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orangelion

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  1. My favorite scenario so far has been Cassie's interview because she was forced to hold it without panties and leaks several times throughout. Likewise my favorite character would have to be either Chloe or Cassie because they are more prone to peeing rather than wetting, though I'm leaning towards Cassie as we don't know Chloe all that well. From a pure character stand point, my favorite character is Mary-Ann because she cares about all her employees, treating them as friends and tries to make them get along with each other. I also like that she is strict about playing in the office, she has n
  2. The game sounds like it would have been fun, but it is a lot of work. It probably would not get done considering you don't have a lot of free time. Now that I think about it, it is actually a good thing that Holly has an eventful first day and learns how to manage her bathroom issues because I imagine the sergeant would not tolerate it later on when he expects the students to be more disciplined.
  3. She didn't even make it half a day without being discovered, but at least she was discovered by someone sympathetic. Hopefully the nurse will understand her situation and help get through the academy. Looks like she will sleep for quite some time. She might be desperate again by the time she wakes up. I really love your writing and the situations you come up with where the characters end up leaking a lot before losing control. I'm disappointed top hear that you're writing will slow down, but life is more important. Nevertheless, I am eager to read the next chapter whenever you release it.
  4. Karenna shouting at Cassie sounded like she was frustrated that Cassie ruined her chance at having an accident in front a group of people for the first time, fulfilling her fantasy. Tyler and Mary-Ann make a nice couple and I look forward to more of them. Anna's scene did feel rushed, but only because there is no build up as she doesn't feel any desperation until she is bursting. So it's hard to get around that, but it's actually kind of nice to have this different kind of sudden desperation that can come as a surprise to readers in the story.
  5. This is my thought on this story. I hope you write more!
  6. Now that I'm starting to know Cassie, I am starting to like her a bit more. The only felt that the descriptions were lacking with Mary-Ann, but I know it was on purpose as the focus was on Cassie. I have on small nitpick with the following phrase, Her pee always passes through her labia so it is kind of pointless to have this phrase. As for the pee scenes, you already know that I prefer peeing scenes over wetting.
  7. I agree with @PeeHour, I don't think Karenna is a bad guy. She clearly feels guilty about thinking about Mary-Ann instead of Chloe and is trying to make things work out with Chloe instead of purely using her for sex.
  8. The rivalry between Cassie and Karenna did feel natural, but I think Cassie's inner thoughts on Karenna were too harsh for someone she hardly knows. I initially though that Chloe was just interested in a sexual relationship, but her telling Justin that she hopes this relationship is serious proves she is interested in a romantic relationship. Her wetting for Karenna also means she is willing to try new things for her. Maybe their relationship will work out? Lastly, the last desperation scene was shorter than usual, but it didn't feel rushed at all.
  9. orangelion

    Omobucks

    I wonder if she'll be able to stop after she fills the cup
  10. Ok, that makes sense. I figured you didn't want her to have pubic hair already, I just wanted an in-universe explanation. I read your other stories, but had forgotten the elven ancestry fact. Now I though of a bit of a silly question. If people don't poop in this universe, do they still have an anus?
  11. I also have 2 question. How come she doesn't have any pubic hair? And how will she shower if there is only a span of 2 hours when her house can use it and I imagine there will be boys using it almost the entire time?
  12. I can see from the schedule that Holly has very active kidneys and needs to pee a lot during the day and even at night. It makes me feel bad for her, as it must be torture to have to be careful about where and when you go to the bathroom for 2 years, especially with how often she has to pee. It's good for us though as it provides more opportunities for content.
  13. I though you said this sub-chapter was going to have peeing? I'm not mad just a little disappointed, it was still an enjoyable read. I see Karenna is becoming more comfortable with the fetish and getting bolder. I'm interested to see how things with Karenna and Chloe will turn out and whether Chloe is interested in more than just a sexual relationship.
  14. That was a wonderful chapter! As a straight guy I'm not really interested in male desperation, but the way you describe the situation kept me engaged and actually aroused me a little. I did not expect for Mia to take out a catheter and have her bladder filled. However, as a guy, I was a little disappointed that Mia's desperation was short. I've noticed that you are posting under 2 different accounts. Why's that?
  15. This is one of my favorite chapters! I personally don't mind long desperation stories, but I still think you made the right choice in changing perspectives throughout the story. It shows that the events are happening at the same time and keeps the pace of the story. I quite like Cassie and am excited to see her introduced the dynamic.
  16. Hot story! I'm a little disappointed that Shirley did not leak at all because that is one of my favorite aspects of omo, but it just proves how strong of a will and bladder she has.
  17. Don't feel pressured to post here. Just write when you have free time and have the urge to write. Now as for the new posts, I love them! The detail you put into their desperation, their loss of control, and leaking. This is my favorite type of writing.
  18. I'm looking forward to them! I see you like to plan ahead. How much have you planned out so far?
  19. You're welcome for introducing you to the concept. I thank you for writing this story and more specifically my requested scenario. You are right the your execution is a bit different than what I had in mind, but you made it even better than what I was imagining. I don't the focus on colors hurt your writing in this chapter, in fact I think it made it more interesting and mysterious. By the way, I think I'll skip all the wetting chapters from now on because to be honest I'm not a big fan of wetting. I'm not totally vested in this idea, but I'm just throwing it out there, what if one
  20. @PeeHour summarized my thoughts perfectly, better than I could have. Adding another more frisky woman into the mix makes things more interesting. On another note @PPP just posted a short story with a similar scenario if anyone wants to give it a read. https://www.omorashi.org/topic/71930-omovember-2021-day-7/
  21. I love these types of scenarios. Great story!
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