Manticore

This flew under my radar, really good and I'd like to see more in this genre!

Incredibly hot and concise! Thank you for writing

Beautifully written, even a short interim story was worth the wait. Sorry to hear about the hard drive failure, I can imagine even thinking about going back and rewriting a large portion of the story must be daunting. I would love to read more from you even if it were a different story altogether.

A superb story, it really does bring about the feeling of an old fairy tale. Reminds me of some of those old, hardcover picture books in a very nice way - thank you for writing!

Loved the story, the descriptions were great thoughout and premise of the story is simple, wholesome and hot. Thanks for writing!

Great story even when passed through Google translator. Thanks for writing!

A great story, with very hot prolonged desperation throughout that has a very plausible reason. Does this fantasy setting and its characters have its roots in another piece of fiction? I wasn't able to find descriptions of the character's physical appearances in the story, but then again a healthy imagination is enough to fill in the blanks. Thanks for writing and I hope to read more!

Excellent story! I love how you blend the desperation into the events of the beginning of the game in a very realistic way. Would love to read more like this, thanks for writing

That's a unique one, and quite funny too, thanks for sharing

This is a lovingly crafted story, more fantasy prose than erotic fiction. The writing flows so naturally I didn't realise I was coming to the end of the chapter. Really looking forward to more!

Superb continuation from the interactive story, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Excellent story, all three managing to wait until the very end and let loose was a great climax to the scenario. Thanks for writing!

Excellent story, love a long scenario and glad to hear there will be more!

Would love to see the conclusion to this some day. Great story with a character whose motivations lead to guaranteed enjoyment.

Really well written, straight into the hot part of the story. Great stuff and I hope you write more!