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wedgeantilles

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  1. That's a cool start, I am looking forward to more chapters! (Personally, I prefer if the text is not bold formatted but plain.)
  2. I liked this story a lot! Some advice: You often start the sentence with "Lyra" - try to change this a little up. Example: Bonny let her inside her home, watching Lyra move like a possessed person. Lyra made her way to the bathroom and sit on the toilet. Bonny let her inside her home, watching Lyra move like a possessed person. Immediatly Lyra made her way to the bathroom and sit on the toilet. Small changes, but it feels more fluid because of less repetitions. But like I said, I definitly enjoyed the story!
  3. Dude, that was an amazing story! It felt real and I can't wait for the next part when Tatiana is having the examination.
  4. Now that is a very new and unique scenario! Well done, it was great! Let's hope we learn much more about Jessie in the future
  5. Oh, I really hope to read a chapter where Lena is forced to piss herself too! How could she up getting filled to the breaking point? Difficult. Maybe her pride - she learns what Demi did and maybe thinks she has to proove herself by doing the same. (If the rescue is still a long way off by some hazards^^) - and then she can't handle the presure and pisses herself. I am curious what ideas who have!
  6. I love all your stories and this is no exception! The twist with India definitly was a surprise. I am very curious how this will continue!
  7. Wow, the second chapter did not disappoint, that's for sure! You did a great job, thank you!
  8. Well, that IS a great beginning - I am looking forward to the next part :)
  9. If two vessels are connected by a tube they equal the pressure. It would not be possible for one with less in her bladder to relieve herself into one with a much fuller bladder.
  10. That was a fantastic intro, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
  11. Wow, that was an amazing story - thank you for sharing it!!
  12. Great, that is an amazing first chapter! I am looking forward for the next one :)
  13. That was an interesting story, I liked it! Looking forward to part 2. Just one small thing: IMO she has been too desperate before she got hit with the stun dart again. She already leaked and I just can't imagine her not voiding her bladder when she got stunned again. If she would have been a little less desperate it would be more plausible that she doesn't loose control while being unconcious.
  14. That was another great story - I loved the ending. That was perfect - he has beaten her. But he realizes how much more the wins means to her and he let's her win. Beautiful :)
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