lightman 120 Posted October 12, 2017 Share Posted October 12, 2017 right now I'm in the middle of a story and I'm trying to think of a punishment for one of the characters. my story is 'dropped in a new world' the character is Bab and she looks like a ten-year-old and is already using diapers. I want to save spanking for later if I can. any ideas on what type of punishment I should give her? Quote Link to comment
doc133 40 Posted October 12, 2017 Share Posted October 12, 2017 Have you thought about making her set in her used diaper for a while, or maybe corner time. Quote Link to comment
lightman 120 Posted October 12, 2017 Author Share Posted October 12, 2017 I have but they don't seem like an interesting punishment to write a full chapter about. Quote Link to comment
Aaron 402 Posted October 12, 2017 Share Posted October 12, 2017 If she has had a wetting accident then make her answer the door to her friend(s) while still obviously wet. Or even take her shopping while wet so that everyone will laugh at her. lightman 1 Quote Link to comment
kochel428 583 Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 What kind of new world has she been dropped in? Quote Link to comment
lightman 120 Posted October 13, 2017 Author Share Posted October 13, 2017 it's a fantasy world. kights and magic type of thing. Quote Link to comment
Hamish Scott 17 Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 Might I suggest that someone has secretly hidden a number of new diapers for her to find and use but she's going to have to search for them - before her own diaper starts leaking. She might ask brave handsome knight to help her in her quest but since the knight has never seen a diaper before, and doesn't even know why the distressed girl is so keen to track them down, she's going to get very embarrassed - but needs must, and her need grows stronger with every passing minute! Could you do something with this idea? Happy story writing! Quote Link to comment
lightman 120 Posted October 13, 2017 Author Share Posted October 13, 2017 the hide and seek diaper idea sounds like a fun idea! but the rest really wouldn't work with the story. but thank you for the great idea! Quote Link to comment
Hamish Scott 17 Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 Well, without knowing more about the story, it's the best I could come up with. Good luck! Quote Link to comment
Dededesciple 67 Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 Sick this guy on her Quote Link to comment
kochel428 583 Posted October 14, 2017 Share Posted October 14, 2017 Since this is a fantasy world I feel like it pretty fertile ground for wetting and punishments. To begin with, you have all the typical "magical omorashi" devices that come up a lot – being able to control someone's bladder fullness or ability to hold, for instance. Then you also have all the standard medieval hierarchies and humiliations. So depending on how dark you want to get, you could have anything from forcing her into servitude to putting her in the stocks, to all kinds of torture devices. And let's not forget chastity belts. The myth of Sisyphus could be a good inspiration. As punishment your main character is forced into service of a stern lord. She's told she's not allowed to eat or use the chamber pot until she finishes cleaning the floors of the castle. Little does she know her tormenter has a magical device that makes her bladder fill to overflowing whenever he chooses. She continually gets close to finishing cleaning, only to completely wet herself and have to mop the floor again. There are all kinds of domestic situations where wetting oneself at inopportune moments could be terribly embarrassing. Maybe the lord of the castle has her whipped every time she makes a puddle on the floor while serving his meals. And, again, depending how dark your fantasies are, he could use her for his pleasure. Maybe the person punishing her makes her wet while being forced to service her lord sexually. On the other hand maybe your protagonist is more of a high class lady. Perhaps a witch curses her, in her great beauty, to have many suitors, but to lose control of her bladder whenever she is around one – to her great embarrassment – ruining every opportunity she has for marriage. The curse won't be broken until a suitor consummates their love while she's wetting herself and him. You could get grittier and more realistic. She could be left in a dungeon chained to a wall and forced to do all her toilet in her skirts for days. Or she could be stretched or whipped until she wets herself from pain or fear. There really are so many options. Quote Link to comment
lightman 120 Posted October 14, 2017 Author Share Posted October 14, 2017 I think I said it in the first comment that Bab looks like a 10-year-old. so sexual content on her is a no for me. but I do like the stocks and possibly the torture devices later. thank you for a few ideas and some that I might use for a different story later on. Quote Link to comment
kochel428 583 Posted October 14, 2017 Share Posted October 14, 2017 (edited) Oh whoa, yeah, sorry, I forgot about that. Definitely no sexual content. The floor cleaning bit would work though. Edited October 14, 2017 by kochel428 (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
lightman 120 Posted October 14, 2017 Author Share Posted October 14, 2017 lol its fine and yes floor cleaning would work Quote Link to comment
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