FullBladder85

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  1. FullBladder85

    A New Chapter

    For name I'll go with B, Amanda. As for what to do, I'll go with D, got to make sure we look good. We can always grab something to eat later, and surely our girl can do without her morning pee.
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    Desperate girl

    I like your line of thinking. 😈 B, tell Jasmine, and mention that we haven't even peed yet today. (how many hours have we been holding it in the story?) I'm sure Jasmine will be perfectly understanding... in realizing that if Scarlet hasn't peed all day she should be able to hold it till they finish watching the movie. Or maybe Jasmine's toilet is broken like @Xx4evRockerxX suggested.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    You and everyone else I'm sure. I'm really sorry this is taking so long guys, seeing how many pages this thread has gotten and how it's still getting replies makes me feel bad for taking so long. I tend to be something of a perfectionist when writing stories, constantly rewriting parts when I decide I don't like them, or think I can make them even better. And frankly I just haven't been that satisfied with the quality of my writing of late. ? I'm sure some of you would still like what I have written if I posted it anyway, but what I have written just isn't up to the quality of the first two parts of this story at the moment, and I'd rather have a few great quality chapters then a bunch of low quality ones. I'm still working on the story, but I'm not sure when the next part will be ready. It's possible the next chapter I post might focus on other characters living in the same city.
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    A Day at the Beach

    Hey, just now discovered this story, wish I had noticed it sooner. Thanks a lot for writing it I really enjoyed it. Eager to see what Ash intends to do with Amy with those things in the next part. ?
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    You could always get a native English speaker in the community to proof read it for you before you publish it. That said on the subject of the next chapter of The City Without a Ladies Room, normally I post these as a status update in my profile, but since this thread is still getting posts: It's not yet ready unfortunately. I'm presently over 2,000 words into it. Not far enough along to publish anything or give an ETA as of yet, but I'm very pleased with my progress today, I got a lot done. ? It's possible I might split the next chapter into two shorter chapters (which would mean posting the next part sooner). I've been aiming for no more then 6 page chapters, and right now I'm worried this chapter will easily go over 8 pages.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    Good points, both are things I had in mind addressing eventually, but I don't know if Erin & Jeff's situation is really the right one for it. Sure, go right ahead. You mean you already finished it? I'd be interested in reading it.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    Thanks, glad you're both enjoying it. Indeed a lot of us would. Well, Erin kind of explained their reasoning already, using public hygiene as an excuse. Or at least that's what they tell everyone now. No idea to be honest, as I said before my end of the year vacation being over will make the next part take longer unfortunately. I'm trying to aim for each part being 4 to 6 pages long, instead of my usual 8+ pages, so that'll help some. The way I write, being too much of a perfectionist at times, I tend to write 3 or 4 bad paragraphs I reject for every 1 good paragraph that makes it into the story. Sometimes my 'bad' paragraphs get improved and reused later though. Parts from the bus scene for example were a part of an earlier unpublished version of this story that had some issues with it, so it's not all wasted effort. That said, I've honestly been having trouble getting started on the next part. I've got a page worth of content, but I'm not very satisfied with it at the moment. I've read about lack of toilets in India and the problems it causes, it's great to fantasize about in stories like mine, but not so pleasant in real life.
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    Pains of a Superstar - Sona's long weekend

    Great start to another story from you. The last Pains of a Super Star story you wrote was definitely one of your better stories, and I'm thinking this one will be just as good.
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    Omorashi on a Plane

    Hey, that was a pretty good story, I liked it, thanks for writing it.
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    Alice and the OmoBar - Part 2 - First day

    I don't know how I missed this when it was originally posted, but thanks to @Omo luna for bumping this. I loved the original story in this series, and I love this one to. Hope you write more of it.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    Thanks, and yeah this is something I need to work on. I find myself sometimes doing it as a way of making it clear who's saying what in a conversation, but yeah I can do it too much at times. I tend to also struggle with sometimes being way too wordy when the same thing can be said much more concisely, that's something else I constantly try to work on. Thanks Rexone, also glad to see you again, haven't seen you much since the holding it board disappeared. Thanks. If you or someone else wants to write a story where all the men have to hold it but the women can pee feel free to. Male desperation isn't really my thing unfortunately. I've occasionally written stuff where a guy can't pee and has to hold it, but only when a girl with them also has to hold it (like a husband & wife on a road trip far from any rest stops). Thanks for the suggestion. I've actually been pondering a mention of something like this already in the series, but it didn't really seem to fit anywhere in the story as of yet.
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    Extreme Bladder Training - Becky & Abi

    Interesting concept, I enjoyed reading the story, but what's to stop the women from just peeing through the band aid without pulling it off first, as Abi eventually did when she couldn't hold it anymore? It would probably have been better if some of her pee sprayed out at odd angles down her leg or something and made a mess because of the band aid being in the way, so that she'd know not to pee before getting the band aid off next time.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    True, and the women who work in heavily male dominated industries are also in the same kind of boat. All their co-workers head to the men's room multiple times a day, while they're one of the only people in the building who has to hold it all day at work. And then maybe the guys want to invite the only women in the building to group outings right after work, with no time to stop home and pee first. Interesting idea. I imagine the women would want to make sure their bladders were extra full for such a protest to. ? I can't say this is an idea I would have ever thought of on my own. But to be honest, I imagine I'd struggle to write such an idea in a good way that would make for an enjoyable story to read. I've been finding I really struggle lately whenever I try to write about multiple people being desperate to pee at once. Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story and Erin's character so much. There's definitely some rebellious women in the city, I'm sure I'll write about one of them later in the series. A lot of what you say about Erin also sounds about right, I tried to model her as the ideal 'perfect' female citizen in a city with no toilets for women. I thought pairing someone like Erin with a newcomer to the city like Jeff was the best way to introduce the rules behind the city not having any ladies rooms. And of course it's also great to see Erin get desperate to pee as the day goes on, all while insisting to Jeff she's fine with holding it like girls are supposed to in this city. Thanks, glad you liked it. ? Also I just wanted to say thanks again to everyone for your posts letting me know you liked the story. I've never had a story get so many replies before that it got a second page. Also FYI, I've actually been taking the last 2 weeks off of work because of the holidays, & because I had a bunch of vacation days I had to use, which really helped me finish part #2 a lot quicker. But now with the new year and my vacation over I'm going to have less time to work on this. I'll still be making progress on it, just not as fast. I don't have an ETA on the next part as of yet, but I've been hard at work on it.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    The thought crossed my mind, but I'm not into that sort of stuff, so I intend to just ignore it. I was trying to cover all my bases when the thought crossed my mind "why pop a squat somewhere outdoors when there's stalls available in the men's room?". We all know there's times in real life when there's long lines for the ladies room when that happens. And I'm sure it'll be an important plot point later if I ever have a girl hurry into the men's room to pee.
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    The City Without a Ladies Room

    Oh you'll get to see more of Erin getting really desperate and nearing her limits, don't worry. Thanks, always love reading your ideas. We'll see what happens with Erin in the next part. As for Lana, lets just say I hope to explore her entire day farther in a separate chapter. Maybe she had a long double shift... maybe she drank way too much coffee or something at work like Erin... maybe something else happened to her that kept her from peeing for a long while... or maybe some/all of these things happened to her... Thanks, glad you liked it. ? I'm sure there are, I'm sure I'll write about one of those women who breaks the law soon enough. Also good point, I never really considered until now how the female police officers would have to deal with catching women in the act of illegally peeing in public while they themselves badly need to pee. It could make for an uncomfortable ride down to the police station having a woman with an empty bladder in the back who just illegally peed a gusher in an alley, while the female cop who arrested her hasn't been able to pee since the early morning.