Jimmy Olsen

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  1. Not to be a bother but I'd love to know what you thought of "Dueling Bowels."  I wrote it based on your prompt.

  2. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku Commission thread

    Very artsy! She's so desperate it's affecting the ink lines! This set is excellent but I'm confused as to why she's still holding when she's sitting on the toilet.
  3. Jimmy Olsen

    DimwitRolo: Sketches

    The queen is lovely!
  4. Jimmy Olsen

    Chamber pots, frilly dresses

    Lovely!
  5. Jimmy Olsen

    The Monster Slayer's Fortune

    I enjoyed this. Very good descriptions (and not just of the bodily functions). I look forward to the next chapter and the inevitable dropping of Eliza's load.
  6. Jimmy Olsen

    Dueling Bowels

    Just gonna bump this one more time.
  7. Jimmy Olsen

    Locked Up Tight

    @Livewire101 Thanks for commenting on my messing fics! It made my day.
  8. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku Commission thread

    I really like the parrot-colored girl with the high-pressure urine stream.
  9. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku Commission thread

    Nice comic! I especially like the first panel, with her desperate pose and the look on her face as she considers the container. On the downside, the urine looks quite opaque.
  10. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku's art

    Nice! I like her pose and the motion-blurred jet of urine. Her face came out cute, too.
  11. Jimmy Olsen

    Wet Camping Night (Equestria Girls)

    You're not a bad writer, you just need to work on the details and the tension-building. I'd recommend rereading stories you enjoy and taking note of how things are described and how things develop and progress and climax. It's helped me.
  12. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku Commission thread

    There are a lot of options. "Pitter patter," "sprinkle tinkle," "hissy sissy," "whizzle fizzle," "splish splash" etc. "Shab baba ban" is one I've never heard.
  13. Jimmy Olsen

    Hissing urine

    I like every sound women's pee makes!
  14. Jimmy Olsen

    obligatory art thread...

    The girl with the bow in her hair is so cute!
  15. Jimmy Olsen

    Biku Commission thread

    I love your comic! It's always fun to see a desperate girl getting tortured by the sound of relief, and the expressions of pain and pleasure are wonderful. The sound effects are just confusing.