OmoJack

That was fantastic!

Dude ur my hero! I can’t even believe ur rewriting this story let alone that’s its as good or better than the first! Thank you! Us omorashi/Potter fanatics NEED this

Love it! I thought I was the only one who liked when wettings exposed panties! Would have loved even more description of them though. Maybe like full back or thong, plain or patterned. Things like that really add to the humiliation aspect of the story which I love! Your humiliation was great in this story already but I feel like it could have been even better. Great story buddy keep em coming!

Soooooo gooood! Can't wait tonread more!

Tremendous story!

Tremendous

Wow...

That's a good theory! And speaking of Walmart, may I suggest there No Boundaries 5 packs. Probably found in the juniors section but a common choice for cheap undies for all ages I'd say lol. They come in very cute,girly patterns that in my opinion pairs up with wetting tremendously! If u happen to look into these panties may I suggest the string bikini. My absolute favorite lol. Sorry I'm a bit of a panty fanatic. Thanks again for sharing ur adventure will definitely be looking for to more escapades from u! P.s may I suggest maybe adding a pic of the wet clothing after? Would be a fantastic touch!

Great story can't wait tonhewr more of ur wet tales! Curious as to how the pee got to the back of ur skirt while running. I would think it would just travel down the legs. Did it get caught in ur underwear? Do u mind me asking what style(and color if u wanna indulge lol) of underwear u wore?

Fantastic wetting scene! This is a very fun story

Awesome story! Top notch wetting

Well thank you. I may give it a go

I've been wanting to write one myself but my stories haven't been well received in the past n I wouldn't want to mess it up! I haven't found any yet n the first has to be good lol

Master and Servant is probably my all time favorite.

I'd really like to see one of the girls pull there pants Down to save them from wetness but wet there panties anyway. But whatever direction u take this should be fine!