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    writing, video games, history, sci-fi/futurism, omo :P

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  1. First accidental wetting

    What luck XD but awesome story! I also have yet to ever truly lose control, and definitely envy you. You couldn't have had a real accident in better circumstances either. And very hot video as well. <33 EDIT: Who legitimately takes 40 minutes to take a dump? That guy should probably get off his phone or get some medical attention.
  2. female Private Piano Lesson

    I loved this. You must be a most dedicated student to have held on until disaster struck for the sake of your teacher. At least she was really good about it. :)
  3. Desperate at School - A True Story

    Desperate in class is one of my favorite scenarios. But in the nicest way possible, this story needs considerable work. Mostly in the grammar/POV area. I thought it was from Max's point of view, but you also have a first-person narrator. At times you know intimately what's going on in Max's head, and in other times, you're not even in the room with him and say you don't know his situation. It leads to a most jarring effect. Not that the story is unsalvageable, but you could do a lot more with the same scenario. Good, bad, whatever though, I *love* omo writing and hope you don't take my criticism too hard. I only give reviews to authors whose stories I like. :)
  4. female I Haven't Wet The Bed in Forever

    Awesome story. I only remember wetting the bed once, and was too young to have enjoyed it at the time. Glad it worked out very well for you. :D
  5. female The Best and The Worst

    But... What does she like?! Awesome story. She sounds remarkably okay with everything. Hell of a catch. Shame about having a bf.
  6. Looking for ideas for a new Shelly McGill story. Something with deliberate wetting I'm thinking. I know it's tooting my own horn but I love her. <33

  7. female Staged An Accident

    She'll certainly start to think something's up, especially with how close of a call this was by the bathroom being *too* accessible.
  8. First bed wetting experience 😖

    Yep. In this case, not a bad idea at all. You've got nothing to lose. As for how to handle it after that, I am fresh out of ideas. X.X Cute anecdote at least, for what it's worth.
  9. School Trip

    Not a bad start, but fittingly enough, you couldn't have waited until you had more content? There's really not a lot of story here. I'd be interested to see how it plays out. :)
  10. Katie and I

    As someone who's generally really critical of writing, these are gorgeous. Please keep them coming. <33
  11. female By Far My Most Embarrassing Experience Yet

    What an awesome account of a cool experience. So sorry it ended badly. She shouldn't treat you like that, especially considering you tried to go to the bathroom and she was in there. Not to mention, her excuse of your being 20 years old cuts both ways. You could always offer to do your own laundry and wet yourself as much as you want. *Sigh* I never understood where people's anger comes from in this type of situation. If it's deliberate and causing problems, sure. Otherwise it's just pee.
  12. Wet Pants At School

    I *love* the stories of people letting out gradual trickles in order to hold off losing it all, and worrying about the point at which it becomes noticeable. Exquisite. :D
  13. People never usually explain what happens afterward. Did anyone say anything? Or just watch until you got cleaned up and then never speak of it? I always imagine it could be really damaging to one's social life if it happens in a school setting.
  14. In the Dark

    Great all around; very sweet story. Because the writing is so good, I've only got a very specific suggestion: cool it on the adverbs. A lot of the time, what you're trying to say is self-evident without the explanation. "Genuinely" "excitedly" "politely" "silently" and other words like it are shortcuts that dilute and cheapen the prose. Unless you've got a good reason for including words such as those, it's almost always better to leave them out. Otherwise, once again it was stellar. Are you sure it has to be a one-shot? I'd be interested in hearing more about Brad and how he deals with his fear of the dark, perhaps amplified by a burgeoning fear of peeing himself again too. :)
  15. Bedwetters and Dating

    Seeing as we're all here for a reason, of course I'd be alright dating a bedwetter. I'd like for them to tell me ahead of time if they sleep in my bed so it can be protected, as I'd not want to hurt my nice mattress. :P But after that, it's all good. Laundry is something I don't find pleasant at all X.X but I'd certainly enjoy waking up to their mess.