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2 hours ago, Bombality said:

If nudity indicates you're new it may not be such a good idea to approach people, have you played in multiplayer servers?, do you know what people do to noobs?

Me neither because I always play on servers that have rules against it but it must be bad

I've played on servers as a noob and have experienced what can happen. The more experienced players will take advantage of your lack of skill to boost their scores a little while you're struggling along, trying to figure out what to do. It's worth it in the end though because once you get better, then you can get revenge!

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I prefer A, buy water. Also in my opinion the thinner lines are better.

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18 hours ago, Bombality said:

If nudity indicates you're new it may not be such a good idea to approach people, have you played in multiplayer servers?, do you know what people do to noobs?

Me neither because I always play on servers that have rules against it but it must be bad

I don't think in that way, I mean It have nudity tags, then I guess It was should to be something normal at this story.

But I can be wrong too, and this talk about " humans been worst than Monsters" I don't know....

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This next part is going to be really long, and have either 3 or 4 pictures. It might take another day or two, but I am working on it.

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Also please no more voting because I don’t want to have to redo everything with the other option

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5 hours ago, Phentaiee said:

This next part is going to be really long, and have either 3 or 4 pictures. It might take another day or two, but I am working on it.

Based on the preview you have given us, it will be worth waiting for two more days, or even three or four, if need be. No matter how long it takes, when it's ready, it will be awesome.

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Emily decided that she should go into the town and buy the water. She figured that since there were shops there, then there must be laws too, meaning that nobody can hurt her. As for the money though, she was hoping that she could find a quick favor to earn a buck or two, and pay for the water that way.

She got into the town, and got a few questioned looks from faces. At first, she was afraid that most people didn’t start off naked, and that she looked like an insane person, but then people seemed to realize, and lose interest. A few of the guys kept looking, though, (for obvious reasons).

One man suddenly started approaching Emily. “Hey, I need you to follow me into this alleyway” he said. Emily stared back, obviously not wanting to follow a stranger into an alley. “Oh, don’t worry about him, Charlie wouldn’t hurt a fly!” A different person said, from within a crowd of people. The man named Charlie slapped his face and motioned for Emily to come into the alley anyway. Emily followed, much more confident now.

“Ok. I can tell you’re a new player, and you came from that desert, so you’re probably thirsty, right?” Charlie asked. “Yeah! I need money so I can buy some water, do you need anything done? Like, uh, car… wash?” Emily asked. “Barely anyone in Zone Pink can afford a car, but if you drop your hands to your sides for a little, then I’ll give you five bucks and some potentially lifesaving advice.” Charlie said. Emily’s eyes opened. She hesitated, but reluctantly dropped her hands to her sides, exposing her naked body to Charlie. She was blushing, but was so sunburnt that nobody could tell.

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Charlie grabbed 5 dollars from his pocket and gave it to Emily. “Thanks. I don’t have a girlfriend or anything, and there’s no porn here, so I haven’t seen anything like this in a while. I’m not gonna rape you, don’t worry.” Charlie said. “...But, what they said about me being a mr. nice guy and stuff, is not true. I’m a thief. Nobody knows this, and I’m telling you this because if you tried to tell people, they wouldn’t believe you. Nobody would suspect good ol’ Charlie! But in this world, you shouldn’t try and respect the law. It’s a barrier. There is literally no security in that warehouse at all. I get almost all of my supplies just from robbing it. If you want water, go steal it.” Charlie said. “N-no! I came into this town because I wanted to be a good person! I could’ve already robbed it, but I decided not to!” Emily responded. “I’m not saying you have to rob it, but you definitely should. These people don’t owe you anything, and water is very expensive here, with us bordering a desert and all. I’ve almost died twice because I couldn’t afford a basic necessity, and I don’t want anyone else to experience the pain I did.” Charlie said. “So you’re both a good person AND a bad person?” Emily asked. “Yeah, I guess. I mean, I haven’t killed anyone… yet…” Charlie said. “What about this money?” Emily asked. “You can keep it. Hopefully you spend it on something else, and get the water for free, like I told you to.” Charlie said. Emily considered it. She couldn’t really carry more than a few bottles, so what’s the harm in that? “Ok. I’ll steal the water!” Emily finally said. “Yes! Up top!” Charlie said, raising his hand for a high five.

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“Eh, it was worth a shot.” Charlie said. As Emily left, Charlie remembered some very important information. “Oh! Whatever you do! Don’t take the water near the entrance! It isn’t wa- she can’t hear me.” Charlie said.

 

Emily approached the entrance of the warehouse. She was going to steal as much water as she could, because she didn’t know where the closest town was. She did find it odd that there was no surveillance here. Charlie apparently stole from it all the time, but they never thought to put up a camera to see who was stealing stuff? Emily looked around and spotted a ton of water, conveniently located near the entrance. She grabbed a bottle, opened it, and downed the entire thing right there. She was in such a rush to drink it, though, that she spilt some.

As she walked over to a crate to take some bottles from it, she slipped on the spilt water and fell. She yelled out in pain, but quickly got up, hoping nobody heard her. As she got up though, she noticed a large panel appeared in front of her.

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“What the…” she thought as she looked at it. There were three boxes, a picture of her, some colored bars, and two boxes, with a rusty spear in them. “Is… is this my inventory or something?!” She thought. She noticed that a red bar said 99% and was almost full. That must be her health, the one percent being from when she fell. After a short amount of time, it reached 100%. She also recalled the announcer voice saying that this experience could be comparable to a game, and how Charlie called her a “player.”

One other thing she realized was that she could put an entire crate of water bottles in her inventory, and she could also put her spear in her inventory so she didn’t have to keep carrying it. While yes, a whole crate of water is a lot more than she was initially going to take, she didn’t really care anymore. She grabbed the crate, and managed to lift it over to her inventory. It was very heavy, she noticed that when she brought it to the box, it shrunk down and disappeared from real life to be just an icon in her inventory. Now that she had everything she needed, she just had to figure out how to get rid of the inventory, as she wasn’t really sure how she brought it up in the first place.

It appeared when she fell, so maybe she had to press on a certain part of her body? She tried pressing her knees, elbows, shoulders, and hips, but nothing did anything. She tried pressing on her tits, but that didn’t do anything either. (But imagine if she had to squeeze her tits every time she wanted to open her inventory? How would guys open their inventory?) she started scratching her chin, trying to figure out what to do, when the inventory disappeared. Emily removed her hand in shock, and then realized what happened. She pinched her chin. The inventory opened up again. Of course! She hit her chin when she fell! (Ouch!) She pinched her chin again and left the warehouse, now knowing that she had an inventory, and how to access it.
 

(Later that day)

“Oh. would you look at that. We’ve had another break in.” A security guard said, starting his shift in the night duty.

“How many time have I told them to get guards during the daytime?!” Another guard asked.

“Wait, look! Look what they stole! The usual guy would never steal that!” The first guard pointed out.

“It must have been that one girl who came in naked! She probably thought it was water!” The second guard said.

“She took a whole crate too!” The first guard noticed.

“Man, she’s gonna have a rough time.” The second guard said, replacing the stolen crate of bottled diuretics.
 

(Earlier, just after Emily stole the “water”)

Emily walked past the town, and noticed that it was very close to some tall mountains. Either this was a transition from a desert to a different region, or it was the edge of the simulated world.

 

Should Emily

  1. Go through the mountains

  2. Continue exploring the desert

 

Also for future reference, how do I add spoiler text? I’m planning on adding a live update of the inventory at the end of every section (to show the colored bars) and I think it would be cool to put it in the spoiler section, unless you can’t put images in there.

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Let's go to the mountains.  There's probably not much more for us in the desert.  

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Well, I don't know about it " mountains " is really vague to me, I mean if I saw a mountain with some plants I should go for it because it is almost sure it have some river or something to get water and food, but if the mountain is just another tall desert piece of rock I should perfer go for the desert because I can move easier in the plan land than in the hills and I can see better my way.

then if the montains have some plants I vote 1 if not, I vote 2

@Phentaiee, lovely pics, I'm loving this story ( God Charlies, how can you forgot to tell about the 
bottled diuretics to her hahaha )

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Maybe water won't be as expensive in the mountains if there are people there, also if all we have is diuretics as liquid we will likely die from dehydration if we stay in the desert, getting water flowing through your body at high speed sounds like something that would be lethal in high temperatures.

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2 hours ago, Phentaiee said:

But imagine if she had to squeeze her tits every time she wanted to open her inventory? How would guys open their inventory?

By squeezing our nipples of course!

i'll vote 2 to even the odds, because I don't give a crap what gets picked

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I vote for heading into the mountains. Even though Emily doesn't know that she has diuretics, it would be a good idea to get her somewhere that finding more affordable water is likely. The desert won't cut it, so the mountains would be our best bet. Like @Bombality said, if we gulp down the diuretics in the desert, then Emily's health is probably going to start dropping.

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7 hours ago, Bombality said:

also if all we have is diuretics as liquid we will likely die from dehydration if we stay in the desert, getting water flowing through your body at high speed sounds like something that would be lethal in high temperatures.

Ok jeez well thanks for ruining my plans

I’m kidding, but I definitely didn’t consider that

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This world just runs on different logic where we can drink as much diuretics as we want but never get dehydrated.  

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Emily decided she would go into the mountains. There were a few plants scattered around, meaning these mountains were most likely the mountains keeping the moisture from the desert, which also means that more habitable land is on the other side.

The only problem would be scaling these bad boys.

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Emily started walking in. She tried to find a pre-made path, but there was none. She was very glad she had boots though, and she equipped her spear again to act as a walking stick.

While it was fun for a change of scenery, the fun didn’t last. Games and movies always made climbing look easy, but even walking on this terrain was tough!

After a while she started getting antsy. She wasn’t sure why, but she had a weird feeling in her stomach. She assumed that either she was scared about falling, or she felt bad for stealing so much water earlier. Speaking of which, Emily found a flat spot, and took the crate out of her inventory. She opened it, grabbed a bottle, and drank it. She then put the empty bottle back in the crate, and lifted it back into her inventory. Her stomach area didn’t like that though, as it felt even worse after drinking the water. It was almost as if it were directly telling her not to drink that stolen water, because it was stolen, and not for any other reason…

After awhile of difficult climbing, Emily found a large hole in the side of the mountain. A cave! If this were truly like a game, there would probably be some good loot in there! But the announcer said there would be monsters! Since she hadn’t seen any yet, maybe they just weren’t on the surface?

 

Should Emily risk going in the cave to get some good loot but potentially seeing monsters?

 

  1. Go in that cave, baby!

  2. Don’t risk it! Keep going through the mountains!

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1. Cave!

Don’t pass up the early encounters or you’ll be under levelled later on. :)

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