Gentleman_95 51 Posted May 13, 2017 Share Posted May 13, 2017 Love your writing but my anti injustice trait just make me angry when i read this x) Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted May 13, 2017 Author Share Posted May 13, 2017 On 12.5.2017 at 3:54 AM, plugnplay said: Although, it does make me wonder now what happens to the girls that end up getting the plug. Im curious xD Your username indicates you would... I left that deliberately vague, but you are not the only one who wonders. I exchanged a few messages with two other people who would like to see that aspect expanded upon. 7 hours ago, smallbladder24 said: Love your writing but my anti injustice trait just make me angry when i read this x) Well, good. If your reaction was "I want this implemented in real life" instead, you'd be in dire need of one of those nicely padded jackets, where the arms are at funny angles. The injustice of it all is the core of the fantasy. These women are forced to hold because Oceania has always been at war with Eastasia. And that's such a conclusive argument as to why it is necessary, that the end justifies all means. watchinghold 1 Quote Link to comment
plugnplay 3 Posted May 13, 2017 Share Posted May 13, 2017 I hope at some point we do get to see more aspects of what goes around on all of this, if you continue the story Quote Link to comment
paulopost 1 Posted May 19, 2017 Share Posted May 19, 2017 I really like your works, you created a pretty intriguing world! If in this universe it's important for a woman to show how big and filled is her bladder, how about a kind of push up girdle? It will reshape her bladder filled belly, squezing at the sides. It will tranform her belly in a protruding ball wrapped in a strong and unforgiving corset! Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
wedgeantilles 156 Posted May 19, 2017 Share Posted May 19, 2017 On 13.5.2017 at 1:23 PM, randomkath said: These women are forced to hold because Oceania has always been at war with Eastasia. 1984, nice. Fantastic piece of work. And yes, you can refer this to either 1984 or your work itself, both fits :) Quote Link to comment
NotDusty 182 Posted January 28, 2018 Share Posted January 28, 2018 This was amazing! Just commenting here to flag it so I can come back and read it again later, 10/10. Quote Link to comment
Tentacool 1,385 Posted February 12, 2021 Share Posted February 12, 2021 I'm years late to this but I still think it's worth complimenting, you are a very talented writer and your descriptions give just the right amount of details without being long winded, a very difficult sweet-spot I struggle to find. I hope to be of your quality one day. randomkath 1 Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted February 22, 2021 Author Share Posted February 22, 2021 On 2/13/2021 at 12:18 AM, Tentacool said: I'm years late to this but I still think it's worth complimenting, you are a very talented writer and your descriptions give just the right amount of details without being long winded, a very difficult sweet-spot I struggle to find. I hope to be of your quality one day. Aww, thank you! ❤️ This story is not quite dead, btw. I just can't be arsed right now. Or for the last three years, for that matter. secretomoact, Tentacool, Ienjoy and 2 others 3 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Tentacool 1,385 Posted March 10, 2021 Share Posted March 10, 2021 (edited) On 2/22/2021 at 3:21 PM, randomkath said: Aww, thank you! ❤️ This story is not quite dead, btw. I just can't be arsed right now. Or for the last three years, for that matter. Since that is the case, may I inquire for a bit? BTW: This doesn't have to be answered in the story nor do I intend on trying to force you to use these ideas to write! I'm just genuinely curious and reading your story has gotten me really interested in the world you created (as... ruthlessly cruel as it may be). Firstly, and this is what has been plaguing my mind ever since the (very well written but) absolute bastard Archibald showed up... Is there anywhere in the state, country... Maybe even the whole planet, is there any place that isn't like this? Surely some women would wind up getting so desperate or fed up that they'd try to escape this government, right? And in the case that there isn't anywhere to run, is there any group that tries to fight back against this oppression? Maybe through some... Weird pee-themed protests or some sabotages that lead to all sorts of naughty shenanigans? Or... If we're going the grimdark route, guerrillas and riots that get constantly shut down or hunted to extinction? Maybe one of their fighters could be prisoner now and be facing the worst possible punishment possible to their bladder! (Wonder what that would be...) Secondly, I remember in the epilogue, the poor lady mentioned how she was considering voiding into a kitchen container or something, even though it was "against regulations"... That got me thinking, is that enforced? Could she even be caught peeing in her own home? In the bad girl cases I understand how, since they either have the sensors surgically attached or have electronic belts that prevent them from taking off their bottoms, which also have sensors. But in the case of a "free" woman, what's stopping her from just peeing into the sink or something? Are there sensors in the plumbing? Could that be circumvented by peeing into a bottle and burying it somewhere maybe? I'm sure a system as bureaucratic as this would be bound to have some loopholes otherwise nothing would get done! (As seen by Archie with his questionable methods...) Finally, and... This kinda has the potential to cross a line too far for me, but I'm curious so... What happens to disabled/otherwise "incapable" women? As in: If they're genuinely incontinent or something, or maybe they've had serious surgery, suffered an accident or were otherwise harmed and that seriously damaged or compromised their bladder, what happens then? Do medical conditions excuse them or are they punished all the same? Or maybe they're excused legally but socially shunned? I'm so sorry for this long winded post, but seriously you're just that good of a writer, you fleshed out this world so much I really want to dive in more and know the ins and outs! ...Even if, admittedly, I have grown rather resentful of all the unfairness and cruelty, but you already heard all that before, and it's hot! So no real complaints from me... Again thank you so much for sharing this story, it's a great read, very arousing and overall an inspiration! Edited March 10, 2021 by Tentacool Spelling and structure. (see edit history) secretomoact 1 Quote Link to comment
Tentacool 1,385 Posted March 10, 2021 Share Posted March 10, 2021 ( And one last little footnote, I know you said you keep this purposefully vague but hnnng PLUGGING IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS IN OMORASHI FICTION! I really hope we get to hear more about the plugged up ladies eventually! I won't be at all disappointed if that isn't the case though, this is just my horny self speaking. ) Quote Link to comment
Cy_The_Fox 26 Posted December 9, 2021 Share Posted December 9, 2021 Archibald and the entire continuance board needs to be stopped. Quote Link to comment
notthewees 248 Posted December 9, 2021 Share Posted December 9, 2021 On 3/9/2021 at 10:27 PM, Tentacool said: Firstly, and this is what has been plaguing my mind ever since the (very well written but) absolute bastard Archibald showed up... Is there anywhere in the state, country... Maybe even the whole planet, is there any place that isn't like this? Surely some women would wind up getting so desperate or fed up that they'd try to escape this government, right? And in the case that there isn't anywhere to run, is there any group that tries to fight back against this oppression? Maybe through some... Weird pee-themed protests or some sabotages that lead to all sorts of naughty shenanigans? Or... If we're going the grimdark route, guerrillas and riots that get constantly shut down or hunted to extinction? Maybe one of their fighters could be prisoner now and be facing the worst possible punishment possible to their bladder! (Wonder what that would be...) Since extremism begets extremism, one might imagine a form of radical feminism based on the idea of taking over and doing this exact shit to cisgender men. You know, for the femdom contingent. Sorry to toot my own horn, but I wrote a brief sketch of such a matriarchal pee dystopia on the "Most Extreme Omorashi Fantasies" thread. There have been several full-length fics about dystopian societies posted to these forums. I don't think they're any more immoral than non-consensual omo fics involving a single character or small group. If anything, they are so hilariously improbable that their cruelties should offend our sensibilities a little less than usual. Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted December 10, 2021 Author Share Posted December 10, 2021 Oh, the revolution is coming. It was inevitable from the beginning. I actually started working on this again. Don't hold your breath, though, I'm extremely busy with actual paying work, and don't see it ending, well, ever. gottliebeln, Tentacool, Leaky Bunnie and 1 other 2 2 Quote Link to comment
Ms. Tito 1,569 Posted February 19, 2022 Share Posted February 19, 2022 On 5/13/2017 at 12:02 AM, Gentleman_95 said: Love your writing but my anti injustice trait just make me angry when i read this x) Me with literally any Omo dystopia story. On 12/10/2021 at 6:47 AM, randomkath said: Oh, the revolution is coming. It was inevitable from the beginning. I actually started working on this again. Don't hold your breath, though, I'm extremely busy with actual paying work, and don't see it ending, well, ever. Workers of the world, urinate!! ✊✊✊✊✊ Quote Link to comment
Cy_The_Fox 26 Posted June 3, 2022 Share Posted June 3, 2022 What would happen with Trans-men and Trans-women? In this world how would the law classify each?? randomkath, Ms. Tito and Tentacool 1 1 1 Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted June 4, 2022 Author Share Posted June 4, 2022 (edited) On 6/3/2022 at 7:50 PM, Cy_The_Fox said: What would happen with Trans-men and Trans-women? In this world how would the law classify each?? I don't have the slightest idea. One of many gaps in the logic and internal consistency of what started out as a convoluted masturbation fantasy. 😬 EDITED: I'm in two minds about this whole thing. I wrote an ending, and various intermediate scenes, years ago. But I'm short on time and energy, and not really into this type of fantasy anymore. Not enough to get the motivation and push through finishing it, anyway. Fucking ADHD and my defective dopamine system. You guys want the incomplete ending, and just make up all the shit that's missing in between by yourselves? 😅 Edited June 4, 2022 by randomkath (see edit history) watchinghold, Weather, gottliebeln and 3 others 4 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Ienjoy 36 Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 Personally I'd love to read anything you wrote relating to this, even if it is incomplete. I'd appreciate it greatly if you posted it! Tentacool and watchinghold 2 Quote Link to comment
Monomone 69 Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 I agree with lenjoy. This story is and will always be one of my favorites and I'd love to read anything that is added to it. If there are some plotholes I'm sure our imaginations can run wild with the possibilities of filling them in! Quote Link to comment
Cy_The_Fox 26 Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 Same here! I love ur writing! Quote Link to comment
secretomoact 2,353 Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 I’d like to see what you have. gottliebeln 1 Quote Link to comment
watchinghold 71 Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 Of course I'd like to see what you came up with too, even if it is in an incomplete state. But only if you are willing to share it. If you'd rather keep it private, that's also perfectly understandable. No pressure either way. It's your decision and we respect that. Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
Tentacool 1,385 Posted August 6, 2022 Share Posted August 6, 2022 I know I'm horribly late to comment here, but... On 6/4/2022 at 7:37 PM, randomkath said: I don't have the slightest idea. One of many gaps in the logic and internal consistency of what started out as a convoluted masturbation fantasy. 😬 EDITED: I'm in two minds about this whole thing. I wrote an ending, and various intermediate scenes, years ago. But I'm short on time and energy, and not really into this type of fantasy anymore. Not enough to get the motivation and push through finishing it, anyway. Fucking ADHD and my defective dopamine system. You guys want the incomplete ending, and just make up all the shit that's missing in between by yourselves? 😅 Honestly? I'm perfectly fine with an incomplete ending, so long as we see a little bit of closure. It doesn't have to be long, it doesn't have to be super detailed... I'd just love to see this story finally get it's final little bow to tie up all loose ends. Y'know? Don't push yourself too much just put a little conclusion out! Of course that is all merely a suggestion 😅 Quote Link to comment
Ms. Tito 1,569 Posted September 14, 2022 Share Posted September 14, 2022 On 5/13/2017 at 7:23 AM, randomkath said: These women are forced to hold because Oceania has always been at war with Eastasia. This is just like George Orwell's book 1984 On 12/9/2021 at 6:41 PM, notthewees said: Since extremism begets extremism, one might imagine a form of radical feminism based on the idea of taking over and doing this exact shit to cisgender men. You know, for the femdom contingent. Sorry to toot my own horn, but I wrote a brief sketch of such a matriarchal pee dystopia on the "Most Extreme Omorashi Fantasies" thread. There have been several full-length fics about dystopian societies posted to these forums. I don't think they're any more immoral than non-consensual omo fics involving a single character or small group. If anything, they are so hilariously improbable that their cruelties should offend our sensibilities a little less than usual. Nah mate these countries are gonna be liberated by the Pisuarian Soviet Socialist Republic randomkath, notthewees and Tentacool 1 1 1 Quote Link to comment
Secretaccount 12 Posted February 19, 2023 Share Posted February 19, 2023 (edited) Such a great story, easily my fav omo story of all time, I love the writing style, the characters are great and the descriptions are well written without being wordy. This story inspired me to write my own dystopian style story, and I was wondering if I could have permission to use the term Bladder Master, as I think it is a perfect term for a government authorized bladder control agent Edited February 19, 2023 by Secretaccount (see edit history) Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted February 21, 2023 Author Share Posted February 21, 2023 On 2/19/2023 at 8:19 AM, Secretaccount said: Such a great story, easily my fav omo story of all time, I love the writing style, the characters are great and the descriptions are well written without being wordy. This story inspired me to write my own dystopian style story, and I was wondering if I could have permission to use the term Bladder Master, as I think it is a perfect term for a government authorized bladder control agent I didn't invent it, so I am sure as hell not going to stop you. 😛 Also, to the wider audience: I have no suitable excuse for not getting my shit together in this thread. I just can't be arsed. Tentacool 1 Quote Link to comment
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