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I’ve never done an interactive story before, so this is kinda new to me. The story will focus on the theme of a medieval fantasy world and the various characters within.

WARNING: This story will contain messing

 

The four available characters are thus far as follows:

 

KATHERINE

Bladder: Gargantuan

Bowels: Gargantuan

Hair Colour: Brown

Eye Colour: Brown

Height: 5’10”

Hip/Ass Size: Large

Breast Size: Large

Magical Talent: Medium (50% mana)

Wealth: Limitless

 

Queen Katherine is the current Queen of Providia. Years of conditioning and practice throughout long meetings has left her with a truly incredible bladder and bowel capacity, able to withstand almost inhuman amounts of piss and shit for extraordinarily long periods of time.

 

 

 

ASHLYN

Bladder: Very Large

Bowels: Small

Hair Colour: Blonde

Eye Colour: Blue

Height: 5’6”

Hip/Ass Size: Medium

Breast Size: Large

Magical Talent: Mageworthy (100% mana)

Wealth: &500

 

Lady Ashlyn is the one of the noblewomen of the court of Queen Katherine. Like her Queen, she has trained herself to hold her bladder, but unfortunately she suffers from bowel issues that have plagued her for years. Secretly, this is caused by Ashlyn’s training as a magic-user, a hobby that is most unusual especially for a member of the nobility.

 

 

 

ERIA

Bladder: Medium

Bowels: Medium

Hair Colour: Brown

Eye Colour: Green

Height: 5’10”

Hip/Ass Size: Large

Breast Size: Small

Magical Talent: Major (75% mana)

Wealth: &10

 

Eria is the personal housecarl of Queen Katherine, and is responsible for making sure that the needs of the Queen are attended to. She has a perfectly reasonable bladder and bowel capacity, although she often finds herself busy as the needs of her queen come first, of course.

 

 

 

SARANI

Bladder: Small

Bowels: Large

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Brown

Height: 6’00”

Hip/Ass Size: Large

Breast Size: Large

Magical Talent: Minor (25% mana)

Wealth: &8

 

Sarani is the one of the Queen’s bodyguards and a loyal protector of the court, despite her foreign origins in the Deserts of Fangs. Despite her tough, no-nonsense persona, she has one of the weakest bladders of the whole royal guard, a curse left on her by a mysterious mage several years ago.

 

 

MAGICAL INVENTORY

[5% mana] Mystical Reveal: Shows bladder and bowel capacity of target

[20% mana] Hold Sphincter: Allows holding of urine for a random period of time

[25% mana] Pleasurable Prevention: Relieves feeling of desperation from bladder for a random period of time

[40% mana] Anal Bind: Allows holding of poop for a random period of time

[40% mana] Load Swap: Swaps bladder and bowel percentages

[45% mana] Divine Mercy: Relieves feeling of desperation from bladder and bowels for a random period of time

[50% mana] Shift Spell: Transforms random percentage of urine into diarrhea (increases bowel need)

[50% mana] Toilet Transformation: Transforms diarrhea into solid waste or vice versa (no change in bowel need). Can be used on spellcaster or other person

 [65% mana] Fill Bladder: Target’s bladder is suddenly full (random percentage; minimum 80%)

[65% mana] Magical Connection: Place random percentage of urine or poop into target’s bladder and/or bowels from spellcaster

[75% mana] Fill Bowels: Target’s bowels are suddenly full (random percentage; minimum 80%)

[85% mana] Explosive Release: Target’s holding capacity for both ends is severely reduced

[100% mana] Uncontrollable: Target suddenly wets and shits themselves

Failure to cast a spell may cause the spell to backfire, causing the opposite result to the one intended. Furthermore, increased magic usage reduces bowel capacity

 

 

 

HOW TOILET USAGE WORKS

Free Release: Any character may urine/defecate freely, but they will incur major social embarrassment if found. If they relieve themselves outside of the castle, they may be arrested and fined (Katherine is except from this)

Chamber Pots: Any character may use a chamber pot if they can find one, but only to relieve their bladders. If they release their bowels, they will also incur major social embarrassment and may be charged for a new chamber pot (Katherine is except from this)

                Katherine and Ashlyn each have a single chamber pot inside their bedchambers, as do the other nobility

                Eria and Sarani must use the communal chamber pots, of which there are five in the cellar beneath the castle

Privy: Any character can use a privy to release their bladder and bowels

                Katherine has her own private privy in the bathroom next to her bedchambers

                Ashlyn must use the privy used by other nobles, which has a single seat

                Eria and Sarani must use the communal privy, which has three seats and no doors. They may be forced to relieve themselves next to or in front of other people

 

PART 0

Choose Character:

                A Katherine

                B Ashlyn

                C Eria

                D Sarani

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Ashlyn it is then.

 

PART 1

“Aaaaahhh...”

Lady Ashlyn sighed in relief.

Stepping out of the carriage into the cool evening air was like stepping into a new world. Far from the hustle and bustle of the marketplace, the courtyard of Castle Soris was a wonderful patch of tranquillity. Having spent the morning at the opening of a new section of the market as the Queen’s representative, Ashlyn had developed a major headache, and she was fatigued and worn out by the constant streams of people bursting to get a glimpse of a member of the upper nobility.

In typical fashion, Ashlyn was wearing a large purple dress that was slightly too tight around her waist, a symbol of her traditional nature. Ashlyn was easily one of the most conservative and least brash members of the court, always maintaining her etiquette and showing proper manners at all times, as befitting a woman of her stature. Of course, this was exactly why the Queen was always so keen to send Ashlyn out to such duties as opening a new area of the city, when the Queen was otherwise occupied with geopolitical affairs like the arrival of Lady Viacha from the far-north land of Vaul.

 

“Mistress! You’re back at last!” came a cry from the other side of the courtyard.

Turning her head, Ashlyn noticed that it was her private steward, Tanya. The dark-skinned girl bounded towards her and gave a quick curtsy.

“How was the market, Mistress? Are you tired? Do you require a chair, or perhaps a spot in the baths?”

“No, Tanya,” said Ashlyn shaking her head. “I’ve had quite enough sitting down in that carriage. Now, what time is it?”

“Ten to eight,” replied Tanya.

“Damn, that means only ten minutes until the banquet for Lady Viacha begins. I must have spent longer than I thought.”

Ashlyn began to walk into the castle with Tanya following.

“Is there anything I can do for you, Mistress?”

Contemplating the question, Ashlyn debated whether or not to reveal the true reason she was so annoyed at arriving late. Throughout the day, Ashlyn had enjoyed copious amounts of wine with several 'people's folk' and although quite a while from bursting, her bladder had been making itself noticed since before entering the carriage. Ashlyn had always prided herself on her exceptionally large bladder, and though it was apparently nowhere near the size of the colossus that the Queen was carrying, it was more than capable of going for twenty-four hours without a good piss.

Ashlyn stopped and thought for a second. On one hand, she didn’t want to be caught short and, heavens forbid, show signs of her... need, but on the other, her chamber pot was quite a distance away, in the bedrooms to the far northwest of the castle. She would probably be significantly late for the banquet if she went all the way there, relieved herself, and returned to the banquet hall. That might be just as embarrassing, especially for such a respected noblewoman.

 

                A Ignore bladder, go straight to the banquet hall

                B Go the bedchambers and use a chamber pot

                C Look for toilets a bit closer and risk embarrassment

                D Use a spell (please specify)

                E Other option (please specify)

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We could magical connection some of our bladder to Tanya to stave it off for a while. Not sure how risky/obvious doing that would be though, and not sure how long it depletes our resources for if at all?

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8 hours ago, blooper said:

We could magical connection some of our bladder to Tanya to stave it off for a while. Not sure how risky/obvious doing that would be though, and not sure how long it depletes our resources for if at all?

Good point. This is my vote regardless of the answer, but is/how is mana restored here?

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A. If she thinks she still wait, she can go to the banquet and use a spell later if it becomes a bigger problem.

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19 hours ago, blooper said:

We could magical connection some of our bladder to Tanya to stave it off for a while. Not sure how risky/obvious doing that would be though, and not sure how long it depletes our resources for if at all?

Ooh, I like that idea!

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On 1/2/2020 at 7:56 PM, blooper said:

We could magical connection some of our bladder to Tanya to stave it off for a while. Not sure how risky/obvious doing that would be though, and not sure how long it depletes our resources for if at all?

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On 1/3/2020 at 2:56 PM, blooper said:

We could magical connection some of our bladder to Tanya to stave it off for a while. Not sure how risky/obvious doing that would be though, and not sure how long it depletes our resources for if at all?

Definitely move some of her bladder to Tanya. She will last longer but both be desperate once fully into the banquet

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[So I’ve given it some thought, and the way magic works is that mana decreases by a random percentage each time a spell is used, but never more than the percentage required by the spell. You cannot use a spell that costs more mana than you currently have. Mana is reset when bladder and bowels reach 0]

 

ASHLYN

Bladder: 71%

Bowels: 54%

Mana: 100%

 

Suddenly, Ashlyn had another idea. Clenching her hand into a fist, she concentrated all her effort into what she was attempting to perform. A small judder of energy ran through her, eventually culminating in a tingling sensation around her bladder. After a second, she felt her bladder begin to empty, but not in the normal sense. The urine was simply disappearing, and reappearing somewhere else...

 

ASHLYN

Bladder: 24%

Bowels: 54%

Mana: 44%

 

Whilst previously she had been closely tailing Ashlyn, Tanya stopped in her tracks. She gritted her teeth and made a strange gasping noise. Ashlyn knew exactly what she was doing. As her bladder drained, urine was being pumped into Tanya’s bladder by way of a magical power that Ashlyn had been using for years. True, it was a bit distasteful, to use one’s servants as a way of relieving oneself, but Ashlyn reasoned that it was better to put a servant in desperation than risk the reputation of the nobility by showing a need to go to the bathroom.

At least, that was what she had been telling herself. In truth, during times of particularly great need, she had been forced to use people of slightly higher office to prevent... unwanted situations from occurring. The occasional noblewomen might find herself a bit more desperate than usual by the end of the night if she was around Ashlyn, and once or twice, to Ashlyn’s great guilt, she had relied upon the Queen to hold her burden, lest she totally disgrace herself.

Ashlyn was one of the rare few able to perform this ability. In secret, for the past ten years she had dabbled in sorcery, first educating herself through a book she had found in the castle library, then being trained by a travelling elf mage. Though far from a true mage, Ashlyn would consider herself to be an experienced magic-user, and had little difficultly at all casting minor spells, though the more serious powers were at present beyond her reach. In truth, there was little actual shame in using magic; most citizens considered mages useful, if untrustworthy; it was more that she was worried that the other nobles would see her as an abnormality, especially as so few of them ever learnt even the most basic of spells. There was also the strange side effect of using magic that Ashlyn didn’t want to think about...

 

“Tanya, are you alright?”

“Yes, Mistress. I’m sure it’s nothing to worry about,” replied Tanya. She didn’t look all the comfortable about it. Ashlyn was well aware that while Tanya’s bladder was hardly small, it was not even in the same league as Ashlyn or the Queen.

She’ll just have to hold it thought Ashlyn. Now with any luck, I might get through tonight without becoming too desperate.

 

5 minutes later

 

Arriving at the banquet just in time, Ashlyn sat down on the right of the table, next to the Queen, who was at the far end. The Queen looked stunning, properly dressed up for the occasion, her long brown hair flowing down her shoulders and back. She was wearing a gigantic, golden dress that clearly displayed the wealth of the monarchy. Opposite Ashlyn was Lady Viacha, a short, pale woman with hair as dark as midnight. Unlike the other noblewomen, she was wearing a very bizarre and revealing outfit, that showed off rather too much skin than the court was accustomed to. She may have well have been naked thought Ashlyn.

Altogether, the total amount of people in the hall was about seventy, on top of the ten or so guards and half dozen housecarls that were present to attend to the needs of the nobles. Tanya was currently sitting on a bench behind Ashlyn with the other housecarls, chatting about this and that, while the guards were stood at the entrances with perfect composure.

As they waited for food to arrive, Ashlyn turned to the Queen and whispered “How goes the proceedings, my Queen?”

“Good Ashlyn. So far Viacha, and therefore Vaul, has been willing to listen to the possibility of an agreement.”

The Queen moved slightly closer to Ashlyn and lowered her voice:

“They don’t want to deal with non-humans however. I’ll do what I can, but after this I’m going to send you to speak to the centaurs down south. We need to keep this discrete; if Viacha discovers that the centaurs’ protection is our merchants’ biggest asset in the forest of Shem-Haila, they might try to break off relations entirely”

“Of course, my Queen,” said Ashlyn. She had never met a centaur before, and was exited and nervous at the same time.

 

20 minutes later

 

As they began to eat, Ashlyn felt two needs. First, a slight twinge in her bladder brought about by the wine she had been sipping on, and secondly, the presence of her bowels. Whilst Ashlyn had relieved herself into her housecarl a short while ago, she hadn’t emptied her bladder entirely, for Tanya’s sake. On the other hand, Ashlyn began to regret using magic at all. One of the first things she had discovered about magic was that using it could agitate her bowels, as the mana energies rushed throughout her body. Ashlyn made up her mind to use the privy as soon as the banquet was over.

 

1 hour later

 

Ashlyn was in dire straights. Her bladder, whilst not quite desperate, was constantly pressing her for release. She could almost see it, straining against her tight corset. Meanwhile her stomarch was making all sorts of strange gurgles and noises, as more food was stuffed into it. Despite Ashlyn’s needs, she was under obligation to eat and drink all that was offered to her, filling her bladder and bowels incredibly rapidly. To her right, the Queen was eating even more than she was, enormous mountains of food being devoured with surprising grace and etiquette. The Queen had always had a large appetite, but Ashlyn was still managing to be surprised by the sheer amount of food the Queen could eat. Viacha was also eating her food, and drinking far more than both Ashlyn and the Queen, having taken in almost a dozen large goblets-worth of wine and other liquids.

Suddenly, Ashlyn felt it – the first major bladder spasm of the night. Leaning gently forwards, she held her lips as she held off the urge to urinate. She was worried and upset now. The magic must have set off both her delicate bowel and bladder muscles. Ashlyn began to wonder fearfully if she could make it to the end of the banquet without revealing her predicament. Normally, she would have gone straight to the privy, but that didn’t seem like much of an option now, especially considering that she couldn’t show any weakness in front of Viacha.

Looking behind her, she saw Tanya was scrunched up on the bench, her face a mixture of sweat and pain. I’m so sorry though Ashlyn, knowing that her busty black housecarl was almost certainly gagging for a chamberpot, even more so than her mistress.

Ashlyn considered her options; she could carry on as normal, and try not to show even the slightest sign of desperation, even though it would massively increase the risk of an accident before the end of the banquet. Alternatively, she could try to hold herself through her dress, and start fidgeting in her chair to allow some limited degree of relief. The brief thought of perhaps releasing a significant spurt of wee into the thick folds of her dress also crossed her mind, although the pain she would suffer trying to staunch the flow would surely be intense, so tight was the corset around her waist.

She also considered asking for Tanya to fetch her a chamber pot, figuring that her large dress would allow Tanya to creep under the table and install it where she could relieve her aching bladder... although accidentally or purposefully releasing her other need would be tremendously embarrassing, even if nobody noticed her doing her business at the table.

Of course, there was always the option of feigning illness and leaving the table, and running to the nearest privy with all the grace that an overfilled bladder would allow, but the idea of nurses and handmaids fretting over in the coming weeks would surely allow her even less privacy.

Ashlyn felt close to tears. Here she was, just over an hour into the four-hour banquet, and already she was considering the ways to relieve herself, whilst the pain in her bladder and bowels was only sure to increase ten-fold the longer she was forced to consume meal after meal and drink after drink.

 

ASHLYN

Bladder: 76%

Bowels: 89%

Mana: 44%

 

                A Carry on as normal

                B Hold herself under the table and risk embarrassment

                C Ask Tanya for a chamber pot to relieve her bladder in and risk embarrassment

                D Ask Tanya for a chamber pot to relieve her bladder and bowels in and risk embarrassment

                E Feign illness and leave the banquet

                F Release a little bit of urine into her dress

                G Ask Tanya to remove her corset and risk embarrassment

                H Use magic (please specify)

                I Other (please specify)

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Loving your writing so far!

F Release a little bit of urine into her dress

Just a little bit.

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17 hours ago, Zuorsara said:

[So I’ve given it some thought, and the way magic works is that mana decreases by a random percentage each time a spell is used, but never more than the percentage required by the spell. You cannot use a spell that costs more mana than you currently have. Mana is reset when bladder and bowels reach 0]

This is a little strange and raises some questions. Is the maximum mana cost of a spell is hard requirement to use it? If not, I vote H and use Divine Mercy, even with the 1/45 chance it will fail. If she gets really lucky she might be left with enough mana to use Hold Sphincter or Pleasurable Prevention later.

If that can't be used, none of the other available spells are useful now and the other options are risk too much embarrassment. I suggest asking Tanya to bring something to the table, 'accidentally' knock it from her hands, then blame her for it and excuse herself from the table under the guide of having a stern word with her. Hopefully that's enough opening to get to the privy or the chamber pot. If not, I got nothing.

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