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I really like how the September one is all around slightly warmer with more yellow-red-heavy light. It helps the viewer feel the face-scalding embarrassment.
The March one has more realistic pee (at least stream shape-wise), but it feels a bit odd that the stream is more detailed (sharper? higher definition?) than the rest of the piece. The September one has opaque pee, but it fits better (at least in my opinion) with the general level and scale of detail of everything else.
Trying to put it briefly, I somewhat prefer the older piece's consistency and emotional impactfulness to the newer piece's detailed stream and more distant background.
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Ah ye, thanks for the reply.
I’m still playing around with how I make the urine look. My current issue is that the way I make the streams is the exact same way I make them for my more realistic pieces. Which is a problem when I do anime/cartoony styled pieces because it clashes too much. I’m still working on it-
And hmm, yeah. I didn’t even notice that the warm colouring works better in the previous one.
Thanks for the feedback tho, cat! I’m always trying to improve. It’s good to get some actual criticism so I know what I should improve on.
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