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I feel like my first comment wasn’t in depth enough, but I really like the second part here. The fact that you gave her mother her own spotlight as well as Tori was a great addition to the story, although a description of her mothers wet pants might be nice to add in part 3. 

I also really like that the story is to the point. The set-up and payoff is very quick and it makes this an easy, smooth read

I’m glad to see this story continue!

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16 minutes ago, knockonthedoor said:

I feel like my first comment wasn’t in depth enough, but I really like the second part here. The fact that you gave her mother her own spotlight as well as Tori was a great addition to the story, although a description of her mothers wet pants might be nice to add in part 3. 

Either way, I’m glad to see this story continue!

Thanks for the feedback! I have the next few parts mostly written and/or planned out - not to spoil too much, the mom won't be involved too much in part 3, but in the following parts she will again have a more active role.

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12 hours ago, dudelobowski said:

Hopefully she doesnt use all the clothes she took on the trip! Otherwise she'll have to rewear something after it's dried - or have a dwindling stock of "clean" clothes she has to preserve. 

Lmao I was kinda thinking an evil idea where she tries all her clothes at once and wets them so she doesnt have any left to change into

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18 hours ago, dudelobowski said:

Hopefully she doesnt use all the clothes she took on the trip! Otherwise she'll have to rewear something after it's dried - or have a dwindling stock of "clean" clothes she has to preserve. 

 

6 hours ago, Luna said:

Lmao I was kinda thinking an evil idea where she tries all her clothes at once and wets them so she doesnt have any left to change into

Great suggestions! - similar elements may just show up in the next few parts (hint hint).

 

6 hours ago, DailyDiabetes said:

These story’s are pretty good! I just recent thought “hey, what if you were given permission to wet, that would be pretty interesting,” and then this comes in! I hope you enjoy writing these as much as we do reading it.

I definitely enjoy writing these! The "permission to wet" scenario is one of my favorites.

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I'm glad people actually like it! I'll post Part 4 either tonight or tomorrow.

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6 hours ago, Luna said:

Lmao I was kinda thinking an evil idea where she tries all her clothes at once and wets them so she doesnt have any left to change into

Oooh this is a great idea! Definitely excited to see what comes next. I wonder if "permission to pee" would be expanded if her clothes had already been peed in before? Like "Well they're already dirty, I guess it couldnt hurt to just let her go in them again". At the very least I hope she'll run out of clean panties 😉

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So many options for her adventure to continue! Will she try it in public? Will someone notice her wet pants?

Maybe they get a desperate waitress and Tori and her mom wet to make her feel better. Ton of direction for this story to go and I love that Tori has had alot of devolpment as a character to the point where she is super comfortable wetting everywhere/everything now. Looking forward to the next part!

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