
YouCanCallMeCarl
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YouCanCallMeCarl got a reaction from Kyuu in The Wet Witch
I enjoyed the development role-reversal between the siblings as the story went on, and I think that seeing the older sister gradually lose her hold on her confidence as the supieror in their dynamic made her ultimate desperation all the more satisfying. With a little more character development, this could be a really great piece!