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pogbernard

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    Omo Date!

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    2 hours ago, Ninjajoe95 said:

    Thank you so much for making a mobile version, you are a goddamn hero

    No problem! I'll be sure to include mobile versions for my future works as well.  I can't promise that I'll make them look great on mobile, but I will do my best to make them functional, at least. 

    Omo Date!

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    18 hours ago, likeyourspell said:

    As a lesbian, I appreciated that Taylor was referred to with they/them pronouns. There might be a way to give users an option (e.g. "my date is with a man/woman/non-binary person" choice) but I imagine that would be pretty complicated. There was one point at the fountain where I noticed Taylor was referred to as a "him" though btw.

    It was fun and I really enjoyed her desperation during the walk. Having choices like "go behind a tree" vs. "try to wait until we get to the bathroom" might have been fun too, but all in all great job, especially for a first VN.

    I'm glad that you found that to be a good thing! There was a time where I was considering giving up the idea of making the pronouns neutral, due to the potential confusion, so I had started replacing the theys with hims. but then I changed my mind again and it would appear I had forgotten to put them all back. I'm a little sad I missed them, but I have fixed it in the script and will update it soon!

    I think my inexperience Ren'py was the main force behind why the VN is so static. I wasn't really even sure how to get things formatted at first, so for a while I was struggling trying to make things functional. By the time I kinda got the hang of the software, things were more or less decided. While I'm sad I wasn't able to make things more interactive, it makes me optimistic since I have a bunch of ideas with what I could do in the future!

    Thank you again for your feedback, I hope to make my next project something even better!

    Omo Date!

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    1 hour ago, JLF said:

    great little game!

    I'm no native speaker so I wonder why Taylor is talked about in plural all the time?

    Thank you for the praise!

    You're not imagining it, I did that on purpose. I wasn't sure whether I wanted to make them a boy or a girl, so I just gave them a gender neutral name and pronouns and kind of left it up to the player's imagination.  I suppose it can be confusing, but I hope it wasn't too distracting! It doesn't seem I did too well with clarity this time around.

    Omo Date!

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    47 minutes ago, IgotNoNames said:

    I love this, need way more omorashi games. Been a whil since we had any choose your own adventure stuff either.

    I definitely agree that there is a need for more omorashi content, especially for visual novels. Hopefully I can begin to fill the gaps!

    I'm also a fan of visual novels with a lot of branching paths, so stuff like that is definitely on my list of things to incorporate into my future stuff!

    Thank you for your comment!

    Omo Date!

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    21 minutes ago, Red Simpson said:

    It's ok if you've confirmed it works on mobile then I'll give it a try

    Oh, I didn't mean it works on mobile. On Ren'py, it allows you to emulate what it would look like on mobile (presumably to make sure the assets look right on the smaller screen). I wasn't actually able to make it work on mobile. Sorry for the confusion!

    I'll keep looking into how to make a mobile port!

    Omo Date!

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    9 hours ago, Red Simpson said:

    This looks like a fun visual novel but unfortunately i only have my phone no mac or pc.

    To be honest, I had never even considered making a mobile version. I went back to see if I could make a port on Ren'py, but I'm having troubles with configuring the project. I also previewed it to see how it would look in mobile, and while the assets aren't as bad as I thought, it still looks a little weird scaled for mobile. I'm also not sure how to hide text boxes on mobile so it would be hard to see certain cg as well. As expected, I'm a total noob at this stuff.

    In short, I'm, unfortunately, probably unable to make a mobile version, unless I can figure out how to configure the thingy. Sorry!

    Omo Date!

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    3 minutes ago, Ajax7408 said:

    I really liked the simplistic artwork and the wetting itself was really sexy, especially the part where Jennifer first leaks in her panties. Thanks for adding hissing pee sounds, not enough wetting videos have hissing in them. Personally, I'd love to see more of the Jennifer character in the future that is if you ever intend on continuing to use her.

    Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you liked it! My biggest problems when reading pee scenes in visual novels is the lack of good sfx during the peeing. Sometimes they don't even have sound for them at all, which imo defeats the whole purpose of having a visual novel. So even if I didn't have any music, I really wanted to include peeing sounds. Especially hissing ones! I'm glad you enjoyed them as well~

    As for more of Jennifer... I'm not particularly against the idea, as I had a lot of fun drawing her. Though, I don't really have any good ideas for another story involving her. If anything, it would probably just be standalone pictures. We'll see, though!

  1. It's nice to see your new release! I've mentioned before how much I enjoyed your art style, and I'm glad you were able to expand and add more details/characters to really flesh it out. Something I would have liked to see more of would be streams and puddles. The first wetting was great; it had a shot of the stream and puddle and felt like she had a full bladder. The other two felt lesser in quantity, and not seeing the complete aftermath of the accidents didn't make them feel as complete.  That said, those are things that would only make them better for my tastes, not things that detract from them as is. I just wanted to throw in my two cents.

    Overall I highly enjoyed it, and I'm very much looking forward to your future works as well. It's great to see more Western artists pop up, and skilled ones at that.

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