Imouto Bouquet

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    After School Accident

    Not bad for your first attempt at writing fiction. There are a couple of things which you could do to make it better though. 1. Paragraphing: At the moment, the entire story is condensed down into a single paragraph with absolutely no breaks anywhere. A wall of text can be off putting to some people, so it would be easier to read if you split it up into paragraphs. Each timeframe (explained in a bit) could have its own paragraph to give the story some semblance of an orderly flow. By 'Timeframe' I mean things like this: Before the Assignment, Doing the Assignment, Toilet Search after the assignment and the, finally, in the car with Cole and the closing segment. Splitting the story up like that would leave you with around four neat paragraphs that should be easier for people to read. 2. New Speaker, New Line: A common trap that writers who're just starting out tend to fall in to is trying to embed speech into their paragraphs rather than giving them their own lines. If two people are conversing and all the talk is on a single line, it creates a sort of mini search for punctuation to see where one person's line ends and the next person's begins. This often leads to not knowing who's saying what at what time. Every new speaker in the conversation deserves their own line, even if it's just two people talking. Treat story conversation as something like play scripts. If characters' lines are merged, then the 'actors' (the reader) wouldn't know who's saying what. Aside from those two points, there's just the standard punctuation errors that sometimes happen with writing. Oftentimes, it's better to get a second set of eyes to proofread a piece as well as we often read it as what we think it should be, which can often make us oblivious to the smallest things which an observant reader might pick up on. As far as I know, there was a small community of writers on this site who offered up their services for proofreading other people's works before the Author submitted them to the forum. I don't know if they're still around or not. If they're not, I'm sure there's bound to be some people in this community who wouldn't mind spending a few minutes reading over other people's works before they're submitted to make sure they're as good as they can be.
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    New Titles?

    The WoW nerd in me is silently mourning the loss of reputations like 'Revered' and 'Exalted', but the new ones do fit a little more into the theme of the Site. Apparently, I'm now a 'Hero of the Puddle', though I don't know which puddle I am the hero of. For the different member ranks and rough requirements, there's a rundown of them here in the second post to it. However, ranks like 'Contributory' and 'Respected' are at Mod/Admin discretion along with baseline rep and post requirements. Gold Membership status is only given to those who've donated to the site, I believe, and sits somewhere just below Contributory Status in how much of the site can be accessed. The most lucrative standing aside from the obvious Moderators is likely 'VIP'. You can only be upped to VIP by an Admin/Moderator and it's only saved for those who go above and beyond what Respected/Contributory members do and have pretty much become a supporting pillar of the community with their content. For any more concrete answers, we'll need the higher ups to chip in if they've got the time.
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    Faust's Interactive Stories 4

    4. If she's really as needy as she's making out, then she wouldn't object to it. We've still got stuff to do in here, so it's a decent compromise.
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    Faust's Interactive Stories 4

    Faustus. >:3 (Tiebreaker continues!)
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    Faust's Fateful Occurrences Interactive

    I take it suggestions can be submitted here? If that's the case, then here's a suggestion I have for the Story one: (TL;DR section) Take the "Faust's Finite Fantasy" world stuff (newbie adventuring party setting out to conquer dungeons and stuff), add in some 'Special fun' (Explained a little further down), and take out the Sariliain Influence things to reduce potential derailing by lewdness. Fuse it all together in the atypical 'Isekai' anime tropes and then give a healthy dosing of Faust's unique brand of multi-versing characters and we have the story I've got in mind! (Full section for those interested in the plot [story] and not 'plot' [lewdness]) Over the course of Faust's stories, I've noticed a lack of Kemonomimi characters (demi-humans with the ears and tails of animals, but the bodies and appearance of actual humans for those not in the know). While these would seem incredibly out of place in the real world stories like 'Another Note', 'Magical Academy' and 'MtG Interactive', an Alternate Fantasy World would be the perfect place for them. Fantasy worlds seem to be experiencing a whole new boom in the media industries so there's no lack of material to source from. In a bid to spread the influence of adorable Kemonomimi characters, I submit this story idea: As mentioned in the TL;DR section, this is an attempt to revive the 'Finite Fantasy' Interactive that Faust started last June but eventually was derailed and lost its story direction before proverbially trickling to a halt. The overall storyline is that our Character forms a party with other newbie adventurers and sets out into the open Fantasy World to make fame, fortune and glory, and maybe beat a Demon Lord/King/Whatever Big Baddie Faust comes up with if necessary. There'll be standard RPG classes which our MC can 'spec' in to, like Fighter, Magician, Cleric, Archer and all those other bread-and-butter Adventurer Classes in Games along with Fantasy Races including the Kemonomimi race that I mentioned earlier if Faust is comfortable writing those kinds of things. Sounds all straightforward now, but here's the twist! (Special Fun Explanation Below for Skim Readers) Instead of there being 'Mana', 'Magic Points' or other Aetherial resource that is used for casting spells and using abilities, instead, our characters will have to use their own bladder's contents to cast spells! If we go for a Magician type and want to cast powerful magic, then we'll need our Character to have a nearly full to bursting bladder to channel enough 'MPee' to cast such a thing. Naturally, this brings with it its own troubles for the Magic-casting Classes. Do they hold until bursting and risk an accident to cast powerful Magic, or will they pee now and hope that they don't face off with a Strong Monster? Such an embarrassing dilemma could lead to various fun situations. For those inclined for the...'messier' accidents, we could have the resource for using Physical Skills as being whatever Tummy need they are currently at. This would add a differentiation between the two damage types, with Magicians wetting themselves easier and Physical Fighters soiling themselves more frequently. If we want our MC to multi-class between both Physical and Magical damage, then they'd need to closely watch both needs otherwise be at risk of a 'Double Trouble' accident or being too weak to fight Strong Monsters. I'm not adverse to the 'Lusty' accidents, but I've found they're the things which mostly derail things as we end up being in two totally separate camps and adding tension between where to next take the story, along with seeking whatever lewd encounters we can while completely ignoring the overarching story. I'd prefer the lewdity to be at a bare minimum in this story so we can focus on actual progression rather than sticking it in any hole we find and hoping for the best. That's all for now.
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    Faust's Interactive Stories 4

    I shall be a boring person and suggest: Another Note, Faust, Normal Day. My thoughts being that we've too few things unlocked at present and, with any kind of unlock procedure, you start with the basics first and work up from there.
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    Faust's Fateful Occurrences Interactive

    Option 2 is a personal preference for me. However, due to the overwhelming number of votes for Option 3, I doubt it will win. Anyway, my vote sticks for Option 2.
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    Girls squatting to pee

    ? Not all squats to pee have to be controlled. Some may come as a natural response when all is lost to try and mitigate the damage which may be dealt to clothing. Now for a little bit of constructive advice: A common theme between the most recent four parts is that the character in question "never had a chance to go" beforehand. This may work for a couple of stories but it becomes predictable if overused. Some different things you could try to validate the pressing need for the toilet might be: 1. Super long line for the toilets (Overused as well, but a solid one) 2. Attempting to go but being pulled away at the last minute for whatever reason. If the character in question is naturally helpful, then they might forgo a visit when it's 'not that bad' if someone requests help with something. This may backfire to their detriment later. 3. Toilets are available but in horrible/poor condition. 4. Being too embarrassed to excuse themselves to the toilet. First time date with their crush? (Amusement Park, maybe). 5. Don't want to inconvenience others so opt to hold it until it gets really bad. You've got potential but it's just the case of fully unlocking it.
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    Girls squatting to pee

    Some random ideas for scenarios which may lead to the desired outcome: 1. Peeing into a stream/river. 2. At the beach/swimming pool. 3. At a natural hot spring 4. At an amusement park 5. During a Camping trip/School Field Trip 6. At a Live Outdoor Concert 7. By the roadside before/after a Day Trip Hopefully, these prompts for direction should help somewhat.
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    TVGuy Releasing a couple videos

    Echoing the above sentiments, if you really want the videos then it would be better to purchase them yourself and help support TVGuy's work further. Begging for videos to become free would likely have the opposite effect to what you want. I'm not well versed in the art of film-making in the slightest, but I'm positive that it's not exactly cheap to make the Videos he does. He's got cameras and video editing software to buy, a website to maintain and models to pay for their work. That's excluding any potential travelling and supplies costs. It's a living to him so it's totally understandable if he doesn't want to give his Premium content away for free.
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    Post a meme a day thread

    ^My reaction to the above. I'd love a Frostmourne replica so I can't believe that someone would use such a thing as a CUTTING KNIFE! That is the highest form of dishonour to such an awesome sword. It should be preserved in a display box and hung up for all to admire. (And I think I got a little off track there)
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    Tell us your best joke!

    Terrible pun coming through: In what race are urine-powered cars able to compete? The Piss-tonne cup! (Excuse me while I smash my face against the wall for making such a terrible joke.)
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    AuthorFaust's Omorashi-Fantasy Club

    *Chiwa's comment in regards to Miniskirts being easy to get off prompts me to look a little to the side as I imagine lewd scenarios.* "Um...yeah. Easy to get off for emergencies." I respond, my voice breaking slightly as I try to not reveal my lewd mind's wanderings. "Also, I guess skirts help for stealthily letting it flow without leaving too much of a trace on your person." *My own lewd thoughts cause me to admit the convenience of wetting in a skirt. Thankfully, my mind is set straight once more when Chiwa agrees with the hefty price tag.* "Want to go and try it on?" I offer to Chiwa as I start to head into the store. Chiwa's 'accidental' rump bump presses against me, causing a slight rise in the front of my jeans. Chiwa's blatant admittance to how her need is rising makes the bulge in my jeans turn to full on tent-pitching. "G-good to know." *Entering the clothing store reminds me that this is the first time I've ever been in one with a girl, so naturally I'm quite the prime target for further teasing, should Chiwa take notice of how I'm slightly blushing.* "I think it was around...here." *I gather up the hoodie and mini-skirt combo from the surplus on the racks and start on over to the changing rooms.* "Ah...I can go wait elsewhere if you'd rather me not be outside the changing rooms. I-I won't peek!" I nervously explain to Chiwa, the slight lie behind not peeking plain to those who might be paying close attention. "Unless you'd want me to peek." I quietly add on to the end.
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    Faust's Fateful Occurrences Interactive

    The only option I would consider would be 1. Juuni doesn't deserve the embarrassment which would come with a public accident, so the least we can do is try and prevent it being 'too' public by rushing her to the toilet.
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    Post A Ecchi Pic a Day thread

    Okay, hold on a moment while I write out another IOU for my immortal soul. The further decline to Evil Aligned has never looked so inviting.