SummerRain 72 Posted October 18, 2022 Share Posted October 18, 2022 An attempt at omoradhi art, and tips or criticism? Horsenorse and Codedog92 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Brackets 7 Posted October 20, 2022 Share Posted October 20, 2022 If you want some constructive criticism, here is what I was able to spot: try to make your line work more clean by properly erasing sketch lines. I think this is the most apparent on the left leg of the character. It will lake your artwork look more refined and finished. The second think I could suggest is maybe, try to tweak the pose a little? I think it would look more natural if the character (or something else) was holding the water bottle, as it currently seems to just be floating there. Hope I wasn't too harsh. Good luck with future attempts. Quote Link to comment
fortardball87 43 Posted October 20, 2022 Share Posted October 20, 2022 On 10/18/2022 at 4:33 AM, SummerRain said: An attempt at omoradhi art, and tips or criticism? Is this based on that one Biku comic? regardless, nice art! Quote Link to comment
Horsenorse 0 Posted October 20, 2022 Share Posted October 20, 2022 Cute keep up the good work Quote Link to comment
SummerRain 72 Posted October 21, 2022 Author Share Posted October 21, 2022 Yep it was based on that biku comic since I didn’t know what to draw. Nope you were definitely not too harsh I was looking for critism so I can improve. Any ideas for a next piece? Quote Link to comment
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