HoldingPrinces 563 Posted March 4, 2019 Share Posted March 4, 2019 That's a nice story. Please continue! 😍 Quote Link to comment
RagingPython 241 Posted March 7, 2019 Share Posted March 7, 2019 On 12/11/2015 at 5:44 PM, dolodi said: I love your story, which is saying alot, because alot of the stories on here aren't to my taste nowadays. What about mine? Honestly this doesn’t work in my head. Things just don’t fit. I’ve only read the first few chapters, but I don’t really get it. No government would ever implement something like this, it’d start wars and rebellions, and no government person would even suggest such a stupid idea for fear of being laughed out of office. However, I feel that a stupid concept can still be made good, but I struggle to believe that this concept could ever work. Why would anyone pay the government to use the toilet? If I was in the universe as a form of protest I’d deliberately not use official toilets. Illegal or not, who’s going to seriously send someone to jail for pissing themselves when the government is breaking basic human rights laws? They’d just have a huge rebellion on their hands. I’d love to see a chapter of this where a fucking revolution happens though, that’d be awesome. byronrickards and TheGreatNobody 1 1 Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 Men, wonderful story....please continue It lol Men I love how elaborate It is and all the connections with all characters and with the whole scenario of desperation. Quote Link to comment
DerivativeWings 1,648 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 On 3/7/2019 at 2:49 AM, RagingPython said: Honestly this doesn’t work in my head. Things just don’t fit. I’ve only read the first few chapters, but I don’t really get it. No government would ever implement something like this, it’d start wars and rebellions, and no government person would even suggest such a stupid idea for fear of being laughed out of office. However, I feel that a stupid concept can still be made good, but I struggle to believe that this concept could ever work. Why would anyone pay the government to use the toilet? If I was in the universe as a form of protest I’d deliberately not use official toilets. Illegal or not, who’s going to seriously send someone to jail for pissing themselves when the government is breaking basic human rights laws? They’d just have a huge rebellion on their hands. I’d love to see a chapter of this where a fucking revolution happens though, that’d be awesome. Suspension of disbelief Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 On 3/6/2019 at 10:49 PM, RagingPython said: What about mine? Honestly this doesn’t work in my head. Things just don’t fit. I’ve only read the first few chapters, but I don’t really get it. No government would ever implement something like this, it’d start wars and rebellions, and no government person would even suggest such a stupid idea for fear of being laughed out of office. However, I feel that a stupid concept can still be made good, but I struggle to believe that this concept could ever work. Why would anyone pay the government to use the toilet? If I was in the universe as a form of protest I’d deliberately not use official toilets. Illegal or not, who’s going to seriously send someone to jail for pissing themselves when the government is breaking basic human rights laws? They’d just have a huge rebellion on their hands. I’d love to see a chapter of this where a fucking revolution happens though, that’d be awesome. That is because It is a fiction? just as there is no fire in the vacuum but fans of the Star Wars franchise do not seem to care whether it's realistic or not right? Just enjoy the pee desperation, we all know It is not possible to a government make It, but the question is, It makes te story less interesting or elaborate? Quote Link to comment
RagingPython 241 Posted May 26, 2019 Share Posted May 26, 2019 On 5/24/2019 at 1:35 AM, AkenoSama said: That is because It is a fiction? just as there is no fire in the vacuum but fans of the Star Wars franchise do not seem to care whether it's realistic or not right? Just enjoy the pee desperation, we all know It is not possible to a government make It, but the question is, It makes te story less interesting or elaborate? I’m not saying this story is bad or not interesting, it’s just a big part of enjoying stories on this website for me involves being able to believe them. That’s one of the main reasons why I like to base my own stories off of real events, I know the real event happened so I can believe them. A story like this is so unbelievable to me that I can’t enjoy it as the unrealistic-ness takes me out of it. Quote Link to comment
omolover97 12 Posted May 27, 2019 Share Posted May 27, 2019 On 5/26/2019 at 12:30 PM, RagingPython said: I’m not saying this story is bad or not interesting, it’s just a big part of enjoying stories on this website for me involves being able to believe them. That’s one of the main reasons why I like to base my own stories off of real events, I know the real event happened so I can believe them. A story like this is so unbelievable to me that I can’t enjoy it as the unrealistic-ness takes me out of it. Well that's on you man. Some of us prefer the fantastically over the top fiction. On top of that, it's extremely rare to find a well written story that flows, and doesn't come off as flat. I'm loving it. I also love fics where a woman (I also like male desp. but it's more rare) holds for days and days on end and ends up with gargantuan bladders. Unrealistic? Of course. But entertaining. AkenoSama and FullBladder85 2 Quote Link to comment
Guest FlowerMouse Posted May 31, 2019 Share Posted May 31, 2019 (I've only read chapter 1 so far) This reminds me too much of San Francisco :P Quote Link to comment
LifeIsStrange 1,001 Posted August 5, 2020 Share Posted August 5, 2020 Loving this story so far, wouldn't mind seeing more! Quote Link to comment
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