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Manticore

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  1. Really very wholesome story, a happy surfer that begins to enjoy the waves running through her too! Thanks for writing and I hope to read more soon!
  2. Great throughout, and a good ending too, great performances from all four! They got really lucky towards the end of the trials there. I'm wondering what happens now with Laurence and their group being denied the last rune they needed. Will the evil superhuman carry on or give up on their plan to become an all powerful god? I would love a spin-off or a side story about Joy, the woman from the airplane and the airport with amazing control. She got in a cab at 99% and I can only imagine what she had to do to avoid losing it all the way to her destination. Thanks for writing and loo
  3. I'm surprised I missed this when it was first posted, excellent story! The physically 'holding it in' is really great.
  4. Great chapter once again. Loving the speed at which you put these out!
  5. Really good, I'm interested in the Leaders and the events of The Takeover as much as the stories themselves. Didn't see the vaporisation at the end coming at all either. Great stuff, and written at a great pace too, looking forward to more!
  6. Excellent chapter, Philippa's resolve and control through through a very difficult day were awesome to see. Monica on the other hand I think deserved most of what she got. Annabeth was a little mean towards the end, but she gave her multiple chances to escape her fate. Great descriptions of her mightily holding on until her physical limits were reached - multiple times! Very satisfying, great to read your writing again. Thank you and looking forward to more!
  7. Another great chapter! I think Monica and Philippa didn't take the opportunity to make themselves comfortable after the bus ride - hoping it might come back to haunt them. Philippa seemed sympathetic enough during the bus ride but it would be interesting to see Annabeth getting her boss out of an embarrassing accident (at Monica's expense!)
  8. Really really excellent story, the increasing abilities of all three characters through the three contests and descriptions of Sarah struggling on with all her effort in the vain hope of success were the stars of the story in my books. Feel a bit sorry for Sarah, but she did really walk into Marie's trap. Thank you for writing and hope you write more!
  9. Great scenario again! Hope Annabeth siphons a little (or a lot!) into unsympathetic Monica. Courtney's playing a likeable role in the story too, she's a brave one buying the rest of the passengers some time. Looking forward to more!
  10. This story is going excellent places. Never would have thought the orcs had such a uniquely endowed character for their chief. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
  11. Great alternate reality story. Would love to see Junko take part in a competition with Aoi. It could maybe involve the olympic swimming pool in hopes peak. I always thought Aoi was above average in all her physical abilities, bladder included. Lots of water plus Aoi's competitive swimming nature and I'm sure it could lead to a good forum post. I would also love to see Junko, the scheming evil woman that she is, get desperate and end up in one of the situations she's putting her classmates in. Thanks for writing, looking forward to more!
  12. I enjoyed Joy's role in the story a lot. Her being in control while holding in so much was the best part of the last chapter for me. Would love to see her or a character like her deal with being taken to that limit again. Really do wonder what how she plans on lasting through a cab ride when she's at 99% capacity before even setting off. Thanks for writing and definitely looking forward to more!
  13. Great chapter! It's interesting that the rune fills her even while she's going, looking forward to more
  14. Really great, the scenario improves the longer she holds on. Loved the partial relief too! Looking forward to the next part
  15. Really excellent, the so full they're leaking scenario is superb and I hope you write some more. Plus the choose-your-own path/outfit is an extra-hot addition, really makes the end of the read something special
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