Mbgpeelover 8,719 Posted March 14, 2022 Author ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted March 14, 2022 25 minutes ago, stinklerus said: Thanks for the sequel. Absolutely awesome story! Hope there will be more from them. Possibly. Guess it depends what people want as it might get predictable after a while…. Quote Link to comment
ola93 415 Posted March 14, 2022 Share Posted March 14, 2022 Amazing as always. I have no clue how you manage to spit out these great stories as often as you do, but I certainly won't complain. Quote Link to comment
Mbgpeelover 8,719 Posted March 14, 2022 Author ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted March 14, 2022 9 minutes ago, ola93 said: Amazing as always. I have no clue how you manage to spit out these great stories as often as you do, but I certainly won't complain. I love writing and do it for a living so this is my guilty pleasure:) waterrat and ola93 2 Quote Link to comment
holdit247 234 Posted March 16, 2022 Share Posted March 16, 2022 I want my girlfriend to be more like Rosie! Brilliant story again Quote Link to comment
WaterSpirit 87 Posted March 16, 2022 Share Posted March 16, 2022 This story was beatifully written. I love it that you told it from the point of view of the guy watching the girl struggling with urgency. I love the way the sexual tension and urinary tension grow together at the same time. Great job! Quote Link to comment
Mbgpeelover 8,719 Posted March 16, 2022 Author ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted March 16, 2022 1 hour ago, WaterSpirit said: This story was beatifully written. I love it that you told it from the point of view of the guy watching the girl struggling with urgency. I love the way the sexual tension and urinary tension grow together at the same time. Great job! Thank you. I’m so glad you enjoyed that aspect especially as it would be such a huge romantic turn on for me to experience it like that as the more desperate I get to pee the more turned on I get and I suspect Riley was feeling the exact same way. It was a big risk writing from the male perspective as a female so I’m glad it came over authentic and genuine. Homakyusai, WaterSpirit, pwpj and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment
David_E 116 Posted March 17, 2022 Share Posted March 17, 2022 That was a brilliant story! I imagined a last scene in the loo in which he started to go down on her to return the favour. For a moment she is embarrassed because of all the pee, but then she sees how much he wants to go there, and .......... Quote Link to comment
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