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PeeHour

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  1. I didn't know we were doing favorite scenes, but I think my favroite scene so far was Karenna and Mary-Ann wetting in the restaurant parking lot, because Mary-Ann kept acting like she wasn't going to do it and then just did. Honestly I like any wetting scene with the two of them!
  2. Part 26 is here early! *Disclaimer / Trigger Warning: I briefly mention the Tori’s parents sub-plot in the first paragraph, but that’s it. Feel free to skip the first paragraph if you don’t want to read that part. Part 26: Home Tori sluggishly rolled her wheeled suitcase across the tiled floor and slung her duffle bag over her shoulder. While most students looked forward to finishing finals and winter break, Tori felt anxious. She had been purposefully avoiding visiting home all semester ever since her parents split, even choosing to attend Nadia’s family’s thanksg
  3. It's all good! Also we haven't found out yet whether or not the email sent... Also, just realized I should have put a .... instead of an exclamation point in the picture so it's like she's sighing instead of yellining. Oh well!
  4. Probably Mary-Ann, mostly because she's the hottest in my headcanon/imagination lol. But I also like her attitude towards wetting, like it's a huge interest for her and now a major part of her life, but she knows its place and stays professional (except for the last slip-up in the garage!)
  5. Here is part 6! I tried a different angle with the drawing this time, let me know if it works! Also, on that note, the carefree wettings will mostly be featured in the first half of the story (before the picture), and the serious / story stuff will mostly be in the second half (after the picture). (Although there is still wetting in the second half!) You will also notice there is a time-jump... That will serve a purpose in the near future. Enjoy! Part 6 ~ One year later ~ Alicia was in a better place now. Since abandoning her friends last year an
  6. Loved it! I appreciate the reference and and callout! Besides the obvious use of my characters, the rest of the story was spot-on. The writing, scenarios, and everything was great! And this part advanced the story and paved the way for many different possibilities, while at the same time adding a lot to Cassie's character. I loved how Cassie wasn't grossed out my Karenna's wet pants or peeing, and she even seemed intrigued by Karenna, Tori, and Lilly! Perhaps this will awaken a shared interest? Abd the entire office will be wetters? And I like how Karenna and Cassie grew closer, and Karenna ev
  7. Here's part, the second half of "Wine Wednesdays." PART 25: Wine Wednesdays: Rewired Nightly accidents became a regular occurrence for Tori and Nadia. Not just after Wine Wednesdays, but nearly any night the pair went out drinking, the morning would result in two wet beds. Nadia never had accidents before the initial Wine Wednesday wetting - almost as if the first act triggered something. Tori had a hunch. At this point, she lent Nadia an extra pair of protective waterproof sheets, which saw immediate use. One morning, Tori decided to test the waters more. She
  8. Here's the illustration for Part 5 that I promised, a few days late! Part 6 is written but I still need to draw the illustration for it, so as soon as I finish that I'll post it!
  9. Yeah just like a couple extra spaces betweem paragraphs so the reader knows either time has passed or the scene changed. It's just a small thing to help the reader but effective!
  10. I agree with everything orangelion said above. I really enjoyed the last scene with Anna, though! And I like how Mary-Ann is stsrting to give in more and just wet, whether in a fancy restuarant or breaking her own rules at the office! My only comment is to maybe add some more spaces between scenes. We went from Mary-Ann and Tyler's sexual scene straight to a business meeting, and I was a bit thrown off for a second lol. Overall though, another great part! I'm looking forward to seeing hpw Karenna and Cassie mesh in the next part!
  11. Here is part 24! I planned on it being longer, but I went ahead and posted what I had to stay on schedule. Once I finish the rest, I'll post it as part 25 (maybe tonight but more likely tomorrow). That won't interrupt Friday's release though! (So all in all I plan on releasing 3 parts this week instead of 2). PART 24: Wine Wednesdays “Ready for the movie?” giggled Tori, sipping her glass of white wine. “Why, of course, madam!” replied Nadia, her pinky pointing upwards as she pompously tilted down her own wine glass and loudly slurped down an audible gulp. As
  12. Thanks! And you guys may be onto something.. They are roommates, and Tori has broken her seal again, so I think we can all expect some more discovered wetting. Tori has convinced others in the past (Lilly, Alicia), so we'll see if Nadia is as resceptive!
  13. I think there's still enough! This part was a bit lighter on the omo end, but I enjoyed Mary-Ann and Karenna's continuing banter. You have multiple parts that focus on different aspects of omo, so there's a bit of everything for everyone. I do like Cassie better after this part as well, and I'm looking forward to how her relationship with Karenna and Mary-Ann moves forward.
  14. Here is part 5! Sorry, I didn't have time this week to include a drawing, but I'll add one later. This part is by far the longest though, so hopefully that makes up for it for now. This part features a bit of everything: deliberate wetting, nonchalant/convinience wetting, intense desperation, holding, leaking, permission to go, semi bladder control, ecstatic relief, and some embarrassment/ shame. (The first half is just the usual deliberate wetting for those who are mainly interested in that). Part 5 Life was good for Alicia. Having been accepted as one of the soccer gi
  15. PART 23: Hungover Tori soaked in her first month of college. Her classes, although mostly gen-eds, felt more fulfilling than her boring high school lectures. She had grown accustomed to her new schedule, smiling at the familiar faces on the way to class. Even her social life blossomed - she and her new roommate Nadia developed a new friendship, and they would often accompany each other to parties. One thing was missing, however. Tori managed to stay mostly dry during her first month. She had not indulged in her secret habit once - although the temptation never left, Tori wanted to
  16. Here is the finale! Enjoy ~ PART 13: Presentation “Good Morning sleepyhead!” Kirstin’s calm coo tickled Madi’s ear. Madi peeled her eyelids open, flinching at the sunlight breaking in her window. It burns! She laid curled up in Kirstin’s bed, her knees tucked up and her arms cuddling a pillow. Kirstin stood over her, softly stroking her girlfriend's thin, bare shoulder. “We have the presentation today, silly! You gotta get up!” “Mrrmmmph..” grunted Madi, the only sound she could manage to utter. She stretched out her arm and emitted an audible yawn. Her messy strin
  17. Thanks!! I'm glad I could make them all relatable in some way, even with their characterized stereotypes! They have grown close, but they still have only know each other for a few weeks, so we'll see if their omo-centered relstionships stand the test... Although the story is ending soon, I am attached to these characters I've created, so expect to see at least a couple of them return! The final part is ready, but I'm still debating on splitting it up or not... (4000+ words)
  18. Another good part! No one mentioned it yet, but I like how Karenna pushed the boundaries of "no playing at work" by intentionally leaking. I wonder if Cassie will tattle? And I wonder if this isn't the first time the rules will be broken again? I don't think it quite makes her the bad guy. The audience knows she is truly enamored by her boss, so it does create some conflict, but her leading on Chloe due to unresolved feelings for someone else is something relatable enough (for some) without being too 'evil.' Especially in this situation where her crush is essentially unobtainab
  19. Here is part 12! (I hope the ending isn't too weird, but this is a fetish site, after all. Either way, it is a one-time occurrence). Part 12: Preparing the Presentation Madi sat cross-legged at her kitchen chair, her eyes on her phone but her mind on the day’s plan. The group now had to combine all of their individual papers into one big, cohesive project, as well as craft a separate presentation pertaining to the same topic. With the busy midterm-filled week, Saturday served as the only day where the four members’ schedules overlapped. They all agreed to meet ag
  20. Here is Part 22! *Disclaimer: The only “serious” part occurs towards the end when Tori and her mother say goodbye. It is very brief. This scene involves Tori arriving at college, so I had to include a scene like that. PART 22: New Beginning Tori strategically maneuvered the last piece of luggage in the back of her mother’s minivan. The tightly-packed arrangement of boxes and suitcases resembled the work of a master Tetris player. Satisfied, she slammed shut the trunk. “Nice work there!” a cheerful voice chimed behind her. Tori turned around to see her blonde
  21. Part 4 - Alicia’s feet anxiously shuffled through the blades of grass. Approaching the field felt like walking up to the stage to give a speech to thousands of spectators. Her fingers tightly gripped her water bottle, the liquid inside sloshing from her trembling hand. She knew the urine in her bladder must be moving the same way, swishing back and forth with every step. She hoped her black short and white T-shirt proved an adequate outfit for practice. Her eyes stared ahead at the group of girls scrimmaging each other, kicking the ball back and forth. She didn’t know what to say:
  22. I was cautiously optimistic in hoping that Mary-Ann would wet with Karenna at the end. (And was ecstatic reading that she did!) It wasn't quite a surprise but definitely pleasant, and I loved how she wet while she talked about going to the bathroom instead...(how it was handled was nicely done and unexpected!) It's hard to make a judgement of Chloe since we've only seen her once so far. I'm assuming they won't end up 'together forever.' But, since you're slightly hinting that Mary-Ann and Karenna may someday have their moment, maybe Chloe could be used as a plot device to make Mary-Ann je
  23. Part 3 Carissa and Natasha walked back to the bench, letting some of the less experienced players sub in. Neither girl cared; with the score 4-0 and only about 10 minutes left, they had this game in the bag. Plus, Carissa knew this would give her a chance to relieve the annoying twinge in her bladder. She sat spread-legged on the metal bench, her sweaty thighs welcoming the cool aluminum. Her cleated feet dangled from above the ground. She grabbed her water bottle and chugged down a few mouthfuls as Natasha sat near her. After a few minutes of watching the game, Carissa
  24. Ok, definitely my new favorite part. Mary-Ann joining in at the end was the icing on the cake! I love the natural character progression and how it led up to this point. And seeing how much Karenna thoroughly enjoys it, plus her infatuation with her boss, is amazing. I'm looking forward to both the wettings and the story / character building. I'm rooting for Karenna and Mary-Ann to get 'closer,' or at least have a 'moment.' Overall, awesome chapter!!!
  25. I'm glad you guys liked how I handled part 21. The next part is almost ready! I know I've mentioned their panties before, but I also know for a fact that I've forgotten to mention any sort of underwear on some occasions as well. It's safe to assume they're always wearing underwear unless I specifically call out that they're not - hopefully that clears things up!
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