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dbeornssen

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  1. Welcome! I just read your story and really enjoyed it!
  2. I found it enjoyable - I think the contrast between Sarah's reaction and Mary-Ann's will be interesting for Karenna to encounter/deal with (or perhaps even for Mary-Ann to contend with). But I don't think it went too far.
  3. Your writing is so good, and compelling! I am of course enjoying the story itself, but I wanted to say I also really enjoy your writing style; you balance description, internal monologue/thoughts with teasing hints very well. Suffice it to say, my own work day is going to take a great deal of effort to concentrate, now!
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