Bulge_Lover 1,909 Posted October 4, 2018 Popular Post Share Posted October 4, 2018 (edited) I thought a fun game for all the writers here would be to see what kind of stories we can come up with using a very limited word count. Let's go with the size of a tweet - 280 letters. For an extra challenge, try it oldschool - 140 letters. You can use this online tool to see exactly how many letters you've used, and copypaste from there- https://wordcounter.net/ Remember, these are supposed to be stories. They should have a beginning, a middle, and an (at least vague) end. Please also include the number of characters you used. Here's some of mine for now. 273: Veronica was so full. She had consumed two liters of water...four hours ago. Her bladder was rock-hard. She was sweating, shaking, and crying. One mile to go. A red light... It was too long. She exhaled, feeling warmth envelop her labia as she relieved herself in her seat. 137: She screamed out loud as he pressed on her bladder. She twisted her legs together, but it did not help as her pee sank down into her bed. 280: The movie was almost over. She moaned as another leak soaked her panties. A moment later, the credits rolled. She stood and limped to the stairs, gasping as her foot slipped on a step. She couldn't stop it. She sprinted out of the cinema, pee flowing from her skirt the whole way. 277: The Princess squeezed her womanhood under her thick dress. The feast had started an hour ago. Wine. Water. Ale. "How much longer?" she asked her mother, the Queen. "Until evening, my dear," the Queen stated. The Princess began to cry, looking through a window at the rising sun. 280: "Kari, you're on," the director said. She nodded and stepped slowly onto the stage, her thighs damp and shaky. The curtains rose up, revealing an audience of hundreds. The backstage loo of the playhouse was broken. She hadn't had relief since morning. And yet the show must go on. Alright, you all get the idea. I'll be posting more here eventually but I gotta sleep now. Hope to see some interesting stuff come morning. Edited October 4, 2018 by Bulge_Lover (see edit history) donnydom, FullBladder85, randomkath and 6 others 8 1 Quote Link to comment
donnydom 8 Posted October 4, 2018 Share Posted October 4, 2018 255: She didn't remember drinking anything, but she desperately had to pee. Hazily, she waddled to the bathroom and just in the nick of time made it to the toilet, letting it all go. Chills of warmth and pleasure shot through her body, and then she woke up... MoistMark and Mistress26 2 Quote Link to comment
FullBladder85 374 Posted October 5, 2018 Share Posted October 5, 2018 I normally struggle to write short stories, but here's a few of mine. ----- 280: Erin hadn't been able to pee in two days, it had taken that long to get a plumber to fix her broken toilet But just when Erin thought she could finally pee she ran into a new problem. Her jeans zipper was jammed, it seemed the world was determined to make sure she never peed again --- 280: Zora woke up late. She badly needed to pee after last night's drinking, but another girl had beaten her to the toilet, and Zora had to get to class. Now she sat at the back of class, squirming desperately, a fist glued to her crotch as she tried to focus on her 6 hour final exam. --- 276: The queen sat on her throne, desperately needing to pee. She hadn't gone in over 24 hours, and she had drank so much tea with her guests. Her guests had to pee just as badly. If only they realized they were both waiting for the other to excuse themselves first due to protocol. Mistress26, UrineLover1, Weather and 1 other 3 1 Quote Link to comment
Sapphire3619 340 Posted October 6, 2018 Share Posted October 6, 2018 Let's give this a shot: 216: “Just stop talking,” was how she had ended the fight 2 hours ago. She couldn’t even look at him. She just kept her eyes on the road. “Babe…” She finally glanced over. His eyes and his pants were wet. “…I’m sorry.” 278: He woke to the sound of his brother thrashing in bed. He shook the younger teen, but it was too late - the darkness created by his bladder spread across the sheets. They both froze; heavy footsteps sounded down the hall toward the bedroom. The real nightmare was just beginning. Mistress26, JT Bull and Omolover222 3 Quote Link to comment
Mickey 285 Posted October 6, 2018 Share Posted October 6, 2018 What a fun idea! Here's my first (I'll definitely come back and post more) 274 characters: He woke up with hands clamped tight around his dick, barely holding back the flood. Bending to locate the chamber pot was torture. No way to stop the leaks. Then sweet relief, pee gushing out to the pot. Till it overflowed. He clamps shut, barely. This will be a long night. luckymel, wolferine, Mistress26 and 1 other 4 Quote Link to comment
DaveG 41 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 278: Emma crossed her legs tightly under her skirt. She had been desperate to wee for almost an hour, and there was still half an hour of her exam to go. She gritted her teeth and tried hard to clench her muscles, but she could feel the first tiny drops escaping into her knickers. Mistress26, FullBladder85 and randomkath 3 Quote Link to comment
Flush 282 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 For those who like the concept, another user satyr has once started a similar thread. I don't want to necessarily dig it up from the dead, but it has some nice short stories too. Two hasty contributions to this thread from me: "227 characters - 50 words" I don't need to go. It's not that urgent. I'll just hold it. If I leave now, I can still make it. That was only a small leak, no big deal. No, I did not wet my pants! Lies: six, equaling one third of the candles on her birthday cake. "405 characters - 73 words" As a data analist, for Jenny anything in life always boiled down to an equation of input and output. On this day, she was dealing with a demanding process, the input being an important deadline, a promotion on the line, an extremely long call with her boss, and four empty coffee cups on her desk. Oh no, a buffer overflow error! Into her panties, her business skirt, and her expensive computer chair. UrineLover1 and randomkath 2 Quote Link to comment
Mickey 285 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 251 characters, 45 words: They were warned - too dangerous to leave the cabin after sundown. So they played cards till midnight and drank a few beers. It was great. Till nature called and realization hit - toilets are out of bounds till sunrise. 5 hours away. Only one made it. Quote Link to comment
Mickey 285 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 280 characters, 54 words: She wants to pee but the cab is waiting. Pee later he says. Last seats at the crowded bar - move & you lose your place. Twisting her legs into a pretzel, she endures. Cleaner toilets in the cafe he says. Bursting, she still waits. Out of order, says cafe owner. She pees her pants luckymel, randomkath and Ondinist 3 Quote Link to comment
FullBladder85 374 Posted October 8, 2018 Share Posted October 8, 2018 A few more stories. --- 280: Erin had no choice but to wait by the side of the road for the tow truck driver to arrive. She hoped he arrived soon, she really needed to pee bad. The worst part was when her boyfriend peed by the side of road in front of her, while she, nearly pissing her jeans, had to hold it. --- 277: When Erin realized that there were no toilets at the campground she held it all day even as the guys peed openly around her. By evening a now very desperate Erin waited for the guys to fall asleep, before she finally hurried to a tree, ripped her shorts off, and peed a gusher. --- 280: No AC combined with a really hot day & lots of water met Jessica and the other women really needed to pee when the bus finally pulled over in the middle of nowhere. "Either you pee here or you hold it, your choice ladies" said the driver. Some peed, but Jessica was still holding it Trickling Down, Theonlysaneperson, BeeCat and 4 others 5 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Aloe 580 Posted October 8, 2018 Share Posted October 8, 2018 (edited) 275: I approached the counter. Our eyes met, she smiled. A general day, a simple exchange. But nothing is ever, truly simple. Legs crossed, deliberately; bladder filling, intentionally. A kindred spirit. But I’d never know; I don’t think I’m supposed to. “Cash or card?” “Card please.” 280: My secret, poorly entrusted to my mischievous girlfriend. I had unwittingly put fuel on a fire. Her plump ass pressed into the barstool, in public. Squirming, bowels full, stomach bubbling... “Shouldn’t you- ” “No, I’m good.” A wry smile. She knew what she was doing. What a mess.... Edited October 8, 2018 by Alex Oxford (see edit history) Theonlysaneperson and Brown&yellow 2 Quote Link to comment
SJC Omorashi 1,550 Posted October 8, 2018 Share Posted October 8, 2018 277 characters 47 words: Mikayla had 3 coffees this morning, and didn't get to pee at lunch. Her afternoon biology class just started and she's absolutely bursting. "May i go to the bathroom?" She asked mister Stewart. "You should've gone at lunch!" He replies. Mikayla wet herself halfway in to class. 280 characters 55 words: Rachel desperately pee danced, sitting on the bench of her basketball game. Just then, the coach put her in to play. "Uh coach i need to pee." She protested. He ignored her and sent her in the game. She played the game with a full bladder. At the end she ran to the toilet.to pee. randomkath 1 Quote Link to comment
i like wet bikinis 302 Posted October 8, 2018 Share Posted October 8, 2018 (edited) On silent, leathery wings the succubus came in midnight darkness. Bedroom window open in the warm summer air, her victim slept unaware. Like the naked lover of his dreams she squatted over his loins. She pissed. He hardened. Awakening, he entered her. She stole his soul. Edited October 8, 2018 by i like wet bikinis Edited down to 280 characters. (see edit history) Ondinist and UrineLover1 2 Quote Link to comment
Jimmy Olsen 933 Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 400 characters: They shared an exquisite meal at an expensive restaurant, but she had trouble enjoying the evening. Each time she tried to go to the ladies' room, he refused to excuse her. "You're responsible for taking care of such things beforehand. I can't let you go if it's not an emergency. There will be consequences if you leave the table without permission." Never again would she date one of her students. 300 characters: He didn't know what animal he found that night. It looked like a ferocious wolf, but acted like a friendly dog. The answer came in the morning. One moment there was an animal sniffing a hydrant, the next there was a nude woman shamelessly lifting her leg and relieving her bladder. It was a werewolf. UrineLover1 1 Quote Link to comment
Ondinist 144 Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 How about a haiku? For example, Bare toes in soft sand Blue bikini, spreading warmth Dark sand, sweet relief i like wet bikinis 1 Quote Link to comment
Bf1fan 171 Posted October 11, 2018 Share Posted October 11, 2018 194 characters 35 words Jackie crossed her ankles, gritted her teeth and buried her hands in her skirt. Moans whimpered from her mouth as the professor droned on. She lets out a shriek as golden liquid floods her legs. Quote Link to comment
Jimmy Olsen 933 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 (edited) On 10/8/2018 at 2:14 AM, Alex Oxford said: My secret, poorly entrusted to my mischievous girlfriend. I had unwittingly put fuel on a fire. Her plump ass pressed into the barstool, in public. Squirming, bowels full, stomach bubbling... “Shouldn’t you- ” “No, I’m good.” A wry smile. She knew what she was doing. What a mess.... On 10/7/2018 at 10:52 PM, FullBladder85 said: Erin had no choice but to wait by the side of the road for the tow truck driver to arrive. She hoped he arrived soon, she really needed to pee bad. The worst part was when her boyfriend peed by the side of road in front of her, while she, nearly pissing her jeans, had to hold it. These are my favorites so far. Nice work, guys! I made a stupid wager with my girlfriend. She dressed as a guy for the costume party. It fooled a couple guys and a girl. I bet she couldn't fool anybody in the men's room. At the urinal next to me she did some sorta witchcraft with her fingers and lady bits and took a standing piss that put me to shame. Nobody batted an eye. Because I lost the bet I have to dress like a girl and sit down to piss. He was a samurai. She was a maid. He said they were too old to trick-or-treat. She wanted to go, so they went, but she had to go, and there was nowhere to go. "Don't watch," she said, "unless you really want to." She made a motion almost like a curtsy and a liquid ribbon flowed down to the grass below, safely avoiding her skirt and stockings. Trick-or-treating continued as if nothing had happened. On their third date she ate something that disagreed with her, resulting in the largest and smelliest bowel movement of her life. Unfortunately she was in his car at the time. He politely ignored the stench and the soiled passenger seat. He only acknowledged her accident when he said "I hope your tummy feels better soon" right before he kissed her goodnight. That was when she knew he was a keeper. I've been too embarrassed to use the toilet in the locker room, but I'll have to get over it. Wetting myself is worse. I'm sure of that after last night. Everyone was watching me when it happened. If they couldn't see the streams, they could still see the wet spots. It's the worst torture I've ever gone through. To be fair, though, the ones who suffered most were the girls below me in the pyramid. Each of these is 400 characters exactly. Edited October 12, 2018 by Jimmy Olsen (see edit history) Aloe, Brown&yellow and FullBladder85 3 Quote Link to comment
i like wet bikinis 302 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 Amy got to the breakers. She had left it too long – was bursting – but the sea was the only toilet. Cold, damp sand slid between her toes. Surf suddenly splashed her. Muscles reacted. Amy wet her bikini. She could not stop, so squatted, peeing on the beach for all to watch. [280 characters, counting spaces] Quote Link to comment
Aloe 580 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 11 hours ago, Jimmy Olsen said: These are my favorites so far. Nice work, guys! Thanks Jimmy, I feel the love ?? 11 hours ago, Jimmy Olsen said: I made a stupid wager with my girlfriend. She dressed as a guy for the costume party. It fooled a couple guys and a girl. I bet she couldn't fool anybody in the men's room. At the urinal next to me she did some sorta witchcraft with her fingers and lady bits and took a standing piss that put me to shame. Nobody batted an eye. Because I lost the bet I have to dress like a girl and sit down to piss. “Some sorta witchcraft” indeed ? Quote Link to comment
Aloe 580 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 (edited) 280: "Sure, I’ll transfer your call!" She winced. "Oh god”, she said, pressing her plump ass into the seat of her chair, "I feel like I'm going to shit myself..." But nothing was stopping her from going; she was just in a mood today. “Hi, how can I help you?” She smiled, butt clenched. 278: Demi needed to pee. Bad. So bad, everyone in the car needed to know. “Guys, I have to PEE!” Mission accomplished. But the night was catching up with her bladder. She’d still have to wait in line, AND get her jumper off. ‘I’m probably going to wet myself again,’ she mused, annoyed. *First one modified from a fiction I worked on maybe a year ago and never finished. The second one strongly based on a true story. God I love jumpers ❤️ Edited October 12, 2018 by Alex Oxford Typos ? (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Jimmy Olsen 933 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 3 hours ago, Alex Oxford said: Thanks Jimmy, I feel the love ?? “Some sorta witchcraft” indeed ? Just so you know, there are real women who can do this. 38 minutes ago, Alex Oxford said: The second one strongly based on a true story. God I love jumpers ❤️ Just for fun, could you describe the jumper? On 10/4/2018 at 1:15 AM, Bulge_Lover said: I thought a fun game for all the writers here would be to see what kind of stories we can come up with using a very limited word count. Let's go with the size of a tweet - 280 letters. Only now do I notice that I skimmed over the original post, which gives a specific character limit. I've found it very difficult to whittle my stories down to 400 characters, so it's amazing that you guys can tell good stories with just 280! Aloe 1 Quote Link to comment
Aloe 580 Posted October 12, 2018 Share Posted October 12, 2018 10 minutes ago, Jimmy Olsen said: Just so you know, there are real women who can do this. Just for fun, could you describe the jumper? Only now do I notice that I skimmed over the original post, which gives a specific character limit. I've found it very difficult to whittle my stories down to 400 characters, so it's amazing that you guys can tell good stories with just 280! I know and it’s freaking wild ? To my memory, it was dark blue, with little pink Hawaiian flowers on it. She’s a slim girl Mexican girl, total sweetheart, super fun! Also just for fun, she peed herself in the bathroom, and handled it like a champ! I feel you on that though man. I have to scrap a lot of description, which I feel is the best part of the story! But it gets you thinking, like, “how can I expand on this?” Quote Link to comment
AndrosTecaduro 7 Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 (edited) I liked the idea. Here's one of mine (196 chars): F: Hey, sis, up to a pee holding contest? Dee: [squirms] Again? We had one yesterday, and you lost badly. F: I'm better prepared now! Dee: [fidgets] I'm still holding. F: [disappointed] I can't win... Edited October 13, 2018 by AndrosTecaduro Unwanted automatic emoticons. (see edit history) FullBladder85 1 Quote Link to comment
AndrosTecaduro 7 Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 Another (219 chars): Julie, my lover, works at the Desperate Brothel, whose rules are: "Arrive desperate to pee, work desperate to pee, leave desperate to pee, only pee by client's request or boss' leave". Her only daily pee is on my pussy. randomkath 1 Quote Link to comment
AndrosTecaduro 7 Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 These short stories are great: I post 'em as I write 'em. 200 chars. Pee fairies bestow a very full bladder to anyone they touch. New pee fairies take three hours to gestate within a bladder, then are birthed at the next pee. This makes pee fairies an endangered species. UrineLover1 1 Quote Link to comment
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