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orangelion

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  1. Wow, 40 chapters. Hopefully you'll make it to 50 by the end of the year
  2. Here. The second file the original full video, but it is mostly regular porn video with a few wetting scenes as explained in the description.
  3. A comment by the uploader on thisvid says that it is the full video. He mentions that the videos from that model end abruptly for some reason, but he doesn't specify her name. I already have the videos, but I'm sure someone appreciates it. The only improvement advice I can think of is to upload the original files to the Download section to get the best video quality. Uploading as an attachment limits the file size to 73MB which degrades the video quality.
  4. Here is the thread. Both videos are still up. You should download them in case they get deleted someday. I briefly tried to look for the model, but I did not find anything
  5. Unfortunately I don't. I just found the video online.
  6. I'm not sure if you've seen it, but there is a video of a peeing ballerina
  7. Here you go. I'm fairly certain this is the original file uploaded to the internet and like I said in my previous comment, it has no audio. I don't believe a version with audio exists.
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  9. View File Cam Model Pee Desperation Request Requested upload from this comment Submitter orangelion Submitted 09/17/2023 Category Female  
  10. I got the video from the original uploader, and sadly there is no sound. So there doesn't exist a version with sound. Unfortunately, I don't know the model name
  11. Yeah, it doesn't have to be with She-Hulk. Almost any power will work.
  12. I've had the idea of a super-heroine with a hyper piss super power. Basically she can pee infinitely(or has an extremely large bladder) at will and with enough pressure to make her fly. She uses pressurized shots of pee to knock enemies out. It's a dumb idea, I know. What if she gets her power from her bladder? If gets desperate enough she transforms and then as her bladder continues to fill she gets stronger. Eventually when she empties her bladder she goes back to normal
  13. This is even better than the original version and that was already pretty good! Shame on Mary-Ann and Karenna for being water wasters. They could have both peed in the shower and saved water. In Karenna's case she could have also gotten her morning relief without wasting any time. I'm excited to see how the direction this new version takes!
  14. I'm not usually I fan of water paintings, but I think this one looks pretty nice
  15. I very much enjoyed it. I hope things get worked out with Paisou. Also congrats on getting to the top half of the leaderboard
  16. There is a subreddit dedicated to this https://old.reddit.com/r/Nonchalant_Pee/
  17. I really enjoyed this story! I only noticed one or two typos and I didn't really mind it. How about a story based around this picture set? The premise is that she wakes up extremely desperate and goes to the toilet. Unfortunately, her boyfriend is showering and can't hear her pleas over the shower noise. I know this story already has a similar scenario, but just throwing out ideas. As for the picture, I personally prefer the situation where she is completely nude without panties, but you choose the situation you prefer. Below are two more ideas. They spend the day outdoors and aren't allowed to use the toilet. Movie theater desperation.
  18. Yeah, but it isn't too bad. The main weakness is that it's simple.
  19. You're story doesn't seem too bad. Your inclusion of messing and diapers though does drive a lot of potential audience away as most people aren't into that stuff, including me. Additionally, at least for me, I find it hard to get invested into a story without at least one peeing scene. So I often ignore stories until they have a peeing scene. The major thing that can improve better description with a wider vocabulary. I know this is difficult as I myself have trouble with this aspect of writing, so I can't help you much here. One last minor thing, when quoting someone in English, you use double quotes. "Like this" and not ,,like this". As it stands it looks like at least pee_punk loved your story. Perhaps some other people who aren't registered on the site enjoyed the story as well. I'd say to keep writing if you enjoy doing it. If you don't enjoy writing then don't force yourself to write.
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