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wedgeantilles

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  1. Like I said, there are public urinals. Amsterdam (capital of the Netherlands) e.g. has such things. But next to those there are "real" toilets. It is true that you have to pay for some toilets. Prices are 50 Cent, maybe 1 buck, that depends. And during open hours official places have bathrooms too. However, if shops and public buildings are closed it can be difficult to find a toilet if you have no idea where to look. I'll grant you that.
  2. I hate to ruin it for you, but there are public toilets in Europe. Everywhere. For men and women. Yes, there ARE a few places with something that you may call urinal (just like there are some areas in festivals where men can piss quite easily, just some trees e.g.). However, in these playes, there are real toilets too. Obviously on festivals those facilities can be quite overrun and several women prefer to pee in the open too. If you gather thousands of people in the wild that isn't equipped for handling such numbers, facilities are always in short supply.
  3. Amazing story, I love to see a proud and arrogant bladder being bested.
  4. That's an awesome start! I love how she gets punished for her behaviour. Let's hope the exams in the clinic will be embarassing for her *evilgrin*
  5. Quite dark, but really well written. You did a great job with this!
  6. I love the beginning! The idea of a sniper with a bladder that gets fuller and fuller is great. Can't wait to read more :)
  7. I love this story, it is so amazing!
  8. Wow, that was an intense story. Very well written, you managed to combine a serious topic with a bursting bladder perfectly!
  9. Hey, no need to apologize - you did not rage at all! You gave a (well founded) opinion, that's perfectly fine! Yeah, my opinion differs, but that doesn't make yours any less legit It's always nice to read praise, sure - but I am equally sure that the author values your opinion a lot. In fact you benefit more from critic than from praise. Because the critic has another perspective. And even if you do not share that persepective, you gain something from it. Always. If you are prepared to listen - which most persons will do if the critic is well written and not just a "rage". And like I already said, your critic was the former and definitly no rage.
  10. I loved the latest chapter! And personally I enjoyed some of the aspects watchinghold critisized the most: IMO it is good that you focus on the main protagonists. They ocationally observe another desperate women or meet them in a line. How would the story benefit by focusing more on those (totally irrelevant) women? It would just be a distraction. Focus on a few characters and do not try to fit in too much. Yes, a series like Game of Thrones with it 4000 pages can and should focus on tons of characters. But not a short story. Know where your strength is and focus on that. My taste differs in the "they wet without being at fault" too. At first, I do not think they are not to blame. The could have gone before going to bed. If you wait until the last second there is always a chance that something goes wrong. (Especially if you have taxed your bladder to the limit!) Yeah, an elevator without energy isn't the most impressive idea ever, that's true. But the most important part IMO: It made the hold earlier on of Barbara even more impressive. The reader learns from the second accident, that she had taxed her muscles to the absolut limits. This proud women with her very strong bladder took her bladder to the very limits. And muscles that have been that much taxed do not go back to their normal state. No, they remain strained for some time. Barbara decided to put more strain on her bladder by not relieving herself before going to bed. Well, that was a mistake. We see that her bladder is still weakend, because she was at her absolut limit. That makes the whole story much more believable and I enjoyed this development a lot.
  11. Wow, that is not the average story! I love it, you are doing great work here!
  12. Amazing! Awesome story and I am very curious how Barbaras plot will work. However, at the moment my mony is on Cath - even if Barbara manges to make her drink more, in the end I guess her bladder ist just too strong for Lilli or Barbara. Let's see how it continues
  13. Amazing story! I missed the first part, but read them all now. Great job, I love it :)
  14. Awesome second chapter! And do not feel stressed about how fast the next chapter will be done. Do not stress yourself and take your time - it is very important that the author is enjoying his work too :)
  15. Now I remember, this story was from you too - I enjoyed the weakest link a lot too. Your stories really are something special with a very interesting setup! Personally, I'd like this story to have more realistic numbers. The setup in this story is way more plausible, that's why more realistic numbers fit very well in this story IMO. And that you wrote the weakest link gives me very much hope that we will see more chapters There are several awesome stories on this board that started great but never finished
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