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Manticore

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  1. I enjoyed Joy's role in the story a lot. Her being in control while holding in so much was the best part of the last chapter for me. Would love to see her or a character like her deal with being taken to that limit again. Really do wonder what how she plans on lasting through a cab ride when she's at 99% capacity before even setting off. Thanks for writing and definitely looking forward to more!
  2. Great chapter! It's interesting that the rune fills her even while she's going, looking forward to more
  3. Really great, the scenario improves the longer she holds on. Loved the partial relief too! Looking forward to the next part
  4. Really excellent, the so full they're leaking scenario is superb and I hope you write some more. Plus the choose-your-own path/outfit is an extra-hot addition, really makes the end of the read something special
  5. She's still on twitter @youromofantasy, there's been a couple great videos from her on there
  6. Each chapter better than the last! I really enjoyed the group dynamic, plus the addition of the dean's motives in the between-chapter scenes really sells the idea of this university being a place where this really could happen. Personally would have loved to have seen Eloise last a little longer, or possibly gone into more detail of her holds over the (relatively) short time she did hold in the chapters, but that's a non-issue when her holds are accompanied by the superb struggles of strength displayed by the rest of Iron House. Thanks so much for writing and definitely looking forwa
  7. Amazing as always, thanks for writing! Loved that it was both of them holding on all the way
  8. Great continuation, the two alchemists get together really well and I do hope we see a few large-bladdered reasons why Orla cleans a lot of stains... Looking forward to more!
  9. Great story and final payoff! Would love to see more, maybe with a longer holding buildup?
  10. Great conclusion! I enjoyed all the characters getting what they deserved, good or bad. You've done a great job capturing the setting and desperation of the original RP and I would love to see more if you write it
  11. Great end, loved the workaround for Cliara. Thanks for writing!
  12. Glad you're making progress! We'll be waiting to hear more
  13. The story only gets better with a re-read! I hope you do find the time and motivation for part 2, I for one would love to see Loren hold until she just can't anymore
  14. Hot story, and cute couple. Thanks for writing!
  15. Really good, please keep writing! Jessica seems like she knows her capacity and enjoys using it fully I hope she and our protagonist go on more, longer dates and discover that they are into similar holding habits. An unsaid implied holding challenge, long trip to the wilderness, extra long car ride - the possibilities are endless
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