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I think there is Barry, I for one would like it if you and Buggy went on with it.

Hi Piddly I'm glad that Charlotte is going to be part of the story, I half-hoped that she would be and the way you handled the conversation between them was just beautiful and so true to life. I sound like a total sycophant don't I; but that's just too bad because the way you've begun to build this story up is just amazing and I can't wait to read more.....

That was a brilliant chapter Barry. You wrote it so well that the reader could almost be an observer there and watching what was going on. A really first rate job.

I really enjoyed reading all those chapters Piddly! you really are making a good job of this; I think introducing Charlotte was a great move and I'm looking forward to seeing if she becomes a permanent character from now on or not. Thanks for telling me about the "other story" and I'm glad it's still safe. Any Idea when you 'll be able to post straight to the boards without being moderated first?

That was unbelievable!!!! Well done Buggy this story is simply getting better and better. I can't wait to see where you go from here....

Love this Barry it really is great stuff.

You're doing a great job with this Piddly. You've built up a good storyline and with the "non running bus" aspect a good sub-plot too! Like the others I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this, but I know from past stories you've written that there will be plenty of twists and turns

Great stuff Barry and Buggy. A really great start and I look forward to reading more.

Well planned and written as usual Piddly; I'm looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.

This is interesting Piddly and I'm wondering where you're going to take it. Surely not an accident at the bus stop?

Great stuff again Piddly. It's great to see both you and Barry producing wonderful stories again after what seems like a long hiatus!

Is there anything more to come with D&A Barry, or have you finished with that story now?

This is great stuff Piddly, I really am enjoying it very much.

Great ending to a great story Barry. looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Yes I'm enjoying it very much Piddly. It's nice to have you back writing on here again and at last you seem to have your writing mojo back once more. I'm still looking forward to seeing how you take this storyline forward.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this Piddly

Hi Piddly Sorry but I've only just found this topic that you've started and I have to say that I enjoyed everything that you wrote in the past. Suggesting a new idea into an active story is much easier than trying to suggest a topic for a new story; especially one based on the wetting theme, but how about one based on a couple getting together and finding out that they share similar interest? Age is irrelevant; it could be a couple in their late teens or even perhaps a pair of middle aged divorcees who meet through a dating agency. If you went along with the idea the age decision would have to be yours! One thing I do know is that whatever you do decide to write will be well worth reading! B.T.W. I tried to look on "your homework website" the other day to see if there had been any new updates, but the site appears to be gone; have you deleted it?

Terrific stuff Barry; well done.

Just loved those pictures of you doing it in your jeans Alice. It was also great that you allowed the top that you were wearing to get wet that time too! Wet tops Rock!!!

Just loved this Alice; you're a star!

As usual that was just wonderful Becca; so well written 🙂

That was just terrific Barry; This story just continues to get better and better!