LoveToDance_22 98 Posted March 9, 2013 Share Posted March 9, 2013 Sorry about the wait guys! But im done now. Ah and i am making this a 3 part series so if you dont like this or simply want to make a request comment and tell me i love to hear your guys opinion. PS: I am not gay (No offence if you are) But if any Guys/Girls want me to make a male version i can try. So here it is my 145 lines of a masterpiece. Go easy this is my first story and thanks for reading mates! ~DAY 1~ GOOD NEWS EVERYONE -professor Oh god..... -Leela What is it? -Amy You have to make a delivery to the toilet planet -professer Awww professer do we have to? -Amy Lets just go amy...... -Leela *Amy and leela get on the planet express* WAIT!!!!!! -Amy What is it? -Leela I have to make a quick "Pit stop" -Amy Just go when we get there okay? -leela Not like a have a choice...... *Frowning* -Amy STARTING ENGINES! -Leela *The ships thrusters explode into space and propells the ship far away* DAMNIT FRY!!!! He must have been messing with it again. -Leela *Amy has her hands on her crotch* *She takes them off* Woops...... -Amy *Showing a small pee spot* Wow amy you cant even hold your pee -Leela IT SCARED ME *Crying a bit* -Amy STOP YOU DAMN CRYING AND HELP ME YOU BIG BABY -Leela OKAY JUST STOP YELLING *Sobbing* -Amy (They are working on the ship for about an hour and amy has become REALLY desperate) When are we gonna be done!? -Amy Awwwww is wittle bitty amy gonna have an accident? -Leela YES I AM ABOUT TO -Amy *Leela bends over to grab a screwdriver* WHATS THAT!? -Amy Whats wha........ *Amy pulls leela's pants down to reveal a diaper* OH MY GOD AND YOUR CALLING ME THE BABY????? -Amy What? I had to go pee or i was gonna wet myself -Leela You already peed in it? -Amy No but im about to *Stands up* -Leela NO YOUR NOT. I AM!! -Amy *Amy grabs and un-does the diaper and tries to put it on* OH NO YOU DONT -Leela *Leela smacks the diaper and it goes flying out the window* LOOK WHAT YOU DID -Amy Lets just get this done. -Leela *Leela puts on tight panties with flowers and pulls her pants up* Shmeesh leela are'nt those pretty tight? -Amy Yea well its all i have -Leela *A drop of pee escapes into Leela's panties as she bends over* SCREW THIS SHIP *Standing up* -Leela *With her hand still on her crotch* HEY COME HERE I GOT SOMETHING -Amy (Static........) Hello? -Fry HELP US FRY WERE AT TH......... -Amy (static) NOOOOO WE LOST SIGNAL -Amy i'm sure they can find us..... -Leela I cant it much longer..... -Leela Then why dont you just pee your pants? -Amy *Leela's face turns red as she considers it* Well...... i dont think there gonna be able to get here till tommorow night. *She presses her legs hard together* WAIT I KNOW WERE SOME DIAPERS ARE FROM WHEN WE WERE AT THE BABY PLANET! -Leela But we only have 2 and they wont be here until at least 3 days -Amy *Leela grabs her crotch hard* I HAVE TO GO NOW -Leela *Amy unzips her pink suit takes off her blue panties and puts on a diaper* Okay amy my turn..... -Leela Nope! -Amy What do you mean? -Leela Get your own diapers. THESE ARE MINE *Zipping her suit back up* -Amy I'M GONNA HAVE AN ACCIDENT!!!! -Leela *A bit of pee goes into leela's panties and she gasp to stop it* GAHHHHHHH -Amy *She feels the diaper expand as the pee squirts out* Seeing you pee makes me have to more *Still holding ctotch* -Leela Just go!!!! *Sqeezes leela's stomach* -Amy *This was too much for Leela to handle* Woopssss.... *The pee overflows her panties and she notices how warm it feels as it goes down her legs.* LOOK WHAT YOU DID!!!! -Leela -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Make sure to leave suggestions! Here is a picture of amy in a diaper for good mesure! Loading... and Theonlysaneperson 1 1 Quote Link to comment
vexer6 62 Posted March 9, 2013 Share Posted March 9, 2013 Ok for a first start, but it coudl use a bit more description. Quote Link to comment
LoveToDance_22 98 Posted March 9, 2013 Author Share Posted March 9, 2013 Ok for a first start, but it coudl use a bit more description. It was my first story mate. Quote Link to comment
vexer6 62 Posted March 9, 2013 Share Posted March 9, 2013 I know, just giving you some suggestions is all. Quote Link to comment
nets 62 Posted March 10, 2013 Share Posted March 10, 2013 Maybe go for a bit of a more narrative format than an rp format. Not a bad Idea none the less. Quote Link to comment
Axis 200 Posted March 10, 2013 Share Posted March 10, 2013 Good, I just wanna know how there's an open window in space. Quote Link to comment
LoveToDance_22 98 Posted March 10, 2013 Author Share Posted March 10, 2013 Good, I just wanna know how there's an open window in space. Lol yea sorry i'll be more detailed on day 2 ;D Quote Link to comment
Zamary 38 Posted March 10, 2013 Share Posted March 10, 2013 I found this confusing to read, idk why Quote Link to comment
4n0n 32 Posted August 5, 2018 Share Posted August 5, 2018 On 3/9/2013 at 11:54 AM, LoveToDance_22 said: *The ships thrusters explode into space and propells the ship far away* Actually, the ship isn't propelled and the thrusters are seemingly only to deter attackers from coming near and to move in shorter amounts of space. In the episode where Hubert clones himself and creates Cubert, Cubert figures out (as the professor does in a dream, though he forgot it in another dream) that the engine really doesn't move the ship, it moves everything BUT the ship and keeps it in relatively the same spot. csm5 1 Quote Link to comment
monkeyboy 37 Posted August 10, 2018 Share Posted August 10, 2018 On 8/5/2018 at 7:06 AM, P I X E L said: Actually, the ship isn't propelled and the thrusters are seemingly only to deter attackers from coming near and to move in shorter amounts of space. In the episode where Hubert clones himself and creates Cubert, Cubert figures out (as the professor does in a dream, though he forgot it in another dream) that the engine really doesn't move the ship, it moves everything BUT the ship and keeps it in relatively the same spot. This topic has been dead for 5 years lol Quote Link to comment
LucyDL 68 Posted October 14, 2018 Share Posted October 14, 2018 @LoveToDance_22 can i clean up and finish this story if you are done with it? i see a lot of potential with this one, but it seems to have been dead for 5 years Quote Link to comment
LoveToDance_22 98 Posted October 16, 2018 Author Share Posted October 16, 2018 On 10/14/2018 at 3:40 PM, LucyDL said: @LoveToDance_22 can i clean up and finish this story if you are done with it? i see a lot of potential with this one, but it seems to have been dead for 5 years Oh yeah for sure please, I am almost embarrassed at how garbage this story is. It's when I was first starting to write. I would love to see what you do with it! LucyDL 1 Quote Link to comment
monkeyboy 37 Posted October 17, 2018 Share Posted October 17, 2018 On 10/14/2018 at 8:40 PM, LucyDL said: @LoveToDance_22 can i clean up and finish this story if you are done with it? i see a lot of potential with this one, but it seems to have been dead for 5 years I would love to see this Quote Link to comment
AliasnameTO 334 Posted October 20, 2018 Share Posted October 20, 2018 (edited) If this is going to be revised, it's almost worth it to experiment with theater/screenplay format, seeing as almost all of it is dialogue. Edited October 20, 2018 by AliasnameTO (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
LucyDL 68 Posted October 21, 2018 Share Posted October 21, 2018 On 10/17/2018 at 9:58 AM, LoveToDance_22 said: Oh yeah for sure please, I am almost embarrassed at how garbage this story is. It's when I was first starting to write. I would love to see what you do with it! thanks, il start working on it when i get back home (currently in new zealand) no need to be embarassed lol, we all have to start somewhere Quote Link to comment
LucyDL 68 Posted October 24, 2018 Share Posted October 24, 2018 i have returned home, i am looking to turn this into an interactive story if i get enough viewership on the first part (which should be up in a few days time) Quote Link to comment
LucyDL 68 Posted October 24, 2018 Share Posted October 24, 2018 NEW VERSION IS GOING LIVE Melificentfan 1 Quote Link to comment
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