YouCanCallMeCarl

I enjoyed the development role-reversal between the siblings as the story went on, and I think that seeing the older sister gradually lose her hold on her confidence as the supieror in their dynamic made her ultimate desperation all the more satisfying. With a little more character development, this could be a really great piece!

Another good one :) I really like how you took time to set up the situation in this one, as well as the overall idea. I could see omorasi robots becoming a thing on here lol

Wow! I have no idea what you're talking about being not a great writer, this is some really awesome work and you should be proud! The robots is certainly...unique, but in a good way. Very interesting. I for one can't wait to see more from you :D