MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 (edited) Xophliello was a small area that was covered with hundreds of tiny independent countries, each with their own culture. Most of these countries always dealt with their problems together and fought over influence by compentitions like art, which includes sculpting and architecture, and games, which included gladiator fights and chariot races. However, some countries, typically around the edges, settled more land and grew. These countries needed more resources than they typically could find out in the unknown world. In order to survive, some of these countries had to invade their fellow Xophliellians and conquer, despite that it might have been their only option these countries were resented. The bigger they grew and the more independent they grew away from Xophliello caused them to be considered by Xophliellians as non-Xophliellian and the Xophliellian countries would embargo them, seeing them as a threat to the littler Xophliellian countries and a power that has to be taken down. Lopan was a larger country that focused on its traditional culture. They were not a violent country, but if they had to fight they fought and they fought hard! They were only warriors when the time was needed, agent hey weren't warriors they were artists who spread their tradition and culture across all over Xophliello. Despite powerful counter-attacks and devestating defense system, Lopan was conquered by the Psurrians, Riassuns, and the Autons. Despite that Lopan faced defeat on the war they did not stand down, they still rebelled against their captors. There were many Lopanians who joined the rebellion, they would not stop until they had liberty. This is the story of a... 1. Woman from Psurria, Psurria was the most powerful Xophliellian country despite its small size. Psurria was puny compared to Auto and Riassu, but Psurria proved that size doesn't equal power. As far as culture went, they didn't care unless it was the culture of their enemy, they saw accepting enemy culture, like for instance, Lopanian culture, as a weakness and that person would be exiled. They had the best army in all of Xophliello and probably the best archer in the entire world. They focused on honor and their military. This has caused them to be hated by many but they nobody would attack them due to fear of their counter-attack. The ruler of Psurria was Garett the Glorious, who wanted to keep Psurria as the most dominant power of Xophliello 2. Woman from Auto, Auto was a large country that spread via arranged marriage, they rarely ever fought. This caused their country to be extremely diverse, the only real Auton culture found in Auto was near the center, the further west you went the more Lopanian you get and the further east you went the more Riassun you get. This scale of diversity has caused some issues inside Auto but there was nothing major. They're not used to the way the Lopanians revolt and fear the it would encourage further rebellion, causing a power decrease in Auto. They were the most intellegent and sophisticated country. The Autons were led by The Great Gloria, who was forcused on expansion more than anything, but she wanted to keep Auto as intelligent and sophisticated as they could be. 3. Lopanian revolutionnaire 4. Woman from Riassu, Riassu was the largest country in all of Xophliello, the second largest was a little over half the size of Riassu. Riassu was the most Eastern country and it closed Xophliello to the unknown eastern world. To go east you had to go through Riassu, which left all the unknown eastern land in Xophliello to be Riassu's. Riassuns were dumb! They didn't care about education, all they cared about was doing their job which was 90% of the time either agricultural work or fighting in wars. They are the least technologically advance country in Xophliello, they get their technology from other countries they spy on. The spies would bring back a new invention and the Riassuns would take it apart, analyze it, then put it back together and make more. How they fought against their enemies was by sheer numbers. It didn't matter if they had automatic guns and tanks somehow, they would send a large horse of swordmen to kill them and overwhelm them. Their views on culture was in the middle of a somewhat civil war between western and their eastern culture. The ruler of Riassu was Katerine, she focused on advancing Riassu technologically, she thought that Riassu would collapse if they didn't become educated because she could regain control of such a large country. 5. Woman from some other country you're making up Edited May 20, 2017 by MsFortune-Take (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Melificentfan 1,215 Posted May 20, 2017 ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted May 20, 2017 2 Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 3 sounds good, can't go wrong with a resistance story Quote Link to comment
blooper 611 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 3, redheaded revolutionaries are perhaps the most bloper of characters Quote Link to comment
wedgeantilles 156 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 A very promising start! Since I am indifferent in this specific choice I won't vote. But I definitly will be following the story closely and I will choose on later votes. Quote Link to comment
randomrobot007 60 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 3 viva la revolution Quote Link to comment
MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 (edited) Welp, it's been now 15 hours and there are five votes in, 4<1=2<3 appears to be the case here. The next few are going to be short because there's a bit of interaction needed. ... Lopanian revolutionnaire. This Lopanian lady slowly opened her eyes, she was laid in bed and had just awoken from a tiring night. She pulled her blanket off her and stood up, she stretched for a bit, she was soar from the night before. She had walked into the bathroom and looked into the mirror, her hair was a mess and she looked like shit since she just got out of bed. Her name was... [I'm gonna think of a number, the person who says a name and the number closest to the one I have in mind will be the name of the character] Edited May 21, 2017 by MsFortune-Take (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
randomrobot007 60 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 Katherine and the number 63 Quote Link to comment
MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 The number was 1, 12 seems to be the closest, Viktoria won Viktoria. She was the Lopanian revolutionnaire who turned the tide of the revolutionary war. She would fight until the Lopanians had liberty. Though there were many Lopanians who wanted liberty, many other Lopanians just accepted their occupation and joined on the side of their occupants. Many of these people were used as spies by the occupants to learn about the revolution. She got a comb and brushed it through her messy hair, she then got a tooth brush and began to brush her teeth until she heard a loud crowd of people yelling and what sounded like metal clashing into each other. She... 1. Ignored it and continued on her daily routine 2. Went to see what was going on 3. Grabbed her weapons then see what's going on 4. Grab your weapons and defend your house Quote Link to comment
MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 (edited) Welp, it's been about 7 hours and 3 seems to win ... grabbed her weapon to see what was going on, she ran into her bed room and picked up a... 1. Spear (makes her a cavalry girl, Viktoria the Imapler) 2. Sword and shield (makes her a standard soldier, Viktoria the Swift) 3. Mace and shield (makes her a berserker. Viktoria the Devastator) 4. Bow and Arrow (makes her an archer, Viktoria the Goldeyed) 5. Different weapon you choose and a nickname Edited May 21, 2017 by MsFortune-Take (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Mydnyght68 206 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 After looking at those four possible titles... You wanna call Viktoria the "Swinger"? Really? NO. Goldeyed... That kinda looks silly in text, so forget it. As for Charger... Meh, I dunno... Now, DEVASTATOR, on the other hand.... YES. PLEASE. Option 3. Quote Link to comment
MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 20 minutes ago, Mydnyght68 said: You wanna call Viktoria the "Swinger"? Really? NO. Any good swordsman nicknames you could think of? I had nothing :P Quote Link to comment
Mydnyght68 206 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 15 minutes ago, MsFortune-Take said: Any good swordsman nicknames you could think of? I had nothing :P Swift, Valiant, Conqueror, Slasher... and Impaler would work for the spear option... Then again, Devastator sounds more awesome than my suggestions anyway, so I'm staying with option 3. Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted May 22, 2017 Share Posted May 22, 2017 5 - Viktoria, scourge of the earth, her weapon shall be psychological warfare 5 - Halberd - Viktoria the defiant. (Viktoria the swinger sounds like she belongs in the '20s toting a Tommy gun or something) Quote Link to comment
MsFortune-Take 110 Posted May 22, 2017 Author Share Posted May 22, 2017 (edited) 27 minutes ago, Dimwitrolo said: Viktoria the swinger sounds like she belongs in the '20s toting a Tommy gun or something Where TF do you see Viktoria the Swinger? Edited May 22, 2017 by MsFortune-Take (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted May 22, 2017 Share Posted May 22, 2017 15 minutes ago, MsFortune-Take said: Where TF do you see swinger? You might find one in a speakeasy, listening to Sinatra Quote Link to comment
Mydnyght68 206 Posted May 22, 2017 Share Posted May 22, 2017 Actually, isn't a "swinger" someone who's more than a little too sexually active or something like that? Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted May 22, 2017 Share Posted May 22, 2017 14 minutes ago, Mydnyght68 said: Actually, isn't a "swinger" someone who's more than a little too sexually active or something like that? That as well, but the twenties are cool and wife-swapping isn't so much Quote Link to comment
ju48 12 Posted May 22, 2017 Share Posted May 22, 2017 5 - cloak and dagger, Viktoria the shrouded. Quote Link to comment
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