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wedgeantilles

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  1. Wow, great story! Why aren't there more replays?
  2. Great, that is an amazing first chapter! I am looking forward for the next one :)
  3. I am curious, will this story continue?
  4. I totally agree, this is a fantastic story!
  5. That was an interesting story, I liked it! Looking forward to part 2. Just one small thing: IMO she has been too desperate before she got hit with the stun dart again. She already leaked and I just can't imagine her not voiding her bladder when she got stunned again. If she would have been a little less desperate it would be more plausible that she doesn't loose control while being unconcious.
  6. That was another great story - I loved the ending. That was perfect - he has beaten her. But he realizes how much more the wins means to her and he let's her win. Beautiful :)
  7. That was an amazing story, I am so glad you brought this story back. Wasn't here last month and missed it!!!
  8. What an amazing new chapter! I read it yesterday evening but didn't comment then. High time I do this now I hope to see Jane humiliated, she is such an unlikable person (you did a great job of describing her!) and it would be great to see her devastated. Can't wait to learn how hard she will have to try to hold it longer - and still loose despite all the effort and pain she went through! *evil grin*
  9. Another nice chapter, however I noticed several grammar errors. If Enligsh isn't your native tongue then there isn't that much you can do against those errors I guess. However, it may be useful to read the text a second time (I'd suggest the next day) before posting it, there is a high chance you'll realize some of the errors. Obviously those errors aren't the end of the world and I did enjoy reading the story. Just a small piece af advice :)
  10. Wow, this is amazing! Fantastic story, I enjoy it a lot!
  11. That's a very interesting start, I am curious how it will develop. Will she really dare it? And if yes, will she rue it? Hopefully we will find out
  12. Wow, that was a fantastic story, thank you very much for posting it!!
  13. Fantastic story, a very interesting setup you have drafted here! I am really curious how it wil develop further
  14. Great new chapter, a very interesting idea with this race. I'd love to watch one of those :D
  15. Wow, a fantastic story. And the best? That there is a huge promise of another chapter! Thats's amazing :)
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