I'd like to compliment you on the old Gurren Lagann fic I read today. You're very good with dialog and excellent with descriptions. I've never seen the anime but I felt like I knew Yoko and Nia after reading a little of what you wrote. I like it when polite regal women have to go, and I like it when sheltered women have to go outdoors, and I also like it when women go standing up, and so I loved the story of Nia's desperation and relief! Yoko's ordeal was good also, and the two characters complement each other nicely. Well done!