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26 minutes ago, bustin2pee said:

I'd like your opinions/comments on a new character I'm thinking of producing, please.

All of my characters so far are slim young women in the 18-30 yr old range. I just want to do something a bit different and I'm toying with the idea of an attractive mature lady with a more rounded "fuller figure" possibly about 50 - 55 years of age. I'm thinking she could be a divorcee, a former teacher, who having left to raise a family has now returned to work as a supply teacher (sub). Her liking for coffee and her "not as strong as it was bladder" will create inevitable awkward desperate situations for her.

I'm asking because I realise a lot of members on here are probably in their 20s and 30s and may not be happy with a character in her 50s?

This is what I've come up with, I called her Mrs Diane Jackson

I'd love to hear your feedback

 

Mrs Jackson.jpg

I think she looks good. 

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5 hours ago, bustin2pee said:

I'd like your opinions/comments on a new character I'm thinking of producing, please.

All of my characters so far are slim young women in the 18-30 yr old range. I just want to do something a bit different and I'm toying with the idea of an attractive mature lady with a more rounded "fuller figure" possibly about 50 - 55 years of age. I'm thinking she could be a divorcee, a former teacher, who having left to raise a family has now returned to work as a supply teacher (sub). Her liking for coffee and her "not as strong as it was bladder" will create inevitable awkward desperate situations for her.

I'm asking because I realise a lot of members on here are probably in their 20s and 30s and may not be happy with a character in her 50s?

This is what I've come up with, I called her Mrs Diane Jackson

I'd love to hear your feedback

 

Mrs Jackson.jpg

A milf

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Ooh wow! This lady is beautiful!! 

I really like her figure, I think it looks like the kind of body complexion a woman in her 50's would have. Also, the pose's really well done! 

And for his backstory, I feel it's great! I had met an artist some time ago who I became friend with who was that age and also a sub teacher divorced all just like you said. Also she was super fan of coffee and also had a bladder not as strong as before when she was younger. 

So I think that's such a great backstory!!  today I wrote a message to my friend on his art site because it's been like 7 years I don't know about her and seeing the backstory of your character I realized I missed her. So you can say this character feels very lively and real.

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8 hours ago, HopBop said:

She looks fine, not sure about other people’s opinions. Her backstory sounds extremely karenesque, though 

Thanks

8 hours ago, Wildagram said:

I think she looks good. 

Thank you

 

4 hours ago, Codedog92 said:

A milf

She certainly is! I take that as an approval

 

2 hours ago, Cephy said:

Ooh wow! This lady is beautiful!!

Merci beaucoup! I'm so glad you can see her as a real person.

Thanks to all for your positive comments, I value them greatly.

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I think she's very attractive! In fact, she has a very striking resemblance to a music teacher who taught me during secondary school, who was also the head of the music department. She was a very attractive lady of a similar age and body type, who often wore sexy figure hugging dresses with heels or knee high boots. I was lucky enough to see her absolutely bursting for the loo on a few occasions, as she would often teach several lessons back to back and run activities during lunchtime, so she had very few opportunities for a loo break during the day. It was made even harder for her as although the music department building had tea and coffee making facilities, it did not have any toilets and the closest ones were a good 5 minutes walk away in another building. She was a very lively, outgoing lady and definitely wasn't shy about squirming around, crossing her legs or pee-dancing when she was bursting to go, although of course being the head of the department she did her best to stay professional and composed in front of the students.

I remember one afternoon I was in the school's recording studio waiting to record my A-level performance piece, and she was in the recording booth playing piano accompaniment for a singer. They eventually finished and came to the mixing desk to listen back to the recording and she looked absolutely bursting for a wee, in fact she was standing in pretty much exactly the same pose as the lady in the drawing - crossed legs, bending forwards slightly, one hand on her thighs and the other pressing down on the front of her dress. She had clearly been in there all day and hadn't had chance to leave to go to the loo. After they had listened back to the recording and were happy with it, she walked over to where me and a couple of other A-level students were sitting and was talking to us about what we were planning to record, but I was barely concentrating as she was now doing an extremely sexy 'need a wee dance', basically marching on the spot while lifting each thigh up across her body while bobbing up and down slightly. There was also a noticeable bulge where her extremely full bladder was pressing against her fitted dress. After I finished telling her what I was planning to play, barely able to keep my eyes off her thighs as she bobbed and marched on the spot right in my eyeline, she smiled and said 'Right, I'll be back shortly' before leaving the studio with as much composure as she could manage, trying to keep her thighs pressed together as she walked, bending forwards slightly, and I could hear her heels clicking down the corridor as she hurried to the loo!

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6 minutes ago, Despguy123 said:

I think she's very attractive! In fact, she has a very striking resemblance to a music teacher who taught me during secondary school, who was also the head of the music department. She was a very attractive lady of a similar age and body type, who often wore sexy figure hugging dresses with heels or knee high boots. I was lucky enough to see her absolutely bursting for the loo on a few occasions, as she would often teach several lessons back to back and run activities during lunchtime, so she had very few opportunities for a loo break during the day. It was made even harder for her as although the music department building had tea and coffee making facilities, it did not have any toilets and the closest ones were a good 5 minutes walk away in another building.

Thanks for that very interesting insight - I think you may have  given me the outline of a story now, if that's o.k. with you? As for the knee high boots - Mmmn... I like that! something I hadn't considered, but very erotic! I'm in the middle of my next project just now, but I'm starting to get excited about this lady, think she will be the follow on.

Thanks for your feedback.

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1 hour ago, bustin2pee said:

Thanks for that very interesting insight - I think you may have  given me the outline of a story now, if that's o.k. with you? As for the knee high boots - Mmmn... I like that! something I hadn't considered, but very erotic! I'm in the middle of my next project just now, but I'm starting to get excited about this lady, think she will be the follow on.

Thanks for your feedback.

Its perfectly fine with me! Glad I could offer some inspiration for a story. She taught me A-level music and I remember during one lesson in the afternoon she was struggling to concentrate on teaching, and because we were a very small class of 17-18 year olds she felt comfortable admitting to us that she was bursting for the loo as she hadn't had a break all day. She had been teaching all morning followed by break duty, then more teaching, then leading the jazz band rehearsal all lunchtime, then teaching all afternoon. She told us that because she had to go straight to a 'heads of department' meeting with the headteacher straight after school she wouldn't actually get to a loo until after 5pm, perhaps longer if the meeting overran as apparently it often did. She must have had a bladder of steel to be able to wait for so long, especially as she always seemed to start every lesson with a fresh cup of coffee.

I always loved the way she dressed. She had a pair of brown leather knee-high boots which looked amazing on her, and she wore heels quite often too which accentuated her sexy legs, and sometimes sandals in the summer months. She had a very 'active' teaching style and would often start the lesson by taking off her shoes or boots and leaving them under her desk, spending the lesson dancing around the room barefoot or in tights, moving over to the whiteboard to write something down, or over to the piano to demonstrate what she was teaching, or play something from her computer. I suppose part of her moving around so much was that is was a helpful distraction from having to hold a full bladder for hours with no chance of relief any time soon. 

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23 minutes ago, Foxlover said:

As a fan of mature women in omorashi situations, I, for one, am extremely excited to see her in action XD

Thank you, with all the positive feedback I've received, she's definitely going to feature in the next but one comic. I'm excited myself and I haven't even started the on the script or the story board yet, never mind the artwork!

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On 18/2/2021 at 18:25, bustin2pee said:

Me gustaría recibir sus opiniones / comentarios sobre un nuevo personaje que estoy pensando producir, por favor.

Todos mis personajes hasta ahora son mujeres jóvenes delgadas de entre 18 y 30 años. Solo quiero hacer algo un poco diferente y estoy jugando con la idea de una mujer madura atractiva con una "figura más completa" más redondeada, posiblemente entre 50 y 55 años de edad. Creo que podría ser una divorciada, una ex maestra, que después de haberse ido para formar una familia, ahora regresó a trabajar como maestra suplente (sub). Su gusto por el café y su "no tan fuerte como lo era la vejiga" crearán inevitables situaciones incómodas y desesperadas para ella.

Lo pregunto porque me doy cuenta de que muchos de los miembros de aquí probablemente tengan entre 20 y 30 años y es posible que no estén contentos con un personaje de 50 años.

Esto es lo que se me ocurrió, la llamé Sra. Diane Jackson

Me encantaría escuchar tus comentarios

 

Sra. Jackson.jpg

Because of her age, I think it would be interesting for her to like her students to have accidents and for her to always be secretly desperate, to make her story more interesting, to make the first student who made her have an accident, now see her get wetting

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As a female I find this one very relatable. I’m not quite as old as her but having had children I have a similar figure and lots of personal experience of being a supply teacher too! At one point I was also what’s known as a visiting specialist’ going round different schools helping with literacy and not having time to use a toilet but being given tea or coffee and almost every school! 

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