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Hey, I think you did a great job putting together the story! Aside from the small corrections that Grammarly would probably yell at me to fix, I think this does well to set up the story's cause, effect, and conclusion as an omo-based story would often want to do. I do enjoy Splatoon-based hijinks, and tying in the demands of the competitive scene was a neat idea. My only real critique, and do know that not every story needs a lot of this, is that some parts felt they lacked a bit of extra sustenance, or lacked a bit of added detail. I still believe going simple is a fine approach, and I did enjoy reading through this. However, I understand some readers like that added pizazz now and then. Otherwise, for your first fanfic on here, you did great, Clem.

I do have Xbox Live, so I think we could make it work. lol

To quote something you said, "Faye with the delectable hips."

Considering the small space would make using the broom awkward, I'll go for option A to start things off. Also, it's interesting to see a new interactive from you, Rolo!

I have to say, TV, this is a great idea! I'll have to check it out sometime, but keep up the great work.

Aaaaah, I remember this one. You definitely did a great job making it, and it still holds up well to this day. (No pun intended.)

Sounds fun! How bad is the urge so far?

Great story, Gemmy! I especially liked what ended up happening to Megan at the end of her desperation.

That is correct! For those who don't know or those who are wondering, I imagined this commission to happen in a scenario where Faye gets recruited onto Celica's team. That is something that you actually can do in the game, by the way.

I sometimes play chess. Granted, the only platform I've really used the most recently was something that can be done in the Messenger app, but I'm interested to know what else is out there online.

I know I have a friend here who would enjoy the heck out seeing something with Revy, so I'll vote for that.

Hah! I didn't even think about that! XD Well said, though!

I’d be down for that! First off, how bad is your urge to go?

Neither did I, but I'm glad I commissioned it. I felt she needed some art, anyway, since she was one of the many Fire Emblem characters who don't have something yet.

Neither would I, honestly.