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YouCanCallMeCarl

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  1. I enjoyed the development role-reversal between the siblings as the story went on, and I think that seeing the older sister gradually lose her hold on her confidence as the supieror in their dynamic made her ultimate desperation all the more satisfying. With a little more character development, this could be a really great piece!
  2. Wow! I have no idea what you're talking about being not a great writer, this is some really awesome work and you should be proud! The robots is certainly...unique, but in a good way. Very interesting. I for one can't wait to see more from you :D
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