Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 16, 2016 Popular Post Share Posted December 16, 2016 Shameless self plug - I do an interactive story set in a nuclear post apocalypse about a girl called Julia Thought I'd post the wetting scenes in the artwork forum, criticism and advice is welcomed and encouraged, I want to improve my drawing style as best I can. Uhh, I am allowed to do this right? I'm not breaking any rules by doing this am I? Mods pls no bully Martin1, OmoJack, Bismiris and 4 others 7 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 I like the little lizard Dimwitrolo 1 Quote Link to comment
Palloren 239 Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 (edited) Sorry for the criticism, but the pee somewhat looks like honey, other then that its pretty good Edited December 16, 2016 by EthanDaOmoWIz (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 Have you ever tried a drawing pad before or do you just not have the money? Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 16, 2016 Author Share Posted December 16, 2016 9 hours ago, EthanDaOmoWIz said: Sorry for the criticism, but the pee somewhat looks like honey, other then that its pretty good Don't be sorry, I really appreciate any criticism - I'll try to make it look thinner in future, haven't had too much experience as of yet so I'll put in some practice 9 hours ago, Nikeryda said: Have you ever tried a drawing pad before or do you just not have the money? I do the drawings by hand then trace over them with gimp, can't afford a drawing pad. I'm sure my hand will get steadier with the mouse as time goes on though. Well, I hope it will anyway. 10 hours ago, Nikeryda said: I like the little lizard Glad you like him, I thought he was a cute little addition Quote Link to comment
HPattern 192 Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 (edited) Yep, that lizard is dope... I love tiny details like that. Really shows the detail and enthusiasm put into the scene. 8 hours ago, Dimwitrolo said: ...I do the drawings by hand then trace over them with gimp ... I'm sure my hand will get steadier with the mouse as time goes on though... Protip: Try adjusting the sensitivity/DPI of your mouse lower when drawing to give more precise/steady control over the lines. This can be done in your mouse's driver software, or in Windows (or Linux ;)) itself (Ctrl Panel in XP/7, and Settings.app IIRC in 8.1/10) if your mouse or driver doesn't support adjustments. I can edit with a link/step-by-step for your mouse/OS as well, if you like. Edited December 16, 2016 by HPattern (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 17, 2016 Author Share Posted December 17, 2016 2 hours ago, HPattern said: Protip: Try adjusting the sensitivity/DPI of your mouse lower when drawing to give more precise/steady control over the lines. That's actually a pretty good idea, I'll have to try it next time I get the chance, thanks Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 On 16/12/2016 at 2:06 AM, Dimwitrolo said: Shameless self plug - I do an interactive story set in a nuclear post apocalypse about a girl called Julia Thought I'd post the wetting scenes in the artwork forum, criticism and advice is welcomed and encouraged, I want to improve my drawing style as best I can. Uhh, I am allowed to do this right? I'm not breaking any rules by doing this am I? Mods pls no bully Well, she definitely seems to be in love with this relief ;P Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 21, 2016 Author Share Posted December 21, 2016 Second peeing scene from Wet in the Wasteland, though this time it's a deliberate pee scene of Julia peeing outside before she goes to sleep On 16/12/2016 at 10:05 PM, HPattern said: Protip: Try adjusting the sensitivity/DPI of your mouse lower when drawing to give more precise/steady control over the lines. I tried doing this, does it show? I think it does, but that could just me getting better with practice. Or me thinking I'm getting better. I also have tried to make her pee look a little less like honey, did I do any good? Either way, useful criticism is invited and appreciated, and I'm going to plug Wet in the Wasteland again HPattern, GadgetCereal, Big Boss and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment
HPattern 192 Posted December 21, 2016 Share Posted December 21, 2016 38 minutes ago, Dimwitrolo said: ...I tried doing this, does it show? I think it does, but that could just me getting better with practice. Or me thinking I'm getting better. I also have tried to make her pee look a little less like honey, did I do any good? Yep, definitely better than the first scene (IMO at least), and it's certainly the result of your practice and continued experience with the character, although going low-DPI can help a bit ;) As for specifics, the arms are better defined, the neck is proportioned much better, the hair is significantly improved, and the jawline is smoother. The button-down shirt looks great too btw. The pee is more realistic as well. As for criticisms? One of the tent poles isn't filled, and there's no smoke coming off of the (apparently red, so presumably smoldering) campfire ;P Additionally, +1 for return of the lizard lol Quote Link to comment
pumpkin juice 38 Posted December 21, 2016 Share Posted December 21, 2016 Ah yes, I much prefer the second one. It is much more realistic and I love the subtle shading and of course the button-down shirt and lizard. Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 23, 2016 Author Share Posted December 23, 2016 Two new scenes from the story - new girl Jess wets herself when she thinks she won't make it, and another where Julia wets herself a little in shock/fear when she finds an old guy. As usual, criticism and feed back is welcome - anything you liked, anything you don't like, just tell me and I'll see what I can do. Sorry that there's no lizard this time - he didn't want to go inside, he prefers being out in the sun As an additional note, if you have any general requests feel free to ask - drawings, omo-fics, anything - I'll see what I can do AkenoSama and Big Boss 2 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 If you're up to it could you draw Brayden from my interactive? Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 23, 2016 Author Share Posted December 23, 2016 (edited) Sure thing, Nikeryda. Describe the situation you want to see her in and I'll give it a go (I didn't quote you directly because im on my phone right now) Edited December 23, 2016 by Dimwitrolo (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 (edited) Her pressing up against a table to stop herself from wetting and a red 117% somewhere to show that she's way past full. Edited December 23, 2016 by Nikeryda (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 23, 2016 Author Share Posted December 23, 2016 Sure thing, I'll post it when I next update wet in the wasteland, so this time tommorow Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 (edited) K sounds good. Thanks! (12:47pm for me btw lel) Edited December 23, 2016 by Nikeryda (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 24, 2016 Author Share Posted December 24, 2016 First request done, Nikeryda's character Brayden - that is, how I imagine her based on the description. Hope it's what you wanted Nik Feed-back and requests are welcome, as usual Big Boss and AkenoSama 2 Quote Link to comment
haloslipping 27 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 I like what's going on here. I especially like the color scheme. Apologies if this has been asked before, but is there any particular universe this takes place in, or is perhaps inspired by? Your second drawing here reminds me a lot of the Old Mormon Fort from Fallout: New Vegas. Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 2 hours ago, Dimwitrolo said: First request done, Nikeryda's character Brayden - that is, how I imagine her based on the description. Hope it's what you wanted Nik Feed-back and requests are welcome, as usual Yea it's perfect! Thanks a lot for drawing this and I like the chair you added. Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 24, 2016 Author Share Posted December 24, 2016 18 hours ago, haloslipping said: I like what's going on here. I especially like the color scheme. Apologies if this has been asked before, but is there any particular universe this takes place in, or is perhaps inspired by? Your second drawing here reminds me a lot of the Old Mormon Fort from Fallout: New Vegas. Glad you like my work, really means something to hear things like this The universe of Wet in the Wasteland is sort of heavily inspired by fallout, also I'll probably include other influences like metro 2033 or other post-apocalyptic things, but it's bit any one specific canon other than my own. I do see what you mean about the Mormon Fort now you mention it, wasn't intentional but I can see the similarities Quote Link to comment
Big Boss 207 Posted December 25, 2016 Share Posted December 25, 2016 Could I make a request being only a humble follower of your work Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 25, 2016 Author Share Posted December 25, 2016 Sure thing Big Boss, what was it you wanted? Quote Link to comment
Big Boss 207 Posted December 25, 2016 Share Posted December 25, 2016 (edited) These are characters Rileycat23 and I made for a book I'm writing and I want to see them desperate to pee and poop. No wetting this time around. The first girl is named Blake Integra Heaton:Long Black hair, amber eyes, 5'6 in height, bust size is C-Cup. A Pre Vizla scar, and a nice ass. Her desperation involves her clutching her crotch with both hands and a swollen bladder with a meter of 120% and her stomach gurgling making Her desperate to poop with that meter at 107%. Her outfit is a white crop top with a black leather jacket, white short shorts and black stockings plus a pair of black boots.the second girl is named Ruby Marie Heartfilia: Long Black hair with red tips, silver eyes, 5'4 in height, D-Cup bust, nice ass, child bearing hips, and A Weiss Schnee scar. This one I want her to be clutching her crotch and ass with a bladder meter at 115% and a bowels meter at 105% and having a fart with it. Ruby wears a Red zip down hoodie, black t-shirt with a red rose on the front, Black short skirt with red hemming, Black stockings and black thigh high boots. Their lovers so a duo shot for the desperation would be the best. Sorry if this is such a tall order. I just really wanted to see these two come to life on paper Edited December 25, 2016 by Big Boss (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Dimwitrolo 3,018 Posted December 25, 2016 Author Share Posted December 25, 2016 Sure thing Big boss, I'll try and have it done by tomorrow, sounds like a fun situation. Don't worry about tall orders; I could do with things that are harder to draw - helps me practice and improve my style. By the way, love your new icon Nikeryda! Quote Link to comment
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