Guest JTeam_ Posted July 4, 2019 Share Posted July 4, 2019 Holy SHIT This story is incredible Quote Link to comment
Pain 927 Posted July 7, 2019 Author Share Posted July 7, 2019 (edited) On 7/2/2019 at 1:48 AM, huberp76 said: Great story! I like what you write and i like the way how you write it. The boys gets aroused just to know that the girls did not pee for so long, to know that the girls are needing to go for so long and that they still has to wait hours for hours. "The girls putting off their need to piss for so long. Their bladders would just have to stretch a little more. Katherine said to Mord that they need to use the chamber pot, because they really need to.. and he did answer " that can wait". Really great to say to a girl who is full to burst, who is needing to wee more that anything else in the world, that she can wait. Thank you so much, huberp76! It means a lot! On 7/2/2019 at 1:53 AM, huberp76 said: Yes the king should not allowed the girls to pee outside, the girls should have to hold it until they reach back. The boys would love that. I really appreciate your suggestion, my friend, I'll try to incorporate it in one of the future chapters. And once again thank you so much for reading! 🙂 On 7/3/2019 at 6:33 AM, call3x said: i love the way you're writing this story,,, the last chapter was so amazing i re-read it a lot! can't wait for charlotte to finally relieve herself i know it's gonna be legendary Thank you so much, call3x! It really means a lot to me if I know that I've made at least one reader happy! Thank you so much for your valuable comment! I promise to post the next chapter as soon as I can! 🙂 On 7/4/2019 at 11:17 AM, JTeam_ said: Holy SHIT This story is incredible Thank you so much, JTeam! It really means a lot to me! Thank you so much for leaving a comment. Edited July 7, 2019 by Pain (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
[X] Doubt 44 Posted July 18, 2019 Share Posted July 18, 2019 I’ve been reading this fan fic before I made an account on this website and I must say @Pain, you’re very good story writer. There isn’t many fan fics that I read through, but this one is one of the rare occasions. Thanks for giving me a reason to procrastinate 😂👍 Quote Link to comment
Pain 927 Posted July 21, 2019 Author Share Posted July 21, 2019 On 7/18/2019 at 9:16 PM, [X] Doubt said: I’ve been reading this fan fic before I made an account on this website and I must say @Pain, you’re very good story writer. There isn’t many fan fics that I read through, but this one is one of the rare occasions. Thanks for giving me a reason to procrastinate 😂👍 Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. Quote Link to comment
DerivativeWings 1,648 Posted July 21, 2019 Share Posted July 21, 2019 This is a pretty cool one. Multiple-people desperation is fun and so is the setting. Quote Link to comment
Frooger 98 Posted August 7, 2019 Share Posted August 7, 2019 Will there be any more of ths story? I hope it will🙂 Quote Link to comment
Mistress26 31 Posted August 10, 2019 Share Posted August 10, 2019 On 8/7/2019 at 3:39 PM, frogger4y said: Will there be any more of ths story? I hope it will🙂 Me too Quote Link to comment
Pain 927 Posted August 13, 2019 Author Share Posted August 13, 2019 On 8/10/2019 at 8:03 AM, Mistress26 said: Me too On 8/8/2019 at 1:09 AM, frogger4y said: Will there be any more of ths story? I hope it will🙂 I wish I had an answer to this but the future of this tale is looking uncertain to me right now. I barely have the time to write after work and moreover I am begining to loose motivation to write. I don't know when I'd find it in myself to finish this story. Quote Link to comment
wedgeantilles 156 Posted August 13, 2019 Share Posted August 13, 2019 Sad to hear that :( But no stress, if you do not feel like writing that's ok. Maybe you'll want to finish it in a year, maybe not. You wrote awesome stories, stories I like to reread a lot. If you force yourself to continue the quality would surely suffer. That's why only write more if you really want to do it :) Quote Link to comment
Mistress26 31 Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 8 hours ago, wedgeantilles said: Sad to hear that :( But no stress, if you do not feel like writing that's ok. Maybe you'll want to finish it in a year, maybe not. You wrote awesome stories, stories I like to reread a lot. If you force yourself to continue the quality would surely suffer. That's why only write more if you really want to do it :) Yea you can't force art. ... Well you can. But you shouldn't. Quote Link to comment
Guest JTeam_ Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 On 8/13/2019 at 9:04 AM, Pain said: I wish I had an answer to this but the future of this tale is looking uncertain to me right now. I barely have the time to write after work and moreover I am begining to loose motivation to write. I don't know when I'd find it in myself to finish this story. Perhaps you could just... I dunno, leave it as it is now and pretend it's a cliffhanger ending? Quote Link to comment
Sake 340 Posted August 15, 2019 Share Posted August 15, 2019 5 hours ago, JTeam_ said: Perhaps you could just... I dunno, leave it as it is now and pretend it's a cliffhanger ending? That is, after all, the traditional omo story ending. 124578 and Biku 2 Quote Link to comment
Rexone_312 764 Posted April 1, 2020 Popular Post Share Posted April 1, 2020 @Pain, here's a gift for your wonderful story... I hope you and everyone here likes it. Holdon, Lyonsheart, fortardball87 and 7 others 6 2 2 Quote Link to comment
Zuorsara 132 Posted April 1, 2020 Share Posted April 1, 2020 That's some great artwork. I know it's a longshot, but I'd love for this to get a resolution one day Rexone_312 1 Quote Link to comment
Rexone_312 764 Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 9 hours ago, Zuorsara said: That's some great artwork. I know it's a longshot, but I'd love for this to get a resolution one day Thank you so much 😃 Quote Link to comment
Guest Peter-P Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 @Pain A fascinating story! Plesse let us know what happened to the Queen and her son in their game, while the others experienced the adventure with the Dwarfs etc. @Rex again your drawing gives us fascinating imagination of the scene. Please show us the extremely bulging bladder(s) and the scene of tightening the corset successfully (no gaps). Quote Link to comment
wedgeantilles 156 Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 Great artwork Rex! Rexone_312 1 Quote Link to comment
Pain 927 Posted April 3, 2020 Author Share Posted April 3, 2020 On 4/1/2020 at 10:21 PM, Rexone_312 said: @Pain, here's a gift for your wonderful story... I hope you and everyone here likes it. Goodness gracious! I am not lying when I say I am short for words. This picture is pure fantasy made into reality. I love how the Queen looks so panicky in this! Loved it! Thank you so much @Rexone_312! You are a champ! And also may I say, that your art has come a long way my dear friend! I am still surprised that you have come to such a level from where you started! Bravo! Keep up the good work friend! You are really talented! Thank you so much once gain for making this. Quote Link to comment
Rexone_312 764 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 20 hours ago, Peter-P said: @Pain A fascinating story! Plesse let us know what happened to the Queen and her son in their game, while the others experienced the adventure with the Dwarfs etc. @Rex again your drawing gives us fascinating imagination of the scene. Please show us the extremely bulging bladder(s) and the scene of tightening the corset successfully (no gaps). Peter, thank you so much for your kind words! I am working on the next panel of my comics and the Iron Queen sequel panel as well. Honestly, I didn't expect that the audience would love it so much. 😊 3 hours ago, Pain said: Goodness gracious! I am not lying when I say I am short for words. This picture is pure fantasy made into reality. I love how the Queen looks so panicky in this! Loved it! Thank you so much @Rexone_312! You are a champ! And also may I say, that your art has come a long way my dear friend! I am still surprised that you have come to such a level from where you started! Bravo! Keep up the good work friend! You are really talented! Thank you so much once gain for making this. @Pain thanks a lot friend! Your encouraging words have always made me work harder and improve. I am glad that you liked my idea of thenQueen. Also, I have sent a dm to you regarding the story... Do check that out! I am waiting for the next installment with baited breath! Quote Link to comment
O.J. 249 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 I happened to see @Rexone_312's hot art on twitter, which lead me to this story. I spent my evening curled up on the couch with a ginger ale, reading chapter after chapter of intriguing slow-build desperation. There's so much that I like about this story. I love the naughty little games the characters play; the power dynamics at play here are very intriguing. Eroticism aside, the medieval setting is very fun. Your descriptions of great, sumptuous feasts and exotic marketplaces made me wish I was there. The queen herself is a great protagonist. She's so sexy, but she's also complex. I appreciate her balance of strengths and flaws. She loves her children, she always tries to do right by her kingdom and set a good example, and she carries herself with grace. She's witty, articulate, and charming. However, she's also prideful and stubborn to a fault. The cracks start to show the more desperate she gets, and she starts to let her nerves get the better of her. One particular scene I enjoyed was when she berates Elizabeth for having an accident (which she practically forced her to have). Even though she cares for the girl, Elizabeth is the only person she can take her frustration out on due to the power dynamics at play. Of course, this just makes the queen's continued bladder torture feel more deserved. Even though Charlotte got herself into this situation, and even though her pride continues to keep her there, I still find myself rooting for her. I'm completely captivated by this beautiful, strong, foolish, iron queen. Pain and Rexone_312 2 Quote Link to comment
Pain 927 Posted April 4, 2020 Author Share Posted April 4, 2020 On 4/3/2020 at 4:25 PM, omorashi_jones said: I happened to see @Rexone_312's hot art on twitter, which lead me to this story. I spent my evening curled up on the couch with a ginger ale, reading chapter after chapter of intriguing slow-build desperation. There's so much that I like about this story. I love the naughty little games the characters play; the power dynamics at play here are very intriguing. Eroticism aside, the medieval setting is very fun. Your descriptions of great, sumptuous feasts and exotic marketplaces made me wish I was there. The queen herself is a great protagonist. She's so sexy, but she's also complex. I appreciate her balance of strengths and flaws. She loves her children, she always tries to do right by her kingdom and set a good example, and she carries herself with grace. She's witty, articulate, and charming. However, she's also prideful and stubborn to a fault. The cracks start to show the more desperate she gets, and she starts to let her nerves get the better of her. One particular scene I enjoyed was when she berates Elizabeth for having an accident (which she practically forced her to have). Even though she cares for the girl, Elizabeth is the only person she can take her frustration out on due to the power dynamics at play. Of course, this just makes the queen's continued bladder torture feel more deserved. Even though Charlotte got herself into this situation, and even though her pride continues to keep her there, I still find myself rooting for her. I'm completely captivated by this beautiful, strong, foolish, iron queen. Thank you! I am glad you like it! It means a lot to me! Rexone_312 and Haoning Wu 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Monomone 69 Posted September 25, 2020 Share Posted September 25, 2020 Hey, I really love your story. I love scenarios with unrealistically large bladders. But will you still finish the story? I really hope you do because a great story like this deserves a great ending. Quote Link to comment
Haoning Wu 0 Posted October 27, 2020 Share Posted October 27, 2020 I’m looking forward to the rest, I hope Queen Charlotte finds a place to pee in the end. Quote Link to comment
Frooger 98 Posted November 7, 2020 Share Posted November 7, 2020 Hope you continue this, and that Queen C has to hold for many more days (or weeks)😃 Quote Link to comment
unravel 3 Posted December 18, 2020 Share Posted December 18, 2020 I love this story. May I ask what is the age of the Queen? xmyx123456 1 Quote Link to comment
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