throwawayname 16 Posted September 16, 2020 Share Posted September 16, 2020 Ah! I see you're incorporating Stanley's suggestion-- Love it 😄 Another great chapter & looking forward to the next. Spooky times ahead 💀. I also wonder what will happen when someone inevitably finds Shayla prove her claim that the pullup is 'just a formality' false. Who will discover her first? Will May try to comfort her in the spooky place, or will May be spooked into an accident of her own? I'm interested to find out. Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
Night Rain 1,157 Posted September 18, 2020 Share Posted September 18, 2020 Very nice chapter I can think of a couple of paths I'd like to see the end of the chapter go. Though those are my own ideas, overall a nice addition. maxiipaddd 1 Quote Link to comment
KatiePeesHerse 2 Posted September 25, 2020 Share Posted September 25, 2020 Would love to see more of Melody. Stanley79 and Big Girl Stacy 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Seifer69 744 Posted October 5, 2020 Share Posted October 5, 2020 This story is brilliant looking forward to reading the next segment wondering who will wet first. Quote Link to comment
YuriChaosLord 201 Posted October 6, 2020 Share Posted October 6, 2020 21 hours ago, Seifer69 said: This story is brilliant looking forward to reading the next segment wondering who will wet first. I hope Shayla! 😜😏 Quote Link to comment
Seifer69 744 Posted October 6, 2020 Share Posted October 6, 2020 I hope personally all four wet themselves by all scaring each other or something Quote Link to comment
Dynamic 133 Posted October 7, 2020 Share Posted October 7, 2020 So I had a thought: what if Fern runs out of sunshine stickers? Does that mean that everybody just has to wet themselves? I would like to see how that conversation would go down. OwOmOsan 1 Quote Link to comment
trekkie 1,098 Posted October 7, 2020 Share Posted October 7, 2020 And I still wanna see Fern in I'm-also-a-client mode. A little too much soda before bed leads to her waking up more soaked than any of her charges, and having to use it as a teachable moment. littlemaya, Rubic13, joebarnes and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment
joebarnes 32 Posted October 7, 2020 Share Posted October 7, 2020 1 minute ago, trekkie said: And I still wanna see Fern in I'm-also-a-client mode. A little too much soda before bed leads to her waking up more soaked than any of her charges, and having to use it as a teachable moment. Now this is something I can get behind! However I am still stoked for anything you have in store 🙂 Quote Link to comment
Kudamono 30 Posted October 12, 2020 Share Posted October 12, 2020 This story is amazing, can’t wait for the next chapter! Quote Link to comment
Bäda 4 Posted October 27, 2020 Share Posted October 27, 2020 Hi Stacy great story so far. Really looking forward to more Quote Link to comment
AnonyMax 1 Posted November 12, 2020 Share Posted November 12, 2020 Looking forward to more of this! I will say that I agree with a previous comment from a while back that Shayla needs a break. She came into this as a bedwetter but keeps having daytime accidents now. Unless you're going in the direction of her starting to enjoy it (I've seen some hints of it), I personally would like if she got dialed back a bit so she was no longer the most frequent wetter. It would also be more realistic if she stopped letting her pride get in the way. I've read tons of stories (omo and otherwise) that go all-out on the character refusing to learn from their mistakes and/or refusing to get help dealing with a problem or bully. And frankly I can't see an 18-year-old continuing to do that. Even if it doesn't work, it feels weird for Shayla to not at least TRY asking for the bathroom at earliest opportunities, telling Fern about what Emily's doing (since she apparently has a history of being a bitch I highly doubt Fern would just blow her off), or at least being more open about her problems. I was genuinely surprised when she didn't ask Fern for some shorts/pants that covered her up better. For the record, I am REALLY enjoying this story! I just tend to fixate on criticism when it comes to giving my opinion, and I don't want to see this fall into the trap of so many other stories where a problem could easily be solved by just a bit of communication and/or common sense. Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
Big Girl Stacy 926 Posted November 13, 2020 Author Popular Post Share Posted November 13, 2020 Shayla and May heard Willow and Emily slowly approaching, winding around the same corners and walking through the paths. Shayla crossed her legs and fidgeted in place while May stood, completely stationary. Knowing that she would have to hold it a bit longer, Shayla asked May “What should we do?” Thinking quickly, May replied “We’ll hide from them. They have a different set of clues, so they shouldn’t need to go into the cave.” Shayla looked reluctantly into the cave, its pitch black darkness sending shivers through her spine. I hope we don’t have to stay in there too long. Shayla thought. With no time to consider further options, hearing the footsteps of Willow and Emily approaching, May and Shayla rapidly ducked back into the cave and crawled in. This time, the darkness made Shayla even more uncomfortable, as she urgently wanted to escape into the woods to relieve herself. I really hope I don’t have to use my pull-up, Shayla prayed. May and Shayla crawled towards the light they saw earlier, trying to move as quietly as possible. Though they were now sufficiently out of view, the girls advanced onward if just to ensure they could sit under the light and look out. The crawling, stretching, and minor scrapes on her legs all made it harder for Shayla to hold on to her pee. This deep into the cave, the girls heard nothing of Emily or Willow. The overwhelming silence in the dark, damp place was only broken by the clumsy and irregular landings of the girls’ hands and feet on the rocky floor. Shayla tried her best to look around, but to no avail. With extremely little light and her eyes still adjusting to the blackness, Shayla grew very nervous of the cave around her. The claustrophobia put her on edge, leaving her nerves on a hair trigger. Finally, she spotted the light and gradually advanced toward it. She positioned herself next to May underneath the hole in the cave, leaning against the cold and wet cave wall. The coldness increased her need to pee even more, and she crossed her legs tightly in front of her. May intently put her ear towards the hole, attempting to listen for signs of Emily or Willow. In her quietest voice, Shayla whispered “Maybe they’re gone.” I really hope they are! May put a finger up to her mouth and continued to listen. Faint voices and footsteps could still be heard within the cave, but they seemed distant. Feeling her control loosen and begin to fail, Shayla decided to quietly speak up. “I can’t hold it in much longer!” She rasped. For a silent moment, the girls continued to listen as Shayla shifted on her butt and buried her fingers deep within her crotch. Shit! I’ve got to go now! “You can pee in here.” May finally said. “But… I don’t want you to see.” Shayla said, blushing in the almost-complete darkness. “I won’t look.” May whispered. I’ve got to pee so bad… and every second it seems like I’m leaking even more. “Thank you… please don’t look” Shayla said slowly and quietly to May. Shayla rapidly shoved her shorts and crinkling pullup out of the way, moving them to her ankles. Sitting up in a kind of squat, her pee almost immediately began to gush out of her. Although she felt May’s eyes uncontrollably watching her, the palpable relief that Shayla experienced far outweighed the embarrassment of having to pee in such a situation. Shayla permitted herself to let out a quiet moan, whole-heartedly enjoying the relief of her tired bladder. The echoing sound of her pee hitting the floor below echoed throughout the small cave, a perfect hissing sound accompanied by a myriad of harmonious drips. “You must have really had to go.” May said, startling Shayla. That piss was so good, I totally forgot that May was there. “You didn’t look, did you?” “Not at all.” May said. Full of lies. Shayla thought. It’s OK though, May seems all right, even if she does seem to get off on some strange things. Still partially absorbed in just how good the relief of her bladder felt, Shayla allowed herself to finally calm down. She stood up, hunched over in the cave. First, she moved her pullup back into its position. It was very slightly damp, Shayla knew, but it felt dry on her privates. One could probably only tell that she had a little leak if they looked on the inside of it. Not bad, Shayla thought, relishing in one of the few successful times she had avoided wetting herself entirely. Next she pulled her revealing shorts back up, again failing to hide her waistband. In the dark, no one could tell though. Shayla and May fell back into silence, listening for the murmurs and footsteps of Emily and Willow. After a five-minute period of silence, May decided to start moving out. The small cave smelled weakly of urine. “Watch out for the pee over that way…” Shayla said. “Sure thing.” May said. May and Shayla crawled back out of the dank cave, successfully avoiding Shayla’s pee puddle. When they finally emerged from the entrance of the cave, Shayla covered her eyes to protect them from the high afternoon sun. Willow and Emily were nowhere to be seen. “Damn, I really have to go pee too!” May said. “I was starting to think that I was the only one holding it.” Shayla said happily. “Yeah, I’ve got to go really bad. I’m glad Emily and Willow are gone now.” May said. “You could go pee in the woods, that’s what I wanted to do.” Shayla said. “Yeah,” May said, pondering her options. “But I think the woods are a bit too far away.” She said sarcastically, pointing at the woods less than ten yards away. May was not fidgeting or showing many signs of discomfort, standing perfectly still with her hands proudly at her hips. “What do you mean?” Shayla asked. Instead of giving an answer, May stared at Shayla directly in the eyes. May continued staring for a moment. Just as Shayla was about to ask a her a clarifying question, she heard a faint and familiar hissing sound. She can’t be… But she was. A dark patch could be seen, tiny at first but rapidly growing and spreading down May’s jean shorts. The liquid poured down her thighs and over her bare knees and lower legs. The yellow rivers of pee gathered at May’s shoes as she confidently wet her panties, all the while staring at Shayla’s eyes. Shayla couldn’t help but look at Shayla’s soaking pants, watching eagerly as the pee slipped out. The hissing died down and May finished wetting herself. “Ahhh, much better.” said May. In utter disbelief, Shayla stuttered through a question: “Why did you… You didn’t have to…” “I know I didn’t have to.” said May, smiling. Her jeans were glistening in the sun, thoroughly soaked from her large bladder. Even though May ended up wetting herself, Shayla admired the control she had just exhibited. May looked relieved, and she had wet her panties on purpose. “It’s so nice and warm!” said May, beginning to rub her front slightly before stopping herself. “Let’s get the next clue.” Shayla said. throwawayname, TheOwl, rndmnmbrsnlttrs2 and 10 others 12 1 Quote Link to comment
LittlePunkGirl 109 Posted November 13, 2020 Share Posted November 13, 2020 Wow that was someting. Is may the one into this? It's been a while. Quote Link to comment
YuriChaosLord 201 Posted November 13, 2020 Share Posted November 13, 2020 Aww... I was hoping Shayla will have accident... Buuu Could Shayla still end with storm cloud? Please please please. (Sorry. It's just that weird thing about my fetish. Usually I'm turning on on one character. 😅😔) Alltheomorashi 1 Quote Link to comment
Big Girl Stacy 926 Posted November 13, 2020 Author Share Posted November 13, 2020 16 hours ago, LittlePunkGirl said: Wow that was someting. Is may the one into this? It's been a while. Yep, May is the one into this. Sorry I haven't written for a while, I felt very uninspired. 12 hours ago, JuliusSlouchy said: Aww... I was hoping Shayla will have accident... Buuu Could Shayla still end with storm cloud? Please please please. (Sorry. It's just that weird thing about my fetish. Usually I'm turning on on one character. 😅😔) I guess you'll just have to see how this turns out! A little unpredictability never hurt anyone. Reeve, throwawayname and YuriChaosLord 3 Quote Link to comment
trekkie 1,098 Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 On 11/13/2020 at 12:12 AM, LittlePunkGirl said: Wow that was someting. Is may the one into this? It's been a while. I think May was the one who hints to Shayla that her accidents aren't entirely accidental. Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
LittlePunkGirl 109 Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 19 hours ago, BedwetterStacy said: Yep, May is the one into this. Sorry I haven't written for a while, I felt very uninspired. Honestly I feel that I rarely have the headspace to write anymore Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
trekkie 1,098 Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 11 hours ago, BedwetterStacy said: Yep, May is the one into this. Sorry I haven't written for a while, I felt very uninspired. I guess you'll just have to see how this turns out! A little unpredictability never hurt anyone. With you on unpredictability! Also, it adds a bit of realism that Shayla's not going to wet herself EVERY time she needs to go. I'm sure she hasn't gotten her last storm cloud, but it's also good to learn about the other characters. TheOwl, jippy, Big Girl Stacy and 1 other 4 Quote Link to comment
OkiF 37 Posted November 15, 2020 Share Posted November 15, 2020 Just excellent! I was also surprised that Shayla made it (almost) dry, but indeed it is nice to add a bit of surprise. Your writing is awesome and I wish you would have nothing else to do than writing. I am really impatient to read the next episode. And as far as I am concerned, don’t add yourself too much pressure as based on the different stories you wrote, I think I will love anything you write! By the way how is the Stace cloud/sun calendar? Thanks so much for sharing your writing here. Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
Big Girl Stacy 926 Posted November 15, 2020 Author Share Posted November 15, 2020 2 hours ago, OkiF said: Just excellent! I was also surprised that Shayla made it (almost) dry, but indeed it is nice to add a bit of surprise. Your writing is awesome and I wish you would have nothing else to do than writing. I am really impatient to read the next episode. And as far as I am concerned, don’t add yourself too much pressure as based on the different stories you wrote, I think I will love anything you write! By the way how is the Stace cloud/sun calendar? Thanks so much for sharing your writing here. Thanks so much! It really means a lot that people are actually reading this story. For me, it's a nice way to explore my sexuality and my wetting fetish. I wish I had more time to write, too. YuriChaosLord, throwawayname and AliasnameTO 3 Quote Link to comment
throwawayname 16 Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 Oh my... What an awfully naughty thing for May to do... Nice to see you exercising your unpredictability, and see May finally show some of her true colors (yellow, I suppose?). Another wonderful chapter on the adventures of yellow-- I mean, white water cabin. As for myself, I may have just pulled a May while reading this. Good thing I'm wearing this easy-up. Off to do other things... Quote Link to comment
theyellowsafe 57 Posted November 17, 2020 Share Posted November 17, 2020 Great chapter! Though I'll always want Shayla to wet herself, I agree that some realism is necessary. It was a nice touch to have May brazenly wet herself at the end. It was already obvious to the reader that May liked wetting herself, but I'm curious to see what will happen now that Shayla knows. It certainly creates a fun dynamic. Can't wait to see what you have in store next! But don't feel too much pressure about writing quickly. Alltheomorashi 1 Quote Link to comment
Kudamono 30 Posted November 17, 2020 Share Posted November 17, 2020 Interesting development to have May openly admitting that she prefers to go on her pants! With that kind of behavior, seems like she is going to earn herself a pair of pull-ups as well... Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
Bäda 4 Posted November 18, 2020 Share Posted November 18, 2020 Another chapter well done. And with an surprising outcome at that. Would be interessting to know what happened to the others. Maybe a spinnoff chapter in the future? And as others said already how about Fern in I'm-also-a-client mode with her having an accident during the scavenger hunt and pullups for her. Thanks for your great work so far. Big Girl Stacy 1 Quote Link to comment
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