Tentacool 1,385 Posted July 31, 2021 Share Posted July 31, 2021 Although hydration is important I think they deserve a bit of a break, they've managed to come this far! B Quote Link to comment
JustARandom 22 Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 A The drinking doesn’t stop until there’s pee on the floor, mwahahahaha Quote Link to comment
Peeingonceaday 5 Posted August 16, 2021 Share Posted August 16, 2021 How about you make 2 endings, one for each choice? That way, people won’t be sad from the ending! Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
lethalty60 33 Posted August 23, 2021 Share Posted August 23, 2021 On 8/15/2021 at 8:21 PM, Peeingonceaday said: How about you make 2 endings, one for each choice? That way, people won’t be sad from the ending! Agreed! I'd like to see that happen. Peeingonceaday and Tentacool 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted September 5, 2021 Author Popular Post Share Posted September 5, 2021 Both girls decided having one last drink of something would be for the best. They were both desperately thirsty. Rina whimpered as she poured herself a drink of water. Sakura squirmed and sweated as she watched, her legs twisting like a pretzel. Rina handed her one, taking one for herself, and they both chugged the drinks. Rina's bladder pounded and pulsed, sending shockwave after shockwave through her body, but she finished drinking anyway. Sakura had to stop a few times to hold herself, her bulging bladder trembling back at her as she looked in the mirror, stopping to feel it, which made her twitch and groan. After they had finished their drinks, both girls climbed into the Rina's bed, spooning for the night. Rina was the little spoon, Sakura the big one. They figured being affectionate might help take their minds off of the main things that would be keeping their attention that night. Both girls shook violently as they laid in bed, Sakura meowing in pain a few times when Rina shifted her position directly into the neko's bladder, for which Rina apologized. Neither girl could get completely comfortable, given both the added bulge and the pain of holding so much for so long. Rina panted as both girls attempted to get in position. Finally, they both found a position comfortable enough to be able to get to sleep. Rina found herself on boat in the middle of the ocean. The waves were not only reminding her of her tremendous need, but also they were gently swaying the boat, making her bladder rock and jiggle. She held herself, hands between her legs as she crossed and double-crossed them tightly. Suddenly, a friendly whale came up to her, smiling at her, and she smiled back. It breached, and when it came back down the water splashed all over the place, and the remaining water was now yellow, including a yellow waterfall. She stared at the waterfall, before shutting her eyes tightly. She could still hear it, however, and it was at that point that she fell into the water! When she resurfaced, she was at a sporting event. She wasn't sure where exactly she was, but it was the New Hydrant Town Exploders vs. The Lemonadeville Waterfalls! She held herself as she sat down, hoping the game - whatever game it was - would be over soon. She had seen Master watch games like this in the past, but she never understood them. Suddenly, halfway through the game, the venue sprung a leak! Water began pouring in from all directions, making Rina whimper and hold herself with both hands rather than just the one. She looked around to see that nobody else seemed to be affected, though a few people had pulled their pants down and started peeing all over the place. It was enough to make Rina wake up! Sakura, meanwhile, found herself in a school. It wasn't one she was familiar with, but it was one she had dreamt about before. She was sitting in her set, in the middle of class, and the teacher was droning on, giving a lecture about how water travels through the human body, and how good the relief of peeing feels. Sakura's hand shot up, and the teacher called on her. "C-can I go to the bathroom!? P-please!?" she yelled. The teacher shook his head. "No, Sakura, you've asked too many times today!" He grabbed a bottle of water, which was of course filled with a familiar yellow fluid. "Now, class, observe this..." He undid the top and started slowly pouring it onto the ground. Sakura crossed her legs, rocking back and forth and she saw and heard this happen. The other students were all looking at her and taunting her about how badly she needed to pee. "Look! She looks like she's gonna POP!" someone said. She saw a water balloon explode and closed her eyes. When she opened them again she was at an aquarium, seeing fish swim around the... ngh... water... she felt her bladder stretching. She looked at the fish, noticing one swim up and then splash back down, water going absolutely everywhere, including out onto the patrons. She even got some on herself! That really did it. Sakura gasped, her hands pressed firmly into her naked crotch, as a few spurts of pent-up piss erupted from it, waking her up instantly. Sakura, being the first to awaken due to a spurt, rolled out of bed, being careful not to wake Rina as she went down the stairs to the kitchen to find something - anything to pee in! She checked the clock, 4:00 AM. They got several hours of sleep, at least. Speaking of 'they', Rina was the next to awaken. She hadn't lost anything but that would soon change. She ran downstairs as fast as her legs could carry her, and found Sakura in the kitchen, searching through the bowls and containers to try and find something big enough to contain the waterfall of pee that was boiling inside her. Rina decided to go a different route, running to the door. The running had made her leak, leaving little droplets of her pee on the floor in a trail leading up to the door. Finally she got it unlocked, though having to lift even one hand off the crotch made her lose a big spurt. She got outside and, not even noticing how chilly it was, ran to the nearest plot of freshly-fallen snow she could find, and released. Meanwhile, Sakura had found every bowl and tupperware container she could, but nothing was big enough, and she didn't want to ruin them anyway. She'd have to release outside, like Rina was doing! Running to the door, she opened it and went outside. She got two steps outside and noticed Rina peeing all over the ground and that's when she lost it. Rina was in heaven. She hadn't felt bliss like this in so, so long. Dozens of hours of piss finally shooting out of her like a maximum-power fire hose, creating yellow snow, and a melted patch giving way for Rina watering the grass. She barked, panting as her boiling hot piss tank was emptied onto the frigid whiteness below. She was still going, and didn't think she was even going to top any time soon, but she didn't care. Rina would pee until she physically couldn't anymore, and there was no force on earth that could stop her. Sakura was in much the same boat. She was still on their porch, but she felt like they wouldn't mind that much, especially since it wasn't on the carpet or anything... or at least that was what she hoped. She didn't care that much anyway, as moving from that spot seemed impossible. She had lost all strength in her legs from the tremendous, overwhelming sensation she was experiencing from finally getting the sweet relief her body had been craving since... probably before even Rina was! She was purring the whole time, her senses blinded by the sheer elation. Her pee was making yellow snow, melting it, and travelling down past the edge of the porch and onto the snow-covered garden down below. After 6 and a half minutes of full-force peeing, Sakura had finally stopped. Only a few trickles remained. Rina, however, was still going. It took her a full 8 minutes to get from full to empty, and it made her out of breath and exhausted. She just wanted to curl up right there and sleep for 12 hours, but she felt like she should probably get inside first. Fortunately, Sakura had thought of that. unfortunately, there was an issue. "It's locked!" She yelled back to her dog girl friend. "Uh-oh..." Rina walked up to join her, having regained the use of her legs after releasing, though admittedly she was sore in general, her holding muscles from having to put up with so much for so long, and her releasing muscles from having to push that much out of her. Sakura was in less pain, but she still felt it. But at least they both knew that this one would go away the next morning, unlike the pain they had been experiencing in their bladders. Both girls tried opening the door. "Locked?" Rina asked. "M-maybe it's frozen," Sakura suggested. They were both too physically weak from both exhaustion and the strain of holding and releasing in large quantities, so they couldn't get the door open. "Oh well," Rina said, now feeling the cold since her pee wasn't inside her to keep her warm anymore. "Let's just..." She started walking off the porch and into a fresher, whiter snow pile. "Let's just go to sleep out here..." "Rina, wait!" Sakura ran down to join her friend. She wanted to protest, but once she got close Rina grabbed her, hugging her close, the blue-tinted snow glistening in the night air, the frigid winds blowing against their naked bodies. Rina was holding Sakura like a kid with a teddy bear, and she wasn't letting go. She didn't care that they might freeze, she was just happy that she was finally comfortable. The snow was soft, if chilly, and she had someone to snuggle with, and neither of them had horribly distended bladders. It was cold, but nice. For the first time in days, she could actually relax, and maybe get a good night's sleep. Despite Sakura fighting against it, she soon lost the battle to her tired mind, and both girls fell asleep, snow slowly coating their naked bodies. When they both woke up, they were back in Rina's bed. "Huh?" Rina looked around. She had a heavy blanket on her. She smiled, but then realized it was all a dream! She grabbed herself, but... she didn't need to pee! She was... it hadn't been a dream! She was wondering how it was possible, when the answer literally looked her in the face. "Hello, Rina!" "MASTER!" She ran at him, tackle-hugging him to the ground, kissing him and licking his face, her tail wagging at 1000 MPH. "IMISSEDYOUIMISSEDYOUIMISSEDYOUSOMUCH!!!" She squeezed her master, who chuckled and hugged her a little more gently. "Awww... I missed you too!" He looked over at Sakura. "And I notice Sakura's here..." "Yeah... we, um... we both had to pee really bad, so Kura-san came over and we held it together." "Oh, Rina, I'm sorry! The repair people had left a message saying they were delayed, if I had known that I would've given you permission to go outside!" He frowned. "It's okay, Master!" Rina giggled, "I forgive you!" She nuzzled against him. "I'm just happy you're home!" He smiled and pet her. "You're a good girl, Rina." Rina barked louder at this, her tail swishing so fast it looked like it could decapitate someone. Sakura, meanwhile, was just waking up. She purred upon realizing that she both had an empty bladder and wasn't absolutely freezing upon waking up. She noticed Rina's master was home and smiled, realizing what had happened. "Thank you!" Sakura said to him, "Thank you for bringing us back inside!" She purred a bit louder. He stood up, Rina clinging to his leg, as he walked over and gave Sakura some much-deserved head pats. "I wasn't just gonna let you two sleep in the snow!" He chuckled. "Nya!" Sakura looked up at him and smiled. "Rina, I like him!" Her tail swished behind her. "He's mine!" She stuck her tongue out at Sakura playfully. They both laughed. "So, who wants a nice big glass of lemonade?" Master asked. They both looked at him. "...I'm kidding!" He laughed. They laughed too. Rina and Sakura were finally empty, and neither of them ever wanted to be that full again. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey guys! REALLY sorry about how long it's been! Without going into too many details, I've been getting distracted by side-projects, hobbies, and other random things, and the few times I've remembered this, it's been too late in the evening to start it, since if I was motivated I'd want to do it all in one sitting. To make up for that, this part is big. 😛 Almost 2000 words for a single part. 🙂 Got some dream sequences in there, full-blown descriptions of the final bit of relief, and the triumphant return of a character we've only heard about up until this point! Why am I being vague about these things? Assumedly you've read the part already if you're at the bottom reading this. Oh well. My point remains. And THIS STORY IS FINALLY DONE! 😄 I hope you all enjoyed it as much as I did! I love these characters, I think they're adorable and I might bring them back for future stories, but for now their chapter is complete. 🙂 I do have an idea for my next story (and as it turns out, having an idea for the next story is a great motivator for finishing the current one! :P), so I hope to see you all for that one! It'll be a bit more of a mixed bag, with desperation still being the main focus, but with a smattering of other fetishes thrown in their too, for good measure. Think of it like my version of Zone Pink. 😛 Now, this doesn't mean I won't be active on here again. If you want to give me feedback on the story, I'm happy to hear it, but if you see me post in this topic again, it won't be another part of the story. 😛 I hope you're all having a wonderful day, and I hope more than anything that you liked the ending of the story. I tried to please everyone I could, though the idea was that since they had an extra glass each, that was too much and they couldn't hold through the night. 🙂 I don't know how to end things, so... peace! :3 Red Simpson, GermanShepherd, animefreak256 and 6 others 4 1 4 Quote Link to comment
Gatto-Italiano 58 Posted September 5, 2021 Share Posted September 5, 2021 It was very fun to read this, thank you! Bees 1 Quote Link to comment
LifeIsStrange 1,001 Posted September 5, 2021 Share Posted September 5, 2021 That was quite interesting, can't wait to see your next story. Bees 1 Quote Link to comment
Peeingonceaday 5 Posted September 5, 2021 Share Posted September 5, 2021 Yay it finally ended I loved this story Bees 1 Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted September 5, 2021 Author Share Posted September 5, 2021 6 hours ago, Gatto-Italiano said: It was very fun to read this, thank you! Thank YOU! :3 It was very fun to make it! 4 hours ago, LifeIsStrange said: That was quite interesting, can't wait to see your next story. 😄 Thank you, I'm looking forward to it as well. 4 hours ago, Peeingonceaday said: Yay it finally ended I loved this story 😄 Thanks for your kind words. I'm really glad so many people enjoyed this. BlueRaven 1 Quote Link to comment
DryDragon 2 Posted September 6, 2021 Share Posted September 6, 2021 This story was great! Bees 1 Quote Link to comment
Tentacool 1,385 Posted September 8, 2021 Share Posted September 8, 2021 Woooo!!! 🐙💛💛 Bees 1 Quote Link to comment
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