The girl Who will never make it Ch 1

[Sky.pees 2]

Characters

Dan: Buff guy Green eyes tan skinned and is bald wears Jeans and a red t-shirt 

Amy: Blond hair Blue eyes pale skinned Good Body wears blue jeans and a orange sweeter 

Emma: Blond hair Blue eyes tan skinned Good Body wears blue jeans and white  t-shirt  with a blakc jacket on   

 

18 years ago 

2 lover Dan and Amy are trying to have a baby but it never works They try and try and try but Amy never get pregnant till one day the here of a man that can grant 1 wish

 

Dan: Oh my god Amy you know what this means.

 

Amy: Yes Dan we can finally have a baby but you know nothing comes for free

 

Dan: I'm willing to pay any price

 

Amy: ok then let's see if this is real 

 

After 3 days of traveling Amy and Dan make it to the wishing mans house 

 

Dan: I think this is the place

Amy: lets hope 

 

(Dan knocks on the door) 

 

Man: hello welcome to my home are you here for the wish 

 

Dan: YES we have come for a wish we want a baby 

 

Man: I see you want your wife to be pregnant but you know nothing comes for free

 

Dan: I know that just name a price I will pay it

 

Man: No no no I'm not wanting money. I will be putting a curse on your future kid.

 

Cut to 18 years later 

 

Amy: Happy birthday Emma  

 

Emma: thanks mom 

 

Dan: can't believe you're already 18 year old 

 

Amy: ya just seems like yesterday you were just a Baby  

 

Dan: Well, let's go out to dinner for your birthday. birthday Emma where do you want to go

 

Emma: how about cheddars

 

Dan: sounds good to me

Amy: ya lets get ready 

 

Later that night at Cheddars

 

Dan: you better slow down there Emma your one your 5th tea you going to have to pee relly bad later 

 

Emma: It's fine Dad, I can hold my pee in for a long time. I mean I never have had an accident after I got out of diapers.

 

Amy: ya you were a easy baby to potty train 

 

Dan: I was just playing with you 

 

Amy: Well were all done with dinner so lets pay and had out you need to go to sleep soon it's still 

a school night 

 

Emma: Ya buy let me head to the bathroom first,

 

Dan: tea already catching up to you

 

Emma: shut up Dad

 

(Emma walks up to the bathroom)

 

Emma: Dam Closed well i guess i can hold it 

 

(Emma walks Back)

 

Dan: man that was a fast piss

 

Emma: well the bathroom was closed so I will just go at home 

 

Dan: ok well then let's go

 

On the car ride home Emma bladder just keep filling and filling she started to feel it but did say anything just thinking 

 

Emma: only 5 more minutes till we are home man i never had to pee like this in my life 

 

Dan: Emma Are you ok 

 

Emma: Ya Dad I'm fine just need to pee a little 

 

Dan: ok were only 4 minutes away 

 

2 more minutes have passed and They hit a speed bump in the neighborhood

This shacks Emma's Bladder which is already passed full  she almost lets a little out 

At this point her hands are in here crotch and she is needing to pee

 

Dan: Emma are you alright

 

Emma: Ya just really need to pee 

 

Amy: well we're almost home so no need to worry

 

As the pull in to the driveway and Dan puts the car in park Emma jumps out of the car 

And goes to the door she lucky had a key in her left pocket but as she reached into that pocket there was no key  

 

Emma: FUCK I don't have my key 

 As she run back to the car a little pee comes out make a little wet spot on her jeans  

Emma: MOM MOM do you have the keys to the house 

Amy: yes (as she throws the keys to Emma)

Emma: thank god

 

Emma runs back to the door and a little more pee comes out make the wet spot big 

As she try to put the key in its not going in she tries and try's wail more pee is coming out she finally gets the key in and unlocks the door as she bolts to the bathroom she goes to open the door and its locked she looks in horror as she tries to open the door again but there was no time as her bladder gave out no matter  what see did there was not stopping it as here jeans started to get darker a warm sensation fills here body and a gold puddle start getting growing under here she starred cry. 

 

Emma: no no I peed myself I was right I front of the bathroom

 

And as soon as her bladder was empty and her jeans were socked the bathroom door opened

 

Emma: what is my luck 

 

Amy and Dan walk in

 

Dan: Emma did you… oh

 

As they see there 18 year old daughter cry over a puddle of her own pee 

 

End of Chapter 1   

  

 

[mipmixer 42]

Ha, funny. I once wrote a story I never posted about a woman who was magically cursed with the bad luck to never be able to find a bathroom in time no matter how hard she tried. It will be cool to see someone else write out the same idea.

[wedgeantilles 146]

That's a cool start, I am looking forward to more chapters!

(Personally, I prefer if the text is not bold formatted but plain.)

[YuriChaosLord 161]

I like the story, it's a nice start. (I also prefer when the text is normal)