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  1. wedgeantilles

    Emma's Office Agony

    I loved the new chapter and I am curious how the story will continue 🙂
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    The Iron Queen

    Great new chapter! I always love reading something new from you (or reading some of the old stories again). I would have loved to read a few sentences how she felt when she had to put on her corset. Maybe next morning?
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    Desperation Under the Influence

    Great story! And yeah, she is in BIG trouble. Driving drunk definitly isn't fun or a small thing - even though lot's of people think it is. If you drink you don't use the car. If you use the car you don't drink. Easy as that.
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    Confidence Anne

    What a sweet story, I am very glad you decided to write this! One thing took me by surprise: Detention, but they can do whatever they want? Not realy detention, is it? Where is the big difference between hanging out at home reading a book / playing on the phone or hanging out in class reading a book / playing on the phone? Shouldn't they get a task they have to do? Doing some calculations (it's math after all) or something like that?
  5. Amazing story, thank you very much!
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    The Iron Queen

    Well. there is one point that bothered me a little bit: After several hours she admits to her maid that she wants to pee - and after 8 hours she is upset / angry that she doesn't get permission from Farlen to relieve herself. However, after 40 hours she still claims to be able to hold it longer. To be honest, I do not quite get the curve of desperation here. It is quite a big thing for her to admit she has to be. How can she possible hold it 5 times longer if she was already at the point of being angry not to be able to piss? I have no problem that she can hold it longer then 40 hours - but I can't understand her behavior after 8 hours, just a fifth of this timeperiod.
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    The Iron Queen

    Great new chapter!
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    Crime Scene Omo

    That was a surprising ending, great job!
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    [Fallout 4] The Raider

    Cool story, I enjoyed it a lot!
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    Emma's Office Agony

    Wow, what an amazing story! This is not the first story you have ever written, is it?
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    Hermione the potion master

    This story continues to be amazing! Ginny played with the fire - and it seems like she burned herself. IMO she should have to face the consequences. Let her try to hold it as long as possible, but in the end she doesn't make it and wets herself. Maybe somebody comes up with great idea how to avoid it, but I can't think of anything. And she definitly shouldn't like the wetting - how the story is going I can't imagine how she would feel anything but being horrified. A little wetting in front of Hermione is a turn on for her, but wetting in front of the boys? No way. But hey, maybe having to face the consequences will be an interesting point for the future. You could use this if you need an angle to change the behaviour of her or something like that.
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    The Iron Queen

    Awesome start! And yes, "the foolish queen" seems a very fitting name for Charlotte. Your introduction about the financial problems, the "solution" with the fake-coins... was very well written.
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    Fiona Oceans: Piss Talk

    Great story, I like the concept a lot! Personally I prefer a "curve" of desperation: The women gets more and more desperate until she reaches the point she can't hold it any longer and has to pee.
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    Ally's Challenge

    Great story! I enjoyed the other one a lot too and was excited to find another one.
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    No wee for a Girl on a Bus Trip

    Interesting story, but I am curious: Why do you type most nouns with a capital letter? Engilsh isn't my native tongue (which is quite obvious probably), but your English is way too good to make mistakes like that. That's why my guess is that it's deliberate. I am curious - why is that? Personally I am not troubled about that (in German those words would be spelled with a capital letter), but I guess it is kind of annoying for native speaker?