Markj9494 569 Posted June 30, 2021 Popular Post Share Posted June 30, 2021 Hey guys, here is my next / previous story. It started over in the Interactives section, but I decided to turn it into a normal story due to limited interaction (by bad design). I explained a lot of the set up over there, so im going to just link it here if you want to know more about the premise and characters although ive made a few tweaks to those after realising the story needed a little bit of a protagonist: Some things may have changed a little since then because of the shift in formatting and taking the time to make it a properly flowing story (Hopefully). The desperate promotion – Part 1 (of 2) “Have you got it?” Willow asked as the group huddled around their Phones, desperately waiting for the contest to start. “Not yet” Jana responded, her phone in one hand as she nervously bit into the sparkly painted nails on the other. “I told you to reset the internet earlier.” Francesca replied bluntly, inspecting the bottom of her beer bottle before setting it down on the table. “Im on Data and I haven’t got it either.” Victoria replied, cutting short any arguments. “Anyone want another drink?” Willow asked, putting her phone in her pocket and grabbing her almost empty bottle and tipping the last drops into her mouth. Walking over she placed it down next to the rows of empty beer bottles the group had gone through since gathering here at Roxy’s house a couple of hours earlier. They had been waiting for this event for days, the VIP tickets on offer the perfect prize for the group who had failed to get tickets in the two minutes they had been available before selling out. They hadn't been to a live gig in a couple of years and they looked forward to re-living their misguided youth. “Yeah sure” Roxy said, holding up her own empty bottle and swaying it slightly for Willow to grab. “Concentrate guys, its 20:01 are we sure we signed up correctly. What if our form was wrong?” Francesca asked, could this have all been for nothing. “I got the email reply that said we were accepted.” Polly said, gently chewing her lip as she watched her phone and refreshed her inbox constantly. Walking back over with two bottles Willow handed one to Roxy, “That’s the second crate empty” she announced, but it seemed the others were too preoccupied to worry about the number of beers left. “Oh!” Jana exclaimed, a ding from her phone quickly followed by a number of other tones from each of their phones. They had received the first Clue, the start of the strange scavenger hunt that was between them and their tickets. “Ok guys, here we go!” Roxy exclaimed happily, fired up by the contest and swigging from her bottle before looking down at the phone. “A different kind of game?” Victoria said, clearly slightly confused by the cryptic message. “Is that it?” Francesca added, staring at her phone and scrolling through it. “Ok, Jana you get up the list of pubs and we can try and figure this out.” Willow replied, sipping from her own bottle and joining Roxy in looking at Jana’s phone. “Guys the taxi is almost here, its two minutes away.” Polly said, showing her screen of the booked taxi and its location, the small icon of the car shuffling around the map. “I mean it could be something to do with game animals?” Jana suggested as she checked her purse for everything they would need after losing her phone to Roxy and Francesca. Their eagerness not waiting for her to look over the map before peering in and making it simpler just to give them the phone. “Shit, well lets get ready to go. If we need too, we can figure it out in the car.” Victoria added, putting her half empty drink down and grabbing her bag. Looking towards the bathroom Polly wondered if she had time to dash into it, but a beep from outside told her she didn’t. It didn’t really matter, it was just a precautionary pee anyway. “You sure you have everything?” Francesca asked as she slid her coat on, it felt a little bit odd for them to be dressing so casually on a sort of night out. But, they had all agreed to put the competition first and above all other things. They could always go out next weekend, but this was their one chance to get these tickets! “Yeah, now come on the taxi is right outside!” Roxy grunted, using a finger to slip her trainers on without undoing the laces. “One second!” Willow said, upturning her bottle and starting to down the rest of it. “Come on!” Roxy said smiling, linking her arm around Willows and pulling her towards the door still drinking. “Good to go” the black-haired woman responded a few moments later, setting the empty bottle on the table by the door as they stepped out. Stumbling into the large car the group packed themselves in, Francesca jumping in the front with Jana’s phone still in her hand. “Where too?” The driver asked, causing them to look up and pause. They hadn’t really thought about that, they had been too busy grabbing their things. As always, when they had told Polly they were ready for her to order a taxi, it hadn’t quite been the truth. “Girls?” Francesca asked handing Jana her phone. It was now or never. “I don’t know, what about Jacob’s tipple?” Jana replied “It could be the black grouse?” Victoria added “That seems a bit obvious though, what about the shrunken head?” Roxy put in, their minds clearly taking them to different answers for the simple yet deceptive question. “It could be any of them…” Francesca said looking a little disheartened as the group fell silent for a moment. “Jacobs tipple is just round the corner if you want me to take you there first? I guess you are doing the scavenger hunt tonight?” The young taxi driver asked, clearly reading the room. “Yeah we are!” Willow said happily. “And we are going to win!” Victoria added slight tipsily, the alcohol from pre drinks clearly starting to have an impact on her. “How about I take you to Jacobs tipple and then I can take you wherever you need to go after?” he offered “That would be amazing!” “Yeah, thank you so much” Jana added, stuffing her phone back into the small pockets in her jean shorts. They had never been to Jacob’s tipple despite it being as close as the driver had suggested. A couple of minutes later they were outside the corner pub, groups of people enjoying a pint on the picnic tables near the front of the traditional pub. “We will be quick!” Francesca shouted back at the cabbie as they burst out of the car and made their way into the pub, hoping their proximity would surge them into the lead. “So, what do we need to do again?” Victoria checked. “It says we need to go in and get a drink from the bar and there should be a thing to scan that will give us a code. We then record us drinking outside the pub and upload it to our social media with the code. If its right it will send a new clue and we move onto the next one.” “Sounds simple enough.” Roxy said nodding. “Lets get the party started!” she laughed, shaking her torso as if dancing to some exotic music. Her strange sense of humour raising their spirits as they found their way to where they could order. Waiting patiently at the bar, the group were happy to see they looked like they were the first ones here. Although, it shouldn’t have been surprising given they had started just around the corner, if this kept up then they would be certain of victory! “Hi, we are part of the Blue Wombat promotion.” Victoria said as a barman walked towards them polishing a glass. “Promotion?” The barman asked, looking a little bemused before Victoria pointed to the bracelet on her wrist. It had come with the pack and information when they signed up, it was probably to stop other people getting a free drink. “Oh right that thing, yeah sorry.” He continued before pulling out a QR code and 6 large cans of Blue Wombat from the bottom of the fridge. Taking a moment to clearly mark off 6 cans on a wall chart pinned to the frazzles board. “Good luck” he finished off, before moving on to pour a group of regulars several pints of biter. Shrugging to each other, they each grabbed a pint sized can and rushed out of the pub. Happy to see their taxi man still waiting patiently. “Ok, and remember to say we love Blue wombat before we start.” Polly said, fumbling with her phone for a few moments. Setting it up on a small wall near the front, they used an ash tray to prop it up and make sure they were all in frame. Hitting record, the group popped open their cans. “We love Blue Wombat!” they said loudly as they began to chug the drink down. Despite the happy outburst Polly and Jana couldn’t help but blush slightly as the public display of extroverted behaviour caught the attention of several people sat nearby. An elderly couple shaking their heads at the young women who were clearly having too much fun for their liking. At least the drink itself was amazing! It tasted like fruit juice with almost no sense of the alcohol inside it. It even managed to cover up the acidic tang their basic energy drinks had. “All right ladies, lets take the lead!” Roxy said, burping loudly and getting a death stare from the old woman smoking on the other side of them, muttering something under her breath. Stopping the recording Polly quickly scanned the QR code which generated a hashtag that she added to the post before uploading it. “So now what?” Francesca asked as the group gathered around the phone. “Well, they are supposed to be scanning posts they are tagged in for hashtags, like our name and then code we just got so that….. *Bing* “There we go….what…we were wrong!?” Polly said, recoiling from her phone as if it had just somehow insulted her. “Did you do it right?” Francesca added, her tone a little harsher than she probably meant it to be as they grouped around the phone in disbelief. “Yes, look” Polly said handing her phone over. “Come on guys, lets not argue, lets just head to the next place.” Willow added calmly, her face still a picture of optimism and enjoyment despite the setback. “Yeah, that only took us 5 minutes. I am sure people will live outside of town and have to travel in. We are probably still high up if we get to the next place quickly.” Jana added, hoping to dispel any angst the group was feeling towards each other. They were a team, they were sure to make mistakes along the way so it was important to remember that. “To the Black grouse inn!” Victoria shouted as she took charge and pointed towards the taxi still waiting for them. Going across town at this time of night was always difficult, but they seemed to have lucked out with their driver. Every time they came to traffic he would swerve off the main road and down some narrow streets before emerging closer to their destination. He certainly seemed to have a really good grasp of the roads and how to avoid any bottlenecks. A fortunate turn of events as they now had to go all the way across town. Leaving old town behind they crossed into Glendale, something that was puzzling to Roxy as she watched the buildings blur past. The Black grouse was in the Seafront district, why were they going this way? But, her questions were soon answered as they crossed the road she would have taken them along only to see bumper to bumper traffic. He had taken them through the residential area and avoided the influx of students and people heading to the town for a night of drinking. “Should be there in two minutes” Their driver announced pulling off the main road, but even his mighty navigation skills couldn’t get them out of what was now ahead of them. “Oh crap.” Jana said as they came to a standstill, the others smiling slightly at her innocent exclamation from their blonde friend. But they quickly disappeared as they spotted the same thing she had, going up the road for the final half a mile was a line of taxi’s and cars including the other competitors! “At least that means we have to be in the right place?” Roxy pointed out. “Come on Victoria, lets put those muscles to some good use. We can walk from here, but thank you so much!” she added from the middle seat, slapping Victoria on the leg playfully and indicating that she should get out. “No problem” The driver smiled, holding up a contactless card machine, another blessing as Francesca could just swipe her apple pay and it would save her dealing with cash. Every second would count, and that would have been at least a minute or two. Walking quickly past the line of cars, they could see many of the groups holding phones displaying the same app they were using, they were in the right place! But behind them a couple of other teams were now getting out, clearly seeing them walk past and deciding they were onto something. Moving towards the bouncer a few minutes later they held out their bracelets causing him to roll his eyes but waved them in amongst the other patrons. “We love blue wombat!” A group shouted loudly as they approached the front of the pub. The young group of students clearly enjoying themselves and dressed up for a night on the town, a rookie mistake Roxy thought to herself. There was no way they would beat them in their tight dresses and high heels, Roxy and the others were dressed for comfort and it would be easy to last the entire night without so much as breaking a sweat. Inside it was packed, but it seemed that most people were not taking part in the hunt at least. With those that were, quickly grabbing their cans from the bar and running out the front to record themselves drinking them. Stepping aside as another group barged their way out, they joined the back of 3 other groups waiting for their cans. Unlike the last place, it seemed the bar woman was actually scanning all their bracelets. A much better way of showing how many had come and drunk at their pub, but for them it meant more time wasted.” “Hey, do you think we have time for me to run to the ladies?” Polly asked quietly, her bladder not enjoying the jostling it had received in the taxi. It was a little embarrassing to admit her need this early in the night, but since they seemed to have some time to burn she might get away with it. “Can you hold it till the next place? I think we should make the most of this and try and get ahead of a couple of these teams.” Jana whispered back. “Yeah, I think they will need to scan your wrist too.” Victoria added a little louder as one of the groups moved past them giggling slightly and holding their cans. “Yeah sure, no problem.” Polly replied, smiling back at them. She didn’t need to go yet. It could wait, she told herself. But she knew from experience that the building pressure inside her bladder would not be able to be put off for too long and would begin to escalate quickly as they continued to drink. She had always envied the others whose bladders seemed to be able to cope with so much more than hers. Standing there the group waited for the five in front of them to get scanned, Francesca tapping her foot lightly on the floor while Victoria seemed to be fidgeting slightly. Did they need to pee too Polly wondered, at least she wasn’t alone. It would be a bit awkward to ask again, but if someone else asked she could just join in with them. “Next” The bar woman shouted, getting them to hold out their wrists one by one and scanning the little barcode on them. “6 beers” She said coldly before grabbing 6 from the room temperature box on the bar and noisily clunking them on the wood. Not waiting for any more delays the group grabbed them and ran. “Sorry guys, going to have to crab another crate. I’ll be back in a couple of minutes.” The barwoman told the next team, causing Victoria to smile as they broke out of the packed building and out into the clear night. “We love Blue wombat!” Yet another group cheered next to them, it seemed several teams had gotten ahead of them during their detour. “Why don’t we go over there.” Jana said, pointing out a recess a little bit away from the pub, somewhere they would have more privacy. Shuffling over they repeated their trick with their phone, this time with a little rock and soon began drinking their second pint. They were continuing to be pleasantly surprised by just how good it tasted, a relief considering they didn’t know how many of these they would be drinking tonight. “Right then, I mean this should be right.” Polly said, her legs jiggling slightly as she waited for the reply. “Yessss” She exclaimed happily, causing Roxy and Victoria to high five. “Ok to what does it say?” The others asked as they huddled around the phone. “A sharp turn of events” Polly said quizzically. “So what are we thinking this time?” “Well, a sharp turn could be to do with a wagon wheel?” Willow said pointing to the Gypsy Wagon on the map. “But what about The Lemon Bar? A sharp taste?” Francesca suggested. “Ooooh that sounds good! But really it could be either of them” “Should we get a Taxi?” Polly asked, her legs bowing together slightly as the pressure in her bladder increased. The last can of drink had been difficult to down as quickly as the others, her need to pee making it 10 times harder. Now that the drinks had started to make their presence known, she just wanted to get somewhere quickly so she could pee. “I mean, there might be a problem with that plan” Jana said, indicating to the long line of cars and taxi’s struggling to get into the place and then out again. “Why don’t we walk? The Lemon bar is just along the seafront, it would probably be quicker anyway.” Victoria brought up while twisting slightly awkwardly in place. “Walk?” Polly asked nervously. “Yeah, its less than a mile away. We will be there in no time.” She said confidently, although the others didn’t share this optimism. But looking at one another, none of them could think of anything better to do. At least if they walked, they would still be making progress instead of just standing around for a few minutes. Although Polly had kind of hoped that if they had chosen to wait she might have convinced them to let her pee now. Thankfully for Polly, the constant moving was levelling off her desperation at a manageable level as they started towards the seafront. The costal path just a few minutes away and it would take them directly to where they wanted to go. However, a couple of minutes later there was something that she and the increasingly desperate looking Victoria hadn’t thought about. Cresting the hill that led down to the towns beech, the sound of rushing water and crashing waves met their ears. “Oh god” Polly whispered quietly to herself as she felt her bladder tighten reflexively. Shortening her steps Polly slowed slightly, stuck between wanting to get their as quickly as possible but also trying to distress her bladder as little as possible. Thankfully it seemed that she wasn’t the only one being impacted by it, Francesca and even Jana seemed to be walking slower than usual. Although, while Francesca was looking a little tense, Jana seemed fine. Maybe her friend was just better at hiding her need, but knowing she was not alone made Polly feel a little better. Jana always loved the sea, the stroll along the seafront brining a smile to her face as they walked. To her right she watched the sunset over the horizon, a large container ship silhouetted against the red skyline. The calming sound of the waves overcoming the competitiveness of what they were doing and making part of her wish she could just stay on the beach forever. Further forwards Victoria was almost marching off without them, her natural fitness and increasing need to pee causing her to walk faster than normal. Just like Polly, the constant crashing of the waves was causing her some strife internally, her mind never far from her need to pee and unable to distract itself. “Hey guys, can we get a picture?” Jana suggested cheerily. “We are in a race.” Victoria laughed, the group stopping for a moment and causing her to sigh to herself. “Come on, look out there. The sunset looks so nice, just one Photo.” Jana asked, pouting slightly. “Yeah, its super pretty.” Willow joined in. “I mean its been a while since we have had a nice one.” Roxy gave in, apparently casting the winning vote as the others grouped around each other on the seafront. Rolling her eyes a little Victoria walked up behind them, stooping slightly and resting a hand on her thigh. “Smile everyone!” Jana said as she did her sweetest smile, holding her phone up to take a group selfie. *click* “See, was that so bad. Now we have a memory that will last us a lifetime.” She added as she lowered her phone, inspecting the nice group photo. “I don’t think that’s how memories work.” Francesca joked before a strange look overcame her face for a moment. Starting to walk again the group seemed to split in two, with Victoria, Roxy and Willow walking a little quicker than the others. While Polly’s filling bladder, Francesca and Jana fell a little behind as Jana cycled through the possible filters for her photo on Instagram. It only took them about 15 minutes for the front three to reach the bar, the others lagging a minute or so behind. Victoria’s pace even speeding up in the last few hundred meters as she neared the establishment. Her rapidly filling bladder causing her to power walk her way up to it. Going through the large glass doors they found themselves in a relatively busy bar, yellow neon lemon lights signalling the way to the bar. Looking through the crowds Victoria took note of the sign to the ladies up the stairs next to them. When the others caught up she would have to ask one of the others to take her place as she nipped to the loo. It wasn’t too bad yet but she was starting to feel the extra couple of glasses of water she had to combat the alcohol. She was working tomorrow morning and did not want a hangover, especially when she was doing circuit training. Something that brought up a good point… “Do you guys know what percentage these things are? Should we be worried about getting drunk?” she asked as they took their place in line, three other groups standing ahead of them and another joining just behind them. “You should never be worried about getting drunk.” Roxy smiled, nudging her slightly. “But I think they are only 3%, so that shouldn’t be a problem even for Polly.” Exchanging smiles they could both remember the last time their friend had gotten drunk and her rather public singing display that they still teased her about now a couple of years later. Meanwhile, outside Polly couldn’t help but smile for another reason as she spotted the sign for the bar. She was almost there and not a moment too soon. Her muscles had been sending her warning signs for the last couple of minutes as her bladder seemed to be heating up inside her. A strange warm tingling sensation giving her a general sense of unease as in her peripheral she watched the sea churn against the sea wall. “After you” Jana said, holding the door open for the three stragglers. “You guys go ahead, I think im going to nip to the ladies.” Polly said quietly as she ducked inside. “We need you to scan your bracelet, can you go after?” Jana asked as she followed the others in. “I…Im sorry but I really need to go. It will take me 2 minutes.” Polly blushed, she wasn’t usually one to push her own wants above others, but this situation was getting dire. If she knew where the next place was and how long it would be, she might have been convinced. But given the unknown timeframe of everything, she didn’t want to be caught short. “Ok, but be quick.” Francesca added, a twinge from her own bladder making her think about going up after Polly. But shrugging it off, the pair looked around for the others. Rushing up the stairs Polly supported her bladder as it jostled around inside her. Dodging out of the way of a couple holding hands she rounded the corner of the stairs, following the signs to the lady’s room. Opening the first door she was met with a line of other women standing around and chatting. “Oh god.” Polly whispered to herself again as she tensed her muscles and stood up straight. Despite needing to pee she didn’t want to attract any attention from those waiting in line. She would die with embarrassment if they saw her dancing around like a little girl, even if that was what she really wanted to do. Joining the back of the que she pursed her lips and pressed her legs together, hopefully this wont take too long or the others might get annoyed. “Finally…wait where is Polly?” Roxy asked as Francesca and Jana joined them “She’s gone to the ladies, be down in a second.” Jana filled her and the others in. “Really, couldn’t she have waited until after?” Victoria asked, her own legs jiggling slightly. “I mean, she did ask at the last place. At least this way we got ahead of a few groups.” Jana defended their friend. Taking a couple of steps forwards a few minutes later, they were next after the group currently being served. This bar offering a similar bar code scanning as the last one but seemingly having some technical difficulties. “Well, she better hurry up or we are going to have to wait for her to go through the line on her own.” Victoria said, her knees slowly banging into each other as she stood in line. Now without the relief of walking her bladder seemed to be getting heavier as the last couple of drinks made their way through to her “Next!” The barman shouted at them a minute later. Exchanging looks they were unsure what to do, Polly still hadn’t come down and the line was only getting longer as more and more groups caught up with them. “Im sorry one of our group is peeing.” Francesca said rather bluntly to the man. “Well, either hold out your wrists or let another group through.” He responded. “Cant we just…” “Next!” He interrupted, waving another group towards the bar. One of the other group smirking at them as they took their place in line and in the contest. “Fuck” Roxy muttered under her breath, they could quite literally see their lead slipping away. “Guys, im so sorry. There was a big que.” Polly came back, her bladder empty but her cheeks flushed a few moments later. The relief on the toilet had been immense, but she couldn’t enjoy it knowing she was letting her friends down. “Good, you peeing has already cost us a place.” Francesca replied. “Im sorry, I just really needed it.” Polly said, looking down at her feet, her red ears poking through her matching hair as she tried to avoid eye contact with her friends. “Hey, don’t worry about it guys. Im sure we will all need to go at some point, one place isn’t too bad. Plus, its still early on.” Willow said softly, putting her arm on Polly’s shoulder. “Next!” The barman shouted again and without hesitating Victoria threw her arm up so he could scan her code. She didn’t want to lose any more time or places in this pub. “Six cans of Blue wombat.” The barman said unenthusiastically as he pulled them out of the stocked fridge behind the counter. “Thank you!” Jana said politely despite his actions as he handed them a can each. Gripping the cold cans the group squeezed through the growing crowd as more and more people caught up with them. Backtracking their way in Victoria paused as the bottom of the stairs under the sign she had seen earlier. “Hey, I need to pee, I will be right back!” Victoria said as she went to hand Roxy her can. “What, no way. Why didn’t you go with Polly, we have already lost at least one place.” Roxy replied. “Well I didn’t know she was going to pee.” Victoria replied, still holding out her can and waiting for Roxy to take it. “I mean, in Polly’s defence she did warn us at the last place.” Roxy said, seemingly changing sides of the argument. Next to them Francesca wanted to agree with Victoria, her bladder steadily filling and meaning she would usually have leapt at the chance to go with her. But after everything they had just said to Polly it would probably have been a little hypocritical….But then again if Victoria could worm her way out of this one she wouldn’t say no. “Come on I really need to pee.” Victoria said, bobbing on the spot for a moment to emphasise the point. “All of a sudden?” Willow asked with a raised eyebrow. “Well no I needed to go before, but I just…didn’t say anything.” “If Polly can hold it to the next place then you can too!” Roxy said, before turning Victoria away from the stairs and towards the exit. “Besides, she already said there was a que so you would have to wait anyway.” “But….” Victoria tried briefly before giving up and letting Roxy lead her out. It wouldn’t be too long to the next place, would it. Walking out of the bar the cool air hit the group now that the sun had set, for Polly it was the refreshing air she needed but for a couple of the others it seemed to make their desperation worse. “Oh my god you Clutts, that’s my Phone!!” A shout came from ahead of them. The smirking girl from the group that had passed them was now knelt holding a clearly smashed phone. The others stifling their laughs except one who had their hands over their face, the likely phone dropper. “How are we supposed to upload it now! We are going to have to get more cans since we have drunk the others.” The woman continued, brandishing the smashed phone. “Well that’s one less to worry about.” Francesca muttered as they passed. A glare from a couple of them clearly showing they had heard that remark but knowing Francesca that was probably the point. “Over there” Jana pointed to a low wall where they could do their entry. “We Love Blue Wombat!” They shouted in unison as the cracked open their drinks and began to chug. Anyone watching them as they tipped their heads back would have been able to see the visible shudder from Victoria, while both Willow and Francesca seemed to be standing far more rigidly than they had been previously. Although, a smile still beamed across Willow’s face as it always seemed too, despite the beers and now three pints of energy drink flowing through her and all of their systems. Uploading the footage, they all celebrated as the ding sounded once more, they had been right! Now the next clue was displayed across the screen, the small number in the corner showing them they had managed to get all the way up to 9th place. “A bit of a circus position, so its clearly either Piccadilly or the Dandy lion right?” Francesca said as they looked over the map. The group collectively deciding it had to either mean the animal that was sometimes part of a circus, or in reference to Piccadilly Circus in London. The new clue seemingly designed to be as unhelpful as possible, the organisers were starting to turn up the difficulty and spread out the competition. “Yeah, but which one?” Victoria said, a frown on her face as she pressed her legs together as they waited outside. “Taxi’s on its way.” Polly said, a smile on her face as she re-joined the group. “ppfffff” Roxy puffed out her cheeks, slowly crossing one leg over the other “So how do we decide?” “I think we just have to pick one and go with it…coin toss?” Francesca said as a bit of joke, but to her surprise the others seemed to be taking it seriously. “Heads its Piccadilly, tails it’s the Lion one.” Willow said, pulling out a coin from her pockets. Flicking the coin up in the air, the silver piece of metal flipped several times before she caught it again. Slamming it down on the back of her hand she lifted the other away, “Heads!” She announced. “Piccadilly.” Jana shrugged, the others laughing at their decision-making technique. It wasn’t quite the contest winning smarts they were hoping to employ, but it was the best they could come up with. Standing at the roadside the others watched as Victoria squirmed where she stood, it wasn’t a rare occurrence to see. She often drank far more than them on a night out and hated to interrupt her dancing in the clubs, especially for something as mundane as a bathroom break. But somehow she always made it, her bladder clearly strong enough to deal with quite a lot. “How slow is this taxi!” Francesca lamented, “Im really going to need the toilet too at the next place.” She added, bending over and letting out a deep sigh to emphasise her need to the rest of the group. Her behaviour only half play acting, enjoying the moment of attention but meaning every word of it. “Yeah, its starting to catch up with me as well Willow admitted” Even though she had managed to keep that fact hidden from most of them, it wasn’t a surprise to them given she had been drinking literally until she was pushed out the door. “Well maybe we can all go at the next place?” Jana asked hopefully, standing with her legs closer together than normal. “All!, come on that’s so much wasted time.” Roxy argued, a hand resting on her hip. Her large and prestigious bladder clearly putting her at odds with her friends, even as it began to send signals to her it was filling. Although, she had thought Jana would be on her side and even Victoria given their bladders and control of them they had shown in the past. “It’s the same time as if we all go at different times, it’s the same pee.” Victoria countered. “Not really, it means we have to que behind each other. If it was just one of us and one stall became free, then we would pee and be done and able to go on with the contest. If its all of then we would have to wait one after another.” “I hate to admit it, but Roxy does have a point.” Francesca added, tapping her heel on the pavement. “If we want to win we just have to hold it, otherwise we loose to much time.” Roxy announced, but the others were clearly less confident in their bladder capacity as they looked at each other. “Yeah well, you can tell my bladder that. Im going at the next place.” Francesca added resolutely as she scrunched herself up slightly for a second. “Didn’t you pee just before we left?” Victoria asked, raising an eyebrow at the suspiciously fast paced desperation her friend was exhibiting. “So, I guess I broke the seal. You know what its like.” She said pointing to the state Victoria was in. “No, some of haven’t peed since we started drinking like two and a half hours ago.” Victoria shot back, taking the insult at her bladder’s capabilities personally. “More like 4 and a half” Jana whispered under her breath, the others missing her admission and regret of not peeing earlier. She had been out in town for lunch and had gone when she got back. But running a little late to get to Roxy’s, she had forgotten to go. For most nights out that would have been fine, a few hours of drinking and holding was no problem for her. But she also usually drank slower than she was right now, but crossing her legs slightly she put it to the back of her mind. “Taxi’s here” Polly interjected, sensing the rising tensions again but also wanting to get out of this conversation. Despite having emptied it just now, she could already feel an aching dullness inside her, or maybe it was just in her head. Sometimes it was hard to tell. “Finally!” Victoria said as she unwound her legs and the got into the taxi, Polly giving the driver the destination who with a nod started down the road. At just before 9pm the town was packed, people and cars moving slowly through the streets from pub to pub. The contest had clearly drawn in a lot of outsiders, putting even more people in their way. To make things worse, the destination they had chosen was all the way across town and some of them were starting to worry about if they were right or not. Never mind their troubled bladders, this could be the difference between winning and losing. Crossing her legs Jana felt herself being squeezed against Victoria whose own legs were bouncing rhythmically as she gripped her thighs and looked anxiously out of the window. A few suspicious glances from the driver in the rear-view mirror told them that he knew something was up. Although given the tense looks on all of their faces, combined with the constant shuffling it was a sure giveaway. A series of signs that only got worse as they spent 22 long minutes driving through the centre of town. At one point a number of gasps filled the cab as it was forced to break heavily, a strange whimper escaping Victoria while Jana and Francesca grunted deeply. A drunken young man had stumbled into the road after tripping on a bollard, much to the amusement of his friends but not the women's bladders. But finally the group pulled up outside the Piccadilly, the pub outfitted to look like an underground train station. The trendy place clearly popular as a lot of people were sat in the outdoor smoking area, but thankfully for their chances of winning there didn’t seem to be a que. Maybe they had gotten ahead of their competition for the most part. With such a 50/50 clue it would surely give them a massive advantage if they were right. “Come on before I pee myself.” Victoria said sternly as she walked awkwardly towards the front door, her thighs only separating by a fraction as she took small but rapid steps. Behind her many of the others were not doing great either, Willow and Francesca taking their time much to the annoyance of Victoria. It seemed the nights drinks were catching up with them all now. Before they could reach the entrance another group burst through, their faces similarly covered in concern and hands deep between their legs. The blonde at the front red faced and clearly sweating as she dashed forwards towards the taxi Polly had just left after paying. “Oh god, Oh god, Oh god.” She stammered as she wrenched open the car door, the other three in her group steadily chasing her. “Im about to piss myself.” Another said crudely as she paused for a moment, half kneeling before standing up and joining the others. “Lucy, your house is closest!” the first woman shouted as she slammed the door shut, the cab driver shaking his head, his night clearly wasn’t going to get any easier. But at least It seemed it wasn't just their group having some problems with their filling bladders. Entering the bar, loud rock music filled their ears as they looked for where they could be served. The strangely decorated inside having signs pointing in all sorts of different directions, whether they were all just for decoration or actually designed to be helpful wasn’t clear. “Over there” Polly pointed the group towards a corner marked as the junction yard. “I don’t see any signs for the toilets, where are the toilets guys?” Victoria asked clearly concerned. “We can ask at the bar, lets grab the drinks and then you can go while we find a place outside.” “Fine, but if there is a que I’m going looking.” The brown-haired woman replied, getting some nods from the others. Walking up to the counter the bar staff had just finished serving another group who grabbed their drinks and rushed out the door. They were clearly on a mission and doing everything they could to win. “Hi how can I help you?” The barman asked, smiling back at them. “6 Blue wombat please” Roxy said, holding up her wrist. Nodding the guy grabbed a book from under the counter. “Sorry, we are having some technical issues so I’ve got to do this the old-fashioned way.” “Its ok, its no problem.” Roxy replied, letting him write out the number under the barcode down in his book. “Actually, it is a problem, where are your Toilets?” Victoria asked quietly, leaning over as she wiggled her hips in need. “They are back that way and on the right, but they are being cleaned at the moment.” He said, grabbing the number from Willow’s bracelet next. “Oh…how long for?” Willow asked. “It should only be like 10 minutes, maybe 15.” The man replied nonchalantly as if there wasn’t a pee dancing woman currently in front of him . “10 minutes!” Roxy and Francesca said in unison but for different reasons. “Guys we cant just wait 10 minutes” Roxy said to the group as the third of them got their number taken. “Yeah and I don’t know if I can wait 15 minutes.” Francesca added, although her demeanour was still calmer than Victoria who was clicking her heels together as if rehearsing for a role in wizard of oz. “Yeah, I wouldn’t mind going somewhere sooner than that so we can pee” Willow admitted. “So we are agreed, we will grab these and maybe you can go in the next place.” Roxy said, the others agreeing reluctantly as that wasn’t quite what they had meant. But it seemed like the best they were going to get right now. “I don’t like the sound of the maybe” Francesca said, catching on to what Roxy was saying. But a minute later the group was heading back out of the bar, large cans in their hands as they headed to do the video. “We love Blue Wombat” they cheered again, although half of them seemed to be less enthused about chugging their drink. Victoria pausing for a moment as she stared at her can before starting to drink. Her legs clearly pushed together and her spare hand griping into her tight jeans. Roxy and Jana seemed to be the only ones able to down their drinks, the pint disappearing quickly down their throats. Surprisingly, it was Victoria that beat out the others, trying to get it over and done with as soon as possible. Although, once she had finished she couldn’t help but curtsey while Willow, Francesca and even Polly had to take a break halfway through. But holding their bloated stomachs and bladders the three of them managed to finish the rest in one more go. Their faces slightly more tense looking than they had been a couple of minutes before. Grabbing her phone from the small railing she had put it on, Polly quickly uploaded the video and was happy to see they had gotten it right despite their strategy relying on a coin toss. They had achieved the right result and that was surely going to put them in a good position. Although as she looked to the corner it seemed they were still in 9th place, those ahead of them getting it correct as well. “A formal fortress?” Jana said confused, shrugging as she looked up at the group but finding several of them not looking. Victoria and Francesca were too preoccupied with their bladders while Polly was currently cleaning up their cans and putting them carefully in the nearby recycling bin. “Windsor is a formal fortress, right? Doesn’t the queen live there.” “Great let’s go!” Victoria announced as she gripped herself tightly between her legs. “I…you are not going to like this one though” Roxy couldn’t help but smile. “What?” “Its at the seafront, more or less where we were earlier.” “Oh, no…no way am I spending another 20 minutes in a car. I will literally piss my pants.” She said, her feet now stamping where she stood. “Do you have another idea?” Jana asked. “I…I…we just go somewhere nearby, let me pee, and then we can go wherever.” “Do you want to win or not?” Roxy asked sternly. “Yes but…” “Great then we will get a taxi to the next place and you can pee there. There are only 8 groups ahead of us. So there won’t be a cue which you can’t say for anywhere else.” “Taxi’s on the way” Polly said, looking up after she had slightly tuned out the conversation. The gentle twinge of her bladder making her try and make this quick. She could handle it now but pretty soon she would have to pee again. So the more pubs she could put between her and her last trip to the bathroom, the better it would look to the others. “Great…Great!” Victoria said throwing her hands up, before whining softly and putting a hand back between her tensed legs. But looking up Jana could see the slight tenseness of how Roxy was standing. Despite how she was acting Jana knew things were starting to catch up with even her large bladder. Although that may have been half of the problem. Roxy was always one to boast about her ability to hold it, for fair reason. But she also considered it a failure to stop and go and pee, a necessary thing for most people was a massive inconvenience to her. So her anger at the others was probably partly aimed in at herself. Puffing out her cheeks Jana crossed her legs a little tighter, really starting to regret not going to the toilet before coming out. Her only saving grace was the others who had already peed or would go at the next place. She would have to bring it up and go in the one after herself. For the next 5 minutes the group stood around waiting, Victoria tying her legs together and standing rigidly as Francesca danced on the spot next to her. Willow and Jana engaging in a slightly tense looking conversation as they tried to distract themselves from their increasing need to pee. Arriving the taxi pulled up, the woman behind the wheel beeping twice despite the fact they were only 5 feet away. A cheery smile plastered across her face that Victoria could only roll her eyes at. This wasn’t the time for a happy go lucky cabbie, her bladder felt moments from exploding. The speed at which they were drinking them seeming to force it through to her bladder at the same pace. Carefully lowering herself into the cab Victoria took the middle seat, breathing heavily through her nose as she fought for control of her body. Being squeezed in as Jana grabbed the seat on her left and Willow the one on her right. Neither looking particularly happy either, crossing their legs they fixed their eyes on the road ahead of them and after giving the driver directions they were on their way. But as soon as they moved off Victoria let out a quiet whimper, now locked in her bladder was sending urgent signals as if it knew what she had done and was making her pay the price for it. Once again, they found themselves slowly passing through the town, a pace that was only making Victoria more antsy as she fidgeted. Upfront the driver was happily talking Polly’s ear off, asking questions about the competition and where they were all from. Her slightly distracted nature making the three desperate women in the back worry about what would happen if she didn’t notice anything and had to slam on the breaks. The tight seatbelts already cutting across their bladders and any sharp stops could end up in a wet disaster for them. “Oh god…..” Victoria whimpered again as she felt pulse race through her bladder, the nights drinks pushing into her distended bladder and causing it to swell with each minute. Looking through the windscreen she sobbed slightly as she noticed the cab driver letting out a line of traffic at an intersection. Her friendly wave to them adding more time between her and a toilet. She felt like for every two steps forwards she was taking one back. But there was little do but try and hold on, her palms becoming increasingly sweaty as she chewed her bottom lip. “Can you go a bit faster?” Francesca asked, partly for her own sake but also because she had been noticing the blood fall out of Victorias now pale face over the last 10 minutes. She was beginning to worry there was a real chance her friend would end up peeing herself and that would surely end their chances of winning. Not to mention a real chance of her getting wet with someone else’s pee, a disgusting thought for her. “Hey, just doing my good deed for the day. Karma is a cycle, you do something nice now and you will get it back another time.” The driver replied, clearly taking no notice of the fact they were in a race. Letting out another quiet whimper Victoria’s legs began to vibrate, the heat she was feeling from her straining leg muscles compared to that of her struggling bladder. Eventually the taxi made it back to almost the exact same place as they had been an hour earlier and when Victoria had originally been about to go to the toilet. If she would have known the discomfort she would be in right now, she would definitely have insisted she go then. Her control felt like it was being held together by the smallest shreds of self-control. “Alright we are here, first stop is a toilet” Francesca replied as they took a look at the double Windsor bar, a rather classy place with large, polished glass walls and windows. Ornate but clearly electrical chandeliers hung from the second floor above the diner’s eating their food. A sculpture of a grand piano slowly rotated on a plinth in the entrance way. While these features would have been breath taking for most, none of the group seemed to be taking in any of the sights as they rushed towards the building desperately clutching themselves. Holding the door open Jana let the others rush by but looking back she could still see Victoria sat in the back of the taxi as Polly paid. Her legs tightly knitted together and unmoving as she sat there. But she knew she had to get out sometime and with a bit of help from Polly she gingerly stepped out. “I don’t know if I can do this” She whispered to Polly who looked back at her with an awkward look on her face as she tried to come up with something to say. She wasn’t used to it being this way around, it was usually Victoria and Roxy making comments about her. “I..uh, is it really that bad?” Polly asked “I thought I was going to pee myself in the taxi, but now its so much worse.” Victoria tried to laugh, bending over gingerly and placing both hands between her legs. For the first time Polly could remember, she was seeing Victoria blush with embarrassment. “Do you need a hand?” Polly offered, but looking at her Victoria shook her head. “I can make it, its all in my head.” She said, lying to herself. Taking a deep breath Victoria advanced slowly towards the bar, her thighs tensing rhythmically as Polly walked slowly beside her. Reaching the front, they walked through into the front of the bar. Their friends waving at them from across the room, but it wasn’t them she was looking for. Frantically scanning the room she spotted the ladies room sign ahead of her and started towards it. Her lips pursed and awkwardly walking upright, Victoria did her best to look normal. But the look of concentration and sweat on her brow was a sure sign that she was anything but fine. Approaching the hallway as Polly left to talk to the others, she spotted Francesca coming the opposite way. “Hey, should we head to the bar?” Francesca added, bright eyed and clearly feeling better after visiting the ladies room. But heading to the bar was the last thing in Victoria’s mind. “Not on your life.” Victoria replied, shuffling past Francesca who simply shrugged. Letting out a soft whimper a fork of pain shot through her navel and feeling her internal muscles starting to strain and ache terribly Victoria sped up her pace. Breathing deeply as she saw the small ladies room, a single stall sitting there with the door invitingly open. Hearing a group of laughing women approaching her she would not be able to handle it if they beat her to the only available stall. Standing upright and holding onto her bladder she walked as quick as her muscles would let her. Crashing through the open door and fighting with her jeans she wiggled on the spot. Bending her knees and bouncing on the spot as the button she had undone a thousand times toyed with her and seemed to become impossible to undo. “Oh god, oh god!” She whispered angrily at her button. “I just want to pee!” she hissed at them, feeling a worrying looseness in her muscles and a telltale relaxing sensation. But finally, she felt her jeans loosen and in a flash they were around her knees. Even before making contact with the toilet she felt her pee burst out in a powerful jet, just about making it into the bowl as she collapsed on it. Her bladder clearly taking the sign of not being in her jeans as a sign to instantly empty, despite getting no command from her to do so. Letting out a sign of relief Victoria sagged back on the seat, her shoulders dropping and relaxing as the last few hours of drinks flowed out of her. She didn’t know how, but she had made it without having an accident. The last hour had been the most desperate she could ever remember being, but wiping the sweat from her forehead she let herself laugh at the absurdity of what they were doing and listening to her stream that seemed to go on forever. Back at the bar the others were waiting slightly off to the side, Roxy scanning the room for other competitors. But it seemed they were alone, could that mean they were wrong or even that they were in first place! “Where is she?” Francesca asked, having passed her friend almost 3 minutes earlier and knowing there was no que. “Yeah guys I am really sorry but I think im going to go to the bathroom too. I’ve been trying to hold it but just waiting like this is making me really need to go.” Willow admitted. The others surprisingly shrugging and indicating she may as well if there was no que and Victoria was doing something else clearly. But as Willow admitted her need, a very relieved looking Victoria sauntered towards them. “Man, that felt so good” She said wistfully, her eyes crossing slightly and getting a quiet groan from Willow and making Jana and Polly cross their legs a little tighter Even Roxy seemed to be thinking about something, even her prestigious bladder would need to be released at some point. “Ok that’s it, im going to pee!” Willow said as she started towards the bathrooms. “Wait we are all here, can we at least get the drinks first?” Roxy asked, snapping back to the room. Relenting Willow groaned quietly as she turned back to the bar and moved up to be served. The barwoman happy to hand out 6 Blue Wombats and scan their bracelets. “Can we get 6 Pints of water too.” Victoria asked, getting confused looks from the others. “Come on, we don’t want to get drunk on this stuff and we need to stay hydrated.” “That’s not a problem.” Willow joked before reluctantly accepting a large glass of water. “You cant take the glasses outside though sorry.” The barwoman added. Walking over to the side slightly Victoria immediately started to down her pint of water, the others gently sipping their own as willow wriggled on the spot. Her lip never leaving the glass but her body twisting underneath her. Next to her Jana seemed to be employing the opposite tactic and was apparently acting like a statue. Her legs locked together and unmoving as she steadily drank from her glass, a red hue covering her face as she forced herself to try and act as normal as possible despite the ocean of liquid inside her. Finishing her glass and still feeling a slight buzz Victoria returned to the bar, getting a refill for herself and downing a second glass before the others had even finished their first. A familiar fullness settling in her stomach as she patted it lightly, there was no way she was getting drunk tonight. “The best Irish liquor?” Polly read aloud 5 minutes later and after uploading yet another video of them drinking. They had been right again and now the group were smiling as that could only mean one place. “That’s got to be O’Malleys, right?” Victoria asked, her interest renewed after being able to relieve herself. “It’s the only one that makes sense to me.” Roxy added. Next to them Willow and Jana were all but silent, the former having somehow forgotten to bring it up again. Her mind addled by the new liquid and serious waves of desperation flowing through her distended bladder. She had only been asked to wait until they had gotten their drinks, but for some reason her mind had substituted that with until the next place. Something that Roxy and Victoria were not going to remind her of, and the others were all too worried about having to pee themselves than remind her. “Its just down the road, that’s lucky.” “I…I need to pee.” Jana whispered quietly, her cheeks burning bright red at the omission. “Sorry?” Francesca asked her to repeat herself. Part of Jana wanted to say it was nothing, pretend she hadn’t said anything. But inside she knew that if she wanted to be given a chance at peeing she would have to say something. “I…I need the bathroom.” She repeated, only marginally louder than before. “Ok, go at the next place with Willow” Francesca responded nonchalantly. Jana simply nodded, feeling a little silly about being so shy about it. All of the others, including Polly had admitted it with no problem. Even now when she had done so, nothing bad had happened. Yet, she couldn’t help but feel completely embarrassed by admitting it to anyone. Walking down the street the followed the pedestrianised road, passing scores of young students and people having a good time. Faint trails of liquid coming out from alleyways between establishments in a way that was all to familiar to the locals. Reaching the bar a few minutes later the group let out a chorus of groans. The outside was packed with a long line of people trying to get in. Almost two dozen people lined up between a zigzag of ropes. “Oh” Willow said, the look on her face one of a woman unconfident in her abilities to wait that long. “Guys I don’t know….” “It might be quick?” Victoria countered, knowing what Willow was about to say. Taking their place in line it soon became apparent that it wasn’t going to be. Only a handful of people entering as they waited 5 long minutes. Jana's double crossed legs beginning to shake as she nervously bit her lip while Willow paced around them. Pained grunts escaping her every so often as her maxed out bladder continued to send signal after signal to her brain telling her to let it free of its burden. A hiss of air slipped out from between Jana's pursed lips as she looked at the floor, her cheeks burning and toes tapping on the ground. Her mind filled with all of the toilets she had passed in the last six hours, the ones at the shops, her own toilet at home, Roxy’s toilet, even the toilets in all the pubs. A blurry mirage flowing through her mind and making her kick herself each and every time she thought of another one as they stood their for another 15 minutes. The weight in her bladder steadily increasing as the pints of energy drink flowed into her distended bladder. The button on her tight jean shorts digging into her stomach painfully. “Guys, I cant hold it. I need to pee.” Willow said, stopping next to them and screwing her legs around each other, bobbing on the spot. “It cant be that much longer, maybe like 10 minutes!” Victoria said, trying to motivate her friend. “I cant wait 10 minutes, I think im going to go back to the last place. It was only 5 minutes away.” “What if there is a que there though?” Roxy countered, eliciting a whimper from Willow as the prospect dawned on her that she didn’t know where she could pee the sooner. She was at her wits end and there were no good options. She wasn’t use to holding this much inside her, she had tried to go toe to toe with Jana and Roxy before but had bailed at the last moment. She had never told them what she had been trying, playing it off as simply not wanting to break the seal. But there was something interesting about the two of them. But now she had passed the point of that night, her cramping and spasming bladder fuller and angrier than she could remember. Pulses of pain were bouncing around inside her like a pinball machine. Looking to her left she let out a groan as she saw and heard Victoria chugging from a bottle of water she had pulled from her bag. A droplet forming between the sporty women’s luscious lips and the large bottle before falling to the ground. Tiny droplets bounced off the ground and onto her ankle, the contact causing her to shudder involuntarily. “Guys, im serious I cant hold it” the desperate woman reiterated. “I need, something, somewhere!” she begged for them to come up with a solution to her painful problem. “I mean there is always” Francesca said, indicating to the back alley to their right. Several large bins and boxes would make it easy to hide in one of the alcoves. Panting slightly Willow looked at the slow-moving line and then back to the ally. Her muscles trembling more with each second that was passing and she was starting to realise there was the real possibility of her wetting herself if the line didn’t move quickly enough. If she could hold it a few more minutes that would make them almost too close to give up, and what if there was a que on the inside. “Come on, watching you has made me need to go again.” Francesca added, grabbing the desperate Willow and pulling her towards the alley. “You coming?” she asked Jana. “I…..” Janna paused, desperately wanting to follow them but she had never peed outside before. She rarely used anything other than her own toilet, so to expose herself like that was almost unthinkable. But feeling a painful twitch from her bloated bladder she almost gave in. She didn’t want to admit it, but she was desperate and more desperate than she had been in years. But…there was no way she could stoop to that level. “No…im just going to wait until we are inside.” She replied sheepishly, Willow giving her a knowing look but letting herself get pulled away by Francesca with a hand buried in her crotch. Watching them disappear into the ally Jana couldn’t help but groan quietly, doubling over for a moment as her bladder tried to make her give up, to make her follow them and pee. A burning sensation erupting between her legs as her tired muscles began to tremble. Cursing herself for wearing tight jean shorts she wished she could at least have had a pocket or something that she could use to hold herself without it being too obvious. “Come on Vic, lets go see what’s up. Maybe we can get through this.” Roxy said, the pair of them matching off towards the bouncers next to the door. Getting calls and being stopped by a number of people who thought they were cutting. Even their progress was slow, but Jana hoped it would help her. But now left to her own thoughts, with Polly being strangely quiet Jana had nothing to focus on but the deep pulses penetrating her bladder. She could almost see them, her vision pulsing in time with them as she screwed up all her body to contain half a days’ worth of pee, well far more than that she realised as she started totting up the pints compared to what she usually drank. Another brick added to the weight of her bloated organ with each pub. Whimpering she paced around in a small circle, biting her nails and trying desperately to hold on with all her being. Rushing into the alley and despite it being for Willows sake, it was Francesca that ducked into a small alcove behind a series of bins first. A small puddle already there and showing they were probably not the first people to do this tonight. “Keep an eye out” Francesca said, grabbing the waistband of her trousers and slowly shuffling them down out of sight. Getting into a crouch she sighed quietly as a stream of pee began to slowly fall out of her. “Oooooooh” Willow moaned as the trickling noise of her friends pee almost caused her to lose control. But adding a second hand between her clenched thighs she bobbed on the spot, her face red with exertion. Looking back towards the pub she made sure that no one would be interrupting Francesca and hoped that she wouldn’t be long. A small rivulet of pee snaking out from under the bin and past her. 30 seconds later she heard Francesca begin to rustle her clothes back on, stepping out a few moments later looking happy with herself. “Oh thank god, I was about to wet myself.” Willow smiled, knowing that she was about to get the relief she so badly needed. Trading places she rushed behind the bin, yanking her clothes down and falling into a squat as a heavily pressurised stream burst out of her and noisily splattered against the concrete. Moaning loudly she lifted her head back as the tenseness and aches in her body stopped and were replaced with pure bliss. Her bloated bladder continuing to empty at some speed and the large puddle she was creating quickly overshadowing Francescas and rushing under the bin in more of a wave than a trickle. “How are you still going!?” Francesca asked the other side of the bin 45 seconds later. “Oh I don’t care.” Willow said, her voice a little hoarse as she continued to enjoy the simple feeling of peeing. After another 10 seconds she finally finished, sighing again she asked Francesca for a tissue and feeling much better they both emerged from the ally to see Jana and Polly desperately waiting in line. “I…I need to go again guys.” Polly said, her face blushing red once more. She had been feeling the need to go since even just 5 minutes after she went last time. Part of her wondered if she had been to worried about taking a long time and had failed to relax and empty herself fully. With the added pint after pint of this stupid drink filling her small bladder rapidly. She had been hoping to make it to the next pub before breaking but this line was taking too long. Plus, she had been worried about what they would all think, but given Francesca had just peed for the second time no one really seemed to care. Why was she doing this to herself then, not that she wanted to pee outside. But if the que was too much longer that would happen either way. Ordinarily she wouldn’t have even considered this, but maybe the alcohol was having some sort of effect on her, even if the others were not being impacted. In a weird way some of them had even seemed to sober up slightly since pre-drinks at Roxy’s. “We will be in soon” Jana said to her, her voice more hopeful sounding that anything else. “I…im sorry I just cant hold it. Would you be able to show me where you went?” She turned to Willow who just looked back surprised. “Oooh, didn’t expect it from you.” She grinned back. “But yeah sure, you want to come too Jana?” This was the second time in 5 minutes she had been asked and despite her most hopeful thoughts, they were all coming back to her peeing herself right here. But, if Polly was willing to give it ago, why couldn’t she. “I….Yes!” She said eagerly as her mind caught up to the demands of her bladder. “Its just there” Willow pointed to the spot her and Francesca had used, a lake of pee still spreading out from that area. “Please can I go first, im about to...” Polly blushed, begging Jana but unable to finish the sentence. Despite her own need she knew she had a large bladder and could wait the 30 seconds it would take Polly to pee. Nodding to Polly she watched as the shorter woman all but sprinted behind the container and another burst of pee hit the ground behind it. Squatting awkwardly Polly was doing her best to shield herself, even though she was in cover she couldn’t help but feel exposed, vulnerable to preying eyes. Wait, what about cameras she blushed. Her stream cutting off instantly as she looked up and around the walls, but thankfully there didn’t seem to be any. Her stream resuming as she felt her body relax again. The splatter was pure torture for Jana, the noise bouncing around the inside of her head and causing her bladder to go wild. Gritting her teeth she writhed on the spot, her hands buried deep in her crotch. But thankfully, Pollys small bladder had emptied out in just 45 seconds even with a strange pause in the middle. A taunting gap where she had let her guard down only for the stream to suddenly and without warning restart and cause her to shudder violently. “Ok my turn” Jana said, seeing a blushing Polly emerge. But as she went to go behind the dumpster a whistle caught their attention. Looking back down the ally they saw Roxy waving at them. “Oohhhh” Jana moaned, her bladder throbbing as her hands rested on the buttons for her tight jean shorts. “Maybe they got us a way in, you can use the actual toilets.” Polly said mildly embarrassed that she had just peed outside instead of waiting 30 more seconds. Clutching herself Jana took a deep breath and began the walk back to the line. “Hey, so the guy said if we were just here for the promotion he would let us in. They have a bar to the side that is serving the Blue Wombat.” Roxy whispered to them, hoping to keep any competitors in line in the dark. Whimpering to herself Jana walked slowly behind them, her face flushed and now shinning with sweat as she battle to keep her bladder in check. True to their word the bouncer waved them in, giving Jana a weird look but not stopping her. To their right they spotted the bar, a large blue wombat sign hanging from it. “Six please” Victoria asked happily, part of her wondering why hadn’t they thought to ask earlier. “Bathroom” Jana muttered, smiling at the barwoman. “Sorry, toilets are for paying customers only” She replied. “I don’t care, ill buy whatever” Jana said, her voice becoming pained as desperate as she tried to barter for her relief. “Im sorry, you would have to re-join the que” The bar woman said, shaking her head slowly and pointing to the line they had just skipped. A line that was even longer than it was when they had gotten there. “You don’t understand, I really need it.” Jana said, pushing the problem in a way that wasn’t normal for her. But she wasn’t lying. “Sorry, its policy” “Its ok” Roxy said, putting an arm on Jana. “You can go in the alley; we have still saved time.” “But…I...Ok” she said weakly, walking towards the exit. But emerging on the street, despite only having been gone for 2 – 3 minutes the scenes has changed a little. Now the pedestrianised area was home to two police cars, leading a couple of women to the back of their car. Wetness currently spreading down the bare legs of one of them, her short black dress not hiding anything. While her friend hung her head, skin-tight jeans clearly showing evidence of someone who had been disturbed while relieving themselves. Strange splatter marks against her legs with trails down each leg indicating she had tried to pull up her trousers but hadn’t had enough control to stop her stream while doing it. Now the disgraced pair were being led away while their apparent boyfriends tried to talk them out of trouble with the police. “No, no, no, no!” Jana panicked, her final solution taking off the cards. There was no way she could pee outside now and there was absolutely nowhere else to go. “Where should we do this then?” Victoria asked, ignoring the twitching eyed Jana clutching at herself. “Guys I cant” Jana said, admitting her need loudly for the first time. “Come on, two minutes and then we will just wait until they have gone and you can go.” “I cant go now, the police have already been there!” Jana said, her legs twisting inwards on themselves. “Ok, then you can go at the next place.” Roxy said calmly, although with a hint of annoyance at another disruption or possibly reminder of her own filling bladder. “I cant wait that long” Jana strained out through gritted teeth. “Well then, what do you want to do?” Roxy asked, putting a hand on her hip. “I don’t know, Please!” Jana begged, her bladder feeling moments from exploding and ruining her night and clothes. “Look, the quicker we do this the quicker you can pee. Either after the police go or at the next place. If its all the way across town we can call a cab from the bar down there and you can go in while we wait.” Victoria summed up. Grounding loudly Jana knew she was out of options. There was no way she was going make it through the line, the police had cut off her escape and that left one option, hold it! “We love blue wombat” Jana mumbled as the others did their best to retain the energy they had started with. The pint of liquid flowing down her throat like a thick milkshake, her body trying to make it as unpleasant as possible to convince her to stop. But fixing her eyes on a star in the nights sky she let everything leave her mind as she just swallowed mouthful after painful mouthful of liquid. Somehow she had drunk it, but it felt as if it has instantly reached her bladder. A strange tight bubbling sensation filling her bloated and stretched abdomen as she doubled over. A fork of pain splashing around inside of her as she tested her bodies limits. “I’ve called a cab” Polly added, something Jana wasn’t sure if she was happy about or not. On one hand it meant she was already almost on their way to the next place. On the other it meant she would soon be stuck in another car for who knew how long. Just the thought made her whimper again, her hand pressing deeply against her crotch in a balled-up fist. “Yess, another one right, were 8th guys!” Francesca announced happily, ignoring Janas plight. “Look out for Pea’s?” she continued confused, but thankfully the fully renewed Willow was on hand to figure it out. “It’s a princes thing, like in the stories when they put a pea under the mattress, and she could tell.” “Well, im glad that…” Their conversation was interrupted by Jana as she moaned loudly, following it up with a squeak as she felt her bladder tremble, a spike of pure pain shooting outwards from her centre. “Jesus Jana” Roxy laughed, unable to believe her friend has just made. But Jana didn’t care, her body was constantly shaking and despite the cool air outside she could feel the sweat gathering across her flushed skin. “Guys I cant hold it.” She stammered. “Well, you will just have too. We already talked about it.” Roxy continued, unconsciously crossing her legs. “Im serious Im about too” Jana stopped, shuddering where she stood as the others raised their eyebrows, was she about too… “Taxi’s here” Francesca said, elbowing Roxy. “I…” Polly wanted to object, she could feel her control slipping. Her bladder was too full, she couldn’t hold it. Yet she let herself get almost escorted to the taxi, her eyes wide and hands balled into tight fists as she sat down. “Ooooh” She groaned loudly, the button on her shorts digging into her bladder even more in this position. Hearing the door slam shut as Francesca dived in the front her heart went into overdrive as panic filled her body as quickly as the drinks were filling her bladder. Breathing heavily she watched the town go by slowly, the traffic much lighter by this time in the evening. “We will be there shortly.” Polly said, gently pressing into Jana and trying to reassure her. But all Jana could think about was what if there was a que, what if there were even more people outside the next place. If there were no ally’s or worse the police were there. How many people would see her wet her clothes, she could feel it even now! Her bladder trembling, spasming, expanding against her muscles and causing her entire body to feel like it was being pressurised from the outside. “Uhh” Jana grunted, feeling another spasm. But unlike the last few times this one wasn’t stopping. The electric twanging of her muscles was continuing incessantly, heating her up from the inside. Looking out the window she knew they were still at least 10 minutes from the bar they were heading too. There was no way she would make it, there was just no way. “You have to pull over” Jana said, the others turning to look at her while the driver gave her a suspicious look in the mirror. “She's fine, she can hold it” Roxy replied, waving for the driver to carry on. “Roxy, I cant…I am about to lose it.” Jana sobbed. “Come on, you have held it longer than this. Just like 10 minutes, where are you going to go out here anyway.” Victoria asked. “Iv’e never needed to go this badly.” Jana pleased, a tear rolling down the side of her face, but doing little to convince her friends. “Guys, maybe we should, we have all been except her.” Willow pointed out, well aware of what it felt like having been desperate just minutes before. “I haven’t” Roxy said, raising her head proudly at that accomplishment even though she had been starting to show signs that even her massive bladder was starting to struggle. “Please…” Jana sobbed next to her. “There is the public toilet, pull over up there.” Polly said, making the decision for them all and directing the driver without even asking the others. She couldn’t help but feel bad for Jana, it was her fault she still needed to go. If she had let her go first in the alley the others would probably have been more forgiving of her. They knew she had a small bladder, which apparently now came with some advantages. Not that they out weighed the daily disadvantages. As the car pulled up on the side of the road Jana almost cried in relief, opening the door before it had even come to a stop and rushing for the toilet. The pain of running quickly only slightly more than what she had already been feeling. At least now she was up her bladder was lest compressed although that was quickly counteracted by the sudden movements. Bolting for the large silver structure she slammed the open button only for the LED button to display that it was currently occupied. “No, no, no” Jana stammered as she bobbed around in a small circle. Her bladder shaking inside her, the rolling tide of energy drink thrashing around agonisingly. “Nooo” she whispered again as she stopped, her aching muscles had finally failed in that last spin. A tiny spurt of wetness breaking through her defences, the miniscule amount sneaking out between her iron grip and wetting her panties. Breathing heavily for a few seconds she could feel the process beginning, the start of the end, her control had maybe seconds before she would lose it. Shuffling over a few steps Jana almost threw herself into the bushes to her left, yanking down her jean shorts that were thankfully still dry. A second later her bladder exploded, a noisy thick stream of pee shooting out of her and hitting the soil beneath her. Still panting, her face bright red and covered in sweat she finally relaxed as her giant bladder got what it wanted. Her stream continuing for some time, the puddle she was making washing away the top layer of soil and creating a waterfall from the brick work at the slightly elevated side of the bushes. The decorative plats placed in the centre of town almost drowning in the torrent she was creating. After almost two minutes her stream abruptly ended, the light soil dried from the last heatwave entirely darkened for two meters around her. Still shaking Jana quickly covered herself up, now becoming aware that she had just pissed in the middle of the town square, dozens of people walking by her. Most thankfully to drunk to notice the desperate blonde peeing openly next to them. Blushing deeply she felt humiliated, but at least her clothes were still for the most part dry. Walking back towards the car she had almost forgotten about the contest, but seeing Roxy standing their tapping her foot she couldn’t help but feel a little annoyed by her friend who had refused all of them the simple comfort of a bathroom at least once. They might be in a contest but Roxy was definitely taking it too seriously. “I hope there were no cameras” Victoria laughed, “Put on quite the show there.” “How are you doing?” Polly asked, sticking her head out of the cab, getting a nod from Jana who was still putting herself back together. “Can we get going, we have already lost so much time with people peeing. Its kind of embarrassing, especially you Jana. I thought I could have relied on you!” Roxy said coldly, Victoria nodding despite being one of the first to pee. “No one asked you.” Jana snapped uncharacteristically, getting a few glances from the others. “Hey, peoples small bladders are not my fault.” Roxy replied, trying to defend herself but just insulting her more. “Yeah, well if you think we have wasted so much time peeing I am sure you and Victoria will be happy to hold it until we are back home.” Jana shot back. “Absolutely, we weren’t even thinking about it.” Roxy finished, crossing her arms under her chest. “Great well I guess that is settled then.” Jana said, sitting back down in the cab. The awkward tension palpable but now as she finally let her muscles relax fully she couldn’t help but feel better. The stress of the last hour or so ebbing away as the cab pulled away and the headed off to the next bar. Their bladders all relieved, except Roxy who was already regretting her choice slightly, but she would show Jana. Her bladder was capable of anything and its strength would be the thing that allowed them to win this contest. They would all be thanking it, or her once the night was over. -------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope you all enjoyed reading this first part of the story. The other part probably wont be finished for a few weeks, so I hope this was enjoyable on its own. Its taken a while to get this part done so sorry to anyone that was waiting, real life has been a bit manic (Thankfully in a good way). tevoka, Dark-Rose77, Kei and 11 others 11 2 1 Quote Link to comment
Flush 282 Posted July 1, 2021 Share Posted July 1, 2021 (edited) Note to self: I really need to visit the Interactive Stories section more. It seems like there is some good content there, but I've never bothered to visit the section that is a bit "buried" under the fiction section. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to upgrade/sidegrade this to a fiction story, otherwise I would have missed it I guess. Although, it would have been fun to "participate". Kind of a double edged sword. I don't think I've ever commented on of your stories before, but it's not the first one that I enjoyed. So thanks for all the good stories so far. As for this story, I think the "game" element is a nice touch. I'm looking foward for the next installment, not only because of the desperation it will bring (duh, that's why we are here), but also because I want to find out how the girls will fare in the contest. It's definitely a thing that makes the story stand out. Edited July 1, 2021 by Flush (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
WiiGuy86 641 Posted July 1, 2021 Share Posted July 1, 2021 This is FANTASTIC. Easily one of my favorites ever. Thank you for continuing to work on it. It's a travesty the interactive version of this didn't get more attention, and I'd encourage anyone to go check out the original thread for more about the premise and characters, but the standalone version does not disappoint! Great characters, great premise, and premium writing. Can't wait for the next part. mikev 1 Quote Link to comment
Manticore 20 Posted July 4, 2021 Share Posted July 4, 2021 Superb continuation from the interactive story, can't wait to read the next chapter. Quote Link to comment
Markj9494 569 Posted July 4, 2021 Author Share Posted July 4, 2021 6 hours ago, Manticore said: Superb continuation from the interactive story, can't wait to read the next chapter. On 7/1/2021 at 4:24 PM, WiiGuy86 said: This is FANTASTIC. Easily one of my favorites ever. Thank you for continuing to work on it. It's a travesty the interactive version of this didn't get more attention, and I'd encourage anyone to go check out the original thread for more about the premise and characters, but the standalone version does not disappoint! Great characters, great premise, and premium writing. Can't wait for the next part. On 7/1/2021 at 4:11 PM, Flush said: Note to self: I really need to visit the Interactive Stories section more. It seems like there is some good content there, but I've never bothered to visit the section that is a bit "buried" under the fiction section. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to upgrade/sidegrade this to a fiction story, otherwise I would have missed it I guess. Although, it would have been fun to "participate". Kind of a double edged sword. I don't think I've ever commented on of your stories before, but it's not the first one that I enjoyed. So thanks for all the good stories so far. As for this story, I think the "game" element is a nice touch. I'm looking foward for the next installment, not only because of the desperation it will bring (duh, that's why we are here), but also because I want to find out how the girls will fare in the contest. It's definitely a thing that makes the story stand out. Thank you all for the kind words and I am glad you enjoyed it! Manticore 1 Quote Link to comment
WiiGuy86 641 Posted July 29, 2021 Share Posted July 29, 2021 Just bumping this for the benefit of anyone who missed it and also to say that I can not wait for the conclusion! Quote Link to comment
Markj9494 569 Posted July 29, 2021 Author Share Posted July 29, 2021 2 hours ago, WiiGuy86 said: Just bumping this for the benefit of anyone who missed it and also to say that I can not wait for the conclusion! Hey thank you, sorry its been so long. Work has been manic, its like there has been a year and a half of things to catch up on or something... But good news I have the beginning and end of the chapter written, just need to fill out the middle and add a couple of details to hopefully make it meet peoples expectations. Quote Link to comment
Markj9494 569 Posted August 7, 2021 Author Popular Post Share Posted August 7, 2021 Hey, sorry this took so long. Work has been busy and I was struggling to come up with an ending. Part of the problem of setting it up as an interactive was even I didnt know where it was going to end up! But here is chapter 2 and the conclusion, I hope you enjoy it! The desperate promotion – Part 2 of 2 “And six pints of water please” Willow said, a cheeky smile on her face as the stood at the bar Of the Princess inn. “Wouldn’t want you guys to get drunk would we”. Willow repeated the earlier sentiment and enjoyed the unconfident look she got from Victoria. She wasn’t usually one to get her own back for something, but Victoria had made the decision for all of them when handing them the water earlier. Her own desperation increasing very quickly after that point, the extra fluid steaming through her system fuelled by the probably diuretic energy drinks. Roxy for her part was still playing the strong and confident type, but Willow had been seeing the signs of someone starting to feel their bladder fill for at least the last hour. Her friend had been doing a good job of hiding it, but Willow was sure she would be backing down from her position soon. For all they knew it could carry on for hours, with dozens of pubs still to come. “I know what you are doing, but it doesn’t matter” Roxy said, glaring at her friend slightly who was still smiling at her. Grabbing the glass, she tipped it back and began to chug, a show of force while the others slowly sipped from theirs. A few smiles could be seen from that outburst, It seemed that it wasn’t just Jana that had felt hard done by over the last few hours, and now they were going to enjoy playing with Roxy. “Right then, should we make a move” Roxy chimed up after downing the water quickly, placing the empty pint glass on the counter. The others paused for a moment exchanging glances, maybe this wasn’t such a good plan. Picking up the pace they followed suit and emerged out into the night once again, their bright blue energy drink cans in their hands and ready to be drunk. Behind them and out of sight of the others, Roxy allowed herself to quickly press into her crotch for a moment. The cold nights air reaching her straining bladder and causing it to contract inside her for a moment. The stiff hem of her overly tight jeans digging into her painfully, she considered undoing the top button but knew the others would take that as a sign of weakness. Thankfully as they cheered and started drinking most of them were feeling somewhat refreshed. Jana, Willow, Polly and Francesca had all enjoyed making use of the great outdoors for better or worse, their bladders empty and almost carefree. Although all were aware of the fullness of their stomachs, still bulging out slightly with the vast quantity of liquid they had consumed over the night. But they at least had a little bit of time before it flowed into their bladders. Only the buxom Roxy and Victoria had reason to worry as they downed their 7th pint of energy drink of the night. *Ding* “Hey, were down in 11th” Polly said a little sadly after having lost a couple of places despite their correct answer. The waiting around in line and short detour to the toilet for Jana had been somewhat of a speedbump. Although it could have been worse, in more than one way Jana thought to herself. “Right then, we are really going to have to motor through these.” Willow said, seemingly taking the lead of the group from Roxy who was once again standing rigidly with her arms and legs crossed. “If anyone needs to pee, just tell us early and we can work out the best place to do it. No point in wasting an empty bathroom if it will save us time at the next place right?”, a small glance at Polly telling the others who she was thinking about. But even so, they couldn’t help but all feel like they had been in that position at least once this night. “Since there are just 4 of us now, we can do two at a time?” Francesca brought up, smiling back at Roxy and Victoria and hoping to see them flinch or falter but they stood strong. Although a faint glimmer could be seen reflecting the lights of the bar on Roxy’s face. “I cant believe you involved me in this” Victoria said to Roxy as Francesca looked down at her phone, her attention taken away from them. “Oh come on, you were teasing her just as much, and anyway we will be fine. How many more pubs could there possibly be on this thing.” Roxy replied, uncrossing her legs and despite the fraying at the corners of her appearance, she sounded absolutely confident in her ability to wait until they were over. “We don’t know it could be….” “Taxi’s here” Polly said again, pointing down a couple of hundred meters to the road and cutting Victoria's complaint off. For the next 45 minutes things went as well as possible, the group becoming veterans in their riddles, or maybe they were getting easier. The game designer hoping to give those who were falling behind a chance at catching up, but it seemed to be working out well for them. First the Boat house, a fisherman’s friend that had pulled them up to 8th. Then on to the Jolly moose via a quick detour to Box factory pub where Polly and Francesca took use of the empty bathrooms to relieve themselves in a pit stop almost as fast as you would see in formula one. Their small bladders emptying themselves in under 30 seconds, it seemed even their organs were now putting in the effort to help them win this thing. With 4 out of 4 right answers they cheered after downing their drinks outside the Jolly moose. “We are in first!” Jana said in delight as she held her phone, but looking up she didn’t get the same level of excitement from the others she was with. Polly and Willow had already walked off to grab a taxi from the rank nearby. It seemed pointless to call a taxi if there were some just a short walk away and they were trying to keep the momentum they had built up. That just left Jana with Francesca who was currently fixing her hair using her phone, Victoria and Roxy who had barely said a word in the last 10 minutes. Both dark haired women were standing with their legs pressed together tightly, and rocking on the spot as they tried to battle the increasing pressure inside their bodies. Although, it was easy to see that despite her stalwart facial expressions, it was Roxy who was beginning to suffer the worst having not relieved herself all night. A giant bulge pushing out of her usually toned stomach and squeezing against the deathly tight waist band of her jeans. A noticeable bulge pushing up and over it, the buttons almost pulled back through the holes by the pressure being exerted on them by her stomach and bladder. The recent uptick in speed and efficiency forcing them both to down pints faster than they had the rest of the night, the swimming pools worth of liquid now sitting in their round, heavy stomachs. The others had been watching them both but in particular Roxy, originally in enjoyment of her getting some of her own medicine. That has soon changed to a sort of morbid fascination, with each establishment they visited her bulge grew and the pressure increased. They were all starting to wonder how far she could go, her insurmountable bladder taking a beating but holding in there, much to their surprise. In the last pub she had almost groaned after downing the drink, her teeth clenched and nostrils flaring. But she didn’t break, her face sweating and pale but still she held on silently. Would she ever break, surely she must realise at some point she would reach a limit. “Jana…” Victoria said sweetly, her own face flushed and legs rubbing against one another rapidly. “Yes?” Jana replied in kind, knowing where this was going and revelling in the satisfaction she was about to get. “Im sorry for earlier, I didn’t mean it.” Victoria said. “Do you mean what you said to me, to Polly, to Willow? Or about being able to hold it all night to help us win?” Jana said back, enjoying it a little more than she should. The alcohol was clearly brining out a slightly more sadistic side she didn’t know she had. “I…all of it. I really, really need to pee.” Victoria begged calmly, bobbing on the spot. “Well, Maybe you can go in the next place.” Jana replied. “Hey, that wasn’t me that was Roxy!” Said Victoria, throwing her friend under the bus. “Oooahh” Roxy groaned, wobbling slightly where she was stood, a hand resting on her bloated bladder as she looked off into the distance with a thousand-yard stare. The involuntary noise the first clear sign she had given to the others she was starting to struggle, not that they hadn’t already noticed. They were sure even passers by could by now tell something was off, the bouncers had given her a strange look but let them in anyway. Probably thinking she was going be sick rather than what was actually wrong with her, her boulder of a bladder. “You doing alright there?” Jana asked, but the question went unanswered as Roxy just stood there. Clearly she was too preoccupied with ignoring her bladders fullness to reply. “Oh, looks like they got us one” Francesca replied, holding up her phone with a text message from Willow telling them to get their asses over there. Taking a few steps, slow steps in Victoria's case they noticed Roxy hadn’t moved. Her white face extenuating her crimson lips that she was biting nervously. The pristine lines of her lipstick now slightly smudged with marks on her front teeth from where they bit into her painted flesh. “Roxy!” Victoria exclaimed, her own desperation adding urgency to the remark. While she had pee’d once this night, it hadn’t taken long for the multiple pints of energy drink to fill her once again. Now as she restlessly waited for her partner in crime, it was clear to everyone she was basically back to where she had been a couple of hours before. Although this time, the urgency would only be getting worse and worse as the pints flowed through her system relentlessly. Last time it had only been a couple of beers and some water, a fact that she herself was all too aware of. “What!” Roxy snapped back, her legs uncrossing and re-crossing as a hand hovered near her crotch but she refused to give in with everyone watching. A wave of sudden desperation causing her to teeter slightly as she fought against doubling over completely. “Taxi, this way” Victoria added, pointing down the street. “Oh ok” Roxy said, taking a single step before pausing. Looking up she blushed in embarrassment as she realised her friends were watching her every desperate move. She couldn’t believe how humiliated this made her feel. Forcing herself she took another step, grunting softly as she shifted her body around the heavy weight in her abdomen. It took a few minutes to make the walk with the overfilled Roxy struggling to maintain any pace at all. Clear spikes in pain and desperation were flowing through her body as some of the others watched, her facial muscles twitching and reacting to the sensations going on in her body. But eventually they reached the Cab, Victoria leading the way and quickly ushering the others waiting into the car so they could get underway as soon as possible. Her desperation making her act almost in complete opposite of Roxy. “Huuu” Roxy made a strange noise as she was forced to compress her bladder as she sat in the back of the cab, her eyes widening and hands moving to “rest” in her lap. Thankfully it seemed the driver wasn’t paying any attention and as the door to her left slammed shut they were on their way. Arriving at the silly goose 15 minutes later they clamoured out the taxi slowly and headed towards the two story pub on the outskirts of Goose Green. A number of people enjoying the large open green and clear skies for late night picnics or dog walks. “Guys I really need to pee” Victoria said, bobbing up and down on the spot a little faster than she was before, both hands firmly between her legs. “I’ll be quick I promise.” She pleaded, pivoting her body and doing her best to look innocent. “Uhhh” Willow sighed, looking at Jana before laughing slightly to herself. “Well I guess…..” “WE LOVE BLUE WOMBAT!” A group to their right shouted loudly, causing them all to look over. “Shit, we need to be quick!” Francesca commented, they were no longer in first and the competition was literally right there! “Let go!” Willow said urgently as they pushed towards the pub, leaving Roxy standing on her own again. Looking back for a moment the others paused as they watched the desperate woman put one foot tentatively in front of the other. Her lips still pursed and a pained expression on her face. “Roxy….” Willow started. “Im fine!” Roxy shot back slightly angrily. Her body racked in pain and betraying her, she had never had this much trouble holding in her pee but right now she felt humiliated by her childish lack of control. Not needing any more encouragement or wanting to avoid her anger, the others dashed in. “Look, the toilets empty I could go now!” Victoria said as they passed the ladies room, the door open and inviting them in. “No way, we are in second and only like a minute behind the others. What If the next place is the last one.” Francesca said, walking between Victoria and the toilet and steering her towards the bar. “Do you want to win?” “I want to not piss myself” Victoria said sadly, pivoting her right leg and squeezing herself a little tighter. “Well you better keep those ladies muscles clenched, im not loosing this because you were rude to us and then couldn’t control yourself.” Francesca replied, it seemed the closer they got to the front the more they were actually believing they could win it. Something that was making them a little more determined not to let anyone else off the hook for what they had claimed or said earlier. Next to them Polly couldn’t help but feel bad for Victoria, despite what she had said earlier. It was just who she was and was why they were friends. Although, part of her couldn’t help but feel a little good about herself, this time it wasn’t her that was causing them any problems. Her smaller bladder sure had been an issue early on, but since then she had only gone a couple of times and Francesca had been just as many times. But being completely truthful, she too could feel her bladder filling. It had been over almost an hour since she had peed and they had all been constantly drinking through that time. Placing a hand on her stomach she felt it churn slightly, the quantity of energy drinks sitting a little uneasily inside her. The fizzy liquid only amping up the pressure she and the others were feeling inside their bodies. Scanning themselves in Roxy was just about able to keep her outstretched hand steady enough for the barmaid to scan her. A strange look from the woman to the others asking them if they knew if she was ok, but she didn’t say anything. Handing over the cans that they all took swiftly, turning to leave. “Please, I need to pee and so does Roxy” Victoria pleaded as they approached the open bathrooms. “Im fine” Roxy replied in a coldly robotic tone, a bead of sweat rolling down the side of her face as she lumbered along behind them. “Well I need to pee, come on please!” Victoria begged. “Lets do this and if we are wrong you can pee, or if the taxi is a few minutes away then you can go then.” Willow countered, starting to feel bad for her but still wanting to win. “Oooh” Victoria whined, giving in and following them out into the nights air once more. But reaching the bottom of the slope to the pub she couldn’t help but moan loudly, doubling over and clutching herself again. “I cant drink any more, im about to explode!” She whined. “UHgh!” Roxy grunted beside them again, her body clearly reaching intolerable levels of desperation as she fought against the giant mass of liquid bearing down on her tiring muscles. “Do we even have to drink them” Roxy asked quietly, staring strangely at the can in her hand after taking a moment to regain some semblance of control. Although the question itself was a sure sign of how much she was struggling, at the start of the night or even an hour earlier she would never had suggested that. “Yeah, how would they know!” Victoria asked excitedly, looking over towards the others. “Do you guys really want to take that risk?” Willow asked. “Yeah, come on I want these tickets. Don’t get us disqualified now we are basically in the lead!” Francesca replied, folding her arms across her chest and giving both the desperate women a disapproving look. Ignoring the rest of them and dashing to a toilet was one thing, in fact Francesca was assuming that was what would happen when they finally reached their actual limits. But to get them disqualified was totally different. She and the others hadn’t gone all over town to mess it up now. “But I….” Victoria said exasperatedly, bending over clutching her stomach with one hand while the other stayed between her tightly crossed legs. “Right, lets do this. Who knows it might be the last one!” Jana said, pointing to the phone that had now been set up opposite them. “We love blue wombat” they shouted at Polly's phone again for the umpteenth time that night, some of them sounding far more convincing that others. The establishments and drinks blurring together and being hard to count as the night wore on. “Oooha” Victoria whined again, throwing the empty can away from herself and dropping into a crouched position, leaning back she began bobbing on her heels to give her stomach as much room as possible. Fumbling with her Jeans she undid the top button. Breathing heavily through her nose as she set her bladder free, although the relief was worryingly short lived. Another painful pulse rolling through her abdomen as she bounced, slamming her shoe into her crotch as if hammering a nail into a the boards covering the cracking defences of her muscles. The onslaught of water and drinks driving her crazy, the strange bouncing jostling everything around inside her violently but for some reason it seemed to help. The overbearing weight on her muscles gone, replaced with a painful sensation as if the expanded bag of water inside her was pulling on her skins nerves directly. But somehow it seemed to help her desperation, the pain replacing the overwhelming urge to pee like stubbing a toe to ignore a headache. “Right you guys said I could go if we got it wrong or the taxi is late?” She said to the others. “We were right!” Polly announced a moment later, “We in first again!” Wait, why were we rushing. What about that other group at the front shouting about blue wombat? Victoria thought to herself. "Weird, I guess that other group got another of the clues wrong and came here?" Willow said to Jana, Dam it that meant that was one option down for peeing now, Victoria thought to herself, but that still left…. But as she looked up a she noticed a cab pulling up, a group of 4 people rushing out and towards the pub. They must be the group in second and were only 2 minutes ahead of them. That kind of difference was tiny, a wrong turn in the taxi, even walking slower than them could cost them the lead. But Victoria couldn’t help but hope that somehow as she watched Polly talk to the driver, that he already had another fare lined up. She knew she shouldn’t be hoping for that, she and all of her friends really wanted these tickets. It was rumoured to be the last time the band would tour, they couldn’t miss this opportunity. But she felt minutes if not seconds from soaking her jeans and embarrassing herself. “He’s free!” Polly said waving them over to the now unoccupied cab. “Oooh” Victoria sobbed internally, before groaning loudly as she heaved her heavily bloated bladder up from her position. Forks of pain shooting out as her skin creaked under the strain of its increased mass. Ambling towards the cab next to the equally slow moving and deathly white Roxy, their footsteps was causing powerful pulses to radiate from their throbbing bladders. “Ooohohoh” The pair whimpered as the lowered themselves into the cab. “Oh GOD!” Roxy shouted as she sat down in the cab, a hand shooting to her waist, grasping at her jeans for a second before a loud and sudden tearing noise could be heard. Followed a second later by a series of loud clinks as the top button of her jeans exploded off them and ricochet around the cab. “Jesus” The cab driver muttered to himself. “Sorry” Polly said sweetly, hoping he wasn’t about to kick them out for that, or more likely the two writhing women clearly minutes from peeing in his cab. “Where too?” He said, shaking his head. “Hog and Handmaid please” Polly replied, the clue about an unlikely friendship fairly simple to deduce, although it had been a fierce discussion while waiting for Roxy and Victoria to reach them outside about this and the stag and pheasant. But of the two options this seemed the odder, so off they went. By this time in the night the roads were much clearer. It was almost midnight and everyone was clearly already where they were spending the night. The occasional taxi whizzed passed them, taking their drunk occupants home early. Lines of people were now starting to form outside the late night takeaways as they spilled out of the pubs and headed to the bars and night clubs that stayed open later. A quick detour to recharge before heading out again. “We neeeeeed to stop” Victoria whined again. “Ignore her” Francesca said, trying to play it off to the driver. “Im about to wet myself” “You better not!” The driver said angrily, looking in his rear-view mirror. “She can hold it, it will be fine!” Willow cut her off, ignoring her desperate plea and holding up a hand apologetically to the driver. “Wait, the toilet in town. Please, I can just use that.” Victoria countered, thinking back to Jana and her near miss earlier. “Its like 5 minutes to the next place, come on!” Francesca countered again. “We can hold it” Roxy said, her face a deep grimace as she violently gripped her crotch with all her might. Even with the button flying off and the temporary release, it was only helping so much in this position. “I cant….” Victoria repeated, rocking backwards and forwards in her seat. But as she stammered out those words she noticed the metallic silver cubicle go past in the window, a long line of desperate looking people waiting their turn. Several unable to wait and urinating publicly next to it, a couple even using the same bushes Jana had been forced to earlier. It seemed she had inadvertently used what seemed to be an almost regular feature for late night relief. Moaning deeply she hung her head, her feet starting to stamp into the floor of the car as she continued to rock in her seat, the subtle acceleration of the taxi telling them all the driver didn’t want to take any chances. A bonus for their chances of staying in first but as they hit a small pot hole that would have been bearable at lower speeds, Victoria and Roxy both groaned loudly. Their muscles assaulted by the sudden bump and shaking their control violently. Hearing the women grunt behind him, the driver once again looked their way. A prolonged glance back, not at their faces but the condition of the seats under them. Clearly worrying more about his upholstery than the uncomfortable passengers. Lifting his foot off the pedal he decided that the best option for him and his car was to take their time. Even if it put more time between the women and a bathroom, that wasn’t his problem. It would take longer but he knew from experience in this town hitting the pot holes wouldn’t end well. More than once desperate passengers had lost control in his car, then trying to blame him for going to fast and refusing to pay. He wasn’t going to give these women any reason not to pay, so doing his best to ignore the constant shuffling and grunting he focused on the road ahead. Trying to be as smooth and careful as possible. Despite this, the group arrived quickly at the next pub, a few smokers stood outside the front, but it looked like there was no que. “I need to pee” Victoria said again as she cradled her bloated bladder getting out of the taxi. A prolonged Grunt escaping from Roxy behind her. The weight of standing tugging down at her muscles as gravity took hold and she lost the support of the seat. Swallowing deeply the dark-haired woman closed her eyes, sucking in her lips and she fought ever increasingly urgent waves of desperation. She had passed all previously known limits and desperation levels almost an hour ago. Roxy didn’t know how this could get any worse, but she was determined to hold it all in, no matter what. Her bladder was indestructible and would take anything she threw at it! “I need to pee” Victoria announced once more, no one seemingly acknowledging her. “Fine you can pee when we submit the clip” Francesca snapped, they had all heard her the first 10 times in the cab. At least Jana hadn’t gone on about it like she was now. “I need to go now!” Victoria pleaded, her legs violently shaking and rubbing furiously together. “How about we at least get the drinks?” Jana suggested “That way if anyone else comes in we don’t lose any time behind them?” Nodding Victoria continued slowly towards the pub, but behind them they noticed another taxi pulling up. It was the group from before! “Quick!” Willow almost shouted “I cant do quick!” Victoria answered back as Roxy heaved herself forwards. Her eyes burning and hands now grasping and clutching her aching bladder. One foot in front of the other was all she could think about as they made their way forwards. The other group seemingly more relaxed as one of them got out of the cab. Making eye contract with Polly it seemed like they realised the situation quickly, ushering the others to get out of the taxi. They were so close every second mattered! Maybe not at this pub or the next one, but they would all add up eventually. Turning Polly ran for it, joined by Francesca and Jana they apologised to a waiter on his way out the front door they almost ran into. Quickly finding the bar they approached the bar. “6 Blue wombat” Polly uttered breathlessly. “Sure thing” The barman said with a strange smile on his face. Combing a strand of her hair from her face Polly suddenly felt a little subconscious, why was he looking at her like that. Grabbing the cans, she went to run away before he remined her of their wrist bands. “Oh yeah sorry” She blushed again, holding out her hand just as the others made their way over. Roxy and Victoria slowly approaching as the other group barged through. Thankfully though Polly had got their first. “How can I help” A bar tender asked to their left, the other group instantly darting over. “Come on!” Polly waved them over urgently, but it seemed the two bloated and desperate women approaching we going as fast as their bodies would allow. The pained and heavy breathing audible even before they got to the counter. Finally having scanned themselves they each grabbed a drink a glance over to the other group showing they truly were neck and neck. Walking back towards the door Victoria slowed near the sign to the ladies. “I nee….” “Don’t even say it, move! What if this is the last place. You can pee after we find out.” Francesca said sternly Whimpering Victoria continued, picking up her pace and walking through the door, Jana having run ahead with Polly to set up their phone. The other group now passing them once again as the groaning and straining Roxy let out another deep noise as she hoisted her massively expanded body along. Breathing in through clenched teeth both of them made it outside, Willow waiting with the next door open and accidently holding it open for the other team. Emerging into the cold air they both gasped, their desperation peaking but moving next to Willow they are ready to film. “We love blue wombat!” Both groups yelled, almost in unison. The night air filled with the popping sounds of a dozen cans being opened. Tipping them back most of them guzzled them down, the two groups eyeing each other as they raised their cans further and further into the air. Sucking the drinks out of the cans and greedily slurping them as fast as possible. The nights race could be won or lost in these moments. Or….there could be another 10 pubs to go. A thought that hit Roxy as she grunted into her can. She was desperately trying to drink but there was in immovable lump in her throat, her whole body tensing up to save her bladder. It was maxed out, hitting its capacity several drinks ago. But despite this she had continued to down them, but now it seemed that it was just impossible. “Oaaahhh!” Roxy groaned, doubling over violently as her body rebelled against drinking anything more. Forks of pain radiated from her bladder, her skin tingling painfully as it was stretched taught across her massively distended abdomen. The basket ball sized protrusion pushing against her already damaged clothes. The sheer weight of it pulling on the tendons in her back as she stooped. Next to her, the others in her group had finished, even Victoria who was already dancing around madly. Sweat was pouring off both of them as they struggled, grunting and groaning. “Allright we got it” Someone from the other group yelled.” “Arhhhh” Roxy shouted as she pulled herself up, forcing the can to her lips and drinking again. Her bladder shaking and painfully contracting inside of her. But they had a contest to win, her bladder could take it. Finally the can was empty and upturning it Polly rushed over to the camera, maybe if her connection was better they could upload first? Although what would really matter was who could get the taxi to the next place first. Something that had already occurred to her. While Roxy had been struggling with the drink she had grabbed Jana’s phone and quickly booked them a taxi. It would already be on the way, so even if they were now in second they would quickly retake the lead. “YYYEEEESSS!!!!” A shout came from her left. Looking over the group next to them were celebrating, sharing hugs and high fives. “No….” Polly said softly as the realisation dawned on them. They were not just celebrating being in first….but they had won!” *Ding* Looking down it only confirmed it. “congratulations on completing the challenge, you have placed 2nd” Congratulations……. Polly thought to herself. “No way it was that close” Willow in disbelief as they watched the other group enter the pub to celebrate. “We lost?” Jana said sadly, everything she had been through tonight had been for nothing? We might have won if someone could have controlled themselves Roxy said, her face sweating and in a mess that made it seem a little hypocritical to be confronting someone about the size of their bladder. Yet it seems she couldn’t resist taking one last shot at Jana, the discomfort she was in caused by the blonde haired woman who has seen fit to doubt her. There was never any question in her mind. “Me?” Jana asked, now annoyed that her friend was blaming her. “Yes you, if you could have held it until the next pub we wouldn’t have come second” “Guys…I really need to pee!” Victoria interjected, for some reason not just rushing off to the bathroom the moment the result came in. Now dancing around them in a small circle. “Well, now its over we can go. Those of us that have some self control” Roxy replied, squinting at Jana as sweat rolled down from her forehead. “Actually, if you remember, you agreed to hold it until we were back home. I don’t know about this but it doesn’t seem like your house to me?” “You cant be serious?” Willow said to Jana, indicating to the throbbing, desperately dancing women that looked seconds from exploding in a shower of piss. “Hey, im not stopping them peeing now. Im just saying what they agreed too” Jana said, knowing full well what that kind of thing would do to Roxy. She may as well have been stopping her physically. “Fine, im in nnn…no hurry” Roxy said, folding her arms across her chest. “I don’t fucking care anymore, ive already said sorry so im going to go and pee before I piss my pants right here.” Victoria said, slowly and with careful steps walking back towards the pub. Raising an eyebrow Jana once again silently challenged Roxy, wondering if Victoria giving in would end her prideful display. She once again couldn’t help but be impressed by the display of fortitude, but now it was just getting silly. She was clearly in pain but refusing to give up. Her entire body seemed to be quivering and straining at the seams to keep the nights worth of drinks inside of her. The contest was over but still wouldn’t give in, not that she was helping make that easy. “Guys! There was a huge line and im about to pee myself!” Victoria said hastily as she arrived back at the group, an exerted and worried look on her face. Now moving faster to the annoyance of Roxy and Francesca. It seemed now that she wasn’t trying to hold it and was simply looking for somewhere to pee she had become frantically fast moving. Her legs bouncing up and down as she almost marched around them in desperate agony. “Well the Taxi is here and Roxy’s house is like 3 minutes away” Willow suggested. She was done with tonight, they hadn't won the tickets and now she just wanted to get home and relax. “Well I have to say, I didn’t expect you to make it.” Francesca admitted as a red-faced Victoria and pale as a sheet Roxy walked in, the latter having thrown her keys to Willow to open up. Unable to take the time or concentration away from holding herself to find the keys and unlock the door. Their stomachs and bladders several times larger than they had been when they had left 5 hours earlier. “Well…we….did” Roxy replied, pausing for breath between each word. It might have been an attempt at emphasis and to rub it in their faces, but if it was, it had failed dramatically and only emphasised how close she was to her limit. “Just” Willow threw into the conversation, a smile on her face. Now with the toilet so close to them, she didn’t mind jibing at them again. After all, it was all their own prideful fault. “I…Im fine. I could keep going longer” Roxy muttered out in her direction. “Oh no, no more. I’m not letting you bust my bladder any more than you have already.” Victoria said, monetarily looking up to waggle a finger at Roxy before shuddering and returning the much needed hand to between her legs. “Yeah and you don’t have to pretend any more, we can see your bladder through your shirt, not to mention what its done to your jeans.” Willow said, pointing at the giant bulge sticking out of her usually flat stomach and broken jeans. “It looks like your jeans are about to burst open” Victoria added, still marching on the spot. Seemingly waiting for someone to give her permission to pee still. “Im fine, im in control” Roxy said in a monotone voice as her eyes twitched in response to the obvious lie she was trying to perpetrate. “Really, even now?” Jana asked, smiling in disbelief about her friend’s stubbornness. But taking a deep breath she shook her head. “Look, you’ve kept your word and I can’t say I’m not impressed. Why don’t you just go and pee.” “I am fine!” Roxy repeated, swallowing hard at the end of the sentence. “I….didnt say you weren’t” Jana started before being cut off by a tug on her shirt. “Um I…” A red-faced Polly said, her face contorted in desperation herself. She had managed to go the last few pubs without going, a source of pride but also discomfort for the small woman. Somehow despite the onslaught of drinks, she had managed to stay level with Francesca on pees. Despite her small frame and small bladder she hadn’t been the cause of their loss. Not that she blamed Jana either, the other group must just have been faster. “Can I….” Polly started before frowning and bending slightly. “Of course Polly, you don’t have to ask me.” Jana said moving to the side as the desperate woman ran through. Why were they asking her, had she really taken over as task master of their bladders? “Ok im next” Francesca added, despite having peed the most frequently during the night and being far less desperate than either Victoria or Roxy. In fact it would have been hard to tell she even needed to go if she hadn’t asked, a familiar thing to happen through the night. Despite never having actually looked desperate the entire night, she had been the one afforded most toilet breaks along with Polly. “No way, when she comes out I need to go otherwise there will be a massive wet patch in your hallway Roxy, Tell her.” Looking longingly at the door to her own toilet she snapped out of the trance, her white cheeks flushing as if being discovered that she actually needed to pee. “Your bladder can handle it, I thought you had control.” Roxy replied, being caught out making her double down, almost challenging Victoria or mocking her for admitting such a basic need. “We can wait until after them all.” Roxy continued her eyes blinking quickly as she clearly winced as something painful happened inside her maxed out bladder. “We have drunk like a million pints, and I’ve only peed once!” Victoria cried, re-crossing her legs tighter and banging her balled up fists into her thighs in despair or anger. “I haven’t gone once.” Roxy said coldly, flinching again as despite her confident words her body betrayed her. Painful rumbling pulses beginning to flow through her distended bladder as the waves of pee crashed up against her straining muscles. The tight cramping sensations she had been feeling for over an hour now impossible to ignore, and it was taking all her strength not to be constantly groaning from the monumental effort. The few she had accidently let out made her feel ridiculous, imagine not being able to contain yourself. “Yeah and just look at you!” Victoria replied, doubling over while indicating to the heavily pregnant looking, sweating mess that the once beautiful woman had become, all for the cost of her pride. Hearing the toilet flush through the otherwise quiet house both desperate women flinched, pursing their lips and bending over slightly. A moment of hesitation that might prove fatal as the door opened to reveal a slightly awkward looking Polly who was now being stared at. But a couple of seconds later she was pushed out of the doorway by Francesca who claimed the bathroom despite the earlier protests. The door shutting and the sound of the small metal bolt sliding into place audible above the exhale of air from Victoria. Staring at the badly painted white door, Victoria couldn’t take it any more, her bladder throbbed and this time her muscles were going to listen to its demand to relieve itself. “Oh god.” She said, standing upright and cupping her groin with both hands. She could feel it, the inevitable was happening, her muscles were faltering. The steel walls of her bladder beginning to buckle under the weight of the energy drinks inside her, was that extra pint of water the fatal drink of the night? She knew she couldn’t hold it any longer, her mind already made up. Shuffling more than walking she rushed past the others, heading for her only salvation, the small patio back garden. Reaching the large glass doors she almost wept as they refused to move, her muscles quivering and burning as she took their much needed support away. For a second she felt her muscles contract and then relax. Clenching for all she was worth she regained control and despite the momentary relaxation she couldn’t feel any wetness, a small blessing considering. Continuing to clench her thighs, she ground them against each other as she bounced on one foot. But thankfully she had been here before and knew she only needed to click the little white handle thing, something easier when sober and not breaking your neck for a piss she thought to herself. But after a few seconds she managed to click open the door, sliding it open and rushing through. Hitting the now cold air of the night she felt her bladder spasm again and this time a burst of pee rushed through her defences, a small warm patch now in her underwear but she was more worried about the rest of it, than the tiny amount that had escaped. Not even making it out of the doorway she took two steps and yanked her jeans down, the top button already undone before the taxi ride back. Groaning loudly a heavy stream erupted between her toned thighs even before she was in position, her feet arching slightly in her shoes as she finally got what she wanted. Her body relishing in the immense pleasure it felt as she relaxed, her head falling back as she breathed a ragged and deep sigh of relief. The loud splattering continuing as her steaming piss forced its way out of her at some speed in the best pee she had ever taken. “Im going to order a Pizza” Francesca announced as she walked out of the bathroom, clearly not phased or unaware of what Victoria had just done. Willow excitedly pointed a finger at her, following towards the kitchen and the delivery menus. “All yours” Jana said, smiling and indicating to the toilet. Roxy’s quivering body jerking slightly as she recovered from hearing the rushing noise of the loud water pipes in her house as Francesca flushed. The cistern in particular burrowing into her psyche as it refilled noisily, pumping and dripping noises amplified by the cracked porcelain. “Do…you need to g…go?” Roxy stammered at Jana through a clenched jaw. More beads of sweat rolling down her face as she chewed her lips. “What?” Jana asked confused. “Do…..” Roxy trailed off, nodding or perhaps teetering towards the door. A strange flutter of her eyes and quiet pained squeak escaping her lips as she convulsed slightly. “I mean I want to pee yeah but…” Jana started, but was cut off by Roxy. “I… I….I can wait” Roxy smiled unconvincingly. “Seriously?!” Jana said incredulously, unable to believe how far Roxy was going to prove her superiority. “Fine” She added raising her hands up in surrender, shaking her head and walking into the toilet before she said something she regretted. In truth she had been getting desperate but would have been fine to wait, but this seemed like the only way to get Roxy to give in and pee. However as soon as the door was closed Roxy couldn’t help but groan again. With no one watching her, the façade she was playing for the last 2 hours fell apart instantly. With her left hand shoved un-lady like down the front of her jeans, Roxy stood firmly on one leg as the other crossed and re-crossed itself around it. Winding itself around the other tightly and squeezing it like an anaconda. The manic movements and pulses from her giant bladder causing her to grunt with each passing second, but the steely look and fire in her eyes remained. She would prove to them all that she could hold it, even as the fiery pain began to amplify between her legs. Striking painful sensations building up from her core and bounding around inside her numb muscles. “Ooooah” she groaned suddenly, doubling over and outstretching a hand to grab hold of the bathroom door frame. Sweat dripping off her face and onto the floor as she silently stood their staring at the floor. Her eyes bloodshot and unblinking as she felt her whole-body cramping, strange pins and needles going up and down her limbs as wild goose bumps formed all over her skin. Her giant and abused bladder tingling like nothing she had experienced before, the pain of the last hour amplifying constantly. Meanwhile outside Victoria was still revelling in her pee. It seemed to have no limit, the giant puddle expanding outwards from her and encompassing much of the tiny yard. But finally she felt her stream loosing power, a few last drips falling into the wet mess she had made. Sighing deeply she let her body relax fully, her bladder still tingling slightly but feeling much better now. Standing slowly she took a moment to inspect the damage to her clothes and was happy to see that despite the feeling only a tiny wet spot could be seen on her jeans. It would be almost impossible for anyone to see, but pulling her clothes on fully she couldn’t help but feel the cold wetness of her underwear against herself. Adjusting herself she buttoned up her trousers, sighing in relief once more and patting her bladder. The dull thump reminding her of the fact there was still so much more to pass through. But now she was back home she wouldn’t have to worry about that. Sliding the door open she entered the house, taking a last glance at her puddle and hoping it would dry quickly so the others wouldn’t see. Although, she was kind of proud of the size of it, maybe it would make the others realise how seriously desperate she had been if they did see it. “Oh my god!” Victoria said as she walked through to the corridor, unable to believe the sight before her. A dark stain already spreading down the back of Roxy’s jeans, the denim material darkened down her left leg. Hunched over and clutching the door frame Roxy’s enormous bladder had finally won the battle for control. For a few seconds she had been leaking, a slow but steady trickle escaping her burning muscles, the warmth flowing down between her clenched thighs and around her backside. Groaning she had tried to stem the stream but she had already been clenching with all her strength. There was simply nothing she could have done. She didn’t even hear Victoria come back in, her ears filled with the sound of her own pulse as she held her breath. But a few moments later the dam gave way and the ocean of pee stored in her bladder began to rush out. A loud hissing noise emanating from between her legs as a tide of wetness exploded out of her. A torrential downpour starting between her legs as the dark stain grew rapidly in all directions. Both the front and back of her legs darkening quickly as the material became saturated with her accident, slightly yellow streams flowing off both of her knees and rushing out the bottom of her trousers and filling her shoes. They themselves going from a light grey blue to an almost navy colour as they filled and began to overflow. Quivering Roxy shook violently as her body continued to relax, the spasms caused by her body trying to relax and empty as quickly as possible. She had pushed her body to its absolute limits and breaking point. The volume of liquid coming out of her astonishing Victoria, how was it possible one person could be holding so much. I mean, she had seen the size of her bladder bulge but still, this was ridiculous. Stepping back the puddle around the now panting woman continued to grow, a flushing noise from the bathroom temporarily drowning out the hissing and pattering of the accident. “What the….” Jana said from the other side of the door. As it opened it was clear why, Roxy’s accident had gone under the door, the thin carpet on this side unable to soak it all up and some of it had gone under the door of the bathroom. Expanding across the even tiled floor and almost trapping Jana in there. For more than two minutes Roxy peed, the energy drink’s, beer and water of the night finally catching up with her and making a bid for freedom. But finally she ran dry, the corridor absolutely soaked in her urine. Standing there the three of them didn’t say anything, Jana and Victoria exchanging a glance of what to say. “Who wants Pizza!” Polly said gleefully as she rounded the corner to be met with the wet scene in front of her. The accident happening almost silently in the house. Blushing her face went bright red, eyes wide like a deer caught in headlights. “I..bud..tu..fff” She stammered, causing Victoria to start laughing. Roxy and Jana joining in, the reality of the night sinking in and what had just happened. The things they did for free tickets, they thought to themselves. 1 week later..... Sitting at a table in a coffee shop Polly and Jana were sipping on their drinks as both their phones dinged. Casually looking over Polly couldn’t help but let out a strange squeal of surprise and happiness as she looked over the message she had just gotten. It was from the promotions organisers. “Due to violations in the rules and stipulations of the contest, the group previously awarded first place has been disqualified for failing to consume the drinks in the required fashion. After reviewing the CCTV footage provided by our partners of the group in question emptying out cans instead of drinking them. We are happy to announce that as runners up, you have now been awarded the provisional title of winners, pending an investigation into your group. Congratulations!” ------------------------------------------------------------------ I hope you all enjoyed the ending of the story. Let me know what you guys thought. Note sure if the extra bit at the end of them winning makes it better or worse haha, but who doesnt like a happy ending.! ola93, WiiGuy86, drthunder and 4 others 6 1 Quote Link to comment
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