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On 4/27/2022 at 5:14 PM, byronrickards said:

Great story so far! I like the scenario being a reversal of the usual plot where the protagonist has to pee, but is constantly interrupted.

Thanks. Was hoping to get the next chapter up sooner but an eye infection meant I haven’t been able to see enough to write. My vision is only starting to clear now. I’ll be up soon though! 

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2 hours ago, knockonthedoor said:

I think in the hands of a lesser writer, this story could have ended up being a bit jumbled or unrealistic.

But you have a way of tying everything in so well, as well as creating really interesting dialague that seems so natural that it really works!

I think this might be my favorite out of all of your work so far! 

Thank you. More to come soon. Bit of a fantasy of mine to be in the presence of so many desperate people in one day. 

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10 minutes ago, Mbgpeelover said:

Thank you. More to come soon. Bit of a fantasy of mine to be in the presence of so many desperate people in one day. 

Would be one hell of a day, looking forward for more

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