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Guest Fukin E

This is a very VERY old story I wrote about 3-4 years ago. I though.. "Hey, I should rewrite this". So I did... Here's the results

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Mario entered the Kart Racing Lobby, along with his brother Luigi. This was the first Kart race the kingdom has ever had, everybody wanted to watch.

Mario grabbed a pen a signed himself in, then gave the pen to Luigi.

Luigi fumbled with the pen, then sloppily signed himself in. He started to fumble with his overall strap, thinking about the race.

The lady behind the desk finally spoke up. "The men's locker room is on the right, Mario and Luigi."

Mario collected the locks and their combinations, then thanked the woman. He gently grabbed Luigi's hand and led him to the locker.

"Okay Luigi, I want you to put your locker next to mine so we don't have to be too far away before the races."

Luigi nodded.

Mario picked out a locker and put his lock on it. 

Luigi did the same to a locker next to his older brother.

Mario carefully pulled out the back of Luigi's sweatpants and peeked at the diaper underneath, to his luck it was clean. "Okay Luigi, are you ready to race?"

Luigi shifted back and forth and crossed his legs.

"What's wrong Bro?"

Luigi pointed to the bathroom and grabbed Mario's hand.

Mario realized and patted Luigi's back. "Gotta go potty? You can just go... "

Luigi lightly opened his legs and smiled.

Mario chuckled and opened his locker. He dug out a clean diaper, rash cream, and some powder.

Luigi walked over to the bathroom and gestured Mario to hurry up.

Mario quickly locked his locker and ran into the bathroom with Luigi.

 

In the bathroom Mario put Luigi in a changing table. He took off the wet diaper and disposed it, then he put the new diaper underneath Luigi and put the powder on him. Mario lifted the diaper over Luigi's member and taped it up.

Luigi got up and put his pants back on. 

"We should get ready for the race, Bro"

Luigi walked back out to his locker and put on a helmet.

Mario walked out and nearly ran into Yoshi. "Oh my! I didn't see you Yoshi!"

"That's okay! I can take a hit"

Mario looked at Luigi, who was messing with his overall strap

"Hey... Luigi" Yoshi said. "I heard you know a lot about ghosts"

"Yeah...."

"Can you tell me what a ghost is?"

"Ghost is... d-dead people w...who can't pass over"

"What are the ball things?"

"Energy"

Bowser bursts through the door. "When I win this race, Peach will HAVE to love me!" He bellowed, then spewed some fire and stomped past the trio.

Luigi whimpered and covered his ear, since he was sensitive to loud noises.

Bowser looks at Luigi and gasped. "Oh my... I'm so sorry! I didn't know you were here"

"It's okay" Mario mumbled.

Luigi checked his watch. "M..Mario.... race time..."

Mario looked at the clock. "Oh my! It is race time!" Mario runs over to a pipe. "Come on Luigi!"

Luigi walked over to the pipe and stared into it. 

"Go on.... The race is down there"
Luigi whimpered, then slowly hoisted himself into the pipe. He tumbled in head first.

 

Luigi popped out of a pipe in Deflino Island, next to a race track.

Mario came out shortly after and help his brother up. "That wasn't too bad was it?"
Luigi nodded, then sat down on a bench and waited for the race to start.

 

A few minutes later a voice cam over the speakers. "Alright racers! Get into your carts!"

All the racers gone into their karts. 

Luigi's kart was specially made for him and his condition. The steering wheel had a fluffy cover on it, so he was comfortable holding it, the kart also was wider so if Luigi had an accident he could adjust himself without having to get out of the kart. His most favorite thing was that the gas pedal was a clutch on the steering wheel.

"Racers! Start your engines!"

Everybody turned on their karts.

"3... 2... 1.... GO!"

Everybody sped off, some of the people bumped into each other.

Luigi zoomed past King Boo and a shy guy, putting himself in 10th place. He went through a box and got a green shell, which he threw and hit Peach with.
"Ow!" she exclaimed as Luigi drove past her. 

Luigi zoomed past a few more driver, putting him in 3rd place. A shell hit him, causing his kart to spin. He felt a torrent of urine come out of him as he clung onto the wheel. After the kart stopped spinning he drove off again.  

Luigi zoomed past the racers that past him, then drove through another box. He was holding a mushroom, which cause his kart to go faster. Luigi giggled as he sped past his brother and Bowser. "I'm in first place!" he cheered. But his celebration was interrupted by a blue shell flying towards him. He screamed as the shell crashed into his kart. His kart flew up into the air, then crashed back down onto the asphalt.

The other racers watched in horror as Luigi cried and soiled himself. 

Peach was the first racer to talk. "Luigi... I..I'm so sorry. I didn't know"

Luigi sped away as fast as he can from them. he zoomed past the finish line and ran to the pipe. He let out a small sob, then hopped into the pipe.

 

He came back out of the pipe at the locker room. He ran to a bench and sat down on it.

Mario ran in after Luigi. "Bro! Are you okay?" Mario sniffed the air, then covered his nose. "Oh my! Somebody made a stinky"

Luigi blushed and covered his face with his hands.

Yoshi and Bowser came into the locker room. 

"Oh my... Bowser is that you?"

"God no! I don't smell that bad!.... Do I?"

Mario grabbed the bag from his locker and quickly escorted Luigi to the bathroom. 

Mario and Luigi went into the same stall as they did before the race.

Mario set Luigi onto the table adn takes off his diaper. He quickly changed Luigi.

Luigi cried throughout the whole change.

"Luigi... Calm down."

 

After what seemed like hours, but was only 5 minutes, Luigi stopped crying.

"Are you better?"

"Y..Yeah.."

Mario handed Luigi a trophy. "This is for you.."

"But... I didn't win..."

"Yes you did. You're the campion"

"I am..?" Luigi asked, a small smile growing on his face.

"Yes! You're the karting champ!"

Luigi giggled. "I'm the best karter in the WORLD!"

Mario smiled. "Yes..... yes you are"

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