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Why thank you! So I am illustrating the girl's whole story complete with panels that show the fullness of her bladder as the night goes on. It'll just be her so it shouldn't be too much work on my end to make something I enjoy that I think you will as well. It'll be a fun challenge keeping her pee stain consistent over them all. Some sneak peaks.

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Glad to hear it all mate, yeah there's so much I love about this story. The detail of her embarrassment and how she tries to downplay it, and the little ways her campers teased her. I'm getting a little creative with this so that it's more than just an illustrated version of this random account. And yeah going by the dates that appear between posts this story is rather old, in fact around the time this poor girl apparently went through this I was just discovering my fetish. I certainly would've remembered it had I found it back then but toiletstool was also what helped awaken that so I probably missed this gem my first few go arounds. but yeah i think you all will like what i do with silly sarah's story.

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Well here it is, there are still 4 or 5 pages i wanna do to finish and embellish the story, but here it is. If you go by file name they're in order, sorting by captions sort of works but it skips pages 2-9 and goes right to the aftermath. Hope you like them and please please please give feedback. Also have to include a nudity warning, there's a closeup of her urethra letting go that definitely shows a lot, and I also plan to do a page of her changing out of her wet clothes.

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Alright I think I've pushed this as far as it'll go and I'm pretty satisfied with it. You can download it all as one file below now that it's complete, and this version is in proper order since I mucked up the captions. Again would love to hear more feedback, each direction took a lot of thought and I hope it paid off.

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I really love what you've done with this. I love this art style, as it feels very nostalgic (not sure why), and the way you captured the bedwetting and the stains was, in my opinion, perfect. Not to sound too hyperbolic, but this has to be one of my favorite comics of all-time now. There were some body part proportion issues, but they weren't enough to distract  from the comic. 

I'm biased, as I love the art style, but I think you did a great job. Would love to see more in the future.

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32 minutes ago, PersonGuy said:

I really love what you've done with this. I love this art style, as it feels very nostalgic (not sure why), and the way you captured the bedwetting and the stains was, in my opinion, perfect. Not to sound too hyperbolic, but this has to be one of my favorite comics of all-time now. There were some body part proportion issues, but they weren't enough to distract  from the comic. 

I'm biased, as I love the art style, but I think you did a great job. Would love to see more in the future.

Thank you so much, it's just my standard art style so I'm glad you like it so much (it draws a lot from early Nicktoons so that might be part of it) and yeah I think I know which pages you're referring to with the odd proportions, one of them i had meant to fix but i kept moving forward and the way I did some of the pages backtracking would've been difficult.

Again I really do appreciate the kind words, I certainly enjoyed this and it isn't my first go-around with omorashi art, nor will it be my last ;)

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Oh absolutely, I plan to do some desperation in my other comics and perhaps some here as well. I'm glad everyone likes my style, I know it isn't quite anime like the majority of content here, but I feel some more western omorashi art is needed and I certainly draw inspiration from older anime like Dragon Ball. Also I'm glad I pulled off the bladder parts so well, I debated whether I should depict the inner workings of her urinary system as more of a fantastical Inside Out set-up or just stick to straight anatomy.

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I have to say, I`m normally not a big fan of the "western" art style...I just prefer anime in general...but I certainly have a soft spot for good western art as well.
And you did an amazing job here - kudos! I especially love the amount of detail you put into the wetting process, the bladder depiction and also facial expressions....wow. I am really impressed!

It`s also always good to stay open-minded, whether you prefer the anime or western art style, one shouldn`t be biased when it comes to great art just because you prefer a different "style"

Really hope to see more of your work in the future^^

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There were a few reasons I kept it just the main character, one was less characters to design and also it didn't feel right putting kids in an intentional fetish  comic. Not to say I haven't made comics featuring kids and omorashi content together, but the intents of that work was different, this here was purely pornographic albeit very softcore. In response to your question I had been thinking about it. There are a few other really good wetting stories, and on the pages from 2011 there was a girl named Stephanie who shared a half dozen personal accounts and each was better than the last. It'll all depend if I find time, I'm just between projects and had the time to pursue something based on my favorite story. Maybe I'll post the others and put it to a vote which comes next.

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There was a story on Dailydiapers about a girl who went to a strict catholic school and she wasn't allowed to go pee during class leading to multiple accidents so one day she bought diapers and secretly wore them under her uniform but she got caught one day by a teacher. A lot of it does seem sadly exaggerated and fetishized but it was still a great story

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On 6/16/2017 at 7:15 PM, Ajax7408 said:

There was a story on Dailydiapers about a girl who went to a strict catholic school and she wasn't allowed to go pee during class leading to multiple accidents so one day she bought diapers and secretly wore them under her uniform but she got caught one day by a teacher. A lot of it does seem sadly exaggerated and fetishized but it was still a great story

Um, alright. Not sure what that all has to do with this, but OK. Anyway I have given thought to making more of these, and with the advent of Paypal features, I wanna gather feedback as to what you would pay for more of these. Obviously I want to do more but the art takes time and I have to make up my end. The plan would be that I would share the story I adapt next (from ToiletStool and at the moment no requests, I have a collection going already I want to adapt), and then as people announced their intent to buy the comic I'd make more of this.

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