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  1. Got a copy of Ultra Moon a while back i wanna run through. Not gonna lie, kinda wanna do a mild/mini interactive of Pokemon....
    Though, before any of that, I'd need to know which starter is best from that generation.

    Rowlett, Popplio, or Litten.

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    2. Lisk

      Definitely Litten. Also, Alola is when to Pokemon franchise peaked

  2. Man, I have got to shut the fuck up about other fictions i glance over.
    Also, if anyone wants to see me be bad at bloodborne for 2 hours, i have a video up on my youtube now, lmao

  3. Chapter 2 of Wet Note: Re-Run is out. Check it out, why don't ya?

     

  4. Chapter 2: Encounter. '.....No good. I can't sleep..' The thoughts of the day were still rushing through Shu's mind as he futilely laid about in his bed. The strange notebook, Noel's insistence on using it, and well.... 'I can't believe that it actually...' he thought to himself again, recalling the glamorous view of Noel's dire release, and how flustered it kept making him. He hadn't exactly thought about the scenario as particularly exciting, but seeing the girl in a vulnerable, compromised state, making such illicit noises... ..... Shu kicked his feet over the bed, and picked the black notebook on his bedside, flipping it open once again, and looking over the rules. "Maybe some bureaucracy will put me to sleep.." he muttered to himself, glancing over what he'd already read. "Writing names...PIcturing...Hour cooldown..Twelve hour limit...Twice a day....Age of consent.." His eyes rest on the last one he'd remembered glancing over in class, mentioning some kind of 'Omogami' and their eyes. He lightly glanced over the words below it, before flipping to the third page, and glancing over it. [GamiEyes Deal: A human can make a deal with the owner of said notebook in order to borrow the eyes of a God. These eyes may reveal a great amount of information on others, such as names, ages, bodily limits, or have other effects. However, it is up to the God in question to decide on the price they take, and the benefits the human may receive. So long as the deal is agreed on without duress, a human may be granted outstanding powers, so long as they retain possession of the notebook.] Another medley of thoughts raced through his head, pondering what he'd read. The deities themselves, the prices... The effects....And.. "Possession, hm..?" he muttered, glancing over the book. "I wonder what that entails.." He glanced over the book, and then up at his ceiling, knowing that Noel was likely fast asleep as he read over the book, then glanced at the clock next to him. "Twelve hours, Hm..?" he murmured to himself, as he considered writing her name in the notebook again for a few scant moments, before shaking his head. "It just feels kind of...weird when I know the girl.." he grumbled, setting the book back on his nightstand. "If it's some other girl, I don't mind, but knowing her....." He doubted she would mind too terribly much, so long as he didn't write anything too weird, given the way she was so eager to be a test subject.... But, something tugged at his conscience not to abuse that friendship. "I'll figure something out tomorrow.." he grumbled, rolling over in bed. "Even if it's just burning this stupid book..." Eventually, he drifted off into a quiet, dreamless slumber... Forgetting all about the day for at least a few hours.... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Shuuuu! Shuuuuuu! C'mon, get up!" The familiar call of his friend, and a few annoying, loud knocks. Yep. It was a new day after all. "Nnngh.. Just a minute, Noel." Shu called back half-heartedly, as he got up and got ready for classes, tugging the black notebook into his bag once more as he started to the door. "Rise and shine, Sleeping beauty." Noel's voice greeted him before the door even opened. "I Hope you weren't too busy thinking about yesterday to sleep." Shu grumbled a response that vaguely resembled words, before noticing Noel's outfit for the day. A blue hoodie in the fashion of a shark, with a splash of blue in her silvery hair. As he glanced down, he saw a pair of very short blue shorts peeking under the hoodie (Which had the design of a mouth on it, now that he actually looked at it), as his gaze shifted back to her. "New cosplay?" he asked, as she puffed out her chest pridefully. "Yepyep. Gawr." She answered, making a gesture like she was going to grab him. "Gonna eat you up if you don't stop being such a meanie today." "Cool." Shu brushed off, walking past the girl with his bag slung over his shoulder. "Let's get going then." "Oh come on!" Noel piped up. "You could at least pretend to be scared!" The walk to the bus was filled with the usual sort of back and forth banter, Shu shooting down Noel's various quips and candid remarks, before they eventually gravitated towards schoolwork, and then idle musings of little importance. As the two got onto their communal bus, however.... "W..Wait..! H..Hold up!" an unfamiliar voice cried out just as Shu and Noel took their seat, prompting him to glance out the window to try to catch a glimpse of whoever was chasing them down. "Woah, She must be new..." Noel mused, peering over his shoulder, compromising his focus as her hands rested on his legs. "Didn't think anyone else was on this route.." Soon enough, the unfamiliar voice could be heard at the front of the bus, apologizing profusely. "I was supposed to take off already. Try not to be late in the future, okay? I won't stop for you next time." "Yeah, thank you for waiting. I'm sorry. So sorry. It won't happen again." the unfamiliar voice called. "I just...kinda sorta forgot to get somethin', and I took forever to find it, and before I knew it, I was running late, so I sprinted, and tried to catch up as best I could, yeah?" Shu could see the bus driver's gaze drifting downward a bit, before turning back to the road with a grunt, and a gesture over the shoulder. As the person climbed the few steps onto the bus, Shu could immediately tell what the driver was staring at. "Damn..." It was a girl, with dark green hair and deep blue eyes, donned in a school-uniform-esque blue vest, with a teal shirt underneath it, coupled with a knee length skirt. Though, he couldn't really focus on the bottom half of her outfit when... "Shu, stop staring at her!" Noel quickly jabbed him in the elbow. "I know they're... well, big, but you're being rude." Shu flinched, clutching where he'd been hit, but then quickly tore his eyes away from the mystery girl, who'd taken a seat midway through the bus. He hadn't really thought about it before, but.... 'Who is that...' he pondered quietly as Noel's gaze was locked on.... Before snapping a gaze at him. "Seriously, you're such a pig." She pouted, as she elbowed him in the side. "Haven't seen you blank out that bad since you walked in on me at the pool that time.." "Sh..shut up.." Shu murmured as he glanced down at his feet, stealing glances up for the rest of the bus ride. The girl's dark green hair was tied in a low ponytail, and she held her things in her lap, legs adorned with long, black socks. Something about the girl seemed.... special, but he couldn't put his finger on it, before... "Alright, Everyone off! We're here!" the driver's voice called, snapping Shu out of his trance as Noel stood up. "C'mon, let's go." Noel grumbled, grabbing Shu's arm and starting to tug at him. Despite her obvious annoyance, Shu couldn't help but gawk as the green haired girl made her way out of her seat, and off the bus again... 'Dammit, why did we have to sit so far away...' he thought to himself as they moved along with the crowd, hopping off and onto campus. "Seriously, you were drooling the whole way here." Noel snapped, upgrading to slugging the boy in the shoulder. "You act like you've never seen a girl before." "I...I wasn't drooling.." Shu defended weakly as he glanced around for the mystery girl... To no avail. He let out a soft sigh, as Noel started ahead of him. "Don't worry Romeo, you'll get to see your Juliet again." She quipped. "But, we really should just head on to classes. You don't want to make Mister Harada mad twice in one week, do you?" "Huh? N..No, of course not." Shu murmured, thinking back to the mild humiliation of being called out for not paying attention in class the day before. "Ah, and there's that form I gotta fill out this year with Miss... Asahi?" "Ah? Oh! RIGHT!" Noel suddenly called, snapping out of her tepid attitude. "You gotta talk with her about your scholarship and such, don't you?" "Ugh....Yeah.." It was always an annoying topic, every time he thought of it. Going to the teachers about the scholarship that kept him going to the school, his minimum GPA to maintain it, his grandparent's name.... All things he never particularly felt strongly for. "Don't worry, Miss Asahi's an expert at this." Noel assured, patting his (Sore) shoulder reassuringly. "She's a bit intense sometimes, but she does good work. It'll be in and out! Painless!" "Yeah...I hope so." He'd been through more than enough headaches year after year with teachers and the like... Giving him the usual lecture, the pressure to apply himself, yada yada... "Do you know where I can find her, Noel?" "Well, I heard she's always in the faculty office.." Noel remarked. "Doing the secretary work, proctor work, that sort of thing. If you go now, you might make it in time for History." "Right... Alright, I'm going." he grumbled, trudging through the halls. "See you in class, Noel." The silver haired, shark-hooded girl waved him off as he made his way through the winding halls of the university, coming up to the annoyingly familiar faculty office. Before he could knock on the door however.... "Come in, Michiru." A commanding voice, prompting him to obey quickly. Twisting the knob, he opened the door to the room, spying a single figure sitting behind a desk, and typing away on a computer. "Um... Miss Asahi?" he inquired, as the woman pointed in front of her, not moving from her spot. He awkwardly started into the room, glancing around for others as the silence loomed over them. "Um...I don't believe we've met..." "I work part time here." Miss Asahi remarked, flatly. "I've been at the University as a student, but I started working here as well. So, Scholarship work, yeah?" "Uhhhh, yeah.." he added, peering around to look at the woman, who had dark hair and an all-too-serious expression, meeting his gaze around the desk with strong eye contact, and a glare that could fell a lesser man. "Papers are here." She snapped, gesturing at a pile on a corner of her desk. "Sign at the parts marked X. I've already got your grades, and you're still qualified. Don't make me do any extra paperwork, okay?" Shu gave a slight nod as he picked up the documents, and glanced about for a pen for a scant few seconds, before being handed one by the all-too-serious worker. "Um...Thanks.." he added, starting to scrawl at the Xs, as he looked over Miss Asahi's desk. Miss Asahi had a few small decorations, including a figure of some pale-looking guy in a nice suit, along with a heavily-worn notebook she was scrawling things he couldn't make out without getting closer, and a nameplate that said [K. Asahi.]. He thought he could see a small trophy, or award of some kind, but a sharp glare from her quickly diverted his gaze back to the business at hand. Busying himself back at the papers, he finished signing them in silence, before handing them back to her in as organized a pile as he could muster. "Good. That'll be it." she stated, prompting a slight eyebrow raise from the boy. "Uh, that's it?" he asked, as she made a waving gesture with her hands. "Yeah. Get out. I'm busy." she snapped. "I've got what I need, and you're good another year. Or do you want me to have to read off all of these details and waste both of our times?" "Ah, no... No, I'm good." he remarked, before starting to the door and leaving in a rush. Something about Miss Asahi was...unsettling when he thought about it. Was it because she was both a student, and working for the university she attended? She couldn't have been much older than him, (If at all), but she was attending classes, on top of all the busywork of a teacher, and god knows what else? He could barely keep up with his own studies, much less with a part time job on top of it.... "Guess some people have drive.." he murmured to himself, as he started to head towards class... Pang... "Ah...Well, might as well.." he murmured, doubling back and heading towards the bathrooms in spite of being well past the due time to be in classes. After all, if he was gonna get chewed out anyways, so why not go in with no pressure nagging at him? "Hnnn....." As he felt the surprising surge of sensation spray out of him at the stall, his mind went back to the black notebook he held in his bag, and illicit thoughts filled his mind again... 'You know.... If that book really works..' he thought to himself, shivering slightly. 'If I can find out that new girl's name...' He could feel his heart starting to race a bit at the thought, having control over someone with such a generous figure... Coupled with the same sort of situation that Noel had endured the previous day...Or even in a lesser state of dress.... 'She even lives near us, so I could probably...' he thought to himself, before finishing up and putting himself away. 'No...I should just worry about classes for now. Horn it up later, Shu.' Washing his hands, and heading to class, Shu endured the usual grumbles of Harada as he mentioned the magical S word that silenced the teacher's grumbles (This time, at least), and moved to take his seat. "Anyways, if you could turn to page 23..." Harada's voice called out, prompting Shu to grab his history book and crack it open, resigning himself to a boring day of class again... "Ummm...My book hasn't arrived yet.." the mysterious girl's voice called out suddenly, prompting Shu to glance to the seat next to him, filled in with her figure... Ample breasts, low ponytail, narrow waist.... "Michiru, share with one of our new students here." the teacher commanded, prompting Shu to gulp awkwardly, and nod his head. "Y..Yeah.. yeah, sure.." he called, as the green haired girl moved closer to him, brushing some hair behind her ears. "Sorry, sorry. I ordered them, but they're not coming in until tomorrow.." she apologized, quietly. "Thanks for letting me use your book, Michiru." "N..No problem, uh.." he started, as the girl gave a slight chuckle. "Oh, right. You weren't here for our introductions.." she mused, slightly. "Just.. Don't make fun of my name, okay? I'm aware that it's-" Shu had stopped listening once another sensation came over him... The scent of strawberries, strongly coming off of the girl's body....Wafting in from her hair, and clothing alike. Between awkward staring, murmured repeating of Harada's words, and seemingly being lost in just the plain company of such a mysteriously enchanting girl, it was difficult enough for Shu to even breathe in the presence of the new girl, until.... RRRRRRRRRRRRRINNNNNNNNGRRRRRRRINGGRRRRRRRRRING It was startling as the bell rang, snapping Shu out of his trance once again as the green haired girl stood up, and started out quickly, bowing towards the brown haired boy politely, before turning around. "I'll see you later, Michiru!" she called, waving as Shu tried (and Failed) to stop staring at her ass, quickly approached by his silver haired friend who had a small smirk on her face. "You seem happy, Shu." Noel teased, prompting him to finally flush red as he realized what he'd been doing for the past hour: Not paying attention at all. "Sh..She.. She smells nice." he murmured, averting his gaze from the door the girl had left out of, as Noel poked his side. "You're such a perv, Shu." Noel teased. "I bet you're thinking of all the things you want those breasts to do to you, or how cute she looks when she's just absolutely dying like I was yesterday." "....Well, Now I am." Shu confessed quietly, as Noel shook her head. "You're hopeless." She added. "That other girl's really nice too though. Both way out of your league though." "Wait, other girl?" Shu blinked, turning to look at Noel again. "What other girl? There's another new girl?" "Ugh, You one-track dumbass." Noel chided. "It was her and Gasai. Word's going around that those two are a thing, you know? So, I wouldn't get yourself too excited over her. I hear she exclusively bats for the other team, if you know what I mean..." "Gasai...?" Shu murmured, as Noel grabbed his arm. "You'll get a chance to see her later, I'm sure." Noel rattled offhandedly. "I mean, if you can pry your eyes off of her. Unfortunate about her name though. Gasai told me not to tease her about it, so you'd better not have made fun of it either." "I...Erm.. I would never.." Shu muttered, gazing about nervously as he faintly recalled the girl introducing herself.. But, he hadn't made out the words she said, having been too focused on her... Other assets. "I'm serious, Shu!" Noel snapped, as she drug the boy along. "It's not that weird to meet a girl named Faustus!" ... "Faustus, eh?" The notebook felt heavier in his bag than all of his college books combined at this, as his heart pounded and part of his body started to heat up anew. 'I think I found my next test subject...' ==============================================================================
  5. I mean it all from a place of love. I want to see you improve, and really write some amazing things to really knock my socks off. Writing can be a hard thing to do sometimes, and it takes a lot of work, but I've got no doubt you can improve, and make it loads better! I'll be around to read the whole way, hopefully, and maybe one day we can even do a collab or something. Just keep at it! Do your best, and all that.
  6. Here I am, after my repeated Site Hiatuses, back on my bullshit again. Let's see if I can get a few more chapters out this time around, instead of just one or two, lmao. ============================================================ "Hm? A notebook...?" Something that had seemed so mundane, so regular, so everyday on campus had caught the attention of one of the students, a boy with curled, almost wavy brown hair. Though a dropped book here or there didn't usually garner much interest, what was different about this one was the location... "Who tosses their books in the school fountain?" He grumbled to himself, bending over the stone reservoir and fishing it out with two fingers pinching the bottom corner of the book. "I mean, littering is straight up not coo- That's weird." The boy turned the book over in his hand as he settled it into his other hand, cracking it open to peer inside. In spite of being submerged in knee-deep waters not even ten seconds prior, the book was startlingly, strangely dry and deprived of even the faintest hints of moisture. The brown haired boy flipped through the pages that fluttered with ease, not even a single one marred or struck by even a drop of residual water. Though the majority of the pages were blank, as he came to the front of the notebook, there were a few pages with several things written in them... "Shu! C'mon, we're going to be late!" Another voice, belonging to a girl with shimmering silver hair called out to the boy, who quickly closed the book, and tucked it under his arm. "Ah, right. I'm coming!" he responded, starting into the building without giving much thought to the strange book. Shu, (Mashuda Michiru) was a second year at Megamino University, who always felt like he barely qualified as a student. Through a lucky drawing of applications, coupled with a few whispers from one of his grandparents with connections, he'd been accepted into a decently prestigious university. However, as much as he enjoyed the 'Challenging Enviorment' his grandparents had pushed him into (It ranked just behind the feeling of wet socks), he couldn't help but try to at least pass, if not excel at his studies. In fact, he didn't see many reasons to work hard in schools... "C'mon Shu! I've been waiting up here for ages!" Though, the shining, smiling face of his insistent classmate was definitely one of them. She was a few inches shorter than him, coming up to his chin (If she stood on her tiptoes), and had long hair that changed colors (and shampoos) every other week or so. This week, it was a brilliant silvery-blue. "Sorry Noel." he apologized, rubbing the back of his head. "Didn't get my morning fix of Caffeine." "Oh, I've got an extra can of Cola from the vending machine." Noel responded, digging into her bag, and pulling out a red can. "You want it?" "Eh... Sure." Shu murmured, reaching up to grab the can, as Noel pulled it back, as if holding it out of his reach. "Only if you ask me nicely." She replied. "Say 'May I have your extra cola, Please?'" "On second thought, I'm good." "Ah! Don't be mean, Shu!" The brown haired boy chuckled softly as the silverette pouted up at him, prompting him to give her an easy smile. "Alright... May i have your extra cola, please, Miss...Who are you today?" Shu added, as the girl lightly twirled... In a grey blazer, with a deep blue skirt that went down over her knees. "Oh, today's outfit is Anna Nishikinomiya!" Noel mused, running her hands through her hair. "The show she's from is a bit... Well, um, do you like it?" "I think it's cute." Shu remarked lightly, looking the girl over once more. "Though, I don't know where you get the money for all of these cosplays." "That's...a girl's secret." Noel remarked, giving a small gesture with her finger over her lips. "Now come on... Drink your cola, and let's get to class." "Alright, thanks again Miss Nishishimiya." he added, cracking the can held out to him with a finger, and tilting it back. "It's Nishikinomiya! You need to listen better!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------- It wasn't until about an hour into a history lecture that Shu could not honestly care less about, that he remembered the strange book he'd found in the school fountain. Thumbing through his bag, and being in the far corner of the classroom, Shu felt it was (Probably) safe enough to dig it out for a closer look, opening it to the front pages once more, and starting to glance at it, in lieu of listening to another lecture about ancient civilizations... [Wet Note: Rules and Stipulations] He raised an eyebrow at the title, wondering what it meant by that, as he kept glancing downward, his fingers twirling his pen as he glanced over. [Rule 1: The person whose name is written in a wet note will involuntarily Empty Their bladder.] 'Ah.. This must be like that one show Noel was talking about..' he thought, remembering the blonde cosplay she wore, with a bunch of leather. [Rule 2: A person must be pictured as their name is written, or the note will not take effect. This is to prevent unaffiliated people from being stricken with undesired fates] 'Makes sense..' he thought, continuing his reading. [Rule 3: If a person's name is written down again within an hour of being affected by a Wet Note, all incidents written within the hour-cooldown in a Wet Note are voided.] 'Well, I imagine the body would have to have time to recover..' he thought to himself, scrawling in small circles on the edge of the paper. [Rule 4: When writing a person's name, one can specify specific occurrences that will unfold during the process of voiding their bladder (Within a two minute time frame of finishing the written's name). So long as the written occurrences are possible, they shall occur. Should the occurrences be impossible, through physical or environmental factors surrounding the written, the written will simply void their bladder after forty seconds.] 'Well shoot, there goes breaking the laws of physics.' he jokingly bemoaned internally, as he kept reading.. [Rule 5: Specified occurrences may only be dictated for a time period of up to twelve hours after the name is written. (And cease upon the voiding of the bladder). This is to ensure the written cannot be controlled for excessive periods of time without being able to relive themselves, and horribly endanger their bodily processes.] '...You know, I never did know how long someone could hold it.' he thought to himself, as he glanced down at the last few rules in turn. [Rule 6: A person cannot be affected by a Wet Note more than Twice in a single 24 hour span. In the event of a person's name being written multiple times in that period, only the first one written will take effect] [Rule 7: A person must be of the legal ages of consent to be affected by the Wet Note] [Rule 8: Those who are in possession of a Wet Note cannot have their names revealed by the eyes of an Omogami* [See: Gami-eyes deal on page 3 for furthe det- "Michiru! Who was the world's most successful pirate in history?" the teacher's voice called out, prompting Shu to shut the strange book, and look attentive for a few seconds. "Uh, Monkey The Luff-something?" he remarked, prompting a fit of laughter from the other students. "Wha-No!" the teacher snapped. "Seriously, I know you're not interested in history, but can you at least pretend to care when I'm up here pouring my heart out?" "Yeah, sorry.." he mumbled, sliding the book down into his bag as he settled into class... Still barely listening, as his mind scattered over the weird book.. 'Wet Note, hm?' --------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Man, Mister Harada was really on your ass today, Shu." Noel's voice called, leaning forward on a table. "What were you doing that pissed him off so much?" "I was just reading.." Shu started, quietly. "Some book i picked up earlier today.." "Is it a good one?" Noel added, prompting the boy to pause for a few moments.. On one hand, that kind of thing just screamed 'Deep Dark Secret', but on the other hand... "Well.. It kind of reminded me of that one show you were talking about... The one where you were the blonde, leather girl?" "Blonde leather...?" Noel paused and pondered, as Shu just leaned over, and pulled out the black notebook. "Oh! You mean Des-Ah!" "Someone tossed it in the fountain." Shu flatly remarked, opening the book. "Though, it doesn't seem to be meant for killing people. It's more..." Noel grasped the book and tugged it over to her, eyes skimming over. "It's a... 'Wet Note'?" she read out, tilting her head. "Weird... I've never heard of that. And, you said it was in the fountain?" "Yeah, but it's really.." "Dry?" She added, letting the pages flutter. "Yeah... You sure this is the same book?" "Of course it is. Why would I lie?" he snapped, as the girl glanced over it once more. "Do you think it works?" She asked, as Shu leaned forward in his seat. "Obviously not. It's probably some other cosplayer's prop." he added, glancing it over from the outside. "I mean, why else would it just be left behind like that?" "Well, we could always..." "....Always what?" Shu asked, furrowing his brow, as Noel glanced over the book, and then up at him. "We could...Test it out. See if it works.." she remarked, prompting a lunge from Shu who snatched the book out of her hands with his longer reach. "You aren't writing my name in this thing." he snapped venomously, as the silverette pouted. "Awww, but I wanna know if it works." She whined. "At least write my name in there! I gotta know!" "You gotta know, or you gotta go?" he remarked flatly, as he glanced over it. "Besides, are we really going to know if it works just from a little writing? How do I know you won't just pretend it works, just to mess with me?" "Ah, when have I ever?" Noel remarked indignantly, prompting Shu to narrow his eyes. "There was the time you faked drinking poison at Halloween.." he started, quietly. "And there was the time made me dress up as that one guy with a weird mole that 'Totally attracted girls', and there was the time you pretended to be hypnotized..." "Well, if you didn't ask me to flash my tits, I would have kept playing along." she poked back. "But noooo. You just had to make it weird." "Puberty's a BITCH." Shu snapped back, glancing over the book. "Anyways, unless you can assure me that you won't just start peeing to pretend it works, I'm not writing in it." "Do you really think I'd start peeing, out here in the open, where the world could see me?" Noel asked, earning a long...long silence. .... "Rude." she muttered, averting her gaze as Shu glanced over once more, reading the rules about specifying things. "Well... If you go pee right now, then I suppose, it's fine." he remarked. "You can't force out more after you go... Assuming you really do go, of course." "Ah..Do you think I'd fake going to the bathroom?" She snapped, prompting another look from Shu. "....I wouldn't! Seriously wasn't thinking about it." There was another silence, before Noel stood up. "Alright, I'm going, I'm going. You can follow me if you don't believe me." she added. "But, i didn't know you were so interested in this kind of thing, Shu." The brown haired boy blushed deeply at this, and averted his gaze. "I..I'm not... It's just...weird, you know?" he added, as Noel leaned forward and poked his side. "Try not to think about me letting it alllllll flow out in the commode." She teased, grinning. "Just wiggling my panties down, looking all vulnerable and needy, before just letting out a sigh of 'Ahhhhhhhhhhhh', relief.." "Just go pee, Dork!" Shu snapped back at Noel, who giggled as she started off, moving to the bathroom. He waited until the girl was out of sight, before picking up the book once more, and clicked out his pen. "Alright...if I'm going to be sure, I've got to be specific.." he thought to himself, running some thoughts through his head, as he lightly put pen to paper.... Thinking of the currently-silver haired girl... A few minutes later, he clasped the book shut, as Noel came hopping back, posing lightly. "Alright, I'm pee-free." She mused. "Why don't you try writing my name in that book and think of me, Big boy?" "Don't call me that." Shu added, as he opened the book once more, and clicked out the pen. "Alright.. Noel Everette. Still two T's, right?" "Yeah yeah!" Noel mused. "Now, it's only forty seconds and we'll know, right?" "S'what it says.." Shu murmured, as he leaned back, prompting an almost heart-pounding wait, as the girl stood steady, moving her hips back and forth.... Wiggling, and waiting... ... ....... Though, after what felt like forty minutes (but was more like Five), she slumped back on the chair, and sighed. "Well, that's a bummer." she called, grumbling. "I was hoping for some Note shenanigans." "Yeah, well that's what happens when you buy into that supernatural crap." He added, pulling the page with her name out, and wadding it up. "Anyways, we've got Gym class next, right?" He tossed the ball into a nearby can, which swished in without resistance. "Yeah, yeah.." Noel grumbled. "Maybe if you were specific about it it'll.." "Noel, c'mon. We've got class." Shu remarked, being the one to drag her along this time as the warning bell started to ring out. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- A few hours of rigorous exercise later, Shu was waiting outside the classroom for Noel, still wearing a loose shirt with red shorts. "She's running late.." he mumbled to himself, before the silver haired girl came rushing out, wearing matching red shorts with a white t-shirt. "Sorry, sorry!" Noel apologized profusely, leaning over. "I was just trying to get a drink after all that running, and the cap just popped off! It spilled all over my cosplay, so I just have to head home in this!" "You're so clumsy." Shu mused with a small chuckle, as Noel lightly punched him in the side. "Don't be mean." She protested. "C'mon, let's get on the bus." The two paced side-by-side, complaining about other students, talking about upcoming tests, and even of the constantly shifting weather as they waited on the bus home, Shu leaning back as Noel turned. "And I mean, It's cold one day, warm the next! It's so hard to dress right when..." Shu could almost make out a slight flinch from the silverette as she cut herself off, but the beeping of the approaching bus put a stop to any further thoughts on that, as the two got on, (Shu doing his best to not take advantage of the few moments Noel was a few steps above him for his own benefit,) As they settled in near the back of the bus. "Anyways, it's a real shame about that book." Noel remarked, bringing the topic back to it. "Imagine what you would do with that kind of power! It's basically like mind control, but with peeing added to it. You could be like a God! Make people do whatever you want!" "Within reason." Shu murmured lightly. "I doubt you could really get away with doing too life-changing with that. Not unless you knew the right people to manipulate." "Oh, but you could be rich and famous!" Noel added. "Like, you could make an agency sign you on as an actor, and just get any job you want! Maybe you'd end up becoming a rising hit out nowhere, Like Koz-Mo! You could even make people go out, and buy tickets to ensure your movie was a success!" "That sounds like a lot of work." Shu remarked, flatly. "Who has the time to write that much, by hand, these days?" "Well, it's just an idea anyways." Noel added, lightly crossing her legs over one another. "I mean, it'd take someone really smart to pull that off... Much less, to keep it up. And you can't really convince the world you're all that great without some actual talent." "Well, wouldn't work for me anyways then." Shu added deprecatingly. "I'd basically just be using it to get cute girls and such to do things I'd want. Stay low, and off the grid, ya'know?" "Perv." Noel poked back, lightly nudging him again as they continued to ride on the bus, uneventfully. However, a stop before theirs, Shu could see Noel starting to bounce her leg a bit more urgently, resting her bag in her lap. Seeing his chance, he leaned towards the girl, and dropped his voice to a whisper. "You okay?" he asked, as the girl shifted uncomfortably. "Well... I mean.." she murmured quietly. "I um...didn't get to pee after class. Since I spilled my drink on my outfit, I tried to dry it out... And you know what kind of looks you get if you're dragging your feet in the locker room.." Shu felt his heart skipping a beat at this, but he tried to fight the expression on his face, as he glanced over his watch. "We'll be home in like, fifteen minutes. It'll be fine." he assured the girl, who bit her lip lightly and nodded. "Yeah... It'll be fine." Though, before they could get to their stop, the bus skidded to a halt a few blocks down the way, prompting the two to lurch forward as the brakes were slammed. "Ah..? What's happening?" Shu asked the bus driver, who grumbled and stepped out of the bus. "...Damn. Looks like we got a flat." he grumbled, prompting Noel's eyes to go wide, and her knees to bounce a bit more urgently. "D..Do you know how long it'll be?" she asked, as the driver grumbled. "About Half an hour, if we're lucky.." he murmured, prompting the girl to go pale as a sheet, as she tugged at Shu's arm. "We...we can walk the rest of the way, right?" she asked... Nay, demanded, as Shu felt his chest tighten, and his heart race... "Y..yeah, we can.." he remarked quietly, leaning over the seat. "We're gonna walk from here, okay?" "Yeah whatever.." the driver grumbled some more, as Shu and Noel left the bus, starting down the sidewalk with a renewed sense of urgency. It was decidedly harder for Shu to ignore Noel's squirming and shifting with every few dozen paces or so, along with her hands dipping down to her red shorts with some reassuring presses... "Ohhhhh... It's really bad..." She mumbled, flushing lightly. "I've really gotta go, Shu.." "We're almost at the stop, Noel. Then, it's just a few blocks to the complex..." "I..I know! B-but.." Noel murmured, flushing deeper as they kept walking.....Before freezing up at the stop. "Noel?" Shu asked, as the girl's face shook wildly, and she started to sprint. "Ahhhhnnn... A little came out..!" she whined, scurrying. "G..Gotta hurry..!" Shu's long stride easily kept up even with his silver haired companion's frantic scurries, watching as she wiggled and shifted with every step. He couldn't keep himself fully from staring as the girl's bottom tensed with every few feet of frantic dashing.... Clearly telling of the trouble behind tensed muscles.... They'd scuttled about for another ten minutes or so, before the large complex finally came into view, prompting a quick smile, quickly replaced by a gasp of panic. "Ah..Ahhhhhhh..!!! We're so close..!" Noel whimpered, now fully bent forward and holding herself openly. "P..Please..PLEASE, hold on a little longer...!" Shu followed along with his heart pounding, and his mind racing. Watching his friend in distress was definitely doing a number on him in some fashion, though as the two made it to the building, he felt a lump rise in his throat as the girl froze on the base of the staircase. "I...I'm not gonna make it up there.." She croaked out, glancing over her shoulder. "S..Shu, I need you.." "Sure, let me get the do-" he started, as the girl shook her head. "No! I need you to stand guard for me!" she borderline-yelled, hobbling around, and under the staircase. "I..I can't... Ahhhhnnn.." The brown haired boy watched as the back of Noel's red shorts started to darken considerably as she staggered, wiggling and shaking wildly, before hands dipped down to the material of her shorts... yanking them down and over her firm-looking bottom, before kneeling into a half-covered squat.. "Haaaaaaaah..Haaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhnnnnn..!" And with her groans, an absolutely deafening hiss of pent-up pressure, ringing out for Shu to only hear.. Ssssssshhsssssshhhhhhsssshhhsssshhhssshshhhh And, after a few scant seconds, to see, as the puddle spread out from beneath her bottom, pooling and spreading from edge to edge of the walkway, as she knelt half-concealed behind the staircase... Only her bottom, and growing stream visible to the brown haired boy that was to be standing watch... Staring blankly, as the girl let out a few groans, whimpers, and shivers. "O..Ohhhnn.. Ohhhhnnnn...Ohhhh..I..Is anyone coming?" she asked meekly, prompting Shu to snap out of his trance. "Ah...No, No, it's fine.." he called, lightly turning his head. "You're in the clear, Noel!" "A..Are you staring?" She asked, prompting the boy to flush deep red. "No!" he said a little too forcefully, as Noel's hands went over her bottom, as if attempting to conceal it. "D..Don't stare! Perv." She protested softly, still gushing away for another dozen seconds or so, before the noise started to die down, and she tugged up her shorts...Hobbling back around the corner. "Ahhhnn... Ohhh.. That was too close.." she grumbled. "I nearly full on wet myself..." "Looks like you still did.." Shu added, pointing down at her damp shorts, prompting her to hit him in the side once more. "Don't gawk so much, Perv." She grumbled, flushing. "Anyways, thanks for watching out for me. Try not to be too loud when you're thinking about my butt later, okay?" "Tch...Like I would.." Shu grumbled shyly as the girl started up the stairs again, prompting him to stare at the wet patch on her butt for a few extra seconds, grateful once again for the existence of elevation. As he heard the room above him shutting, Noel's apartment, he went into his own with a quick twist of a key and a slightly upward shove of the door (It liked to stick), he quickly dug the weird book out of his bag once again, and thumbed it open to the last page. "Noel Everette. Feels the need to pee on the bus ride home. Due to some unexpected delays, she finds herself unable to hold it the whole way home, and has to pee under the staircase of Marash Apartment building 5, at 4:57 PM, pulling her shorts down to do so." He glanced over his phone once more, just in time to see the time tick over to five o'clock. Given the sheer mass of her puddle, plus the required time teasing and getting back into privacy.... He could be at least remotely sure that the notebook was, in fact, the real deal. "I might have to test it again, just to be sure.." he mumbled, before tossing his other things down. "But what to do..." ======================================================== [Wet Note: Re-Run, Chapter 1, End]
  7. The idea is plenty exciting, but the presentation could use some work. It's rough, but I'm sure you could make it into something great. You have it written kind of like a script right now, but you've only halfway committed to that style. I feel like you should pick one direction or the other, and stick with it. Also, there's one tiny little problem: Anyone who doesn't know Genshin Impact doesn't quite get the image of 'Yoimiya' or 'Lumine.' It's pretty customary to give a tiny descriptor when starting a story, at least to give the audience a mental image to work with, when it comes to the characters you use. Of course, when you go into a part 2, you don't need to do it as much, until someone else comes in. It may feel a bit harsh, but it is, as it stands, kind of bad. That doesn't mean it can't be improved. If you want to stick with a script style, then it'd be better to segment out actions, and dialogue, so the reader can read it easier, without having to typewriter their heads mid-sentence. If you want to branch it out, story style, then doing dialogue is done in a different way, so that you can identify who is talking, without having to tag their name in front of it, every time. Some punctuation can help break up the sentences so they don't read at an exhausting pace, and the words used could be a touch more consistent. (Though, if you're not good with words, I can see the trouble or confusion, especially if you're writing english as an outsider). Admittedly, reading this (ashamedly), makes me want to kind of re-write / Re-do it, in a fashion that would make it a touch more palatable for others to read: If not outright make more to the kind of series itself. But, given you're the one who pushed this idea forward, I'm not going to do as such, unless i have your explicit permission. At the very least, I won't be writing the girls here, unless I'm told by you to do as such/permitted. My apologies for coming out of nowhere, and just kind of dunking on your writing that you worked on. I want to see your abilities grow, and I feel being a little honest might help out. Though, above all, first and foremost, get well soon. I don't know what got your health down, but being sick or injured is no fun. Recover first, debate/discuss writing stuff afterwards, perhaps.
  8. Man, i really need to learn to take a chill pill.
    When i read some stuff on here, I just plain explode with mad, and  have to contain myself, so i don't end up writing up paragraphs of how to 'Fix' things.
    (Fix in this case, being my own perspective and not others).

     

  9. Ay, Don't forget to credit artist of this! If you're going to post it, at least have the decency to tag their twitter! It's a work done by https://twitter.com/polapolabianda They worked very hard on this, and credit should be given where credit is due!
  10. Part 2 of the Wet Suit Challenge is up!

    Remember: Do not actually do the wet suit challenge, unless you want to be relentlessly mocked by me, and absolve me of any and all involvement, deviants.

     

  11. [The Wet Suit Challenge, Part 2] "Ame, what are we going to do?" the blonde pleaded with her friend. "If we can't go in there without someone seeing, but we can't finish the video without a pool...." "Minnie, I think you've got more important things to worry about than a damn pool!" Amelia snapped back at her friend. "You're going to be caught with... Well, with a very telling mark on that suit if you stand around, OR if you go in there." "Awawaaaaa.... What do we do...?" Minnie whimpered, flushing a bright pink as her friend's hand held her head. 'Stupid Minnie, never thinking these things through...' Amelia internally groused. 'I should just let her stew in this.... But, the thought of some creep ogling her... Eugh...' There was a deafening silence over the two girls, as Minnie's gaze kept shuffling left and right, looking out for anyone who would arrive. Her feet still graced the puddle of her own creation gingerly, prompting a steady flush to her face, before Amelia turned to her foolhardy friend. "Alright, I have an idea." She called. "There's a public pool out in town a few blocks away..." "Ah? But what if my suit dries out before we get there?" Minnie inquired. 'There's gotta be something closer, so.." "Minnie, are you really that focused on your stupid Tren-Door challenge?" Amelia snapped, earning another long silence. "...Oh my God, you're hopeless..." "W..Well, I mean.." the blonde nervously stammered, poking her fingers together. "I...I already peed my suit... It feels like such a waste to quit now.." "I....ugh...Whatever.." Amelia groaned, not entirely for the matter of her friend's focus on a stupid internet trend. Truthfully, Amelia felt more than a soft pang of trouble brewing down below, but if there was one thing more important to her than bodily urges, it was helping her oh-so-stupid friend out. Though, as she started to wrack her brain... "It doesn't... have to be a pool, right?" "Ah?" Minnie sounded, as she tilted her head. "I...erm...I don't... think so...Lemme check." The blonde reach for her phone, having tucked it away in her bikini top, prompting a flat look from Amelia. "You were going to short out your phone if we'd gone in, were you?" she quipped, as Minnie bopped her friend's side. "Ah, shaddup." she quipped back. "I wasn't gonna leave my phone in your room. I didn't forget to drop it off..." Amelia doubted the integrity of that statement, as Minnie's phone called out. 'Get your swimsuit wet....' Ssssshhh...Ssssssshhhh. 'And the hard part...is to get to a body of water, without anyone knowing you peed! A pool, a lake, You cou-' "Okay, now that we confirmed that..' Amelia cut off the video, feeling her legs tense up some more as the nagging sensation pounded away at her. "There's a fountain at the front entrance of the college. You could jump into that, couldn't you?" "Ame, you're a Genius!" Minnie mused, leaping over to hug her friend, who backed away from her hurriedly. "Ah, no hugs while you're in peed clothes, thank you!" she rebuffed. "Let's just get over there, and get this over with already!" Minnie pouted, but gave a small nod of understanding as she started to walk with her friend... Whose pace had been staggered more than a little, prompting her to actually move ahead. "You know Ame, you...are wearing a swimsuit too." Minnie started, earning her a small, but vicious glare from her friend. "Astute observation..." She bit back a bit more venomously than usual, as the blonde flanked her other side. "And i mean.. We're about to get to a fountain...." She added, the glare darkening some more. "Do not.." "I mean, it wouldn't be a big deal if..." "Minnie, i swear...." "You just.... you know....." "Minnie..." "Participated in the challenge with me." "MINNIE." Amelia snapped, stopping in place. "I told you a hundred thousand times. I'm not into these Trendor......Bullshit..Challenges.." "But Ameeeee!" Minnie remarked. "I don't even mean the challenges! You're all shaking, and tensing. I'm just saying, you look like you really need to go anyways, and..." "I'm....Fine..." Amelia snapped, one of her legs crossing over the other. "I'm not like you, I can.... Hold it, until this is over... And go to the bathroom." "But it would be so much easier to...." Minnie started, as Amelia turned away. "If you ask me one more time, you're not getting your video." she demanded, moving as if she was about to ditch her friend. Minnie quickly shifted gears, moving in front of her friend once more. "Okayokayokay, I won't ask!" she remarked. "Just... please don't leave! We've come so far...!" That was an understatement. She'd been at this stupid challenge thing for... what felt like a few hours, as she kept along the path with her friend, moving closer to their destination.... Stopping every few feet to keep herself in control, as she tried to busy her mind with other things. The upcoming midterms in Calculus, the Bio lab project they'd no doubt be getting in a few days....How unbearably hot it was getting lately.... All various distractions, before Minnie called out. "Ah..! There it is!" She piped up, snapping her concentration. "The fountain! Ame, get your Camera ready!" Amelia breathed a tensed sigh of relief, as the end goal was in sight. The fountain was some decoration from long before the two were even born, much less since they started attending college. It looked to be about fifteen feet high, with water that very easily, came up to one's knees (Or thighs on some of the smaller students) The water gushed upwards a few feet extra, at a steady and regular rhythm, splashing about merrily.. Pang....pang.. A noise and thought process that made Amelia bend at the knees, as she reach down for her camera. "So.. Just gotta grab a quick video of you..." she started, pausing as her knees knocked. "Hopping in... yeah?" "Yeah! That'll do it!" Minnie called. "Oh, though you might need to stand back to get a good shot!" Amelia gave a tensed nod, and pulled out her camera, looking up to record her friend, still seeing the dampness on the back of her swimsuit... And more than a few drips still trailing down her thighs. Ksssshshssshsssshsshsshsh The sounds of the fountain were almost unbearable for Amelia, as she struggled to keep the camera steady, and Minnie turned around. "Is it rolling?" she asked, as Amelia finally let her free hand snake down to apply some much needed pressure. "Yeah... Yeah, Go!" she called out, as the blonde stared at the fountain for a few scant moments... And then a few more.... And more... and more... Amelia's legs quivered, as she started to sneer. "Minnie! It's ready..!" She called out impatiently, as the girl lightly rubbed her head. "Um... do you think I'll get in trouble if I.." she started, as Amelia's hand clasped over her own face. "MINNIE, GET IN THE DAMN WATER!' She snapped, before feeling it.. Sssssh... A small sputter of warmth, marring her dry, dark suit. It wasn't a sizable leak, by any stretch... But, it was a leak nevertheless... Which meant warning bells were now going off in her head, as she struggled to keep the camera steady. 'As soon as we get this footage, I am.......' she thought, as her hand shot back to her crotch, applying much needed pressure. 'DONE helping with these stupid..challenges..' What was more upsetting however, was rather than getting it over with a hop, skip, and a jump, Minnie was taking her time stepping over, her foot touching the water for an instant, before quickly jerking back out. "Ahhhh..!!! It's cold..!!!!" she snapped out, as Amelia swore sharply under her breath. "Minnie, Get in the fucking water before I piss my pants." She snapped out way too loudly, as the blonde turned, and chuckled nervously. "Ahaha... Ri..right, Right. Lemme just.." She called, reaching her foot over again.... Flinching as it touched the water, before slowly sinking in. "Hurry up..!" Amelia snarled, as the blonde's body shivered wildly. "It's like...really cold..!" she protested. "I just....Ah...Wait, right!" Amelia groaned even louder as she squeezed herself, the blonde pulling her phone out of her bikini top again, and setting it on the side of the fountain. The raven haired girl could feel her body starting to protest all of these delays, coupled with the auditory torture that was the fountain, before finally Minnie got her other foot into the water (with another soft Yelp), and then sank down into a squat. "Aaahaahaaahh.... It's so cold..." She griped.... "Bu...b...But...Th..that should be it, R..r..right..?" Amelia swore in relief as she started to set the camera down, finally glad to be done with this stupid challenge....Before.. "Oh wow, good idea!" "How come we didn't think about that?" "The pool's so crowded..." Voices. LOTS of voices suddenly rang out, as the raven haired girl looked to the side, seeing a few students all gazing in Minnie's direction. Several students, swimsuit clad and not, had taken notice of Minnie's temporary residence, and as if the fates themselves were conspiring against Amelia, all started to rush the fountain... All clamoring about the heat. "Oh wow, it really IS cold!" "You're a genius, Minerva!" "Oh hey, is that Amelia over there recording?" "This'll make a great yearbook shot!" "Make sure to get my good side..!" The raven haired girl seriously considered renouncing all religions, and thoughts of destiny, as she sat the camera down (To avoid the now rampant splashing of the crowds) and moved over to gather her foolhardy accomplice.". "Minnie, we need to get out of here now." she whispered under her breath to the blonde, who was flushed a bright red amidst the untimely crowd. "Ahaha..y..Y..Yeah..." she remarked. "Oh, don't be like that Ame!" "Come on, join in!" A few errant splashes were flung her way, and as the absolutely freezing water made contact with her skin... Sssssh...Sssssssssssshhhh.. It began. What was a small leak started to quickly progress to a steady sputtering spray of pent-up, vividly warm dampness, trickling through her suit, and down her thighs. The black haired girl flushed brightly, gripping her sides from the sheer chill of water, as her knees knocked and buckled from the sudden, serious spray of shame through her. "Fountain party?! That's awesome! Count me in!" "Hey, I thought we were gonna study after this!" "I didn't bring my suit..!" More voices...More people. Though she stood on the opposite side of the college entrance, more people could be heard joining in, splashing, and squabbling. Though she was standing in a steady growing puddle of warm shame, and freezing waters, Amelia couldn't bear to move a muscle... 'This was stupid....I shouldn't have done this' Lingering thoughts, as the path to a proverbial salvation was blocked off by a veritable herd of people, crowding the entrance (And Fountain, too). One steady enough look, one sharp turn in the right direction, one twist, one slight fumble downward, and someone would notice her folly... The waters of her own personal fountain, rather than the artificial one. 'I shouldn't have let myself get egged on like this..' If she hadn't gone along with her foolish friend's request for a stupid challenge, she wouldn't be in danger of complete social devastation... If someone glanced over, or walked by and looked a little more closely, they'd notice that she wasn't... Bwwwwooooooshhhh.. A massive splash suddenly soaked the girl from head to toe, as Minnie threw her whole figure into upending a massive bout of water, causing nothing short of a full body shudder of shock.. "G..G..G..Gah..!!! FUCK, that's cold..!" Amelia snapped out loudly, Sssssshhhhh...ssssshhhh...sssshh.. As her body's steady trickles were the only thing keeping any semblance of warmth in her. Her face burned with shame still, as Minnie then climbed over the fountain once again, and took her friend's shoulder. "Sorry, Sorry..." she called, giving a telling wink to her friend "Couldn't resist...splashing you, you know!" Amelia cut Minnie a glare, but a small smile kept to her lips.... Thankful for the out, but also still very eager to get out of there. "We've got a um..Project.." she called to the crowd of unaware students, moving over. "So, I'm just gonna grab my camera, and get going." "Awwww, alright." "Thanks for the Idea!" "Eh Tu, Minnie?" "Yeah, s..sorry! We've got a lot of work to do!" the blonde remarked with a forced smile. "Maybe next time!" Amelia scooped her camera off of the ground, and started to head off with Minnie, heading back to her door room with only a few passing gazes from their soaking wet, swimsuit clad figures. "This was still a stupid fucking idea.." Amelia chided her friend, as Minnie chuckled nervously. "Yeah.. S..sorry about all of that." she apologized again. "I'll make it up to you, I promise!" "You'd better.." Amelia grumbled, as the two were almost dry enough by the time they reach their dorms, Amelia leading Minnie back up to her room. "So, think you can send me the footage tonight?" Minnie asked, as Amelia plugged her camera up to her laptop. "Yeah, I'll send it to your phone right now.." she started, clicking away. "Then, you can do whatever you need to for your stupid little Tren-Door, and..." "Thank you.." Minnie called, before patting at herself. "....Um...Erm.. one problem with that." Amelia rolled her eyes, and looked at her friend. "What's the problem now?" she added, as the girl pressed her fingers together. "I..erm... I might have left my phone... outside.." She called, nervously. "Can you send it to my email instead? Tren-Door has a site i can do vids to, too!" "Ugh, you're actually killing me, Minnie." Amelia snapped. "I already sent it to your phone and..." "Butbut, If I don't find it, I can't upload it in time, and I..." "FINE....But this is the last thing." She snapped. "You're buying me so many lunches for this whole stupid favor." "Ehehehe.... Thanks.." Minnie added. "And... Erm...If you could edit the video too.." "I hate you sometimes, you know that?" Amelia responded, as Minnie pounced closer, squeezing her tightly in a hug and kissing her cheek. "Love you too, Ame!" she called. "I'm going to head back now! You're the best there ever was!" Amelia sighed deeply as the blonde started off, and she started to run through the footage. She didn't know why, or how she kept getting talked into doing more work, but she always had a soft spot for her. "Well, time to get to work..." She grumbled, as she started to go through the footage. Simple enough work. Some preliminary bits with Minnie walking, desperate.... The incident of her piddling herself, and then of course, the stepping into the fountain (Cutting out the bits where Minnie kept hesitating), and it would be a video. She left in the parts of others joining in as well, intending to wrap the video there.... Before seeing that her camera had kept running after she sat it down, showing off her own... approach of the blonde, the excess of liquid passing through her own swimsuit, and the girl covering up her... incident with some splashes of water. Amelia's face burned with shame, remembering the accident, and how close she came to social disaster, but as she cut the footage of her own involvement (And the evidence of her own shameful spraying), she breathed a sigh of relief. "Never falling for those stupid challenges of her site again.." she muttered to herself as she added a few finishing touches, and sent the video to Minnie's email, along with a message. 'Hey, when you find your phone, delete the video I sent, delete it, okay?' A few minutes passed, before Amelia heard the ping of a message back from her friend. 'Kk~ tysm Ame! ❤️ ' Amelia let out another, drawn out sigh, before closing her computer, going about her nightly routine, and laying down to bed. "Hopefully, class won't suck too hard tomorrow..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Amidst talking about the results of midterms with her friend a few days later, Amelia finally brought the conversation back around to her friend's hobby. "How'd that challenge thing go for you?" she asked, as Minnie grinned ear to ear. "Oh, it was a hit on Tren-Door!" Minnie mused. "After I got my phone back, I checked up on the video during the midterm. Ten thousand hits! Mari-Star's gonna announce the winner of her challenge today!" A ding rang out from her phone, and Minnie perked up. "Ah, there it is! C'mon, let's watch!" she called, tapping the video. 'Hey everyone, It's Mari-star with the results of my Wet suit challenge!' The redhead's voice called out, looking chipper as before. 'We had quite a few challengers this time, but one of them stood head and shoulders above the others!' Minnie seemed to practically vibrate in her seat, as Amelia pretended to pay attention. 'This spicy vixen was very nearly a late entry, but when you see the video, you'll understand why she's the winner.' Minnie gave a goofy smile, as Amelia mentally chided the thought of Minnie ever being a 'Spicy Vixen'... "More like, spacey.." she quipped as Minnie elbowed her sharply, as they kept watching. 'This college girl sure knows how to get wet, and get out with style..' Mari-Star kept calling. 'And with such a close call, such boldness had to be rewarded, you know?' Amelia raised an eyebrow, getting a sudden sinking feeling in her gut, as the video continued. 'So, with over a hundred thousand views, everyone check out our winner! A bold, tanned, temptress, whose exhibitionism knows no bounds, and whose lust for danger almost matches her viewers!" "No..." Amelia muttered, before the footage of her shaming right next to the fountain of classfolk, concealed only by Minnie's 'Accidental' splashing was then displayed on the feed, prompting that sinking feeling to magnify. 'Links in the description below, so you can see the video yourself! Remember to like, comment, and..' "Minnie, i told you to delete that footage!" Amelia snapped at her friend, who had gone pale as a ghost, and whose face looked just as shocked. "Am...Ame? I thought you didn't..Do these challenges..." she stammered, prompting a glare... Met with confusion. "...D..Didn't you get my message to delete it?" she added, as Minnie nodded. "Yeah, I trashed it as soon as I got my phone back." she called. "Honest! Ms. Kim told me someone had turned it in the other day, and the battery was nearly dead." "Don't you lock your phone?!" Amelia snapped, as Minnie cowered a bit. "Y..Yeah, of course I do..!" She stated, nervously. "And... I would never.... After all you do..." Amelia glared at her friend for a few scant minutes, before glancing down at the link in the video, to the video's source. A few moments passed as the app loaded... Changing to an unfamiliar screenname. 'HeartilyOmorashi' .... 'That's not your screenname, is it..?" Amelia asked her friend sternly, as Minnie shook her head. "No..! No, it's not.." she snapped. "Someone must have.... But... Who..." The two girls puzzled this for what felt like a very, very long while, before Amelia's eyes glanced down to the view count, prompting her eyes to go wide. "...T...Two freaking Million?! What?!" she snapped, as Minnie's eyes also widened in shock. "Two...M...M..Million.." Ba-bump... That meant that that video had been seen two million times. Amelia didn't know how many of those were actual people, or just repeat spammers, but the thought of so many people, seeing her in such a compromised position... Ba-bump... Something about it scared her... But also.... Excited her? 'Pl..please, body... Don't tell me I'm excited by this..' she thought to herself incredulously, as her cheeks reddened up, and her face heated up. No... She wasn't into.. that kind of thing... ... W...Was she? =====================================================================================
  12. You're very welcome. Now i have some incredibly urgent matter to attend to, and I'm glad to have been a part of this. UNTIL NEXT TIME, ORGISTS! MAYBE THEN YOU'LL BEST ME IN THIS TRIAL BY WATER!
  13. Were i a lesser being, that would have ended me. Luckily, I am unfazed by the digital sounds of liquids filling a well. All the same, I'm hitting my time limit, and I'm ready to just bolt off, as soon as I hit those last few minutes, and that bright red button. Which will be in like, two minutes. Maybe three. I'll take my W and run with it.
  14. That is actually diabolical, though thankfully the well holds no power over me! In spite of me playing Gacha, and as such, relying on luck for a lot of things, good fortune ala well-wishing is not as necessary. Either way, time is ticking down, and I don't plan on losing it this close to the buzzer. Gotta keep focus. Gotta concentrate.
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