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Chapter 1 “FUCK!” I yelled as I ran true a sea of trees. Behind me was a pack of beasts chasing me. “They're catching up!” the small girl strapped to my back yelled. “I know that B

chapter 2 My first time I fought a monster I was nearly killed. As bab and I traveled Bab helped to explain things to me. Such as stats. By holding up the bracelet I can see a stats board.

Chapter 5.  After the day Bab had I gave her the bead again as soon as we got back.  “If I see Marvo before we leave I'm frying his ass,” Bab said as she slowly began to regain body function

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“Alex? Are you ok?” Bab asked me as she looked up.

“Ya I'm fine,” I told her as I ruffled her hair. “Just lost in thought.”

Bab got up off my lap and stood right in front of me. The cute girl in her footie pajamas smiled at me before leaning forward and giving me a hug.

“I'll always be here if you need me,” Bab told me.

“Thank you, Bab,”I respond when something hit me.

My body suddenly tensed and I gripped onto Bab tighter.

“A-Alex? Your squeezing too tight. It's starting to hurt.” Bab told me

“I'm sorry bab. I'll fix that,” I told Bab.

But instead of letting Bab go, I gripped tighter. Bab let out a low grown as she tried to push me away. But it didn't work.

“A-ALEX!” Bab yelled.

“Don't worry baby, it will be over soon,”I told her as I opened my mouth and sank my fangs right into her soft flesh!

Bab let out a blood-curdling scream as her blood rushed into my mouth….

“BAAA!” I yell as I suddenly sat up on my bed panting.

My eyes immediately egested to the darkness and I realized it was all a dream.

“Moooo…” I heard beside me.

I turned to see Bab laying beside me. Half the blanket had been pulled off of her and I could tell her sleeping body did not like that as she blindly reached for a blanket to keep herself warm.

I must have pulled it when I sat up. So I moved it back and recovered her. She let out what I could only describe as a moan of approval as she sucked (or chewing) on her pacifier and nestled up against her body pillow.

Then I looked at her neck, something I wish I hadn't. The memory of the strange dream came back and I just had a sinking feeling in my gut. I had to get away from her.

I know it was probably stupid. I've already hallucinated a few times and wandered off. But just the thought of even hurting Bab scared the hell out of me.

I got out of the tent and went over to the remains of our dying fire.

I sat down and just stared at it. trying to calm myself down and think. 

Strength increasing and decreasing -not yet.

Inability to sleep - I think this now counts.

Strange dreams - yes...

Memory lapse - I don't think so...but I don't remember going to sleep...

temporary loss of magical ability - not yet

Hallucinations -YES!

Vision difficulties - not yet

And lastly, a craving for blood - does that dream count?

I let out a sigh as I think of all of this. I just hope we can get the cure soon. I continue to watch the embers die until I hear Bab behind me.

“Alex?” Bab said as she opened the tent.

“Hi, Bab. morning.” I greeted her with a forced smile on my face. I really didn't want to see her at this moment. “You ok? need a change?” 

Bab looked to be still half asleep as she yawned and walked over to me. 

The smell of a dirty diaper soon hit me as she drew closer. 

“Alex? Why are you out here like this?” Bab asked me as she rubbed the sleep from her eyes.

“What?” I asked then looked down and realized I was still in just my underwear. 

It was a cold night, and yet, I didn't even realize that until now…

“Guess I don't feel the cold very much,” I mumble realizing it might be another sign of me turning into a ghoul.

Bab went back into the tent for a moment and got out a blanket that she threw over me.

“Alex...Yawn… tell me what's wrong.” Bab practically demanded as she rubbed her sleepy eye.

“I'm fine, I…” but bab slapped my leg. “Oww.”

“Alex, you're out here naked in the dark,” Bab told me. “Tell me what's wrong so we can go back to sleep.”

She then plopped down beside me. Notably cringing as she realized she was in a dirty diaper and undoubtedly just spread the mess.

I knew I couldn't win. She was stubborn and would just keep pressing the issue. 

“I had a weird, and scary dream,” I told her. For some reason feeling much younger than I actually was after saying it.

“About?” Bab asked.

“I-i lost myself. I bit your neck....” I told her.

Bab just looked at me.

“I dreamed that you were supporting me and what I was going through. Saying you would be there to help me. Then you hugged me and I sank my fangs into you…” I told her my body slightly trembling from that memory.

“Alex…” Bab said as she placed her hand on my leg and I pushed it away.

“Bab, I heard your scream. Tasted your blood! After everything that has happened, that has me scared!” I yelled. "I feel that I'm completely losing myself!"

Bab stood back up and tried to give me a hug. But after what happened in the dream I shoved her away. A little too hard as she fell to the ground.

“B-bab im…” I started as I got closer to help her up.

But as I did, she took advantage of the situation and wrapped her arms around my neck.

“Bab!” I shouted as I tried to remove her. Trying to be careful not to accidentally toss her again.

“Alex! Stop!” Bab yelled. “Do you trust me!” 

We both stopped and looked into each other's eyes.

Finally, I nodded and let her go. 

Bab went back to hugging me. Her arms tightly around my neck while hers was right in front of me.

“Alex, I trust you too,” Bab told me. “I trust you would never hurt me. I trust that no matter what happens, how much you lose your mind, or how thirsty you become, you would never willingly hurt me.”

Bab was right. I would much rather kill myself than to ever hurt her.

I soon found myself matching her embrace. The two of us holding each other. 

“Thank you,”I whispered to Bab. where would I be if it wasn't for her?

That's when my eyes shot open and I my grip on Bab tightened.

“A-Alex?” Bab asked. Before I placed one arm under her butt and lifted her up and pulled out my sword. “W-what's going on!?”

I stood up and the blanket fell off of me as I held Bab in one arm, and my sword in the other. 

I had no idea what was going on. I just had a feeling that something was coming. No, someTHINGS were coming. And that I really wanted to kill them.

I began to let out a low growl as I frantically searched for whatever was coming. I wanted to run out and kill whatever it was.

Finally, they came.

5 BIG wolves appeared from the brush. Each one easily the same size as me and all had glowing gold eyes.

I stayed planted where I stood, growling at the wolves.

One part of my mind screaming to kill them. The other yelling to protect Bab!

“A-Alex! There werewolves!” Bab yelled to me as she stared at the wolves.

To me, they just looked like giant wolves, but if she says so… plus that finally clicked on why I felt like I wanted to kill them.

in most books and movies vampires and werewolves hate each other.

One of the wolves stepped forward. This one is slightly bigger than the others and had a jet black fur.

It bowed its head to me. It was a sine meaning they came in peace.

It took all the strength I had to finally drop my sword and put Bab down. But I kept one arm in front of her just in case.

I then noticed one of the wolves had a bag on its back and another one reached in with its mouth to pull something out.

That same one then began to walk towards me but stopped halfway when it sensed my body tense. It dropped the thing in its mouth and pushed it closer with its snout before backing away from us.

As soon as it was with its pack I finally stepped forward and picked it up. Not once letting my eyes off of the wolves. I then gave it to Bab to read.

It was still dark out, but Bab just used some electricity to produce a light source.

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DEAR Bab and companion.

Welcome to urinează!

We have been expecting you. We have heard of your companions predicament and have sent 5 of our trusted knights to escort you both to the kingdom. Please follow them.

Our nights also have something for your friend's condition. Please have him take 2.

We hope to see you soon.

Love your sisters Layna and Melanthe
**

“Alex, there here to help,” Bab told me as she took my hand.

I slowly began to calm down a little.

Finally when I was mostly calm, one of the wolves gave me something. A little bottle of pills.

I did as the instructions said and took two.

I had no idea why I needed to take them, but at this point, it couldn't be worse then what I was going through. 

Bab and I then proceeded to pack up our campsite and I finally got the chance to put on some clothes and give Bab a much-needed diaper change.

Once we were all set, the wolves surprised us once more.

The big Black wolf and a smaller white wolf knelt down beside Bab and me. As if asking us to get on…

Reluctantly, we did.

If it wasn't for the fact that I partly wanted to kill it, and that I was scared as hell, I would have been enjoying riding on a fucking wolf!

Thankfully Bab’s wolf already had a harness made just for her which made my worry go down a lot. If needed be, I would have strapped her to my back as we rode the black wolf. 

I did, however, notice that the wolves Bab and I were riding had a little distance between them while the other 3 wolves behind me were very close.

Not really surprising considering I was close to trying to kill them earlier. Should I try anything, the wolves would be on me within a second.

I honestly don't know how long we were riding, but after a while, I could finally see a large castle up ahead.

“Wow…” I said as I stared at it.

The castle looked like it was built right into the side of a cliff. I was stunned by the beauty of it. 

Within the next hour, we were at the castle and being led inside by the wolves and other vampires who were expecting us. 

We were lead through the castle and I could only stare in amazement at everything there.

The armors, the paintings, and statues.

I had no idea what was real and what was a hallucination.

“This is cool,” I told bab.

“Alex, we've already stayed in one castle before. It's not that different.” Bab told me 

She was still wearing her footie pajamas with a jacket on. I figured it would keep her much warmer than putting her into her skirt. 

I think even she was torn by that decision. On one hand, she looked like a little girl ready for bed, on the other she was very warm on this cold night.

“Ya, but its still cool,” I told her. “And was that a gorilla?” 

Bab looked in the direction I was looking at but saw nothing. 

“I hope we can get you cured soon…” Bab said as she took my hand.

We finally stopped right in front of a set of giant doors. No doubt the throne room.

Sitting at the other end of the room were two women on thrones. 

Both looked exactly like Eva. the only difference was the hair. One had Snow white hair, while the other had Jet black hair.

Standing beside them were two men. One was a vampire with his red eyes. The other I could only guess was a werewolf as he had bright gold eyes like the other wolves.

The moment I was in there presence, I felt a very strong sense to fall to my knees and obey.

The vampire guy then stepped forward. 

“Standing before you is the queen of vampires and the witch of light, Melanthe Jord!” he yelled gesturing to the white-haired woman.

Then the other guy stepped forward.

“Standing before you is the Alpha of all Werewolves and the witch of darkness, Layna Ulrica” ye yelled while gesturing to the black haired woman.

Both Bab and I bowed in respect for them.

Melanthe then stood up. 

“The rest of you may leave us,” she commanded. her voice cold and chilling. 

The wolves and vampire guards that were leading us bowed again and then left. Shutting the doors behind them.

There was an awkward silence as we all stared at each other. To me, they gave off an ora that intimidated me for some reason.

“Hi, sist…” Bab started before I saw a sudden rush from both queens and I was suddenly thrown across the room!

“What the!” I yelled as I got up to see the two sisters squealing like school girls and hugging Bab very tight.

“SHE'S SO CUTE!” Melanthe yelled as she was happily nuzzling her face on Bab’s check.

“SHE’S REALLY WEARING A DIAPER!” Layna yelled as she began patting Bab’s bottom.

“‘GET OFF!” Bab screamed as she began serging electricity to get her sisters off of her!

Both sisters leaped away from her as I ran over to Bab.

“You ok?” I asked Bab as I knelt down next to her.

“Ya just wasn't expecting that,” Bab said as she looked at her sisters.

They were just standing up after being shocked. 

“Sorry, we just got a little too excited,”  Layna said as she smiled at us.

“she‘s just too adorable.” Melanthe commented as she smiled as well.

"Ok, not what I was expecting," I said as I looked at Bab’s sisters.

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Alexander March
*ttas- lv16
@P- 102 (+4)
)attck-69 (+3)
^neefce-62 (+5)
%eped-59 (+2)
!eegn-11 (+1)
#nana-65

class-fighter
Skills-fighter's soul
Weapons- Yoake (C) (ability: growth)
Element-ice


partner-Bab Ados
Stats- lv18
HP-94 (+20)
Attack-24
Defence-24 (+95)
Speed-24 (+9)
Regen-34 (+3)
Manna-326

class-Sage
Skills-Healer +
Weapons-none
Element-lightning

Money ----
gold 30) 
silver 30)
bronze 30)
copper 32)


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In a dark cell, a chubby man sits and waits.

“What is taking them so long?” the man asks himself as he taps his fingers on a wall.

He has been in this cell for a while. He sent a letter out to his family and was just waiting for them to arrive.

The man could only think back to what brought him here. 

“When I find those fucking brats I'm going to kill them…” he mumbles to himself.

“Hey your not supposed to be in here!” the man heard a guard yell.

“Oh I'm just grabbing my stupid brother before I leave.” a familiar voice said as the guard yelled out in pain!

“You know Marvo, when you said you would be running this town by yourself I didn't think it would be from a jail cell.” a tall toned man said as he stepped in front to the cell.

“Save it for later brother,” Marvo said as he stood up. “Just get me out of this reached place.”

The man did as Marvo asked and opened the cell door and letting Marvo out.

“It feels so good to be out of there,” Marvo said with a smile.

But that smile was short lived as he heard more guards coming there way.

“Hurry brother! They're coming!” Marvo shrieked as he realized they were not free yet,

Marvo's brother just smiled as he pulled out a little orb and waited for a moment.

Soon the guards appeared and Marvo shrieked.

“Shut up little brother.” Marvo’s brother yelled as he tossed the orb at the guards that exploded into a dust cloud. 

The guards began coughing and tried to use their magic but found they couldn't.

“What?” a guard yelled before he was punched by Marvo’s brother.

“This is going to be easy!” Marvo's brother yelled happily.

As all of this was happening, a duck flew over the prison as it searched for someone.

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I've been wondering  what I can do to improve myself.  
Lately I've knotted that my story is not getting that much, save for a few dedicated followers. 
So I was wondering  what I can do to improve myself and my story. 
I've knotted that a lot of people seem to like my other story were the diaper parts were more sexual, rather than pure story bace. 
Should I make "Dropped in a new world " a side project (I'm never giving up on it.) And start  making more "fun" story's for a while. Or should I do something different with my story? 
I would like to know what you think

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Hey! Silent reader here. I check back regularly for new chapters and really appreciate the truly tireless dedication you've put into this story! There are plenty of others reading and enjoying this, looking forward to the next chapter! Please don't lose faith! :)

This world you've created is very interesting, some of the concepts are quite creative. I love how how deep it goes, royal blood, types of magic, all sorts of monsters, people, and things in between! The detail of the world and events has been pretty great. However I must say it's true the story has changed. Thinking back to the introduction of Eva and her involvement with the "royal bloodline arc" I do think I was enjoying the general plot and "feel" of the story a bit more, though I'm not exactly sure why...

Actually, I feel like Bab's character has not developed much recently and her story has not really progressed either. And although things have happened to Alex I feel like something is missing in his story as well. I can't place it though.

I'm sorry if my constructive criticism is a bit too harsh, I'm really hoping my honesty will be helpful to your process and story though!

(Sorry again for this!) One final thing I cannot overlook is the poor spelling and grammar. It really detracts from the story for me. It's distracting to the point of frustration I'm afraid...  That being said, I would GLADY proofread and help with the vocabulary (or even writing structure). - To be clear though your powers of creativity far exceed mine. I can't really create content of my own, I'm just good at editing.

I love this story and it makes me really want to help it happen. (Even just the spelling, please)!

 

Oh yes I almost forgot! I did very much like the scene where Ramonita accidentally wet her diaper for the first time (at the hotel in Alex's arms), and then again when she did it on purpose at night and got caught! She was super embarrassed and flustered! OMG That was so cute!!! :D

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2 hours ago, CBE said:

Hey! Silent reader here. I check back regularly for new chapters and really appreciate the truly tireless dedication you've put into this story! There are plenty of others reading and enjoying this, looking forward to the next chapter! Please don't lose faith! :)

This world you've created is very interesting, some of the concepts are quite creative. I love how how deep it goes, royal blood, types of magic, all sorts of monsters, people, and things in between! The detail of the world and events has been pretty great. However I must say it's true the story has changed. Thinking back to the introduction of Eva and her involvement with the "royal bloodline arc" I do think I was enjoying the general plot and "feel" of the story a bit more, though I'm not exactly sure why...

Actually, I feel like Bab's character has not developed much recently and her story has not really progressed either. And although things have happened to Alex I feel like something is missing in his story as well. I can't place it though.

I'm sorry if my constructive criticism is a bit too harsh, I'm really hoping my honesty will be helpful to your process and story though!

(Sorry again for this!) One final thing I cannot overlook is the poor spelling and grammar. It really detracts from the story for me. It's distracting to the point of frustration I'm afraid...  That being said, I would GLADY proofread and help with the vocabulary (or even writing structure). - To be clear though your powers of creativity far exceed mine. I can't really create content of my own, I'm just good at editing.

I love this story and it makes me really want to help it happen. (Even just the spelling, please)!

 

Oh yes I almost forgot! I did very much like the scene where Ramonita accidentally wet her diaper for the first time (at the hotel in Alex's arms), and then again when she did it on purpose at night and got caught! She was super embarrassed and flustered! OMG That was so cute!!! :D

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thank you :) I'm glad to know more people are reading!

I'm glad you enjoy the world. I wanted to make it simuler to other fantasy worlds but also stand on its own.  as for the feel, I honestly don't know. maybe the slightly darker theme for this arc? I don't know.

for Bab, that is on purpose. while Alex is the main character we see the world threw, (in the main story.) this story is really Bab's story and mystery. there is still a lot to her unknown and I plan on showing slowly.  and for Alex, this ark is meant to give more to his character and backstory. 

and don't worry about being harsh. criticism is criticism and good or bad I like it. as a (starting out) author, criticism is whats needed to help me grow, change, and overall make a story better. and if an author disagrees, then they just like being in an echo chamber.

I've said it before and I'll say it again, sorry... I've been trying to improve my spelling and grammar but it's been hard. I would gladly like some help with proofreading and editing. sent me a message and we can talk about it. :)

lol that was one of my favorite scenes as well :D  

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Many years ago, two monsters were summoned to the world.

One monster that ruled the night with bloodlust. 
One monster that ruled the forest with strength.

And both monsters held a hatred for each other.

They held an ability that could infect other creatures and turn them into monsters similar to them. They controlled the new monsters and fought each other over and over.

A never-ending cycle of bloodlust and death. but neither one able to kill the other.

But one day one of these new creatures fought off there monster master's control over them.

They went to the humans for help. Hoping for some way to turn them back. But the people feared them too much to help.

That is except for one person.

A woman cursed with forever living in this world. She took interest in these new creatures and named them Vampire and Werewolf.

She learned everything she could about these monsters. Learning there strengths and weaknesses. And she learned of their greatest flaw.

All Vampires and werewolves are linked to the original. Should they die, all of them die.

By this time, other lesser vampires and werewolves had started breaking free of their master's control. Begging for help.

They didn't want to be monsters and they didn't want to die.

But there was nothing the woman could do to save them.

Then the woman had an idea. As long as part of the monsters is living, the lesser beings could stay alive. Theoretically.

The woman couldn't cure the people who had become monsters, but she could at least brake the control over them.

The woman captured the monsters and using a magic only known to her, she ripped out part of their soul and combined it with her own. This created 2 new beings, 2 new daughters.

The woman then killed the monsters, breaking their control over all the Vampires and werewolves.

For many years, there were problems with the Vampires and werewolves. They were something new, people feared them, they hated each other, and they were dangerous. but they were alive. 

The woman had even come up with a way for the vampires and werewolves to finally work together. While her daughters had the souls of the monsters and so long as they stayed alive so will the vampires and werewolves, they also had something extra attached.

Both daughters could not live without the other.

The woman gave her vampire daughter light magic. Should it go out of control it will eventually kill her from the inside out.

And for her werewolf daughter, she gave dark magic. Should it go out of control it will smother all of her senses until she is in a state worse than death and will be swallowed by the darkness.

The only way to stop this is with each others magic. Both negating the others magic and keeping each other in line and alive. because they needed each other, the Vampires and werewolves were forced to work together to keep their new masters safe.

while still having a lingering instinctual hatred for each other, they have learned to live together.

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“And that's how we were born.” Layna explained.

“Wow…” I commented as I tried to process all of this. “But, what about the vampire that was attacking the village? Shouldn't he be under your control?”

“While we do have most of our father's powers and abilities, we don't have everything.” Melanthe told me. “One such thing is being unable to fully control our subjects. While we're able to exert our dominance over them, that does not mean control.”

“Were much like regular humans in that we can choose to obey or not depending on what we feel,” Layna told me. “Just like you have humans who broke the law, we have Vampires and werewolves who can do that as well.

To be honest, it was fascinating to learn all about this. Although, it was a little hard to take them seriously when they were fighting over who would have Bab sit on their laps while they told their story.

“While this is all fine and all, we're here for something more important!” Bab said as she sat on Layna’s lap while on the throne.

“Aww! It sounds like baby babble!” Melanthe commented as she reached over and pinched Bab’s cheek.

She got shocked for that…

“She was reminding me of why we’re here,” I told them. “We heard there is a cure for my disease.”

Both queens looked at each other. I knew I was about to hate what was going to come next.

“There is a cure. Using our magic we can destroy the disease and turn you human once more.” Layna told me.

“But, there is one problem.” Melanthe told me.

“I knew there would be a catch.” I groaned.

“You are already past our limit to healing.” Melanthe told me.

Both Bab and I looked at each other for a long moment.

“WHAT!” Bab yelled as she jumped up from Layna’s lap. “NO! He should still have time! He should still have a month!”

“Bab, I know your upset about your friend…” Melanthe started as she tried to calm Bab down. Not knowing what Bab was saying but Bab let out large sparks.

Both of the queen's guards got a little defensive. No doubt ready to rip off Bab’s head should she do anything dangerous to the queens.

Instead, I walked over and yanked her arm into the air and put my arm under her to hold her as I picked her up.

“Bab, calm down NOW!” I slightly yelled.

Bab was still fuming, but she did calm down a little.

Both queens again looked at each other, this time a little surprised but said nothing.

“Bab and I want to know why I can't be cured?” I asked them. Surprisingly more calm then I probably should be.

“If done right away, it is possible to cure. But anything after 1, possibly even 2 days, it becomes too deadly for everyone. Not just you, but for us as well.” Melathe told us.

“If there was any other option we would happily try it. But as said, should we die, so would two whole races.” Layna told me.

“I understand. Then there is just one thing I have to ask then.” I told them as I sat Bab down and got onto my hands and knees to beg. “Please help Bab get back to normal.”

“A-Alex!” Bab said as she blushed and her two sisters started laughing.

“Of course we would help our little sister,” Layna said as she slowly stopped laughing.

“That's what family is for.” Melanthe commented.

“Alex, what about your family?” Bab asked me as I sat up.

I gave her a sad smile as I pat her head.

“My family most likely thinks I'm dead right now,” I told her. “If need be, I'll write a letter to Alen to give to my family when he goes back.”

“Based on when you were bitten, I would estimate you still have about a week and a half before you go completely ghoul insane.” Melanthe commented. “So in that amount of time, we will try to make your stay here as comfortable as possible.”

“Thank you,” I told them as I give a small bow then realized something. “How do I know I'm not going crazy right now?”

“We have been around for the last few hundred years,” Layna told me. “In that amount of time, we have found ways to cope with stuff like ghouls.”

“Earlier you received a bottle of medicine from a black wolf correct?” Melanthe asked.

“His name is Wannatrip,” Layna commented. “He is a beta who will become the next male pack alpha.”

'A question I will ask about later.' I thought.

“Ya, Wannatrip, he should have given you some pills. They are what we give new vampires to help control their new strength and abilities as their bodies adjust.” Melanthe explained. “But should someone going thru a ghoul transformation take it, it will hold back some of the side effects temporarily.”

“Wait, really!” I yelled and they nodded.

“But when it starts to wear off, it will cause the side effects to be much worse,” Layna told me. “Its give and take.”

Well, at least it was better than nothing.

“Thank you for helping me,” I told them as I bowed my head in thanks.

“You don't have to thank us. If it wasn't for you we might have never seen little Baby Bab again.” Layna told me.

“Oh?” I commented.

“We haven't seen Bab in over twenty years.” Melanthe told me and I looked over at Bab who looked away. “Then out of nowhere, we have Eva and her own companion stop by.”

“They looked cute together,” Layna commented.

“She told us what was going on and that Bab was currently stuck as a 10-year-old.” Melanthe continued.

“We were very surprised to hear all of that. Even more that she was also reduced to needing a diaper.” Layna told me.

I didn't even need to look at bab to know she was blushing very hard right now.

“But, why haven't you seen each other in so long?” I asked.

Everyone is silent for a moment.

“I'll tell you later,” Bab mumbles as she stares at the floor.

“Anyway. You both must be exhausted. Why don't we continue this conversation tomorrow.” Layna suggested and we all agreed.

“But first, there is something I would like to check.” Melanthe said as she stood up and held out a hand.

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“ALEX! WHAT DID YOU DO!” a woman screams.

Police sirens screech.

Blood on the floor.

3 bodies lay motionless.

A knife in hand.

*******

I open my eyes and can feel nothing but pain.

“I feel like I had my face smashed in,” I mumble as I sit up.

“Because you did.” I hear Bab say. 

I look over and see Bab sitting on a nice looking bed threw bars?

I shake my head and look again and finally noticed the rest of my surroundings. IM IN A FUCKING JAIL CELL!

I look over at Bab and see she is in a different one facing me.

“WHAT THE HELL!” I yell. “THAT BETTER HAVE NOT BE ANOTHER DREAM!”

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Alexander March
Tstas- lv16
PH- 102 (+4)
Tatakc-69 (+3)
Edefcne-62 (+5)
Pseed-59 (+2)
Eregn-11 (+1)
Amnna-65

lcsas-fighter
Kslisl-fighter's soul
Ewpanos- Yoake (C) (ability: growth)
Lemenet-ice


partner-Bab Ados
Stats- lv18
HP-94 (+20)
Attack-24
Defence-24 (+95)
Speed-24 (+9)
Regen-34 (+3)
Manna-326

class-Sage
Skills-Healer +
Weapons-none
Element-lightning

Money ----
gold 30) 
silver 30)
bronze 30)
copper 32)


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Marvo and his brother bolt out of the prison as fast as they can. The brother laughing the whole time.

“Stop laughing! This is serious!” Marvo yelled.

“Oh shut up you whiny shrub Munky.” the brother told him as they run into an ally to catch their breath for a moment.

“Is Amai here?” Marvo asked.

“Ya, and she’s going to be happy to see her dumbass brother.” Marvo's brother told him. “Sawa still wants to kick your ass by the way.”

“I’ll deal with her later. First, I really want to see my cute little sister.” Marvo told him.

The two finally make a break for the woods and need to run almost a mile to were Amai and there ride is.

“Marvo!” Amai shouted as she jumped out of the getaway carriage to greet her older brother.

She was slightly taller than Marvo and practically shoved Marvo's face into her large breasts.

“It's so good to see you!” Amai cheered.

“I-it's great to see you too Amai,” Marvo said as he pushed her away from him. His face slightly blushing.

“Qwack!” a duck called as it landed on top of Marvo's head.

“DUCKY!” Amai screamed as Marvo began to freak out.

“Blasted bird!” Marvo yelled as he took a swipe at the bird but it flew to Amai.

She notices the note on the bird's leg and reads it.

“Amai, come on!” the older brother shouted as he got the carriage ready. “Get rid of that fucking duck and let's go!”

But Amai didn't say a word.

“Come on Amai, we're going to Pa’a to hide out and…” Marvo stated but stopped

“We're going to see my mistress,” she said as she put the note back on the duck's leg and had it fly away.

“What are you talking about?” the older brother asked as he walked over. “We don't have time for this shit. Were going to pa’a….”

She grabbed both Marvo and the older brothers shirts.

“WE ARE GOING TO SEE MY MISTRESS.” She said with an almost evil voice and black eyes staring back at them. “NOW!”

Both nearly shit there pants as she lets go of them and gets into the carriage.

“Gods I hate Sawa,” Marvo mumbles as he gets into the carriage with her.
 

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important message!!!!!

this is very important to the story! I finally found someone to help me with my spelling and grammar! WOOOO!

so, now that ill be having some help, i was looking back at the early parts of the story and thinking, "this could use a bit of rewriting." so, now that I have some help I will be reposting this entire story(again). 

so, this means the main story will be put on hold for a little while as we work on the story once more. while it might be a little inconvenient, I think overall people will enjoy the fixed story. ill keep you all updated when I know more.

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ok, so a few people have been messaging me about "Dropped in a new world."

they are asking why I haven't posted a new chapter, or whats taking so long.

if you don't already know, I'm reposting all of my old chapters with a lot of fixed spelling and grammar with some added details here and there that I didn't do before or fixed to plot points I needed to fix. (thank you again R682 for all your help!)

now re-editing my story doesn't take that much time. about half an hour to an hour per chapter depending on what I do with it.

but I'm also busy with some other stuff. 
first is my full-time job. with summer so close I've been working more hours and have less time then I would like to work on my stories. (hence why most of them are on hiatus at the moment...)

I am also looking into Artist and Manga/comic makers in hopes to make "Dropped into a new world" into a comic or manga. (i would prefer manga.) the prices for them are very high and I want to find the right one before I go spending a lot of money on art.
(also, before anyone says anything about go fund me, I would at least like a single chapter done first to show what the manga would be like before I start asking for help for it.)

also, for helping me with spellchecking my work, I've been helping R682 with one of his projects. along with a few other people I've been helping out such as Pinkthedinosaur.

so this is why I haven't posted a new chapter in a while. (there's also some personal things that have happened in my life, like a random baby walking into my house...) 

but I am happy to say, CH 33 will be made this week. I'm getting a few days off and I'm caught up on a lot of my works so ill finally be able to continue the story! 

its been killing me not being able to work on this story since I really want to get to the good stuff and finish this ark. 

also, since this might be a good time to bring it up, I am currently planning a MASSIVE event as soon as this arc ends. currently, I have talked to Pink and Wannatribaby about it and so far they are willing to help me. but I would like a little help from you all. 

currently, I am looking for diaper stories with action, adventure, and or magic. if you know of stories like that, or know someone who is writing a story like that, please tell me. if posable I would like to get more people into this event when it gets here.

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chapter 33

 

There was a flash of light that blinded both Alex and Bab.

“What the heck!” Bab yelled as she rubbed her eyes to get rid of the bright spots in her eyes. “What was that for!”

“Melanthe, are you sure now is a good time to test that?” Layna asked her sister.

“Better now than later.” Melanthe commented.

“Test what?” Bab yelled as her vision started to clear and she looked at Alex.

Alex stood motionless, his eyes not blinking.

“Alex?” Bab asked when suddenly Alex started screaming and clutching his head! “ALEX!”

Bab was about to run over to him, to try to see what was wrong when Layna appeared before her and grabbed her.

“Sorry, this has to be done,” Layna told Bab calmly.

“What has to be done!” Bab screamed despite no one being able to understand her.

Alex finally stopped screaming as he looked up with bloodshot eyes. The first person he saw was Melanthe.

Suddenly with more speed then Bab had ever seen posable from Alex, he lunged straight for Melanthe yelling like an animal.

Melanthe didn't flinch as Alex grew closer before her vampire guard got in front of her and using only his palms, shot Alex back and into a wall.

“ALEX!” Bab screamed as he got up and roared again.

But the roar was cut short as the werewolf guard grabbed Alex by the back of his head and smash it into the floor.

Bab couldn't stand it anymore and shocked Layna forcing her to let Bab go before she fired a bolt of electricity at the werewolf guard.

The guard leaped away as Bab ran over to check on Alex.

His face laid in a small puddle of blood before Bab rolled him over. He was unconscious but still breathing.

“I would say a 4 and a half.” Melanthe commented.

“What's going on!” Bab yelled as electricity started to surround her.

“Bab calm down.”  Melanthe told her. But instead, Bab raised and aimed her arm right at Melanthe. “Your friend is a ghoul and we needed to see how dangerous he would be as one.”

“My queen has only temporarily awakened his ghoul side. Should he blackout and release that side of him, we wanted to know what type of threat he is.” the vampire guard told Bab.

“You see, your friend is not the first to be infected by a ghoul. We need to see what type of threat they pose to others and asine guards to them to either restrain or kill if needed.” Melanthe told Bab.  

Bab still glared at her sister but stopped her electricity.

Bab turned to Alex and could see he was still breathing.

“You'll be escorted to your rooms for the night. We will talk more about this later.” Layna told Bab as walked over and placed a hand on Bab’s shoulder. “He'll be alright when he waked up.”

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“And that's how we got here,” Bab explained.

“But why a jail cell?” I asked then looked around again.

While it was a jail cell, the bed I was on was definitely a lot nicer than what they would give a prisoner.

“It's for our protection,” Bab told me. She then stuck her hand out and started waving it.  “Gard! Can you let us out?”

A moment later a vampire came into view and gave us a small bow before unlocking the cells.

“I hope you have rested well.” the guard told us. “Queen Layna is currently waiting for you both in the throne room. Also, Sir Alex. it has been requested that you stay on a schedule with your pills and I must ask you take some now.”

“O-ok I will,” I told the guard who bowed again and went back to his post.

“My sisters asked him to take care of us here,” Bab explained as she walked into my cell and got on my bed. “The cells are to protect both of us should you have another episode. Keeping you contained here so you don't wander off and keeping me safely away so you don't accidentally hurt me.”

“Bab I wouldn't…” I started.

“I know, but it’s what my sisters think is best,” Bab told me with a slight smile on her face. “Anyway, the pills your taking should last for about 8 hours before the side effects kick in and you start hallucinating for about an hour.” 

“Ok, good to know,”I tell her as I take a pill right then. That's when the smell hits me and I know Bab’s in a dirty diaper. “Come on, let's get you changed real fast before we go see your sister.” 

After a change we are lead back to the throne room were only Layna and her guard sit on the throne.

“Where's Melanthe?” I asked as I looked around.

“Unlike the rest of our kind, my sister and I have unique bodies that need constant rest,” Layna told us. “So we take turns watching over our kingdom. From the hours of 7 AM to 5 PM I rule. That is when my sister awakens and for the next 2 hours we both rule until I go to sleep and my sister rules from 7 PM to 5 AM. then I will awake and the proses will start again.”

“But weren't you both awake when we got here?” I asked. 

“On special occasions, like when our sisters arrive, we will wake up early and disrupt the cycle,” Layna told us. “Now, before we do anything else…”

Layna then walked over and picked Bab up to hug and squeal as she exclaimed at how cute Bab was. Much to Bab’s announce.

Over the next few hours, we ate our meal (to us it was breakfast but it was hard to tell the time here.) and Layna absolutely insisted on feeding Bab and giving her a bottle.

I could only giggle at Babs frustration for being treated like a baby by her sister.

After that, we were finally introduced to the Layna’s guard Gideon.

For werewolves are far different than in my world. In my world, the person would turn into a monster during the full moon if they were bitten.

Here, when someone is bitten, they will slowly turn into wolf over the course of a month. And they would not be able to change back. Thankfully they keep their minds even in their new form.

During that of a full moon, however, they do turn into what we would call a werewolf. But will turn back to wolf when it's over.

They are also divided among classes.

Alphas are the 2 strongest in the pack. Which both Layna and Gideon are.

Unlike the other werewolves, the Alpha is the only one who is able to fully control their transformations and turn into a human form.

The only way to become an Alpha is to fight and kill the previous Alpha and eat there heart.

Beta’s are the next ones. They are typically the leaders of their packs under the Alpha and are able to transform into there werewolf forms at will.

Gamma is under them and is the most common. They can't transform at will but have control of themselves during a full moon.

Delta’s are the lowest and are humans who have only recently become a werewolf. They have no control over themselves during a full moon. 

Something I found very funny about Layna, and possibly Melanthe, is when they were behind closed doors they act far definitely than when they are seen by there subjects.

In the throne room they couldn't stop cuddling up to Bab, but as Layna gives us a tore of the castle, she is like what you would expect from a royal.

As we moved on, we wound up meeting some old friends. 

“Fertuitus! Harrison!” I yelled out as I rushed over to greet the vampire and vampire hunter. “How are you guys going?”

“We are doing well Alex,” Fertuitus said as he gave a small bow. “How was your journey here?”

“Did you get cured already?” Harrison asked and suddenly the room went quiet. “Oh…”

So we told them what happened and how I cant get the cure.

“I'm so sorry Alex,” Fertuitus told me.

“Its fine,” I replied. “Shit happens.”

“So did you find out anything about Xar’s master,” Bab asked and I translated.

“Sadly no. most likely they went into hiding after Xar was killed.” Harrison told us.

“We have sent specialists to look for any clues on who this Master is,” Layna told us. “As soon as we find out who they are we will send our troops.”

At least that was good to know.

It was here that Layna also told me that Fertuitus would be assigned to handle me should I go out of control.

To be honest, I didn't like that I needed a handler, but considering how my mind is when I hallucinate, it was probably for the best.

We continued our tour for a few more hours before we ran into a small problem with Bab. she used her diaper…

“Let's go back to the throne room so we may deal with that,” Layna told us calmly as she leads the way back to the throne room.

“A-Alex, could we just go back to the cell?” Bab asked me.

I knew exactly why she wanted to do this and I nodded yes.

But before I could speak up, we ran into Melanthe.

She had just woken up for and was looking for us so she could see Bab.

I don't know how it happened, but 10 minutes later I'm sitting next to both guards as I hear Bab screaming out profanities as her sisters change her diaper and coo at her.

They were behind the two large thrones to give them some privacy from us males.

(thankfully they had Fertuitus and Harrison stay outside while they're doing this.)

Every now and then I would hear Bab scream my name and call me a bastard before I saw a bolt of electricity. 

I didn't want to know what the hell they were doing to bab to make her this upset.

But despite Bab shooting her sisters, the guards never moved a muscle to protect them from the attacks.

“Aren't you both supposed to protect them?” I asked wondering why they weren't.

“There sisters.” the vampire told me. “We won't interfere with there matters unless we are asked.”

“Plus, I think they deserve to be shocked for messing with there baby sister like that,” Gideon commented.

I couldn't help but laugh a little at how they saw this. But I respected that.

Soon the girls were finished and I busted out laughing when I saw what they did to Bab.

A baby blue sparkle dress that barely covers up her triple thick diaper. Her hair was done in pigtails, she had both mittens and boodies on, and a new pacifier was in her mouth.

Oh man did Bab look pissed

“Wy whill kwill wu oll!” Bab screamed behind the passafier.

She then started shooting off electricity at her sisters again and I couldn't help but laugh more as she waddled around with her massive diaper!

When all the fun and games were over, I fixed her diaper problem and had her back into a normal diaper before we had lunch with her sisters. 

Despite Bab’s sisters fighting who would feed her this time, Bab practically jumped in my lab to stay away from them. Guess if she’s going to be babied, she would rather it be from someone who respected her then her sisters.

heck, at this point I wouldn't be surprised if she jumped onto Gideon’s lap to get away from her sisters.

But that didn't stop them from trying to spoon feed her something or beg me to let them give Bab her bottle.

Once lunch was over it was time for Bab and me to return to the cells and get ready for my hallucination.

“You'll be ok,” Bab said out loud. I think mostly for herself then me.

“Ya, I'll be fine,” I say as I rubbed her head.

Once we were in our cells it was just waiting for it to finally happen.

I don't even know when it happened. I just remember closing my eyes….

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“A-Alex…” I heard sniffling as I was gently shaken.

groggily I opened my eyes and saw my teary-eyed little sister standing beside my bed. I didn't even need to see what she did to know she wet herself again.

“I-I-I” Scarlett stammered as I got out of bed and gave her a hug. Just something to calm her down.

She managed to stay dry for over a week and her dad let her wear panties to bed. But sadly that didn't work out.

“It's ok. Accidents happen,”I tell her but she is still sniveling knowing in the morning her dad will get mad she wet the bed again.

But it's too early in the morning to be dealing with this.

“It's ok. Just get out of those wet clothes and put on your pull up,”I tell her as I grab an old towel to lay on her bed where the wet spot is.

A few moments later Scarlett is in just her nightshirt and a pink hello kitty pull-ups.

“I-im sorry…” Scarlett tells me as I get into bed and hold the blanked open for her to climb in.

As she climbs in I hug her close. 

“Its ok, big brother will always be here for you,”I tell her.

“Really?” Scarlett asked.

“Really,”I tell her with a smile.

“Then why weren't you there?” Scarlett asked me.

“Huh?”

Scarlett’s eyes went pitch black as blood came out of her nose!

“YOU LIED!” Scarlett yelled as I started screaming and trying to get away. “YOU LIED BIG BROTHER! YOU LIED!”

Scarlett got on top of me as she took ahold of my neck.

“I SCREaMED AND SCREAMED anD YOu WEren't THERE!” Scarlett yelled as my body coked for air. “I’m DEad becAUSE OF YoU!”

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I'm gasping for air as I wake up on the floor of the cell.

What the hell is going on? Why am I having hallucinations of Scarlett? And why does it keep going back to her dead!? 

I know her and her dad left when I was still a kid. My mom and I were devastated when they left.

As I finally forced my sour body up I looked over at Bab’s cell and saw her on her bed.

After asking the guard to help me out of the cell and into her’s I could see she was crying before she fell asleep. 

Most likely crying as she saw me go mad and knowing I don't have long for this world.

Taking the chance, I changed Bab’s soggy diaper before tucking her into bed with her pacifier and a stuffed bear.

“Rest up,” I whispered as I gave her forehead a small kiss before I walked out of the cell.

Fertuitus was waiting for me right outside the jail cells and he helped escort me to the throne room. Inside Melanthe and her bodyguard greeted me.


“I see your hallucination is over. Where is my sister?” Melanthe asked. slightly disappointed I didn't bring her.

“She’s napping at the moment. I wasn't the only one having a rough experience,”I told her.

“I see, I'm sorry to hear that.” Melanthe told me.

“There is something I would like to ask about my hulusanations,” I told her just trying to get to the point of why I came here without Bab.

“What would you like to know?” Melanthe asked me.

“Why do I see my sister dead in my arms?”

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Alexander March
Amh - xn16
Zco - 102 (+4)
Vjox -69 (+3)
Ed -62 (+5)
Pyc -59 (+2)
Nb -11 (+1)
Eam -65

S'fp -glszsob
Qpusgsdoy -glszsob'd trgd
Vri - Jpdww (B) (kltmlfq: fbyhuk)
U dhfo -tdh

partner-Bab Ados
Stats- lv18
HP-94 (+20)
Attack-24
Defence-24 (+95)
Speed-24 (+9)
Regen-34 (+3)
Manna-326

class-Sage
Skills-Healer +
Weapons-none
Element-lightning

Money ----
gold 30) 
silver 30)
bronze 30)
copper 32)


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A duck lands on the water in the middle of the ocean. Bobbing up and down as small waves push it.

Qwack.

The duck has no reaction as water begins to engulf the duck into a bubble and pull it down into the water below.

Down it goes past all forms of sea life. Most of which could eat the duck in a single bite. But the duck is unfazed by them.

Finally, it gets right where it wants to be as the duck see’s the final person it must deliver its message to. The woman looks at the duck as it gives off a single echoey qwack within the bubble.

The woman reaches out and takes ahold of the note from the duck and reads it.

“Tell my mother I will be there for her when she needs me.” the woman tells the duck who quacks before it is sent back to the surface.

The woman frowns as she knows what she is going to need to do as she walks on the ocean floor to go kill her mother.

 

 

 

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Thanks again for reading. If you still don't know why it took me so long to write this please see the updates i've posted for details. 
I'm still planning on fixing all of my chapters but i'm hoping to get more reguler chapter updates soon.



 

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