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  1. luckymon2

    Eaks-2: A Man's Needs

    Yay I'm glad, and right now I don't have any suggestions but if I think of anything I'll make sure to let you know :)
  2. luckymon2

    Eaks-2: A Man's Needs

    Mickey you’re a freaking omo genius. If you haven’t been able to tell from my previous comments, I genuinely believe the Eaks story as a whole is one of the best omo stories I’ve ever read, if not THE best. From the concept of Eaks to your execution of it to the intensity of the desperation for both genders (I think that’s one thing I never mentioned in my past comments, I loved how in a world focused on male desperation you still had intense female desperation as well), and to just all the little things you did. Each chapter was really special and hot in their own ways. I really can’t praise you enough on this one Mickey, the amount of times this story turned me on to the max have been countless and incredible lol and I don’t plan to stop revisiting the chapters just cuz you’re done with them ;). I definitely wouldn't be opposed to an epilogue or more stories in this universe 😈. Can’t wait for your future stories!
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    Eaks-2: A Man's Needs

    I'm not usually too into teasing but you did a good job with it. Her teasing allowed him to be super open about his need and got them talking about it a lot which I really enjoyed. I also liked how she went from teasing to being sympathetic once his need got really really bad. I liked how even though she was being sympathetic she kept encouraging him that he'd make it because he always does and pretty much I just love the world's implication that guys can always wait. All the call-outs of the pee inequality of the world and how intense the desperation was was perfect. Overall I loved the long build-up (long build-ups are amazing when done right and I always love how you do it) but I especially loved the whole ending part. We already knew what was coming with Zoya so just the anticipation of it was great. And then Di knowing that he had to pee worse and feeling bad about it but still popping a squat was really hot. She was a good girlfriend though and offered to stand guard so that was realistic and as I mentioned I'm glad her teasing wasn't too over-the-top and cruel. Pretty much like you said, I just love the mouth-watering injustice of it all so much. The whole ending part was just amazing. Him watching it all go down and them all popping squats making his need worse and him wishing he didn't have a penis and had a skirt so he could pop a squat were the best lol. And the girls last peed before he did too and now they get to go again while he still has to hold it that is so hot. Oh and this is a random detail but I really liked "Hers was nowhere near as full as Jordan's, but she was far less accustomed to having to wait for relief", just the acknowledgment of how she/girls never really have to wait for relief really turned me on too. Also hearing what's going on inside the bus while the women are peeing outside sounds like a hot idea to me, but at the same time you do whatever feels natural and best for the story. I'm sure you'd appreciate some constructive criticism too but I genuinely am just loving this story that much. So far this is some of the best omo I've ever read. You're already one of my favorite writers on the site but me loving your writing skills and the usual omo kinks you write about combined with this story hitting my personal omo preferences perfectly have made these chapters incredible. And tbh not many stories and writers do it for me because not many omo writers capture my kinks in stories that good, and because of that I usually only stick to like 8 writers on this site, but none of them are really active right now except you so I'm super grateful! Keep up the great work : )
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    Eaks-2: A Man's Needs

    Once again, so insanely hot! I loved how since boys bathroom lines are so long and time consuming that guys actually have be conscious of their bathroom visit schedules and that Jordan waited until he was practically pissing himself to break the seal. And omg I loved how he didn't get to take his final piss because of the girls rushing the guys, yet the girls got to take a final piss without even worrying what the guys need. That kind of stuff really gets me lol, so so freaking hot. I love this world, can't wait for the next part!
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    Eaks-1: The perils of penny pinching

    I already commented on this story but I loved it so much that I think it deserves a more proper comment. This story and universe is just so hot where do I even start lol. I personally love toilet inequality in stories, and while I enjoy it when it's the guys who gets to pee outside and the girls can't, this story is just such a refreshing change of pace since the script is being flipped for once. I think since the scenario is so rare and doesn't exist in real life that makes the concept of this story even hotter but you also just executed the story perfectly for a first entry to the universe. I agree that stories don't always need long buildups to be good and you proved that perfectly. For this kind of world, being trapped in a bus when intense desperation due to nonstop beer drinking is an excellent setup. Them coming from a beer festival is just such a great setup for quick but intense and urgent desperation so I loved that you used that (and it especially works for a shorter story). Also, the way you described the desperation in this story was just so on point and urgent and intense and perfect for me. Parts like "Damn. She wasn't sure if she could last half that time!" and "Nothing except taking a massive piss would soothe it" and "all that piss inside her? It will come out soon. With or without her consent" and "Ah, there, that was better. But an hour was too far" and "Her toes curled inward in an effort to hold back the flood" were all so unbelievably hot. That was just to name a few parts of your intense descriptions that I loved but there were so many more, it would just be too many to write lol. This is getting long and I don't want to take up too much space on this forum so I'll try to wrap up my other points quickly. The main character being shy and trying to play it off until someone else helped her get relief was a nice touch. I also loved how some of the girls were openly holding themselves and then how Zoya couldn't hold on long enough to get to the back of the bus so she popped a squat earlier than she wanted to. And just the way you described all the girls being in a situations that normally the guys would be in was very well executed. Also the reason as to why guys usually can't pee in public was a realistic one. This story was amazing with just the implications that the men would have to hold it so a male sequel or another story in this universe would be even so much hotter I imagine. So yea, basically I thought it was a very well-written and perfectly executed story. Sorry for the super long comment btw I just thought this story was a really special one and wanted to let you know some of the reasons I thought why.
  6. luckymon2

    Eaks-1: The perils of penny pinching

    So happy you've finally posted again! Your stories are some of the best on the site so I always click instantly whenever I see you've posted. Loved this story, the concept of Eaks is super hot. I personally would love a male sequel.
  7. luckymon2

    Hissing urine

    That ratio though lmao
  8. luckymon2

    Karen's Karma

    This story was so insanely hot, I knew after reading the first chapter that this had the potential of being a classic and you did not disappoint. I love your writing style so much and your stories always seem to include all the things I'm into. There are very few writers on this site that write stories on exactly what I'm into but you are definitely one of them. I love double desperation that has intense desperation and I also love long stories with long buildups and you kill it. It would take forever to hit every point but pretty much every omo theme you did in this story is right up my alley. Oh and I also love how active you are right now! Most of my favorite writers aren't that active at the moment so it's awesome you're doing what you're doing. I hope this encourages you to keep writing stories because you're one of the best on the site in my eyes.
  9. luckymon2

    Karen's Karma

    Such a good start and damn dude the tease of the ending was so damn hot! I’m really excited for this one and I’m actually glad it’s a multi-part story because imo the long ones with a proper set up usually have the best pay-offs. Thank you for getting extra creative with some of your stories in order to appeal to your fans and their wants as well, really awesome of you ?
  10. luckymon2

    How old are you?

    I'm 21
  11. luckymon2

    Brave New World

    Guy: Bladder size: Small. Shyness: Shy Girl: Bladder size: Average. Shyness: Not shy. They're friends but interested in each other. The girl doesn't pee before she leaves. Maybe she tries to pee before she leaves but her roommate is in the bathroom showering. Bladder at 60%. The guy wakes up late and rushes so he doesn't have time to pee before he leaves. Bladder at 60%. The girl orders coffee and orange juice with her food while the guy just orders coffee with his food.
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    Favourite desperation scenario?

    I also love when the situation is flipped as well! Although female desperation is my favorite, I really enjoy male desperation when there is a female involved in the story (an example being like the concept you said where the situation is flipped) and I especially love when one character gets to relieve themselves and the other character keeps waiting so I would definitely enjoy that.
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    AskThread - Accepting fiction requests

    I really like when two characters both have to pee. For an idea maybe two characters at a house party together (either two girls or a boy and a girl, maybe they're friends or dating) and they both put off peeing for way too long and then there's a queue or any type of delays and when they finally can pee they both go inside the bathroom together and one has to wait while the other is peeing loudly. It's a pretty simple idea lol but if you do take this story idea you can change the setting or get creative with it, I'm not picky I just find really like double desperation and one person finding relief before the other.
  14. luckymon2

    More uncomfortable decisions

    Super hot! Thanks for staying so committed with the whole series I loved it : ) I look forward to your future projects!