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orangelion

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  1. Oh I didn't catch those things. I did catch the bathroom door being slammed on my first read through and I thought it was strange that it didn't mention who it was because I didn't connect it with Deborah. After I finished the chapter I went looking for the hidden desperation and made the connection withe the door being slammed, but I missed the stain mention and her being distracted while writing the book.
  2. I really enjoyed it. Mary-Ann and Karenna passed the test! It also subverts expectations by having the characters pee normally at the end of the chapter unlike the rest of the story. I do believe the sundress woman wet in public. I don't see any other explanation for sitting on mulch for a few minutes. And if Mary-Ann's eyesight is to be believed, her panties were also darkened. I liked Mary-Ann's fixation on desperation in herself and others. It is also realistic as people tend to get fixated when they discover something new and exciting for them. I did catch the hidden desperation. When Mary-Ann and Karenna exit the elevator, the restroom door is slammed shut. Given that Deborah joins the meeting a few minutes later, it might have been her. Though it could also just be a coincidence in timing.
  3. I like both I like both of these all well. Since we've mostly gotten one-sided challenges, I think contest-esque stories would add more variety. I'm not really into pure male omo, but it'd certainly flips things around and I would read it.
  4. There is a whole website dedicated to that https://thepml.net/browse/category/pee-female/
  5. "I promise the title makes sense if you read the whole story."
  6. I really like how the colored version turned out
  7. Happy late birthday! Since I couldn't reply on the your actual birthday
  8. It haven't read any of Stephen King's books, but I have heard that his sex scenes aren't great. You don't have to be social on here. Some of the best writers on here aren't very social either.
  9. I think think your writing is that weird. I've definitely seen weirder things. Unless you count the omo stuff as weird then that does increase the weirdness. Though of course omo isn't weird considered weird on this site.
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