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Good afternoon!
Hope every one is safe and well during the coronavirus. I wanted to start a thread about which drinks (alcoholic and non-alcoholic) taste the same and look the same, and could be confused with the other.
I am writing an omorashi fiction about a young college graduate who is about to present at a symposium. However, she is convinced to go for a relacing night out with friends for a restful dinner. There, she asks for a soda, but the ditsy new waitress, along with the heavy customer load, accidentally serves the protagonist ungraduate an alcoholic beverage that looks like and tastes like the soda she ordered.
The protagonist starts to feel light headed and feeling nauseated. In my story, the protagonist has an intolerance to alcoholic beverages. Plus, it has a strong diuretic effect on her urinary system.
I was wondering if anyone knew of sodas or other non-alcoholic or non-alcohol associated drinks that mimic alcoholic drinks in appearance and taste.
Please let me know what you think to start this thread.
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Good evening! This is Kataal. You had helped me out earlier when I needed advice on how to write my story. I appreciate that so thank you again. I did want to know for my story about alcoholic vs non-alcoholic drinks. Which sodas or juices taste and look like alcoholic drinks with strong effects on the bladder?
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I have been trying to find the whole video of Paige Turnah peeing into a bucket. I don't know if she was desperate to begin with either. Has anyone been able to find the whole video?
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Good morning. I hope you're all doing well. I was wondering if I could have your help writing a fictional omorashi story.
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First off, good evening and nce to meet you. I appreciate the time you are taking to asisst me.
I am currently trying to wrote an omorashi fiction, and my first one yet. It is about a young adult female college student who is seriously bursting to pee and is leaking during the day of a research symposium event. However, I want to make it as such the protagonist became seriously bursting through no fault of her own.
I am not sure how to write this story. In addition, I don't know the exact way in which a symposium works and how it is conducted. I never went to one. Furthermore, I am not good with physical descroptions and not so good plot development for story writing.
What are your suggestions? If you need more clarifiction behind the story, please let me know.
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Hello there!
I don't have a clue how such an event works myself, so I suggest to ask an actual college student or do some research.As for how a character gets into a situation that they can't pee... that can be as simple as "the bathroom broke", "there is a too long line", "too busy to notice"
The problem is, how do you get a character bursting without their own fault? Normally people have to actively do something, so someone could delay her to go to the bathroom, maybe she is a smart student and she got asked for help and she was too kind hearted to say no? Or a friend of hers talked her into trying some of the new juices at a juice bar with her. Your own creativity is the limit.
Last, getting descriptive. My advice: Read. I take a lot of inspiration of another Omorashi writers, look how they write and what words they use and try to convey them into my own style.
I have written around 10 Omorashi pieces myself, fandom stuff, but feel free to check them out for inspiration.
Good luck with your writing!