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luckymel

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  1. I couldn't pick just 5, but here are the ones I narrowed it down to. The William Abbott stories were from Shara and Ger's old website so that's why they don't have a link. Eaks-1: the perils of penny pinching and Eaks-2: A Man's Needs by @Mickey Abby's business conference by @pguy69 Millie's night out from hell by @pguy69 The Margarets Might or Might Not Make It by William Abbott Dancing and Prancing and Jumping Around by William Abbott Desperate Girlfriend from State to State by @Harwoodd Interrupted Peeing by @Gemmy Bored At Work (male
  2. I love how they casually talk about peeing. Great job with this so far.
  3. I'm loving this story so much so far, can't wait for the rest!
  4. The story was hot as hell as always pguy. Great stuff.
  5. Any chance of you picking this story up again some day?
  6. Super hot story! The majority of stories on this site don't do it for me as I'm pretty picky with what what I like in stories and I'm also picky with authors' writing styles but this was great. I'm looking forward to your future stories if you choose to write more!
  7. My eyes lit up when I saw you posted. You write desperation, subtle teasing, and bathroom inequality so damn well. I loved how you wrote the hypothetical petrol station scenario. Also, tbh I wasn't sure if I was going to be the biggest fan of Troy now knowing about Lauren's game but you handled it well. Them texting and discussing how they would react in hypothetical scenarios was really hot. I also liked how Lauren coincided her irl need with her hypothetical need. Another great addition to your super hot catalog of stories.
  8. I'm loving this story so far! I also love the cliffhanger this chapter ended on I can't wait for the rest.
  9. This story is amazing so far and the premise is super hot! Both the scenario and the way you executed it so far are right up my alley, I'm absolutely loving it. You're also a really good writer and I'm enjoying how the story is taking place in an interesting world. I can't wait for the future parts : )
  10. Yay I'm glad, and right now I don't have any suggestions but if I think of anything I'll make sure to let you know :)
  11. Mickey you’re a freaking omo genius. If you haven’t been able to tell from my previous comments, I genuinely believe the Eaks story as a whole is one of the best omo stories I’ve ever read, if not THE best. From the concept of Eaks to your execution of it to the intensity of the desperation for both genders (I think that’s one thing I never mentioned in my past comments, I loved how in a world focused on male desperation you still had intense female desperation as well), and to just all the little things you did. Each chapter was really special and hot in their own ways. I really can’t praise
  12. I'm not usually too into teasing but you did a good job with it. Her teasing allowed him to be super open about his need and got them talking about it a lot which I really enjoyed. I also liked how she went from teasing to being sympathetic once his need got really really bad. I liked how even though she was being sympathetic she kept encouraging him that he'd make it because he always does and pretty much I just love the world's implication that guys can always wait. All the call-outs of the pee inequality of the world and how intense the desperation was was perfect. Overall I loved the
  13. Once again, so insanely hot! I loved how since boys bathroom lines are so long and time consuming that guys actually have be conscious of their bathroom visit schedules and that Jordan waited until he was practically pissing himself to break the seal. And omg I loved how he didn't get to take his final piss because of the girls rushing the guys, yet the girls got to take a final piss without even worrying what the guys need. That kind of stuff really gets me lol, so so freaking hot. I love this world, can't wait for the next part!
  14. I already commented on this story but I loved it so much that I think it deserves a more proper comment. This story and universe is just so hot where do I even start lol. I personally love toilet inequality in stories, and while I enjoy it when it's the guys who gets to pee outside and the girls can't, this story is just such a refreshing change of pace since the script is being flipped for once. I think since the scenario is so rare and doesn't exist in real life that makes the concept of this story even hotter but you also just executed the story perfectly for a first entry to the universe.
  15. So happy you've finally posted again! Your stories are some of the best on the site so I always click instantly whenever I see you've posted. Loved this story, the concept of Eaks is super hot. I personally would love a male sequel.
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