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12 minutes ago, Bismiris said:

Is the spell designed to close off bathrooms until the caster is done?

The spell closes off a room until someone says politely asks to come in.  The joke being the magic word to end the spell is of course "please."  In my head the spell is designed to keep rude people out and thus give the caster peace of mind from needing to deal with them.  

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I really enjoyed this story, especially the part where she loses control!  I was interested from the beginning because I love cute witches, and this didn't disappoint!  I could complain that you don't describe Rebecca's appearance in much detail, but summarizing her outfit as "a witchy aesthetic" is entertaining in its own right.  My only serious complaint is that the twist about the spell isn't conveyed very well.  I didn't get it until I read your response to Bismiris, and when I read the ending over I still didn't think you made it clear.  Otherwise a very fun read!

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2 hours ago, Jimmy Olsen said:

I really enjoyed this story, especially the part where she loses control!  I was interested from the beginning because I love cute witches, and this didn't disappoint!  I could complain that you don't describe Rebecca's appearance in much detail, but summarizing her outfit as "a witchy aesthetic" is entertaining in its own right.  My only serious complaint is that the twist about the spell isn't conveyed very well.  I didn't get it until I read your response to Bismiris, and when I read the ending over I still didn't think you made it clear.  Otherwise a very fun read!

Thank you!  I really appreciate the feedback.  Looking back I agree I could have conveyed the twist better.

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I had this tab open for a while to read.  I finally got around to it.  Nice story, but not quite what I was expecting.  I was expecting the peace of mind spell to kick in and Rebecca would no longer hold onto resistance and she would begin pissing herself or something like that.  I suppose that would have been the more predictable story, at least to me.  Either way, I enjoyed this read.  Thanks for sharing.

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7 hours ago, ilikeadultvids said:

I had this tab open for a while to read.  I finally got around to it.  Nice story, but not quite what I was expecting.  I was expecting the peace of mind spell to kick in and Rebecca would no longer hold onto resistance and she would begin pissing herself or something like that.  I suppose that would have been the more predictable story, at least to me.  Either way, I enjoyed this read.  Thanks for sharing.

That's an interesting idea!  I really just wrote this story for the joke of having a "what's the magic word" joke but I missed the mark on that one.  I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

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