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On 8/17/2021 at 5:32 AM, Kreed said:

Usually I like it when the character wets herself in the end, but in this story I was actually rooting for her to make it. Glad she mostly did.

Just made it is my absolute favourite, but I REALLY enjoy the desperation. If you're writing stories with girls as desperate as I like, then it stands to reason there will be an accident from time to time!

 

On 8/18/2021 at 11:38 AM, wether said:

Fantastic story, with very well desccribed desperation and peeing part. Is there the original version available anywhere?

It's great isn't it, and whilst I ramped up the desperation, I take no credit for the original story, it was one of the best. Thomas' Water Resources is sadly, long since dead, but can still be found on the Wayback machine. Treat yourself and spend sometime in the competition entries, some of my all time favourite stories lurk in there, and it definitely played a major part in forming my interest in desperation.

femaledesperation.com (archive.org)

 

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