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21 hours ago, sednarb1 said:

The only thing that could have made that better, is if she was telling the story, herself.

Yeah, I considered that right after publishing it. It didn't feel right to write in first person whilst filling in the gaps. I may do a cut down version in her voice excluding the added details. Just experimenting and trying to get the feel for the literotica tone mostly. Thanks for the feedback though 🙂

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