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I tried to draw something and put a ton of effort into it, but unfortunately it didn’t really turn out too well. Plus, even if it did, this took way too long for me to put in every continuation of thi

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I have thought about this series a bit, and it didn't seem right to just leave it in the middle of this cave sequence. I'll go into my thoughts more at the end, but I felt like it needed at least some

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On 7/17/2021 at 10:10 PM, Phentaiee said:

October 28th 2021

Olivia licked her lips eagerly. Only seconds after Emily asked about drinks, several thoughts raced through Olivia’s head. She thought about how she didn’t really want water, but how Emily didn’t want to get rid of the pee in her bladder, but she also thought about how big and full Emily’s breasts looked… She thought there might be milk in there, just waiting to get out, but she pushed that thought out of her mind. She didn’t want to be selfish, she didn’t want to make Emily empty her bladder just so she could drink something less boring! But she knew deep inside that Emily would be fine with it… Was she taking advantage of her?

‘Stop Olivia! Just say water! There’s nothing wrong with water!’ Olivia thought to herself.

“It looks like you’re thinking about something else, did you hear what I said?” Emily asked.

“Oh! Sorry, did you say something?” Olivia asked.

“Yeah, um, do you want me to go fill these bottles with water now?” Emily asked.

“Oh, I heard that! Yeah- uh, yeah just go do that… yeah.” Olivia said. 

“Olivia, I’m fine! My leg doesn’t hurt! You don’t need to worry!” Emily said, noticing Olivia’s hesitancy.

“No… it’s not that…” Olivia said.

“Oh, what is it then?” Emily asked, stepping forward, placing a hand on Olivia’s shoulder.

“I… Uh, well… Uh, I was thinking… ummmmmm…” Olivia started. Emily perked up. She had no idea what Olivia was thinking, but if she was hesitant to say it, it was probably really hot.

“Water’s, uh, fine… No… I- I’m…" Olivia started.

"The idea wouldn’t work.” She said.

“Well, I’d still like to hear it! If it’s hot, I’m sure I’d enjoy just hearing the idea!” Emily responded

“Umm… Your tits, they’re r-really big… but also, they’re really firm, and s-soft, and s-squeezable…” Olivia noticed she was squeezing Emily's breasts without even trying to. Emily had a huge grin on her face.

“P-Point is! Don’t you think there would be a reason they’re so f-firm~?” Olivia asked.
“Because of my muscles?” Emily asked.

“...”

“Go on! I wanna hear what you were thinking!” Emily assured her, hands giving a quick squeeze to her shoulders.

“I-I was thinking… Not that it’s right or anything, that your breasts were filled with milk, and that’s why they’re so big and firm.” Olivia admitted.

“M-Milk!? I’ve never… uh, lactated, in my life! You’ve squeezed my nipples before, no milk has come out! I can assure you that I have no milk in me!” Emily said, shocked at the idea.

 

Also turned on by the idea.

“W-We could try, though… I-I assume you were going to suggest we drink my milk instead of water?” Emily said.

“Well, think about it. We can’t drink your p-pee because we’re out of it, and water is healthier than p-pee anyway. But milk has even more nutritional value that water, right? And water’s boring! There are no diuretics in that lake! So your milk would be the p-perfect drink for me while I’m healing!” Olivia said.

“Yeah! I-I don’t have any milk, though.” Emily said, disappointed. Olivia frowned, but quickly started smiling. She quickly reached for Emily’s massive breasts, and squeezed the nipples.

“Hah… Th-they’re so sensitive~” Emily moaned.

“They’re thick and puffy, they’re more like udders than nipples! There has to be milk in there!” Olivia said, pulling on the nipples. Emily moaned with every tug Olivia made. Olivia pinched, squeezed, pulled, twisted, tugged, pressed on, and flicked the nipples. Emily’s face was bright red, she was loving this.

Olivia let go of the nipples, and brought her mouth over to Emily’s right breast. She licked the nipple a little, and cupped her mouth around the areola. She started sucking on it. Olivia started bringing her head back and forth, pulling and pushing the whole breast with her.

“AAAH! Emily yelled out. Olivia stopped her head in place

‘WHAT DID I DO?!’ Olivia thought, panicking, before Emily’s head flew back, and a creamy milk blasted out, filling her mouth.

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Olivia gulped the milk down, making more space in her mouth for more of the delicious, thick spray to house. She noticed Emily’s left nipple spraying as well, landing on the cave’s floor. She grabbed Emily’s left breast, and pulled it up and back, bringing it towards Emily’s face. Emily opened her mouth, grabbed the tit herself, and enclosed her mouth around the nipple’s eruption.

Both girls drank all the milk they could, until Emily’s breasts stopped spraying, only a few seconds later.

“I… I did that?!” Emily said, shocked.

“I knew you had milk in you! There’s no way your tits could be like that if that weren’t the case!” Olivia said. Looking at Emily’s tits, she didn’t see them sagging or deflated at all. They looked exactly the same as before, but a bit redder from all of the recent nipple stimulation.

“Wait, but your tits… They’re really just that perfect naturally?!” Olivia asked. Emily bounced her tits around.

“Yeah! I guess so! Either that, or we didn’t even make a dent in my milk supply!” Emily laughed. Olivia flicked one of Emily’s still twitching nipples. A thick spurt of milk sprayed out.

“I-I was joking… Are they actually that full?” Emily asked.

“Check your inventory! See if there’s a new bar!” Olivia suggested.

“Um, no. I still have the same bars I had before. D-Does that mean I just have infinite milk?!” Emily wondered.

“Was your blue bar full before you drank that?” Olivia asked.

“Yeah, we just drank the last of my pee, remember?” Emily said.

“If your blue bar remained the same, then that means you don’t actually get hydrated by that, since it’s coming from your own body. But if your blue bar increased, then your breasts are just a tap into some infinite milk supply! You were already full, so we don’t know yet, but we’ll have to test that out in the future!” Olivia exclaimed.

Olivia looked over at Emily’s breasts. She flicked a nipple again, and another spurt of milk escaped.

“That is soooo hot~” Olivia said.

“Well, they’re not n-normally like this… You kinda loosened them up with all of the stimulation just now.” Emily said.

“What if they’re p-permanently loosened up, though?! What if I could just make you lactate whenever I wanted?!” Olivia asked. Emily didn’t know how to respond. Despite it being her own body, she knew just as much as Olivia did.

 

“So, Olivia, which do you p-prefer? My p-pee, or my milk?” Emily asked.

“Oh, that’s way too hard of a decision! Ummm, I’m going to have to say p-pee for now, just because it requires you to be desperate, to some extent.” Olivia decided.

“Speaking of desperation… How are you holding up? What p-percent are you at?” Emily asked.

“Only 117.” Olivia replied.

“I still can’t believe there was a time we could barely get past 80. These p-plugs… They’ve changed our lives…” Emily said

“F-for the better!” Olivia added.

“Oh, absolutely for the better…” Emily said, rubbing her bladder.

“I was thinking… holding through the 100 surge without a p-plug… Surely it can be done, r-right?” Olivia asked.

“If anyone can do it, it’s you. I may have a larger capacity, but you have way more p-pain tolerance than me.” Emily said.

“Aww, thanks! I-I may have to try that sometime…” Olivia decided.

Suddenly, Emily bent over. Her hands flew down, between her legs. She yelled out in agony, but the yell quickly turned into a moan. Her face scrunched up, but it quickly turned into a pained smile. Her legs kicked out frantically.

Olivia let her calm down.

“I-I just hit two hundred p-percent~” Emily moaned. She opened her inventory to confirm, and her bladder was 200% full.

“That looked so hott…” Olivia cooed.

 

“Well, the day is just starting, and we’re stuck in here, what should we do?” Emily asked.

 

1- Let’s have some fun with our bladders! They’re full and cushiony!

2- Let’s try and test that infinite milk theory! Can we drain you?

3- Let’s see if we can get you horny enough to generate a third drink, the second one from your pussy!

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Emily.thumb.png.a23db855da093c85d5495cb67e3a4be9.pngOlivia.thumb.png.91f25fa6328de65f9b4d1e7e637571ed.pngAs you can probably tell, I've been trying to branch out into other fetishes with this series. Obviously still focused on pee desperation, but with Emily and Olivia so horny all the time, they're bound to want to try different things... How do you all feel about Emily and Olivia continually doing things from some other fetishes, like lactation, pee drinking, etc?

 

2 solely because i'm curious

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13 hours ago, Soul_Contact said:

This is definitely my favorite interactive on the site I can't wait for more

Thanks! I am currently in a position where I can’t draw anything for this site, so Fill-Me is on hiatus, and I haven’t been updating this, but it would probably be a good idea to continue this without illustrations for a while, instead of just not doing it at all while I can’t draw anything for it

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On 9/21/2021 at 10:36 AM, Phentaiee said:

Thanks! I am currently in a position where I can’t draw anything for this site, so Fill-Me is on hiatus, and I haven’t been updating this, but it would probably be a good idea to continue this without illustrations for a while, instead of just not doing it at all while I can’t draw anything for it

When shall the next part be out?

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On 7/1/2022 at 8:47 PM, hairypotatocat said:

When shall the next part be out?

To put it bluntly, I do not plan on finishing Zone Pink. While I had things planned for the future, I don’t like the characters- how little their personalities were actually considered when making this, and I don’t like the current tone of the story, and really don’t know how to return to how this story started. I have said multiple times that I want to come back to this, and I really do want it to be continued and great, but I just don’t have the expertise to make the story into what I think it needs to be. It is also very hard for me to work on two separate stories at once, and while Fill-Me is infinitely harder to produce, it’s in a great state, and does not share a lot of my issues I have with this story.

I will say, none of this has to do with the fact that ZP is an interactive and FM is all planned, I think both can lead to great stories, Zone Pink just has a lot going against it for me, such as the shallow characters, and the powerless tone.

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On 7/11/2022 at 4:02 PM, Phentaiee said:

To put it bluntly, I do not plan on finishing Zone Pink. While I had things planned for the future, I don’t like the characters- how little their personalities were actually considered when making this, and I don’t like the current tone of the story, and really don’t know how to return to how this story started. I have said multiple times that I want to come back to this, and I really do want it to be continued and great, but I just don’t have the expertise to make the story into what I think it needs to be. It is also very hard for me to work on two separate stories at once, and while Fill-Me is infinitely harder to produce, it’s in a great state, and does not share a lot of my issues I have with this story.

I will say, none of this has to do with the fact that ZP is an interactive and FM is all planned, I think both can lead to great stories, Zone Pink just has a lot going against it for me, such as the shallow characters, and the powerless tone.

Would you be oposed to someone else continuing the story instead of you? 

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8 hours ago, Bombality said:

Would you be oposed to someone else continuing the story instead of you? 

If anyone were to continue it, you’d absolutely be my first choice. As far as nudity goes, Emily has a very revealing outfit and I’m sure something can happen to Olivia’s main outfit… I don’t think the lack of nudity would be a problem in that case.

Running an interactive story with art is a lot of work though, (at least, I’d assume you’d want to do art for it, considering, y’know, that’s what you do…) so I think you should seriously think about this if you’re at all considering it. If it sounds fun, that’s great, but it will be time consuming.

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I have thought about this series a bit, and it didn't seem right to just leave it in the middle of this cave sequence. I'll go into my thoughts more at the end, but I felt like it needed at least some sort of conclusion. So I decided to give it a sort of ending.

 

October 28th 2021

Olivia thought for a moment, but didn’t have to think too hard to make a decision, feeling a quick wave of pain come from her overfull bladder. She pressed down on her firm bladder bulge, feeling the intensity of the pee forced against her tightly plugged pussy. She moaned in pleasure, putting both arms into it, pressing down more. Emily took notice, and started pressing on her own bulging bladder.

Emily’s bladder was around 4x the size of Olivia’s right now. She was having a much harder time pressing down on it.

“Olivia… could you give me a hand? Or both of them?” Emily asked, pointing to her bladder. Olivia happily helped Emily, all four hands applying great force to the rock-solid bladder. Emily moaned in pleasured pain, feeling the immense pressure built up within.

“Emily, to pass the time while my legs are still healing… Let’s have some fun with our bladders! They’re full and cushiony!” Olivia suggested. Emily thought about it.

“I like that you said cushiony… Are you thinking of letting them take the blows for some irresponsible actions?” Emily asked. Olivia giggled.

“What could we possibly do without me using my legs?” Olivia asked.

“Can you stand?” Emily asked. Olivia slowly struggled to her feet, using the wall to help her up. Emily ran towards her, wrapping her arms around her, and tightly embracing her. Olivia wrapped herself around Emily as well, and the two pulled each other together tightly, flattening Olivia’s bladder, and making a dent in Emily’s. The girls moaned loudly, feeling the pressure skyrocket.

“Ohhhh… I loved that…” Olivia said.

Emily didn’t release her embrace.

“Emily… Are you having too much fun hugging me to try something else?” Olivia asked. Emily giggled.

“Olivia, with you being unable to move, it’s going to be hard to do things like what you described.” Emily said.

“I have an idea. Can you lay down on your back? Right there?” Olivia asked, pointing at the ground in front of her. Emily laid down, her bladder protruding straight up. Olivia turned around, and quickly sat down on Emily’s bladder with a jump. Emily let out a sharp moan, and Olivia started bouncing up and down.

“Please… become dominant again… I really want it right now!” Emily said, craving more fun.

Olivia sighed.

“I’d love to-… that’s a lie, I hate when I lose control like that… but even if I didn’t, I’m out of ideas, bar us just punching each other’s bladders.” Olivia said. Emily stood up, and quickly punched Olivia’s bladder.

“OOF! O-Okay! Maybe the boring ideas aren’t bad!” Olivia decided. She punched Emily back.

“Ohhh… if my bladder weren’t so full… I barely would have felt that… you need to work on your form, like this!” Emily said. She reeled her arm back, and drove it into Olivia’s bladder at full power. Olivia exhaled painfully, hitting the wall.

“Oh shit! N-No I meant for that to be.. like… the same thing we’ve been doing!” Emily said, panicked.

Olivia sat down. She breathed heavily for a moment, and smiled weakly at Emily.

“Other than the wind being knocked out of me… t-that felt great, b-bladder-wise.” Olivia said. Emily smiled.

“Oh wait, Emily! Take all of your armor off, then let me hit you!” Olivia suggested.

“Good idea!” 

Emily removed her invisible armor and clothing, though that didn’t show up in the inventory screen.

“I wonder what’s up wi-THAAA!” Emily yelled, feeling Olivia punch her again. Olivia giggled.

“I don’t really know what all you mean by ‘form,’ but I tried doing what you did!” Olivia said.

“You did great! Either that, or armor is way more effective than I expected.” Emily decided.

“Oh… if that’s the case, i-imagine if I didn’t have armor on when you punched me the second time…” Olivia thought.

“R-Right… that was a little stupid.” Emily admitted.

“A little!” Olivia giggled. She opened her inventory to see her health bar knocked down a few percentage points.

“Geez… we need to be more careful…” Olivia said.

“I-I am so sorry!! That was… reckless… you need to heal, I shouldn’t be making things worse!” Emily apologized.

“It’s fine… we can remember that for when I’m healed though… f-for now, I’m fine with being a spectator!” Olivia said.

Emily thought for a moment about what she could do. She needed to put on a show for Olivia!

She ran towards the cave wall, hitting her rock-hard bladder against the rock-wall. She moaned, feeling the impact. She looked over towards Olivia to see her smiling.

“How about you run into that wall?” Olivia said, pointing to a different wall in the cave. Emily looked over to see a large rock protruding from the side. She smirked at Olivia, and started running toward the other wall. Emily’s bladder hit the rock with even more speed than the last wall, and it was successfully able to push in a bit, compressing the bladder slightly. Emily screamed with pleasure as she was abruptly stopped by the rock, feeling the piss in her bladder squeezed down toward the impenetrable plug.

“OHHHH!!! Ahhh… c-come on! Let’s get a c-cave-in t-to crush t-this thing even more!!” Emily moaned. Olivia laughed.

“Hey, Emily… come over here.” Olivia gestured beside her. Emily walked over, thrusting her hips forward to emphasise her bladder as she walked. She sat down next to Olivia, who pulled her in and kissed her.

“I love you… I can’t wait to stomp that bladder into the ground once my legs have healed… let’s just rest for a bit, though. I think later today, I can probably start walking back to our house, with your assistance, of course.” Olivia said, before starting to kiss Emily again. After a minute, the two pulled away from each other, and Emily smiled at her friend.

“Are you sure you’ll be good to walk back?” Emily asked, rubbing Olivia’s injured legs. Olivia hesitated for a moment, and then nodded.

“If I can’t… you can just carry me back, right? You need a good workout anyway.” Olivia said with a giggle. She laid her head against Emily’s shoulder.

The two sat together for a long while, talking, kissing, the occasional intimate act, but eventually Emily got up to get them water. Emily looked for the light peeking through the corridors to find the cave entrance, and found out that it was moonlight when she emerged. She hugged herself, it was pretty cold out here. It was late October, late at night, and they were in a mountain-y region. She didn’t want to stay out for very long, so she quickly filled up the bottles and walked back to the cave. When she got to the area her and Olivia were recuperating in, she saw Olivia standing up, waiting for her. Her legs were a little shaky, but she wasn’t leaning against a wall.

“Olivia! Are… are you r-ready then?” Emily asked. Olivia nodded with a smile, and limped toward Emily. Emily wrapped her arm around Olivia, helping her up, and the two walked out of the cave together.

“Hooo… it’s m-much c-c-colder out here…” Olivia said, shivering a little.

“D-do you n-need me t-t-to help you p-put your c-clothes on?” Emily asked.

“N-no! I-I don’t n-need to p-put clothes on!” Olivia said. Emily reached into her inventory and grabbed her own clothes.

“I’m c-cold t-too, I-I’m p-putting mine on, if t-that c-changes your mind.” Emily said, putting her T-shirt on as they walked home.

“I… I n-need to stop doing that…” Olivia said, taking her sweater out of her inventory.

“Hey, it’s c-cute! B-but s-selflessness doesn’t need to c-c-come before reason!” Emily said, teeth chattering. She was definitely not wearing clothes meant for cold weather, but it was better than being naked.

“Yeah… I just, I f-feel like I owe you everything… and d-despite that, you s-still d-do more for me than I d-do for you… like I’m indebted t-to your kindness and the gap just keeps g-getting b-bigger…” Olivia admitted. Emily gave her a tight hug.

“I d-do everything I d-do because I love you. You d-don’t owe me anything. I mean it. I want t-to see your s-smile, I want you to get all f-flustered when you s-see my exposed s-skin… If you h-hate being n-naked, then never get n-naked again! P-Plus, if y-you n-never t-take your c-clothes off, t-then you’ll n-never be able t-to remove your p-plug, which is an added bonus!” Emily giggled, still shivering. Olivia smiled.

“I… I know, it’s j-just hard… to accept it.” Olivia said. Emily gave her a quick kiss on the cheek.

“We b-both know you’re g-gonna k-keep being a n-nervous, overly-cautious wimp, b-but I’d love if you were just a l-little more c-c-confident… let your emotions t-take over when they want t-to, t-take advantage of me every once in a while… you d-deserve it, and I’d love it.” Emily said. Olivia rubbed Emily’s bladder, which was nearing 300% full.

“You p-planning something?” Emily asked. Olivia nodded.

“Yep. When we g-get home, I’m g-gonna p-pee, I n-need to g-go p-pretty b-badly!! You’re g-going to watch, of course.” Olivia teased. Emily let out a pleased sigh.

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The two arrived home, Emily supporting Olivia all the way. Olivia started undressing.

“O-Olivia! Y-you d-don’t have to g-get naked for me!” Emily said quickly.

“Emily… I h-have to p-pee… I n-need to t-take my c-clothes off t-to p-pee…” Olivia said, fidgeting with her vest.

“…You d-don’t have to t-take your t-top off t-to p-pee…” Emily pointed out. Olivia smiled.

“You got so flustered b-by that…” Olivia said seductively, causing Emily to blush.

“Um… A-Are we g-gonna fill b-bottles with your p-pee?” Emily asked. Olivia shook your head.

“That’s reserved for your p-pee. It’s a luxury item, w-we don’t need to get it mixed up with mine.” Olivia said, giggling a little.

“I don’t know, I think I p-prefer yours… It has a certain… a-aroma, no that’s smell… umm… con- umm…” Emily started.

“Flavor?” Olivia asked.

“I’m trying to think of a fancier word…” Emily said. Olivia laughed. “Just stick your mouth between my legs already!” Olivia said, fingering around her plug. Emily gladly did so, licking Olivia’s pussy in anticipation.

“P-plug’s coming out, get ready!” Olivia said. Emily was ready. Olivia wrapped her fingers around the golden plug, and removed it, letting her 176% full bladder empty itself all over Emily. Since her clothes were just cleaned, Emily had the foresight to remove her clothing, so the two girls stood together, naked, with Emily being drenched in the golden shower of her lover, drinking as much of it as she could. Her bladder ached before this, but it thrashed with fury as soon as it heard that Olivia was allowed to release. Emily’s legs trembled, but her desire to lick up as much of Olivia’s pee as possible kept her in place. Emily’s bladder sent explosive waves of anger and jealousy throughout her body as Olivia moaned in relief. Emily couldn’t be happier to feel such pain. As she gulped down Olivia’s golden river, she took a hand away from groping Olivia’s ass to give her bladder a quick punch, scolding it for being unruly. Olivia felt a sudden and tight squeeze from Emily’s other hand as she landed a blow on herself.

“Nnhh… W-Was that a squeeze? D-did you s-seriously react to a p-punch… with a bladder that empty?” Olivia asked. Emily loved the roleplay, she moaned happily, not currently able to respond due to her mouthful of piss.

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Soon, Olivia was empty. Emily gulped down what was left in her mouth, and sighed happily.

“You’re soaked! …I guess you won’t be able to put those clothes back on…” Olivia said, smirking.

“I guess I won’t be able to lay in the bed next to my especially grabby friend either…” Emily teased. Olivia immediately wished Emily was dry.

“Of course, I could just clean myself… but the lake is so far away! If only someone could lick all of this p-pee off of my curvy, muscular body…” Emily said playfully, doing a revealing stretch.

Olivia did not hesitate. Emily moaned as Olivia got to work, cleaning her whole body. Olivia made sure Emily’s pussy was extra clean, just to be safe.

“D-don’t f-forget my bladder!” Emily moaned as Olivia’s tongue explored her body.

“I almost missed it, it’s so small…” Olivia teased, as she started licking Emily’s navel.

After a bit, Olivia was finished, and Emily let herself dry off. She put her clothes back on, and the two hopped into their bed.

“So, um… h-how full are we p-planning this time?” Emily asked. Olivia noticed a slight wavering in her voice.

“Not much fuller… maybe enough to make sure you give Lynn a visit… keep her updated. Sound good?” Olivia asked with a smirk.

Emily, whose bladder was already way fuller than she wanted from this hold, whose bladder was approaching the levels of fullness from the torture, gave it only one thought...

 

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“Absolutely.”

 

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I'm not including the inventory screen here, I have switched my computers since the last post, and do not want to download the required stuff again just for the one time. Also, I have no idea why it made everything bold, it usually doesn’t. I tried inserting the text as not rich, but it just deleted all of it. I guess it can be the bold finish.

Not the ending I imagined for this series, although it's certainly a lot better than just leaving it with nothing. Maybe I'll come back to the story in a few years, but I doubt it. There are things I did not set up as well as I would have, had I started this story today, that make writing for it difficult for me. I have moved on to my comic series, Fill-Me, which while way less thought out than Zone Pink, had thought put into it where it mattered, at least for me.


Bombality mentioned continuing the series himself, and while I would fully support that, don't expect him to actually do that. A series is a huge undertaking, especially with illustrations (which I would assume he would want to include), and he knows that. I think he would do a great job, but it would be a lot of work, work that he would likely prefer to put into something else.

Note that my acceptance of that is not an invitation for just anyone to continue this! I trust Bombality specifically, the story isn't just open for taking now!

Thank you to everyone who voted, left a supportive comment, left a horny comment, and just interacted with the series in the past 4 years. It wouldn't have gotten anywhere without an audience, and I am so happy to have one. Hopefully this ending leaves a good memory for the series after the questionable direction it had been taking for a while.

 

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1 hour ago, ash_pikachu said:

It's a shame to see such a unique and wonderful story come to an end.

On a side note when can we expect the next installment of fill-me.

I thought it was pretty unique too, for what it was.

Fill-Me will be posted August 15th, although it may not be approved for a few days. There’s a discord server where I post them immediately, which is linked in the description of page 10 of chapter 2.

Also, try using a question mark next time… 🙂

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10 hours ago, Soul_Contact said:

Thank you again phen for all your hard work on this one! I must have read it half a dozen times over the years. I'm looking forward to lots of fill-me to keep me going!

Thank you! That means a lot to me! I feel like it’s been doing a pretty good job of filling the role of this series. Unfortunately though, Fill-Me is way harder to make, so it doesn’t release very often!

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11 minutes ago, SpaceWonderer said:

Thank you for this great story!

It would be really awesome if someone would go through all 42 pages and put all of the story parts with images into one documents, like maybe on Google Drive? It's a bit of a work but would make it a very nice finished novel.

I actually had to split up all of the writing between a few different google docs because my phone couldn’t handle too much loaded at once. And that was without the pictures!

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On 8/22/2018 at 1:25 AM, Phentaiee said:

“Since we’re too afraid to go into our house, I think we should sleep by the fire tonight. The fire should hopefully keep any animals away from us.” Emily said. “It’s so c-cold out here at night though, and w-we can’t risk the blankets c-catching on fire! The fire won’t keep us warm enough!” Olivia worried. “Olivia, the fire should be fine. It is very cold though, you are right.” Emily reassured. They laid down on opposite ends of the fire, but were very cold. “E-Emily? I’m s-so c-cold! We need our b-blankets!” Olivia said. “Olivia, the blankets c-could catch f-fire, and neither of us want to go into the house anyway.” Emily said, shivering. “W-well, c-could y-you c-come over h-here, th-then?” Olivia asked. “Wh-what?! We don’t h-have blankets! W-wouldn’t us sleeping next to each other t-totally naked be out of your comfort zone?” Emily asked. “Emily I’m so c-cold I’ll do anything! I n-need your body warmth!” Olivia said. Emily laid down behind her. “W-wait, I don’t want to be the l-little spoon!” Olivia said. “W-what? But wouldn’t the little s-spoon be warmer?” Emily asked. “I-I don’t know but I want to be big s-spoon.” Olivia said. Emily repositioned and soon the two girls were pressed against each other for warmth. Emily was very proud of Olivia, as she was sure this would normally freak her out, but she was a little confused by the big spoon thing. Nonetheless, they both went to sleep.

Emily was woken in the middle of the night by something. At first she was afraid that an animal was attacking them, but she just felt Olivia squirming. Emily let her do her thing, but after a few seconds, she realized that Olivia was actually dreaming and moving around as part of the dream. What was she doing though? She was kind of thrusting her hips forward, then backwards, then forwards… it felt oddly sexual. To make things worse, Emily could swear she heard faint breathy moans coming from Olivia’s mouth, but they were very quiet. The real question is, if this was sexual, was she dreaming about a random person, or was she possibly dreaming about Emily? Emily wasn’t sure what she would rather. She didn’t want to like Olivia the way she did, but she did feel pretty attracted by her. She hoped that Olivia secretly liked her, but she couldn’t get her hopes up. Regardless, Olivia had been humping her for a good minute or two now, and the moans were getting louder. Emily was going to have to wake her up. Suddenly, though, she heard a sharp inhale, and Olivia stopped. Emily figured that she should probably sleep, and she would consult Olivia tomorrow.

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“Hey Olivia, what did you dream about last night?” Emily asked. “Oh, n-nothing… I- um, I didn’t dream about anything.” Olivia said. Emily frowned. “Olivia, you were acting weird, you obviously dreamt about something weird. What was it?” Emily asked. Olivia’s face became red. “I uh, it was embarrassing.” Olivia said. “Olivia, you can tell me!” Emily said. “I was dreaming about having sex with a guy!” Olivia blurted out. “Oh, y-yeah th-that explains it…” Emily laughed, but all she could think was ‘with a guy?!’ She didn’t want to draw conclusions too early, but she also realized how devastated she would be if Olivia didn’t like her, and realized that she needed to lower her expectations.

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“A-Alright Olivia, we need water, so I say we go down to the pond and see if we can get some fresh water. I’m running out of bottles from the crate.” Emily said. “Ok! Let’s go.” Olivia said. Both of them walked to the pond, one with complicated emotions racing through her head, and the other just wanting to collect some fresh water.

 

How do they do?

  1. The pond’s water ends up being so fresh they can drink right from it. (Or in the game they aren’t punished for drinking pond water)

  2. They take water from the pond and boil it to make it fresh (but warm)

  3. The water is too bad to drink and there is nothing they can do about it

 

Also, any advice to advance the plot with the relationship?

 

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This is a fairly simple art style (not complaining, I like it), but somehow Emily's eyes perfectly express her mental state of "WTF!?!"

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